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 Posted: Wed Mar 20, 2013 11:02 pm
Holy Rinaku Grand Chevalier Haji Holy Rinaku Grand Chevalier Haji Holy Rinaku 1: Gained at jounin: Commanding Roar: All sound based genjutsu increased by one rank in power. I don't see anyone to have touched this so I will so you can move along Rin~ Since this is a trait I'm going to follow trait rules:We do not allow anything to be increased by rank so thats one thing thats wrong Second aren't these trait supposed to be from you're animal? The only animal thing about this is the name. I haven't looked at the tamer recently but I'm sure it says you gain traits related to your animal. Since no animal has any relation to genjutsu its denied on that as well. Try making traits that make Taka more animalistic and less increasing her powers as a normal shinobi I have...And lions roar loudly for the record. The sound can carry for miles :/ Will Taka roar every time she'd uses a sound jutsu? Aaww that be so cute I just imagine her going RAAAAAWWWRRR -Cough- Okay back to business, I'm not saying sound part doesn't make sense I'm saying how the genjutsu part of the trait doesn't make sense. Besides even if it did, we still do not allow anything to be increased by rank for traits. So the technique falls apart there because making the technique slightly or moderately more powerful like you would a ninjutsu wouldn't make sense since Genjutsu weakness is Kai and pain People arent going to be able to use either of those methods for Taka's genjutsu anyway...idk. Its hard to think of another lion based trait unless you want to push her strength even further. You could gain lions claws or something XD also how would someone break your genjutsu then?
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Posted: Thu Mar 21, 2013 7:01 am
Grand Chevalier Haji Holy Rinaku Grand Chevalier Haji Holy Rinaku Grand Chevalier Haji Holy Rinaku 1: Gained at jounin: Commanding Roar: All sound based genjutsu increased by one rank in power. I don't see anyone to have touched this so I will so you can move along Rin~ Since this is a trait I'm going to follow trait rules:We do not allow anything to be increased by rank so thats one thing thats wrong Second aren't these trait supposed to be from you're animal? The only animal thing about this is the name. I haven't looked at the tamer recently but I'm sure it says you gain traits related to your animal. Since no animal has any relation to genjutsu its denied on that as well. Try making traits that make Taka more animalistic and less increasing her powers as a normal shinobi I have...And lions roar loudly for the record. The sound can carry for miles :/ Will Taka roar every time she'd uses a sound jutsu? Aaww that be so cute I just imagine her going RAAAAAWWWRRR -Cough- Okay back to business, I'm not saying sound part doesn't make sense I'm saying how the genjutsu part of the trait doesn't make sense. Besides even if it did, we still do not allow anything to be increased by rank for traits. So the technique falls apart there because making the technique slightly or moderately more powerful like you would a ninjutsu wouldn't make sense since Genjutsu weakness is Kai and pain People arent going to be able to use either of those methods for Taka's genjutsu anyway...idk. Its hard to think of another lion based trait unless you want to push her strength even further. You could gain lions claws or something XD also how would someone break your genjutsu then? The same way thats stated in cannon as to what to do when your fighting a sharingan...dont do so alone. Unless you outnumber the person 3 to 1, retreat. Hell, they stated kurenai was almost as scary as itachi in that respect. Genjutsu may be one of the least used things in the series but ill tell you, its up there with the most powerful
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Posted: Thu Mar 21, 2013 4:00 pm
Holy Rinaku Grand Chevalier Haji Holy Rinaku Grand Chevalier Haji Holy Rinaku I have...And lions roar loudly for the record. The sound can carry for miles :/ Will Taka roar every time she'd uses a sound jutsu? Aaww that be so cute I just imagine her going RAAAAAWWWRRR -Cough- Okay back to business, I'm not saying sound part doesn't make sense I'm saying how the genjutsu part of the trait doesn't make sense. Besides even if it did, we still do not allow anything to be increased by rank for traits. So the technique falls apart there because making the technique slightly or moderately more powerful like you would a ninjutsu wouldn't make sense since Genjutsu weakness is Kai and pain People arent going to be able to use either of those methods for Taka's genjutsu anyway...idk. Its hard to think of another lion based trait unless you want to push her strength even further. You could gain lions claws or something XD also how would someone break your genjutsu then? The same way thats stated in cannon as to what to do when your fighting a sharingan...dont do so alone. Unless you outnumber the person 3 to 1, retreat. Hell, they stated kurenai was almost as scary as itachi in that respect. Genjutsu may be one of the least used things in the series but ill tell you, its up there with the most powerful I know how powerful genjutsu is,and they said that such a long time ago. How do you even remember...Also itachi totally kicked kurenais a**!!! Muahahahah Also think its time to stop cluttering the custom jutsu area with our idle chit chatter when you get an idea for another trait post it up and I'll take it to be reviewed
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Posted: Sun Mar 24, 2013 5:42 pm
Character: Kenji Hyuuga
Technique Name: True Water Puddle Transportation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: Essentially the same as the Water Puddle Transportation jutsu, the only difference being this mastered form of the jutsu allows transportation between two non-connected bodies of water in close physical proximity.
