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 Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 4:35 pm
As I landed on the ground sensei came at me with a wind gale of his own as I moved back the wind from the attack blew me back to the ground as i slide hard on the ground getting me footing Gai came down with his foot going for me shoulder immdeiatly I put my arms up over my head stopping his leg early he backflipped off of my arms and came at me again with a leaf great whirlwind I ducked it as he landed on the ground with one arma and came again at me with last resort whirlwind back around from the spin I blocked up with both arms over my face as he knocked me back to the ground I was now on my back
3/6
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 4:38 pm
As he came down with a kick to my body from the ground slideing across the grass I jumped up with my arms and launched myself over him coming down with a flip kick as I got my normal postion in the air I came down on his back as Gai sensei moved over to the right of me dodgeing my leg he sweep me off my feet as I spun around in mid-air still airborne I hit the grass rolling sideways around as I got up Gai sensei came back at me as I turned on my sharingan my three symbols spun around my pupil as Gai sensei still came at me thrwoing many one legged right kicks I used my eyesight and ability to slow down his moves some to my naked eye being able to see his moves coming but still kinda quick I dodeed most of them but was hit soon enough with a outward kick as I slide against the ground again flipping back up to my feet
4/6
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 4:41 pm
With his fot coming at my head I did a spin around him giving him a backhand to his head he grabbed my fist from behind and twisted around as he kicked me in the head bringing me in by my arm he grabbed I was hit hard as I fell down to the ground he kicked me up like a soccer ball and used the great leaf whrilwind to push me back with a great blow of air to a tree as I hit the bark i sunk in a little looking back at sensei as he was in crane style stance with his one foot up and balanceing on the other and his hands out with his arms bent he let out a loud yell as I fell from the tree but got back up and looked at Gai sensei now getting all the movement I needed from him with my sharingan
5/6
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 4:46 pm
Now seeing his movements clearly I knew I stood a chance now ladning the leaf gale on him as I open my eyes wide I ran at him and came directly at him as Gai sensei was confused by my movement telling me never come at me opponent like that ever unless I have a idea for the lotus he got serious blocking up his front face and chest I jumped at him making my body seem like it would go into the leaf whirlwind I faked it out and landed short by about 2 inches off from the postion as I went under his legs and then came from behind him Gai sensei turned around thinking I was up as I was still ducked under him I let my leg out as I tripped sensei then used the rest if the wind from the attack to perel him away into the same tree I hit as he hit the bottom and acorns came down hit his head as he said I have mastered the technuiqe to my highest extent as he gave me thumbs up with a bright smile on his face
6/6
Leaf Gale mastered^^
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 5:01 pm
((Morning Peacock Trainning))
Looking at Gai sensei I look at him get and waclk over asking if he could teach me something more about the gates sense I knew there were attacks in the eight gates but gai sensei thought they were too dangerous for me to use but as he knew that I was getting much stronger than before he signed and took me in by the shoulder and explained it to me very carefully "Look Neoshin..... I never knew that you were so strong but you are almost better than Lee when he was a genin but now I think your ready the same treatment as him so I want you to be ready beacuse i'm going to teach you a move that not even Lee knows, the morning peacock.."
1/10
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 5:07 pm
Looking back at sensei I was confused at this new move I have never heard of as sensei drew closer to my ear he went away about a few feet from me and pointed out his finger "I will only say this once so pay attenetion." I took out my notebook taking notes as I looked at him carefully to get it all down "The morning peacock is a taijutsu move that can only be used in the 6th gate the gate of joy or view.... this attack is very powerfull and does massive damage to the opponent if done properly, but be warned that if you stay in the 6th gate for long then the jutsu will do great damage to your muscles and your eyes being the regluar effect of the jutsu, so now that you know I think it's time you leanred it."
2/10
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 5:25 pm
As I stop writing I get confused with the pescription as he did'nt tell me what it does I closed my notbook and asked him what do i have to do in this attack as Gai sensei smiles and then points at a large tree thats about 30 ft tall "The attack is when you go into the 6th gate and then jump at your opponent switfy let quick so he cannot see you and with your great speed it should'nt be a problem for you, but as you jump at them you attack them with a barrage of fist strikes all around there body as the chakra from the attack will create a pecock shaped formation over you opponent from the strikes you stop them and then send your opponent down to the ground with a powerfull kick or punch as they should still be covered by the burining chakra, now you must perform it."
