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 Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 4:19 pm
Letting the smoke get all over him I aw that sensei did'nt cover his body once it went off having a idea that he knew it was there somwhow I go in with caution as I go low to the ground sweeping my leg out threw the smokescreen making it flow threw it I feel nothing there as I jump back I wait for him to come out or the smoke to dissapear as once it does Gai sensei is nowhere to be seen "What! Where could he have gone, I was watching him all the way through..... impossible..." In a lighting quick look around Gai sensei come from the sky with a kick to my head successfully as I ge knocked to the ground going directly downward I feel a sharp pain in my skull but no serious damage "I'm faster than you think my student."
7/8
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 4:27 pm
Looking at him over me he walks away laughing as he thought I was done for today but once I got up I had a idea in my eyes as he could see it for himself he did a backflip in the air and came down with a dropkick I leap to the right side like a frog with my hands and feet I watch as he sinks his foot into the ground he smiles back at me and then gets serious again I look at him with a grin as he knows I have something up I leap forward at him throwing a shiruken as Gai sensei goes directly at it he bends his foot in very deep to his stomtach as he kick forward going passed the shiruken I knew he could get passed it but also seeing him do that strange kick I could tell that was the super strength whirlwind while I spin around like a twister I barley get away from it going right passed him I copyed it down with my shairngan as I land on my both feet stopping myself leaning in a little far I push back really hard going back at him bofore he touches the ground I get to his back and kick out hitting his spine as gai did it on purpose to see me land the move down he hits the ground rough but puts out his hands and legs to stop himself with me landing next to him he puts his hand on my shoulder giving me a thumbs up as his smile shines in the moonlight
8/8
Super strength whirlwind mastered^^
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 4:39 pm
((Konoha full kick soccer trainning))
s we sat there still in the feilds Gai sensei took out a ball that had the konoha leaf symobl on it he held over my face as he spun it around his finger "This ball is a special ball to train with durning sescions that you practice kick moves, that's why i'm now going to teach you the konoha full kick soccer attack, its when you get over your opponents head and kick them across their head but it's done best in mid-air to knock them down to the dirt... now lets begin, if you can get this ball from me by only using your feet then you will be able to do this technuiqe... now play!" I get up and get my legs ready moveing around in place to get them pumped up as I run at him Gai put the ball to then ground and then kicks it up as he goes over my head and then goes passed me moving the ball now on the ground as I chase after him "Damn this might be tough."
1/8
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 4:43 pm
He runs off with the ball constanly kicking it forward to gain more speed to outrun me as I speed up but with the weights on it's limited as I try to get to him he turns around to me and shakes his legs around and makes a funny face as I jump at him and do a downward dropkick to get it over hi legs in between he puts his feet between it and moves his leg up into the air standing on his arms he kicks it up and he jumps off the ground with it as he lands on my shoulders and he is now balanceing the ball on his nose I get pissed off and fall back as Gai jumps off my shoulders infront of me again I flip up and do the konoha dai senpu on the ground making a sweep kick he jumps over it and knocks the ball pass me with his chest as he jumps over me running off behind me with the ball laughing "This is excsise for ya."
2/8
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 4:58 pm
I get up and run after him as I jump high into the air coming down like a rocket at Gai sensei bow putting out my leg to kick him in the head with my foot and then take the ball from him to win but he saw my coming he ducked quickly as he kicked the ball behind him he ran after as I looked back and jumped forward at him I kicked out at his back and he ducked again sending ball back around to his backside I come at him with kick to the body and head as he ducks and dodges me easily with a smile on his face he blocks my next kick with his knee and the other with his arm catching them both he throws me back away from him as he balances the ball on his knee he laughs at me again in joy and delight of are trainning excerise
3/8
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 4:59 pm
"Your pretty good for the round one sescion but now it's time to take it to a new level... following me and try to get now!" Gai jumps into the trees as he has the ball on his right foot between his back thigh and leg holding it in he jumps off on one leg going throught the forest with it as I follow him we arrive in the village as he stands on the roof with it and he balances it on his head telling me to birng it with his right hand "Ok then..... city play, I might enjoy this." I jump at him doing a konoha whirlwind at his body as he hits the ball up into the air and ducks my kick I land on the ground going low with a sweep kick but he does a backflip and gets away just a few feet away from me he jumps baclk in and kick outward moving me back from him as the ball comes down he kicks it hard into the middle of the village as he dissapears in a blur of speed I follow him with some great speed but not enough to follow him toe to toe
4/8
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 5:00 pm
He gets to the ball before it even hits the ground balanceing it on his knee again with his hands up in a crane stance he smiles as he kicks it constaly like a hacky sack as I get there finally a few seconds after him I run at him again and do the hurricane kick as Gai sensei sets the ball down and then blocks the kicks with his knees and then pushes me back with them as he kicks out taunting me I get mad but I keep my cool as he gest the ball and goes up to a building with it I follow him going toe to toe with him as I do variuos attack patterns to catch him and get the ball "Damn you sensei, give it up..." Gai sensi smiles as he dodges and kicks the ball over and under me just having fun with the game/trainning we are going through
5/8
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 5:08 pm
I go at him and then jump back tired out of what I've been through so far thinking to myself "Ok he's only having more fun, but this is tireing me out... i gotta get that ball a quick and eective way without cheating... but how, wait I got it." I look at sensei smileing as he knows I have something up but he continues just playing with the ball as he had no idea what he was doing at the moment I run at him slowly but with a quick step as I get to him Gai flips the ball over his head and gets it to his back leg on his heel as I throw a punch to his chin but faking it stopping when I got close he flinched and loss balance as I jumped over his back to kick the ball away he lifted his leg down and dropped it as he put his hands up cautiously I go to the back of him and try to sweep it from him from down under "I gotta get it this time."
