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 Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 7:41 pm
That's too bad. YOU CAN'T STOP ME.
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Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 9:47 pm
We can still try! just kidding. I need to do something, don't i?
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Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 10:14 pm
Precisely what I was thinking.
Might I also suggest that you encourage your inferiors to get themselves moving to said APC perhaps? Just a thought.
And my story about Garrett's past is up, but don't bother to read it unless you're in for the long haul: In Word, it's nine and half pages and skipped a lot of things that I wanted to go into more detail. I'm considering adding other stories about Garrett and Lilly that happen between the beginning and end of this story, just to flesh out the relationship.
And just a simple warning: I used a lot of foul language, and was somewhat descriptive with the violence. You'll have to forgive me for the overall lack of detail; it's late and I was just determined to get this done and out there.
I'd love some feedback; I'd prefer you give it here, just so I can continue to keep that thread clean. I plan on using it again.
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 1:22 pm
Hey Kai when did your character read minds or did the rules changed for using italics for thoughts. I have been thinking about starting a journal with Blueprints, Plans, Personal thoughts, and other things of Dante's. I'd post it in the guild. I may wait until after the first mission to start. Also Obama Won blaugh lol whee biggrin xd P.S. Something funny i found Barack IM
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 2:32 pm
Since my Character is the GM character. Also, those are often the players' ways of telling me that they are getting bored and want something to do. If i just drone on doing stupid things people get bored and leave XD
Also, that sounds awesome, Sol.
And Damn you, Blackbird! Have to go and get my Girlfriend and I depressed...
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 3:42 pm
But I.... I liked Mallory.... crying
9 pages sounds like something I'll be printing off and reading in health class tomorrow.
hey, speaking of which, I have a take-home test for health I need to hand in. Thanks guys. smile
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Posted: Wed Nov 05, 2008 10:50 pm
I liked the name Mallory too, but the personality that comes into my mind with that name is not what I envisioned as Garrett Hendlow's better half; I've already got thoughts on bringing "Mallory" back in a later story.
And don't worry Kai, there will be happier stories in the future. But perhaps you could give me a bit more feedback? Y'know, what held your attention, what you liked, what you thought could be better, and so on. That'd be lovely, if you please.
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Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2008 8:40 am
Some APC's, for an example.I need to go about and make one for us though... And Blackbird, That was all very well written, though the timeskipping could have used some marking out.
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Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2008 9:32 am
NEW POLL IN THE GUILD!Because I want to know what to do with Green squadron. And don't worry, Chapter six will start soon. Sooner if enough people reply to the poll quick enough =P
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Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2008 9:56 am
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Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2008 12:30 pm
I came.
I Voted.
I Commented.
And I'm pretty sure I did some congquering while I was at it.
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Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2008 2:14 pm
I, as puppet master of the Green Phoenix (Steven), have cast my vote. Hurray for democracy!
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Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2008 4:13 pm
Allrighty, we need to wrap things up for this subchapter, Chapter six shall begin soon! Tomorrow at the earliest, next tuesday at the latest (At which point if you haven't been nice enough to wrap up what your character is doing then just assume they did.)
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:48 pm
Hurray for democracy! Only in democracy can so little be accomplished so consistently.
50%-50%.
Wow.
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Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2008 2:38 pm
If it helps, I only voted for the one with the least votes. xp
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