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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 8:01 am
aramatsu91 Aramatsu treaded slowly forward, cautious of his surroundings as he hunted, watching carefully through the dense brush for any signs of movement, any hints of his foe's whereabouts. He panted slightly, the hot, muggy air causing his breathing to be heavier; however, he forcibly kept his breathing as quiet as he could. As he searched, taking one small step at a time, he caught a rustling motion out of the corner of his eye. Resting a hand on the sheath of his katana, he prepared to draw quickly and silently eliminate the target. All of a sudden, a dark figure bursted from the foliage, sprinting for his own life as he tried to get away from Aramatsu. That motion was the last one he ever made. A dashing slash, horizontally across the neck, was all it took. The man felt no pain. And never would. Wiping the blade clean on the man's clothing, Aramatsu sheathed his weapon, slowly making his way back to the village. Nice! 3nodding Although in our system you'd have to make a roll for that. But no matter, the language itself is pretty good and you pass!
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 8:02 am
well yeah... i just used it as a basic dialogue. i thought it came out pretty good.... and i guess thats all that matters.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 8:03 am
l-Tobi-l Hnn... here goes nothing. My character's name is Sosuke Morirui. Sorry if it's a little voluminous.
Roleplay Sample:
The enemy's eyes darted left, then right. Thirty minutes passed since his encounter with the Mist shinobi, who had no idea of his whereabouts. It was a good start; ninja did their best to stay undetected. A few hundred meters away, the mist ninja in question was resting at the base of a tree, taking refuge in its shade. 'The enemy's definitely clever... he must've been in a siege situation like this befo-' The mist ninja's train of thought was suddenly broken by a disruption in the underbrush several meters away.
He dashed towards it, and immediately recognized it as the target, lunging at it. The enemy and the mist-nin rolled for a few feet, before stopping. When the ninja picked himself up, he was chuckling, holding the enemy by the front paws. A voice emanated from close by: "Good job, Mori-san." It resonated in an adult tone. The voice was connected to a man of brown hair and hazel eyes, wearing a mist headband. "Mission: Capture the missing pet was successful."
Lol what is voluminous crying Anyway.. This is quite interesting, and it's lit enough and I like it, so you pass ^-^
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 8:07 am
just going by root word, volume, it means loud?
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 8:24 am
Istian Goss just going by root word, volume, it means loud? voluminous means large in size, extensive, etc.
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 8:31 am
lol... i used the wrong volume XDDD
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 9:06 am
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 6:48 pm
kouri-chan_xx [Nuisance] Sunlight managed to squeeze between the thousands of leaves above. With his eyes closed tightly, Kade dozed silently underneath the large hammock. His body was very exhausted, and it seemed that even the slightest movement caused him to lose even more energy. The day of hard training had left him not only tired physically, but mentally too. His worn down mind ached after spending half of the day in the library, researching the variations of clans and bloodlines throughout the known world. Lying motionless on the cold ground, a small gust of wind blew a single leaf from the oak above him. Somehow, this peculiar leaf managed to float and position itself where it landed right on Kade’s forehead. His body jolted involuntarily as he swiped at his forehead, knocking the leaf off and poking himself in the eye. A sensation of irritation took over his body as he pulled himself to his feet, staring blankly at the single leaf that now lay motionlessly on the ground.
His eye began to water as he made his way back to his house. Though his muscles ached, he decided it would be best to continue resting somewhere he would have to worry about the annoyance of Mother Nature. As he trudged through the thicket, he noticed that the sky had begun to darken and numerous black clouds began to form over-head. Quickening his pace he removed his beloved headband from around his somewhat large forehead and shoved it into his pocket, protecting it from Mother Nature, whom he thought was plotting against him in some sick way, and was trying to annoy him at any cost.