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Posted: Mon Mar 25, 2013 9:52 pm
Character: Mikoto Suoh (Shinsetsu)
Technique Name: Tetsu-gawa - Iron Skin
Rank: S-rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: By using S-rank chakra, Mikoto forms a thin armor like chakra layer on his skin. Blunt techniques (Blunt force) A-rank and lower are rendered useless, piercing techniques B-rank and higher are able to break the armor. You must wait four posts after it's broken to repair it, once again using S-rank chakra.
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Posted: Sat Mar 30, 2013 9:19 pm
Character: Yuugao Hanshou
Technique Name: Roo Hop
Rank: N/a
Type: Tamer Trait
Element: N/a
Description: From her close connection and long relationship with her Kangaroo partner. Yuugao has developed the ability to clear jump with a slightly increased speed up to 30ft in a single leap.
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Posted: Tue Apr 02, 2013 5:57 pm
Character: Lasuro Setsuko(( or anyone with the Hyouton Blood Line if possible))
Technique Name: Hyouton [ Ice Release: Frozen Pierce]
Rank:S/ A/ B/ C : (C) to learn
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Description:This technique channels a large amount of water from the area from the into ice with the ability of the Hyouton, into the user's hand then into all fingers except the thumb. Depending on the amount of chakra used is how strong the jutsu will be. The jutsu's strength becomes so great that its visible to others. Once the Hand seals are completed, the user charges forward to thrusts their fingers into the target. Once the attack connects ice starts to form inside of the opponent's body where the attack was made freezing the blood in that area for a short time.This produces heavy amounts of damage that is usually fatal.
Hand Seals: Ram → Boar → Tiger →Ox → Bird → Horse → Ox → Rat → Ram
Visual:With the fact that the snow surround the user so much it becomes a icy blizzard spiraling into the users hand. The high concentration of water and ice produces a sound reminiscent of hard winds blowing.
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Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2013 8:59 pm
iBromantic
Character: Kenji Hyuuga
Technique Name: True Water Puddle Transportation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: Essentially the same as the Water Puddle Transportation jutsu, the only difference being this mastered form of the jutsu allows transportation between two non-connected bodies of water in close physical proximity.
approved
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Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2013 8:59 pm
Snow_Akechi
Character: Mikoto Suoh (Shinsetsu)
Technique Name: Tetsu-gawa - Iron Skin
Rank: S-rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: By using S-rank chakra, Mikoto forms a thin armor like chakra layer on his skin. Blunt techniques (Blunt force) A-rank and lower are rendered useless, piercing techniques B-rank and higher are able to break the armor. You must wait four posts after it's broken to repair it, once again using S-rank chakra.
The technqiue can only last 5 posts anyways, until chakra must be spent to continue the technqiue
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Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2013 9:02 pm
Reaper Elyse Character: Yuugao Hanshou
Technique Name: Roo Hop
Rank: N/a
Type: Tamer Trait
Element: N/a
Description: From her close connection and long relationship with her Kangaroo partner. Yuugao has developed the ability to clear jump with a slightly increased speed up to 30ft in a single leap. This seems perfectly reasonable. Approved
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Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2013 9:03 pm
Lasuro
Character: Lasuro Setsuko(( or anyone with the Hyouton Blood Line if possible))
Technique Name: Hyouton Freezing Shard
Rank:S/A/ B/C : (C) to learn
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice Release
Description: This technique channels a large amount of water in the area from the air into snow then to ice/ hail because of the ability of the Hyouton in to the user's hand then into the fingers except the thumb. The amount of chakra is so great that it becomes visible also with the fact that the snow surround the user so much it becomes a blizzard spiraling into the users hand. The high concentration of water and ice produces a sound reminiscent of hard winds blowing. Once the technique is completed, the user charges forward and thrusts their fingers into the target. Once Contact is made ice starts to forms on the opponent's body where the attack was made freezing the blood in that area for a limited time.This produces heavy amounts of damage that is usually fatal.
Also depending on the amount of chakra you use will be how effective and deadly the jutsu will be.
Not approved. The technqiue needs to be more clearly described, and needs to be toned down a bit
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Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2013 9:10 pm
Yo-ko Not approved. The technqiue needs to be more clearly described, and needs to be toned down a bit lml sorry bout the mix up but its basically like a ice version on the chidori, and ill fix it up now
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Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2013 9:17 pm
Any specific reason? It's not broken or OP, it can be broken even by Genin if they've trained well.
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Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2013 9:33 pm
Almost all S rank armor techniques last 5 posts before chakra is needed again, and most are not allowed to be used more then a single time in a battle. As a custom, you are following the rules like other S ranks, but with the added bonus of being able to repetedly using it
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