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 Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 2:21 am
Red Xavier i love this jutsu i made up and it's awesome!!! approve or disapprove... heart copy cat jutsu- user opens a copy cat book and make him copy the opponents same moves until the user ends the jutsu by closing the copy cat book!! heart this is just copying sharingan and kinda like a puppet jutsu when u think about it
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 3:15 am
Extra Instincts-The user can fill vibration on the ground or a wind gust in the air feel fight while blinded.If an opponent jumps the user can feel the air and know.Or is a opponent runs the user can feel the ground
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 11:29 am
Elemental Clone Barrier ~ (Naomi) - All Elemental Clone that have already been created receive a barrier of which protects them from one attack that could possibly destroy them. In other words, the barrier prevents them from being destroyed by their opposing element for only one attack. Beastly Overtaking ~ (Naomi) -Naomi loses control of her judgment and turns into a beast. -(Bio) After feeling the power of the Symbiot Armor Naomi began to long for more. Slowly but surely she loses her mind and the beast within her takes over. Transforming her frail human body into a demonic life form. -(Appearance) Naomi’s eyes turn red and beady and her skin turns pale with unnoticeable swirl in it. Naomi’s nails grow long as senbon and her teeth merely sharpen. She remains the same height and weight but her hair stands almost on end and she stands on her tiptoes. Her speed is not increased and neither is her strength. Only her appearance, judgment, and clones appearance change. When in this form her clones take the same form but their judgment is not changed because Naomi has little control over them in this form. For example, if Naomi sends a clone to kill it may ignore her from time to time as well as Kazuki when not in beast form. Beastly Undertaking ~ (Kazuki)
-Beastly undertaking is when Naomi changes due to beastly overtaking Kazuki also transforms.
-(Bio) Naomi’s beloved pet dog Kazuki was fighting alongside Naomi one day when she snapped. She used a seal to turn Kazuki into a beast dog whenever she lost control. Naomi finally snapped out of her beast form and tried to undo the sealing but could not. Kazuki now had a seal atop his forehead that gleamed with a vibrant pink light. (image without seal and with)
-(Appearance) Kazuki grows as tall as a two story house and as long as a car on an ale train. His fur is dark brown and covered by his seal which can turned into small curled red wind blades. Kazuki’s eyes turn bloodshot red and his pupils enlarge, increasing his eyesight. His claws are as long as a Tyrannosaurus Rex’s and as long as a Raptor tail. (image coming soon)
-(Attacks) Big Dig
Kazuki dashes behind foe(s) and begins digging a hole. The dirt dug up is merely moved aside until he reaches some rocks. Kazuki then kicks the rocks up into the air making a rock rain (the size of his previous form) or a boulder rain (the size of four stacked Choji’s), depending mainly on the areas surroundings. If there are boulders around then there are tons of boulders underground but if there are little or no boulders then only rocks can be found.
-Fetch
Kazuki can catch Naomi either in mid-air or before she hits the ground. This is only possible if he is nearby and isn’t preoccupied with an enemy constricting him.
-Nudge
Kazuki can boost Naomi high into the air, giving her keen momentum and air speed. Or, if Naomi’s on the ground, Kazuki can push Naomi toward an opponent increasing her speed and attack delivery. Cannot be dodged if in really close range (specify) but can in far range (specify) and not off balance.Elemental Clone Jutsu: Clone Compounding ~ - Naomi can combine different Elemental Clone hand signs in order to create a compound clone. For example a fire clone and a sand clone to create a glass clone. Elemental Clone compounds created by Naomi cannot regenerate like her elemental clones can. These clones also cannot increase in size unless Naomi does so when performing the jutsu. The clone can never do this on their own. Naomi cannot with certain clones such as a poison, gas, oxygen, etc. These clones do possess the ability to have an Elemental Barrier on them. *~ These are a few made ups I have come up with and wanted an opinion. Also, anyone who hasn't responded to the following made ups please do because I don't know if their legit or not. ~* Lady Ke-Ke Here's a list of all the made ups I've come up with. Healing Jutsu - Naomi is placed into a deep meditative sleep while replenishing her chakra ten fold as well as heal small wounds. Elemental Healing Jutsu - Naomi can regenerate a lost body part using elements in nature to a certain extent. She can also merely heal a wound to keep from bleeding to death. Elemental Healing cannot repleish chakra or place Naomi's limb back onto her body. Trait Stealing Jutsu - With this jutsu Naomi can take another users trait (such as Sharingan, Mangekyou Sharingan, Byakugan, etc.) for a set number of posts. I say maybe three but I don't know for sure.
Matrix Skill - This is merely something for fun. I doubt if it is capable of doing much damage to a foe or anything of the sort. With this both users it is effective on can move slower and it increases the time it takes for them to attack. Naomi is also effected so it is best to be used when in a group.
