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 Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 7:33 pm
((Its ok biggrin I was doing my homework too! And if Rayne can't come back, I think I might like to try to take over Nendir, as a sort of NPC character, because he is kinda important to the story involving me and Izzy.))
Ryn smiled lightly at Izzy, as he slowly continued forward, saying with as much ease as his pain would allow him,"I'll be ok soon... But you are correct that I need to rest and heal... though we cannot take to long, we should find a spot to stay, but not to close to here."
He continued to slowly walk forwards, wincing with each step, his wings hanging limply at his back. His grey eyes watched constantly, prepared to protect Izzy with his life, and trying to find a trace of Nendir.
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 7:42 pm
HP: 32
Mark sighed, pulling back his sleeve just as the beginning of the healing process was beginning to take its proper color and as the end was finishing up. "I am not human. I am not even from Earth. I do not know your language very well, comparitively. I am regenerating for the purpose of being ready during the next fight. It is clear that this isn't the end, and I really would like to be prepared when we next engage the Purifiers." He shrugged. "It's the same way that this works," he added, pulling up his right sleeve and allowing the energy weapon to come into being, expanding from just above his wrist, its twin barrels protruding from under a green and purple plate extending from just behind where the actual weapon was. ((I guess I'll get a picture.)) "See?"
"Either direction, you should have no qualms in trusting me. The humans are just as human where I come from." Whether this was good or bad wasn't clear, but seeing as he hadn't attempted to blow Amadeus's head off, so far things would seem to be good.
"One last thing... you did hurt him. It is hard to tell, I could not see much of him, but whatever happened he did not come out unscathed."
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 8:21 pm
Craig nodded in response to the androids comment. "He is not invulnerable, even I, a thing made of metal, suffer damage from weapons like your's. Its the fact of using it to fight an individual purifier that makes it difficult. Now, using myself as an example. No purifier is invincible. If I get hit in the head with a weapon, or flame weaponry is used against me, I am weakened. From what I have seen, the one who was fighting all of you is just as human as you, except for his powers to protect him. By the looks of it it has the God of fear written over it. Fear enjoys some form of humor to a creation. it looked like the other purifier can manifest anything he thinks of, yet looks human. Albeit a little insane, and as level headed as a triangle. "
He then looked to both of them and began walking away from the scene. "Best tell you now. I am not a Defender, just a misguided Purifier. I came to you looking for answers, and if they don't make me wish to fight along side you, I will kill you. I also am instilled to have a strong obedience to the gods, if they order me around directly, I might act out of character to how I am now. If I do, don't hold back, use the weaknesses I told you to your advantage. Am I understood?"
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 8:39 pm
[[Dude... Kind, you were kicking some serious a**. Had to use a couple of golems... but you were outnumbered. They didn't di much damage to your HP. By the way guys, +5 HP every post. That's how you heal. So keep up your numbers and let yourself heal a bit. Idk what to do unless Froze posts. O.O]]
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 8:42 pm
((Neat... I'm already back at full health *-* Well none the less, I'm going to act injured for a bit, just because it won't make sense if I'm already completely healed.... >.<))
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 8:45 pm
[[lol! Well, speedposters have nothing to fear!!!]]
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 9:25 pm
((All right! Yes. Short post. Sauron, Pen, I've decided to join you guys and Rayne, at least for now. Since I missed my chance to do battle... stare ))
The wind swirled, and with an explosion of dust that mimicked the earlier explosion, Tamwyn and a'Ariella arrived at the main gate of the Pentagon. Tamwyn stared in at the ruins of the once-proud building.
"Too late," she muttered. "Too damn late..."
She started to stride into the devastation when a'Ariella said hesitantly, Umm... Tamwyn?
Tamwyn stopped and looked back at a'Ariella, who was swirling uncertainly. A human girl and a tall scaled being were looking back at her in shock.
I don't think they're used to having people appear in midair...
((Uber-short. Yah.
Remember, you can't see a'Ariella unless you have a bit or a lot of magic. Tamwyn's fully visible, if odd.