3/10
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 5:29 pm
As I get ready to perform the attack Gai sensei stops my before I use the gates he told me this attack can be performed in your normal state during the trainning for it and once mastered you will truely see results when you do it to your oponent so I took consideration in this and looked up as Gai sensei got into his famou peacock stancehe looked at me as his arms were out to his sides and his one leg was up in the air bent as he right leg kept him balanced "When you leap at your opponent this stance is what must be used to perform it correctly, and it looks pretty cool to but you must leap at your opponent in silence and without one sound keeping this stance on when your even in the air, understand?" I nodded and got in the same stance keeping my balance
4/10
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 5:38 pm
I get in the stance keeping it the same and maintaining it as I try to keep as much balance as possible by keeping my body firm and movemetless I look at the tree with my eyes as I nearly lose footing I move over to the right keeping it the same I then leap off of it as I still have my hands out I get at the large shrubs in seconds using my great speed but not amazingly quick becasue of my weights still on I open my palms out and then cltuch them hard as I strike the tree with great force and persition htting it over and over with my powerfull blows I don't stop only going faster at it but with my body at its normal rate it's not that great while I drop from the sky now landing on the ground i stare up at me progess seening dints in it but not many break-throughs with it as Gai sensei said if you get at least a bust threw the tree then your ready to use it in the gates
5/10
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 5:43 pm
I stare down at my hands as they have some bruises from the bark but nothing series as this jutsu might be harder then I think I go back and do it over and over about firve more times getting bac into the stance and going back at it with my same speed leap and my same power punches as Gai sensei looks at me wondering if the move is too tough for me to master I go back down from the tree finishing my fifth time doing it I look at my hands bnow seeing them bleeding a little bit form the sharp bark from the tree I can see that I have no progress coming on so I might have to think of another way to approach this move and master in a quick and effective time
6/10
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 5:50 pm
Going back again I stand there as I am turned around I sign and then turn back to it as I am breathing heavily doing this move throughout the day and getting kinda tired I could see that my efforts are hopeless I think of a new plan I close my eyes thinking to myself as many images go through my mind about the first time i devoted myself to taijutsu I knew what i'd go threw and nothing could stop me at this point sense I have gone to far I opened my eyes as my sharingan came on and my three symbols spun around my pupil as my mind went through a great change of moves and technuies I have been through for the past few days I look back at the tree as I watch the scene I saw when gai sensei was showng me the stance I instantly copied and got ready to get serious with this move now
7/10
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 5:59 pm
I then put my other foot down as I close my arms across my face Gai sensei looks back at me as he starts to freak out knowing that it might be too much for me but it's already too late as I have alredy skipped the first gate going into the seccond in the instant he starts thinking of the results my hair starts going up as my body around me starts increase in chakra the rocks and dust sprial around me now i am in the thrid gate as I just entered it my skin turns dark and my hair goes spikeing up as I let go of the gate I burst with extreme chakra as I went to the 4th gtae now my head starts growing veins and my muscles start to increase in size as I scream out in excitment I can feel my body getting stronger as I look at the tree now with much intensity I get ready to attack it with the move
8/10
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 6:17 pm
Powering up now with a great amount of chakra going through me I am still in the 5th gate as I bend dwon father and my power explodes as my green aura grows even larger than before about five times tenfold even I am screaming even ouder as I am giving it all I got to perfect this move in one try I now open my eyes fully as they are red but the symbols are still there as my eyes have no pupil but are blod red from my sharingan I then open my arms out again as I yell out loud going into te sixth gate my power explodes even more and as Gai sensei stares at me with much pride in my work I then jump up into the air and then land hard on the ground in the stance as i have only one shot to do the jutsu and now is my only shot
9/10
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 6:46 pm