[I hope this will do. My mind isn't really cooperating now so I could not think of anything else. Sorry!] Lol you pass 3nodding If this is what you do out of form that is great! :3 I'm sorry. I'll make my posts better when I actually get started in a village.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 9:37 pm
Lol, that was supposed to be a good thing that you could make posts like this and still not be at your best.
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Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 10:28 pm
kouri-chan_xx Lol, that was supposed to be a good thing that you could make posts like this and still not be at your best. Sorry.
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Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 1:30 am
((I hope this is good enough..So here go's nothing.))
Deciding that my room would be the wrong place to battle with Moraine, Triox waited atop the roof. Once again Triox felt Moraine's hand on his shoulder. Not allowing him to do anything else, Triox elbowed him in the gut, took the knife he was planning to stick me with, and held it to his throat. "No, Triox." He begged. "You wouldn't kill me would you? After all I've done for you--!" Triox stabbed him in the heart, not allowing him to finish. "That was FOR everything you've done to me!" Triox said as he withdrew the dagger and hurled him off the roof. I watched him fall to the ground. Triox felt relief... it was like all that pain had melted away. And Moraine... I wouldn't shed a single tear for that b*****d. Triox felt a large sense of accomplishment; as if a large weight had been lifted from my shoulders. My blood was pulsing strongly through my body. Then the reality of it hit me: I just killed someone. That's what was causing this feeling. Murder was invigorating... In the excitement of it, Triox licked the knife once, wiping some blood off of it. No one would know I killed him. I had traveled down the path of darkness once again...
((Sorry if its not good enough its been a while since I've RP'ed so my apologies if it doesn't meet your standards.))
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:35 am
As you can tell by the description, this isn't my Naruto character, but I love how this intro came out, so I'm going to use it:
The usual frown was set across her mouth as she leaned against the wall in the hallway, arms crossed just beneath her chest as if she was impatient. A slow tapping of her foot, since she couldn't get herself to stay completely still, began, tapping to some unknown beat that must have subconciously lingered in her head. Her eyes were closed for a moment, training herself to listen to her surroundings more so she'd be ready to look for Darius when the search ran out. After a moment, one blue eye opened, the bright green around her pupil standing out against her dark green leather vest. She prefered leather armor to the armor here, though what she wore was a bit big for her as it had been her fathers. The new species had slain him right above her, and her mind still remembered the sight of blood trickling softly through the floor boards she hid beneath. Her parents had been renegades as well, though that wasn't why the new species had killed them, it just seemed convient for them at the time. Since that day, her hatred towards the species that supposedly surpassed humans ran deep. She didn't often show how she felt, but almost every renegade knew her reasons for wanting the new species gone. She rose slowly to her feet, her bow in her hand as she stood and her quiver back over her shoulder. Yes, they were primitive weapons, but she was deadly with them and choose to use them anyway. If they failed, she always had her physical abilities. She swept her blonde hair up in it's typical ponytail and moved her hands quickly over her clothing to dust off. Beneath the leather vest she wore a tight black, long-sleeved shirt that hugged her body, but didn't hold it back, along with similar black pants that weren't quite jeans but similar. For a woman, she was well built, her arms slender but obviously muscled, her legs in good shape from her constant training while she was here.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 7:07 pm
@triox: Lol, nice story, but it's a story >.> Which is a little different from RP. Also in this guild you need to roll before stabbing the dude so in fact you'd need a sizable post before that. (well four sentences >_>) Lol anyway can you redo?
@TKDLuva: Nice! Pass!! whee
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 7:24 am
Yay! ^_^ I was really worried...Thank you very much, i hope I can continue to be that literate.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 8:42 am
Don't worry about it, and anyway we don't emphasise literacy here, as long as it's a good 3-4 sentences per post. Of course, if you want to stay literate we're not going to stop you either ^_^ IMO the best roleplays are with a nice paragraph per post but only one -_- If you go super literate it's so long XD
Maybe two is fine too. Paragraphs I mean. Lol I am rambling... must be the night...
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