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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:29 am
so i can create another genin and keep kai till you find her and kill her? and i wana keep the clan with the new character since i'm possibly the only active clan member of that clan >_>
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:43 am
Alex:
I made a ton of manual edits to your profile, fixing capitalization and several other things as well. I know you applied for the Kekkai Genkai, but you never wrote another attempt, so unless you want to try it again, you don't have it.
I also moved you to Cloud. Leaf is currently full, so we can't put anyone else in there.
Please respond to this to say you understand.
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:43 am
little mintchan so i can create another genin and keep kai till you find her and kill her? and i wana keep the clan with the new character since i'm possibly the only active clan member of that clan >_> Yes, and you need to re-apply for the Kekkai genkai as well.
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 11:05 am
Death:
1. Could you choose a picture that looks more... ummm... human? (I understand you wear a mask, but you don't have a sword like that, nor do you have wings... and as much as you do hide behind a death mask, you still have a face.)
2. Your back story is pretty weak, and it mentions leaf, even though you are in sound.
3. Elemental Vulnerability has to be defined based on your character's Primary element. (Your vulnerable to the element which is strong against your primary)
4. You need to add the ninjutsu class bonuses to your Shinobi Skills.
5. Cmon dude... 100 smoke bombs? 100 flash bombs? ...that's utterly ridiculous. Keep it at 10 or below. Same for Shuriken and Makibishi... take it easy. You can carry up to 20 shuriken, and like 30 makibishi.
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 11:49 am
Cobra_X Alex: I made a ton of manual edits to your profile, fixing capitalization and several other things as well. I know you applied for the Kekkai Genkai, but you never wrote another attempt, so unless you want to try it again, you don't have it.
I also moved you to Cloud. Leaf is currently full, so we can't put anyone else in there.
Please respond to this to say you understand. i understand
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 2:13 pm
Full Name: Koichi Kujo Nicknames: Koi, Jelly Age: 13 Birthdate: 09 / 06 [September 6th] Gender: Male Ethnicity: Canadian
Nindo: "Stay out of my way, and I won't kill you." Behavior: Koi is a bit of a sick freak. He has an obsession with death that leads people to think he is some psychotic lunatic that was let out of the loony bin a little early. However, when around close friends, he is quick to defend them. He usually doesn't take well to teamwork, so competitions is something that he must have constantly. Personality: Koi is... well Koi. You'd really need to find out for yourself, as it cannot be put into words.
Village: Kirigakure Rank: Genin Shinobi Type: --- Ninja Class: Ninjutsu________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformationSummoning: Bloodline: Curse Mark:
Weapon of Choice: Decapitating Carving Knife (Zabuza's Legendary Blade)
Strengths: ● High Chakra Reserves ● Great Chakra Control ● Intelligence Weaknesses: ● Lightning ● Suicidal ● Women. (He won't kill them)
Shinobi Skills: ● Overkill (Doubles the intensity of my Raiton attacks) ● Jinchuuriki (Host of Isonade - Sanbi - Three Tails) ● Unknown [Can't Decide]
Chakra Element(s): Suiton , Raiton Chakra Color: Aqua Blue
Shinobi Skills________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformationSensei: None Team Mate: None Team Mate: None________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformationNon-Elemental Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu) Kai (Dispell)
Water - Suiton Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation) [E Rank] Isonagi no Jutsu (Beach Crab) [D Rank] Mizu Tate no Jutsu (Water Shield Technique) [D Rank] Kirigakure: Shunshin no Jutsu (Hidden Mist: Instantaneous Body Skill) [C Rank] Mizu no Yoroi (Water Armor) [C Rank] Suikusari no Jutsu (Water Chains Technique) [C Rank] Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Technique) [C Rank]
Lightning - Raiton
Illusions - Genjutsu Fukushi no Jutsu (Double Vision Technique) [D Rank] Suiganmourou no Jutsu (Drunken Sight Technique) [D Rank]
________________________________________|A|pparel + |W|eapon |I|nformation Weapon Type: Legendary Blade Weapon Range: Non-Specific in Description (Large sword...) Special Properties: When handle is removed, blade is shortened. Suigetsu does this in the anime and manga. Weapon Location: Across back.
Headband Location | Style | Color: Left Bicep † Tied † Dark Blue
Flack Jacket Style | Color: Genin Flak Jacket † Black
Kunai Holster Location | Color: Right Thigh † Black
Projectile Holster Location | Color: Left Hip † Black
Scroll Holster Location | Color: Over Heart † Black
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 3 Makibishi: 0 Shuriken: 12 Flash Bombs: 3 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight: 5' 4 1/2" Weight: 107lbs. Body Build: --- Eye Color: Light Blue Hair Color: White (Silver Tint) Family: Kujo Theme song: Bleeding Mascara ~by~ Atreyu________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank: - A Rank: - B Rank: - C Rank: - D Rank: -
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 2:33 pm
I edited Sorry I was in a hurry when i posted it
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 3:01 pm
Beware Of alexthegreat Cobra_X Alex: I made a ton of manual edits to your profile, fixing capitalization and several other things as well. I know you applied for the Kekkai Genkai, but you never wrote another attempt, so unless you want to try it again, you don't have it.
I also moved you to Cloud. Leaf is currently full, so we can't put anyone else in there.