I jump at the tree now as I am completely silent my body dissappears instantly as I am going around the tree now in my sixth gate as I am moving faster than the speed of light my eyes can see everything and anything now that I am in the veiw gate increasing me eyesight and my sharingan making my eyesight even slowly and accurate I can see the tree easily as I circle it constanly with incredible agility Gai sensei looks at me as he can tell wear I am but not see where I am going as I now am infront of the tree I jump back going about 20 ft away and then leaping back at it on one foot I hit the tree with my first strike doing a barrage of punches and strikes breaking the tree in Gai sensei can see the frie coming from my body as I leap down now I jump up again and kick the tree off the root going into the air and in a random part of the forest I come down as i am out of the gate I fall to my knees lookng back and then behind me as Gai sensei smiles and has tear running down his face we have moment and then he gives me a high praiseing thumbs up with a large smile of effort now that I have mastered his best technuiqe
10/10
Morning Peacock mastered^^
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Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2006 7:26 pm
((I'm doing my primary lotus trainning in sets of 5 sense the move is so long and I can type faster at this rate))
As I walked around konoha again I could tell that this was going to be a tight race to try to learn one more technuiqe before the chunin exams so I tried to hurry up and find Lee sensei beofre the exams started to get a better trainning seccion in to get me ready as I looked all over the village for him I could'nt spot him anywhere but as I walked to the feilds of the plains still inside konoha I saw Lees senseo standing in front of the forest as his hand was out pointed at me as I looked over at him and squinted getting a better look it was him as he looked completly serious he open his eyes and then stared straight at me as he spoke "Neoshin.... I want to teach you one more move before the chunin exams to get you ready... if you can handle it then I know your ready for it..... now come and face me as I will teach you the primary lotus... one of the best moves I pocess."
1/15
Seeing Lee sensei stand there made me wonder if this would be another great battle to see if I had what it took to take on rock lee sensei as our last fight when I was learning the sixth gate from him was a tough one indeed becasue of the lack of focus I had on that battle i knew that this fight could probly determine which one of us could be the best at tajutsu but knowing my regular thought I did'nt want to beat my sensei Lee and prove to be better but I also knew that in my mind this would be the only way to be the best ninja I can be, even if I surpass some others in the process "Okay Lee sensei i will fight, but if I don't win then let this fight prove that I have the guts to at least take you on, now lets do this!" I now run at him as I have mt right hand behind my back and my left one out heading straight at him at a normal speed
2/15
Comeing at Lee sensei now I ran at him very quickly zipping off the ground like a rocket I sent a powerfull leaf whirlwind at him as I did'nt leae the ground but I gave him a strong and fast hit that made him at east flinch as he blocked up as hard as he could he went back a little as his face and his arms bent out he held up as I came at him again he back up and put his hands up as I made a strong fist strike at his forearms he put up he blocked me but I pushed him back hard enough to get another attack in as I sent another punch at them again but he put up his other arm blocking it while i used great speed and I got to his side throwing another leaf whrilwind on the ground at his arms he blocked that one too but he could fee my power coming out at him at full strength as he looked at me my eyes showed anger
3/15
As he Lee sdiestepped it and then backed off me again I came at him with a barrage of attacks as he could barely see me coming but once he got one glimps he could easily put his arms or legs up to prevent my attack from doing any damage in a intercepting skill of great porportion I came at Lee with a outward forward kick as he sidestepped it I came again with a punch to his side ribs but he blocked it with his hand having a open palm getting my wirst barley in quick display of speed I went infront of him throwing too lower kicks but he stopped them with his knees before I even had a chance to throw it up my feet could'nt get in but I now had to rely on fist strikes "Damn.... Lee sensei can really put up a good defense but I know i can get in on him if I need to, and it starts now!"
4/15
Now that I was infront of Lee I could go at him full force doing outter damage to his body now that I get a chance to attack him at a fast rate and he has no chioce but to block but I started throwing out a barrage of punches at Lee sensei as he went back a few times he could'nt taje much more hits like this even though he was blokcing the attacks were hitting his bone and his skin making bruises and bumps on his skin and his wraps starting showing blood not form my knuckles but from his as he stryggled to keep me from getting closer once i threw out a kick to his legs he did a backlfip now having a chance to counter attack "Now I will come in on him with the spinning leaf and knock him back to give me some time to recover from his unstoppable blows......"
5/15
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