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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 8:12 am
"I think thats enough for now.." Spoke Magnus closing his book. The glowing light coming from the text fazed out. Blood was scatterd around the battle field but the bodies were not to be found. He placed his book under his arm and began walking.
It wasn't to long till he found a group. "Hello, I'm a medic I was sent to heal any injured." He said to them waving as he approached.
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 9:13 am
HP:31
"I suppose so," Mark said, shrugging. "So does being crushed by rocks and being impaled. You do seem to be operating, however." As Craig explained, however, it dawned on Mark. "So that's what this whole purifier thing is..." he muttered to himself, except he wasn't speaking English. The language he spoke instead was fluent and yet pronounced harshly, his speech sounding nothing like any language existing on the planet he had landed on. The second he realized he had spoken in his native tongue he nearly swore, his expression hardening, hoping neither of the two noticed.
"So... they are all trying to destroy humanity?" Did that extend beyond this planet they called Earth? If so, now would be a rather good time to stop them, before they attacked any of Mark's systems.
Even as he spoke, however, he pushed back his left sleeve, examining the place where the steel had a moment before been through his arm. It was a plate, so the wound was thin and non-severe; it had already half-healed, but it hadn't assumed correct color; a strip of his flesh was still growing and was a strange mix of green and purple. Mark hurriedly pushed his sleeve back down to cover the wound.
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 1:33 pm
[[YOU MAY NOT IGNORE PEOPLE! Specify who you're approaching, too.]]
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 1:46 pm
((Are you talking to me? confused ))
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 2:08 pm
[[I'm guessing that leveling is becoming a problem. ^^ So... Train with each other! 3 wins will equal 1 level up. Don't go psycho or I will limit you to 1 battle a day. ^_^ Keep track of your wins so far. All who regretfully lost in the last battle please state your name. All the winners, state your name, as well. Those, who won. That will count as your first battle. I will not allow you to conceed to defeat until you've lost at least half your HP!!!!]]
She halted at his words, and an icy exterior spread across her form. The child's face flashed across her mind. It was hard to block the feeling she got everytime she thought of him.
"Forget him," she whispered. "If we want to be useful. We'll need to start training."
But, where? she thought quietly. Amati nudged her discreetly and their eyes met.
Remember the plains? Where the mining village was? he inquired. Her brows furrowed thoughtfully, turning away from her companion.
"That could work," she said quietly. Sakeri turned to Kin, her eyes sparkling with determination.
"Feel like making a trip back to the mining town?"
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 2:09 pm
[[Only if you're the group Froze approached, but he also needs to specify.]]
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 2:25 pm
"Huh? What about it?" Kin inquired. Of course, it was already palpable to him that she anted to train, but why there? And why did she suddenly start to think she was so weak, that they were so weak? It started to bother him slightly, despite his gleeful expression of enjoying the frightened face she was making of some boy. "That boy..." he frowned, somehow getting angry. True he hadn't made an attempt to go use his special eyes to perce through her heart annd truly give Sakeri a fright, but what if that boy didn't even try as well? It was rather easy for him to hear her think of that boy being so souless and having his eyes affect her so terribly.
He shrugged slightly, 'Did that old man make another one such as myself? No... It can't be. I'm his son, his only, his masterpiece, the ultimate fear. He can't possibly think of me as a failure and start creating another. No...' A flash of a dead man and a dark cloaked figure holding a great scythe came into view for a moment and immediately disappeared at Kin's forceful swatting of it away, but the thought began to get stronger within hm, sos trong that he couldn't help it.
"Sakeri..." he said softly, bending over to her and looking at her face to face eye to eye. His left eye did its magic and purged deep into her mind (that is, if you'd allow) to seek what that boy would have at least looked like and understand why she was so afraid. He wasn't just playing around his mind seeking ability like back then against the deffenders, but used utter focus instead.
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 3:05 pm
((Am I a winner? I can't tell, it seemed like a bit of a draw. Nobody was critically injured, although Kin did disengage.
Sorry for the OOC, but it does pertain to the RP. That's my excuse. 3nodding ))
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 5:57 pm
(( gonk Ugh if this doesn't work then I have no idea how to enter this RP sweatdrop ))
"Training you say.." Spoke Magnus as he approached, but before he took more thought on the subject of training he tugged on his first aid flag on his arm. "Sorry to interrupt, but before anything else is done I'd like to check any wounds your group may have. As you can see I'm a medic."
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 7:31 pm
[[ eek What?!!?!?!? Froze are you trying to approach my group? We're in a golf field right now because Kin transported us there. You'll need to justify how you got there and your reason. Put detail into who your seeing like red hair and green eyes. You'll be able to access the pictures from the profile pages.
Aside from all of that, we're purifiers and you're human... Purifiers kill humans, so unless you wish for the entire human population to go up in smoke. It's highly likely that our characters will want to kill you. If your human, a good way to introduce yourself is usually to people on your side. But, I can work with that if you really want to RP with us. mrgreen ]]
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 7:39 pm
Amadeus tried to remain calm and collected when the man/thing told him that these Purifiers were here solely to wipe out all of mankind. "Well, that explains the Pentagon, I suppose." His attempts to remain cool were starting to break down, and he was sure the others could notice his somewhat shaky attitude.
"Well, based on how ineffective my assault rifle was on that dust puppeteer back there, I'm going to assume human weaponry is about as effective as BB guns. Oh, man... this is SO not good." He looked back at the two people in front of him. "Well, clearly not all of these God-constructs are trying to destroy humanity. The Purifiers were fighting you," he pointed at Mark, "and another guy with wings, right? Are there more of these things that are trying to help us out?"
While he was saying this, he watched the second guy examine his arm... which was a color definitely not human.
"Hey, buddy. You either need to get that arm of yours checked out by a medic, or explain to me why it's that color. Don't take my gruff tone personally. I just found out some crazy God wants humanity destroyed, and I'm not happy about it."
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 7:41 pm
[[I guess we can say it was a draw because you didn't really give up and neither did Kin.]]
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Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 11:47 pm
((What? In the end, Craig became part of the good guys and it became 2 to one with the human soldier, plus NPCs! >_> That fight wasn't fair at all...))
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 4:20 pm
((Craig just stopped fighting, and the NPC's didn't really do didly >.< They do die one hit stare Stop whining Kind! and now I wait for Pen )) xp
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Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 5:34 pm
~*~♥ ♥ ♥~*~ ((sorry, I was doing homework...))
"no offence, but, not being able to fly is sorted into the list of 'good things' in my mind." Izzy replied. She sighed before continuing, "And unfortunetly, I can't drive. Legaly anyway." She watched Ryn carefully, and noticed his wince when he stepped forword. "but, before we do anything like going to Canada, you should at least wait 'till some of those wounds have healed." The concern in her voice was quite obvious, but that happens most of the time anyway. 'Ryn needs to let his wounds heal, they'll just end up re-opening.' she thought. ~*~♥ ♥ ♥~*~
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