Time Slow Jutsu - Now this jutsu is the same as the Matrix Skill... it just has a cooler and less funny name. I couldn't decide which was better. Lol.Glimpse of Death - Finally glimpse of death. When in a battle Naomi is capable of tapping into the afterlife and learn one skill. This must be performed in a group as well because Naomi basically dies then comes back to life once her trainings over. She must also wait for the number of posts she trained to equal the amount of posts others made. For example: Naomi trains for ten posts then she must wait ten posts before coming back to life and attacking.How are these? Too much?
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 11:35 am
Lady Ke-Ke Elemental Clone Barrier ~ (Naomi) - All Elemental Clone that have already been created receive a barrier of which protects them from one attack that could possibly destroy them. In other words, the barrier prevents them from being destroyed by their opposing element for only one attack. Beastly Overtaking ~ (Naomi) -Naomi loses control of her judgment and turns into a beast. -(Bio) After feeling the power of the Symbiot Armor Naomi began to long for more. Slowly but surely she loses her mind and the beast within her takes over. Transforming her frail human body into a demonic life form. -(Appearance) Naomi’s eyes turn red and beady and her skin turns pale with unnoticeable swirl in it. Naomi’s nails grow long as senbon and her teeth merely sharpen. She remains the same height and weight but her hair stands almost on end and she stands on her tiptoes. Her speed is not increased and neither is her strength. Only her appearance, judgment, and clones appearance change. When in this form her clones take the same form but their judgment is not changed because Naomi has little control over them in this form. For example, if Naomi sends a clone to kill it may ignore her from time to time as well as Kazuki when not in beast form. Beastly Undertaking ~ (Kazuki) -Beastly undertaking is when Naomi changes due to beastly overtaking Kazuki also transforms. -(Bio) Naomi’s beloved pet dog Kazuki was fighting alongside Naomi one day when she snapped. She used a seal to turn Kazuki into a beast dog whenever she lost control. Naomi finally snapped out of her beast form and tried to undo the sealing but could not. Kazuki now had a seal atop his forehead that gleamed with a vibrant pink light. (image without seal and with) -(Appearance) Kazuki grows as tall as a two story house and as long as a car on an ale train. His fur is dark brown and covered by his seal which can turned into small curled red wind blades. Kazuki’s eyes turn bloodshot red and his pupils enlarge, increasing his eyesight. His claws are as long as a Tyrannosaurus Rex’s and as long as a Raptor tail. (image coming soon) -(Attacks) Big Dig Kazuki dashes behind foe(s) and begins digging a hole. The dirt dug up is merely moved aside until he reaches some rocks. Kazuki then kicks the rocks up into the air making a rock rain (the size of his previous form) or a boulder rain (the size of four stacked Choji’s), depending mainly on the areas surroundings. If there are boulders around then there are tons of boulders underground but if there are little or no boulders then only rocks can be found. -Fetch Kazuki can catch Naomi either in mid-air or before she hits the ground. This is only possible if he is nearby and isn’t preoccupied with an enemy constricting him. -Nudge Kazuki can boost Naomi high into the air, giving her keen momentum and air speed. Or, if Naomi’s on the ground, Kazuki can push Naomi toward an opponent increasing her speed and attack delivery. Cannot be dodged if in really close range (specify) but can in far range (specify) and not off balance. Elemental Clone Jutsu: Clone Compounding ~ - Naomi can combine different Elemental Clone hand signs in order to create a compound clone. For example a fire clone and a sand clone to create a glass clone. Elemental Clone compounds created by Naomi cannot regenerate like her elemental clones can. These clones also cannot increase in size unless Naomi does so when performing the jutsu. The clone can never do this on their own. Naomi cannot with certain clones such as a poison, gas, oxygen, etc. These clones do possess the ability to have an Elemental Barrier on them. *~ These are a few made ups I have come up with and wanted an opinion. Also, anyone who hasn't responded to the following made ups please do because I don't know if their legit or not. ~* Lady Ke-Ke Here's a list of all the made ups I've come up with. Healing Jutsu - Naomi is placed into a deep meditative sleep while replenishing her chakra ten fold as well as heal small wounds. Elemental Healing Jutsu - Naomi can regenerate a lost body part using elements in nature to a certain extent. She can also merely heal a wound to keep from bleeding to death. Elemental Healing cannot repleish chakra or place Naomi's limb back onto her body. Trait Stealing Jutsu - With this jutsu Naomi can take another users trait (such as Sharingan, Mangekyou Sharingan, Byakugan, etc.) for a set number of posts. I say maybe three but I don't know for sure. Matrix Skill - This is merely something for fun. I doubt if it is capable of doing much damage to a foe or anything of the sort. With this both users it is effective on can move slower and it increases the time it takes for them to attack. Naomi is also effected so it is best to be used when in a group. Time Slow Jutsu - Now this jutsu is the same as the Matrix Skill... it just has a cooler and less funny name. I couldn't decide which was better. Lol. Glimpse of Death - Finally glimpse of death. When in a battle Naomi is capable of tapping into the afterlife and learn one skill. This must be performed in a group as well because Naomi basically dies then comes back to life once her trainings over. She must also wait for the number of posts she trained to equal the amount of posts others made. For example: Naomi trains for ten posts then she must wait ten posts before coming back to life and attacking. How are these? Too much? I don't think you can have the doggy ones cause you are branching into inuzuka techniques.