...And on another note, my RP is launching this weekend. Look for it.))
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 9:27 pm
((Lol ok... But don't forget you can't say what we are doing! Thats god moding... though I must admit a human girl floating in mid air would get that reaction xp ))
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 7:16 am
((Seemed like a cool idea to join this RP at first, but screw it I quit))
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 11:06 am
((I know... sorry... sweatdrop But I didn't want to just have her turn around and *screen goes black* That would have seemed a little incomplete, no? If you think the reactions would be different, or if I should use "surprise" instead of "shock", just tell me.))
((Edit: Aw, Froz3n Mirror., don't quit. I've RPed by myself for several pages in many RPs before I joined any group. All you need is a chance meeting, like saying that your character saw Ryn (who's streaming blood) or Mark (who's trying to heal himself) and went up and asked them directly if they needed help.))
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:19 pm
~*~♥ ♥ ♥~*~ When the person just "appeared in front of herself and Ryn, Izzy's first reactin was shock. But then that quickly changed to frustration. "can everyone just walk through portals or fall out of the sky or materialize out of thin air?" she muttered.
She sighed, and looked at the new(ish) person. She was still a few stepps behind Ryn, cause she hadn't really walked forword when he did. She had just been watching him, trying to assure herself that he was ok. She didn't like seeing him, or anyone else she knew (as a friend)for that matter, hurt. She stepped forword, standing slightly beside Ryn, still studying the girl. Izzy was still faintly aware of the pain in her shoulder, but she had just ignored it in her worry, and now frustration and confusion. ~*~♥ ♥ ♥~*~
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:41 pm
Ryn looked up at the girl in the air, his eyes growing wide in shock.
"No", He thought," Not another... Not now... I don't think I can protect Izzy from this one, if she is a foe...."
His wings spread wide, dripping blood, and blocking Izzy from the view of the human in the air, his eyes narrowing. Slowly, he said,"What and who are you? But more importantly, which side are you on?"
He slowly raised his arms, dripping blood, his eyes locked on the girl, thinking,"I have only my claws... I can't win against this one... But even if I can't, I will try if I must, to allow Izzy to survive... It is my duty.... To my friend..."
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Posted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 9:16 pm
Tamwyn stared at the human and... other being. She didn't speak for several moments.
Tamwyn? a'Ariella began. Should we go, or just-
I'm thinking, came the reply in her mind, startling a'Ariella. She hadn't known that Tamwyn could communicate without words when encased in a human body. The current regulations do not permit me to have human contact besides what is necessary in retrieving the items. But this is obviously not a normal situation, and one of the two is not human. Perhaps, in this case, a small digression could prevent a catastrophe...
"My name is Tamwyn, and I have come from a distant star," Tamwyn said to the two beings. "I know not these sides you speak of. But I mean no harm."
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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 10:14 am
((XD I laughed when Mark said, "Either direction" instead of "Either way". ^^))
Amadeus's mouth was hanging open by the end of Mark's explanation, especially when he exhibited his lazer gun doo-hickey. But if Amadeus was shocked and surprised by Mark, he was completely bowled over by what Craig had to say. For one thing, combat training taught him to never give away his weaknesses. Ever. But the part that really hit him was the fact that this Android thingy was one of those Purifiers. So he was like a loaded time-bomb, set to explode at any moment.
"Well that's just peachy..." He muttered to himself.
Then he chuckled a bit and gave Craig a weak smile. "Well, then... let's hope that I manage to give you the right answers then. I really don't feel like dying just yet, and neither does the rest of humanity, as far as I know. But anyway... if the Purifiers have finished blowing stuff up here at Washington, do either of you have any suggestions as to what we need to do now?"
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Posted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 1:55 pm
(( xd Awesome guys! I was hoping to reveal later that he was actually hurt from the battle... >_> specially that claw attack from Ryn on his chest, but this is better! And Saki, I have been thinking of something lately for Kin's character development, so I'm just waiting for you lol.))
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