Please respond to this to say you understand. i understand Then you are Approved! (with the profile I edited)
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 3:05 pm
Death:
You are approved to start RPing for the time being, but I have an edit or two i want to explain to you (at the moment however, I do not have the time)
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 5:26 pm
Cobra_X little mintchan so i can create another genin and keep kai till you find her and kill her? and i wana keep the clan with the new character since i'm possibly the only active clan member of that clan >_> Yes, and you need to re-apply for the Kekkai genkai as well.dammit! but do i realllyyyyyy have to make another rp sample???? Dx
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 5:49 pm
Full Name:Rosarian Gato' Nicknames:Rose, Rosey Age:14 Birthdate:July,11 Gender:Female Ethnicity:Russian
Nindo: 'Live life the way you wanna. Not the way someone tells you too.'
Personality:sweet
Behavior:shy
Biography: Rosey had a simple life in a poor family who prospered off the rice fields. She was a happy outgoing child loving the ways of healing she began to experiment on the rice her family grew. One day her experiment failed and ruined the entire crop! Her parents were so furious they beat her till she could barely breath, they put her in the hospital as when she healed she watched the nurses and docters use medical and knew she wanted to be a medical shinobi! She learned a way to made the crops big and prosperous so when she came back home she tried it on the new crops and they grew and grew! Her family became rich from it. She used the money she got and saved to buy a strange kimono with long sleeves past her hands and from waist down it was cut on the sides to allow her legs to move about even in a split position. She kept her old boots almost to the knee and wore armored gloves to allow her wrist to move, but protected at the same time. She always had her hair long and silky white getting it from her mom. After a while she told her parents she was leaving to learn medical training and Fire justu. They agreed after a long exhausting arguement she finally went and left to the hidden sound village to learn the ways of medical!
Village:Sound for medical training Rank:Genin________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation
Summoning: (Supply a link to the Summoning) Bloodline: Motarasu Clan Curse Mark: (Supply a link to the Cursemark)
Weapon of Choice: Senbon Ninja Class: Medical Strengths: ●Chakra Control ●Intelligence ●Strength Weaknesses: ●Weak Ninjutsu ●Weak Bodied ● ●
Shinobi Skills:(Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark) ●2 post less to learn a justu ● ●
Chakra Element(s): Fire and wind - Primary: Fire - Secondary:Wind(learned at : Genin/Chuunin/Jounin)
Chakra Color:White
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation
Sensei: Team Mate: Team Mate:
________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformationNon-Elemental →Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) →Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) →Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu) →Kai - Dispell → Fuuton - Wind → → → → → → → → → → Katon - Fire → → → → → Medical → → → → → Kekkai Genkai - Bloodline → → → → → ________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles
# Custom Weapons Allowed:1
Custom Weapon 1:
Weapon Type: Weapon Range: Weapon Description: Special Properties: Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color: |Right Arm, tied mini sized, blue Kunai Holster Location | Color: |Pouch, white Projectile Holster Location | Color: |pouch,white Scroll Holster Location | Color: | none
Exploding Smoke Grenade: Makibishi:0 Shuriken:10 Flash Bombs:4 Senbon: 15
________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation
Height:5.9 Weight:136 pounds Body Build:frail, skinny Eye Color:Sky blue Hair Color:White Family:none Theme song:Bleeding Love- Leona Lewis
________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation
S Rank: A Rank: B Rank: C Rank: D Rank:
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 9:33 pm
((Here to reclaim Cloud bwahahaha jk)) Full Name: Arekkusu Morinaga Nicknames: Arekku Age: 17 Birthdate: April 7th Gender: Male Ethnicity: Hispanic
Nindo: "Why ain't ya smiling?"
Personality: Careless, loves to relax, and always in a really give's a rat a** mood. Shows determination almost never he is also a little selfish.
Behavior: Modest at times, air-headed usually, and just really outgoing and speaks his mind
Biography: (Back Story) ehhh you'll find out
Village: Cloud Rank: Genin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformationSummoning: NONE Bloodline: Looking around Curse Mark: None
Weapon of Choice: Gauntlets
Ninja Class: Medical
Strengths: ● Chakra Control ● Strength ● Agility Weaknesses: ● Weak Ninjutsu ● Weak Bodied (Strength and weak bodied?? Haha it's the class thing haha)) ● Mid Range Fighting ●
Shinobi Skills:(Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark) ● (More??) ● ●
Chakra Element(s): - Primary: Lightning - Secondary: Wind
Chakra Color: Black
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformationSensei: None Team Mate: None Team Mate: None________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformationNon-Elemental →Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) →Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) →Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu) →Kai - Dispell →
Element - Raiton → → → → → → → → → →
Element - Fuuton → → → → →
Genjutsu → → → → →
Kekkai Genkai - Bloodline → → → → → ________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type: Weapon Range: Weapon Description: Special Properties: Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles) ________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color: On my head sometimes strapped to my arm. Black | Flack Jacket Style | Color: None
Kunai Holster Location | Color: Right leg/ Black | Projectile Holster Location | Color: Under Kunai Holster | Scroll Holster Location | Color: Lower Back |
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 10 Makibishi: 5 Shuriken: 20 Flash Bombs: 15 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight: 5' 07'' Weight: 165 lbs. Body Build: Athletic Eye Color: Green Hair Color: Black Family: None Theme song:Helicopter By Bloc Party________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank: A Rank: B Rank: C Rank: D Rank:
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 9:34 pm
leaf is CLOSED too many nin Dx
cloud is low....and you start at genin dummy xDDD
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 9:35 pm
Hey hey Mint............. don't call me dummy or I will devour you bwahahahaha You went through my pro to quick =P
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 9:43 pm
YOU NEEDZ STORY OR COBRA EAT YOUR AZZ!!! heart hehe look at mine above yours wink
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