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 11:40 am
Komen: Eh, I guess my brother can have it then. Can't it be like a summon when I'm in demon form? Like I summon him from the same scroll but using the beastly blood he is summoned as a beast like me?
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 2:34 pm
flying razor burning leaf jutsu- the user uses his chakra to throw razor sharp burning leafs at the opponent.
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 2:40 pm
Red Xavier flying razor burning leaf jutsu- the user uses his chakra to throw razor sharp burning leafs at the opponent. u keep making random made ups with no discription into it put some meet on it and u dont even have a extra spot for one
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 2:42 pm
My views:
Sage: I don't know what that means?
Ace: Looks good.
Keke: Also, Time slow, or Matrix, I don't think you can have either for the fact that Nyu has the exact same thing I believe. I don't know if he got rid of them or something, but probably still has them.
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 2:55 pm
jashu555 My views: Sage: I don't know what that means? Ace: Looks good. Keke: Also, Time slow, or Matrix, I don't think you can have either for the fact that Nyu has the exact same thing I believe. I don't know if he got rid of them or something, but probably still has them. does thast mean i can add it now?
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 5:25 pm
Body Tack-When the user dies his body will stay intact with a barrier around it that nothing can get in or out unless a promise is made when the user is alive.
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 9:37 am
I have two techniques I just thought they would be cool to show.
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DNA Analysis Creation
Seki watches his opponent in battle, and then copies a sample of their dna from watching them. He then makes a dead body of the person he analyzed, which can be given to another user to make puppets or other clones type things. By giving another person the dead body, they are marked with a seal on their shoulder, that forces them to try and perform a task for Seki.
How it would work: O.k. First I watch Ace battle Nova, and I copy down Ace. Then I go to Bone, and trade the copy dead body of Ace that I made to him. He makes a puppet and is then marked with my Task Seal. I then later tell Bone something like, kill some member or something. He is forced to do it, and once completed, the Task Seal will disappear. If he is killed in the process though, the Task Seal still disappears, because he tried to do the task.
O.k. In other news, when I analyze a a person, the name is added to my weapons, like Nova's Body, and disappears when I give it away.
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Another technique, this one has a cool effect.
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Vampire Acquiring Technique (Name may change)
Seki bites his opponent, after a certain number of posts, and learns a technique.
How this would work: First, me and someone like Nova start a battle. Let's say I am trying to learn Genjutsu Release, and Nova has it in his technique list. After I have made four posts (The Requirement for learning Genjutsu Release), I use this technique to add Genjutsu Release to my technique list. This technique is pretty much substituting the other learning process where you have to type out learning it from a teacher for mimicing it onto my technique sheet. It bores me somewhat typing out everything so I thought it would be funner to be able to battlle and then automatically learn it. This technique can't learn clan techniques.
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 9:47 am
The first one, the task part, I don't think that would work correctly, making someone FORCED to do something? I don't know if anyone would like that done to them, or how it would work.
The second one you can already do if you are sparring for fun or something. o.o;;
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 9:51 am
ok Jashuu wanted me to get another one giving this technique an ok.
The Haunting – Calling upon the most inner portions of the psyche and the portion of the mind that harbors dark intent and nightmares. The user is able to rip out a ghost like being and bring it into the physical realm to combat the users enemies. The Ghost warrior that the user conjures is unaffected by physical attacks but can be attacked by elemental attacks. The ghost warrior appears to be a regular shinobi but just ghost-like and wields various weapons that depends on the user. The number can increase depending on chakra level.
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 6:20 pm
Komenusai ok Jashuu wanted me to get another one giving this technique an ok. The Haunting – Calling upon the most inner portions of the psyche and the portion of the mind that harbors dark intent and nightmares. The user is able to rip out a ghost like being and bring it into the physical realm to combat the users enemies. The Ghost warrior that the user conjures is unaffected by physical attacks but can be attacked by elemental attacks. The ghost warrior appears to be a regular shinobi but just ghost-like and wields various weapons that depends on the user. The number can increase depending on chakra level. ((umm someone? anyone can you check for me if this is ok?))
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 7:25 pm
...I kinda like the sound of this.
phoenix feather snow storm
A-rank
all ranges
Mitsuko creates a light phoenix out of ice that can fly. It has an extremely frigid aura, freezing stuff around it and sticking to anything it touches. Mitsuko can make it explode into a bunch of ice feathers or form it back into a phoenix. Once the feathers get stuck onto the opponent, Mitsuko can then do whatever she wants with the ice, like make it explode with her other technique.
I know all my techs sound flowery...
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