6/8
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 5:26 pm
I get the ball from under I kick it over both of our heads Gai looks up in surprise as I do a battle roll and get to my side and push getting to my feet and stareing at him with a wide smile of my clever plan "There's only one option now sensei.... prepare yourself because this is my game now." Gai looked at me and smiled as he jumped up into the air and then I did also as we got close to each other in the sky we clashed kicks as we did'nt use any hand to hand moves we kicked upward and down and side to side stopping the other ones moves as I saw the ball was coming down I knew I could finish this in an instant if I had the chance to get over him
7/8
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 5:38 pm
We start coming down now to the ground as we contiue kicking but Gai sensei starts going down lower than me because of his weight and I get on his shoulds as he grabs my legs so I can;t get to the ball by jumping off of him I kick my leg at his head and he moves my legs seperatly making me nearly do the splits so I can;t get to it I use my arms to grab his face as I bend down and then headbutt him hard in the forehead as he bleeds a little from his nose as he lets go and I jump off his shoulders as I get over the ball I do dozens of frontflips as I get my foot over it Gai lands on he ground as I kick it down with my right leg hitting it with all my power it smashes to the ground and cracks the earth under me and Gai sensei fals back as he sees the bal in the ground I land on my feet bending down then back up as I put my hand out helping him up with a smile on my face when he gets up he shakes my hand and says "Good job Neoshin... you've done very well for yourself."
8/8
Konoha full kick soccer mastered
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 8:12 pm
Walking around konoha for not all that long he alrdy heres about naruto uzumaki's shadow replication jutsu and how strong it is so he seeks out naruto and request that he teach him the jutsu. he agreed and they headed to a open area to practice the jutsu
They entered the area were they were going to practice at and naruto showed Lokey the correct handsign for the kagebunshino jutsu
"Alright lets give this a shot."Lokey said performing the jutsu easily creating a single puff of smoke that when it cleared what was there was what looked to be a black and white pile of Lokey. "Well that isnt very good there now is it naruto?" Lokey said more then asked
"You can do better...I think" Naruto said
"I know i can do better its hard" Lokey said
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"If you can do better then do it." Naruto said to Lokey trying to egg lokey into doing better by making him mad enough to do better
"I plan on it." Lokey said performing the jutsu easily again creting this time 2 puffs of smoke but both of the puffs cleared to reaveal two black and white piles of Lokey but they had shades of gray in them now which caused lokey to think that he was doing better then before
"Looks like your coming a little bit closer...not bye much though." Naruto said after poking one of the clones a couple of times with a stick "I hope that you can do better then this but not all people can so i wouldnt be surprised if you couldnt do it."
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"I know i can do it but its a hard jutsu." Lokey said pointedly as sure as himself as naruto was that he couldnt do it
"If its so hard why dont you quit..." Naruto said as pointedly as lokey on purpose beginning to truly doubt wether he could do this
"I cant quit." Lokey said cutting off naruto before he could finish his sentence
"well why not" Naruto said angrily after being cut off "You dont look very much like you have anything worth protecting to me."
"Becouse..."Lokey said pausing "...It goes against my ninja way to never give up even in the face of death." He performed the jutsu another time managing to get both of his clones he had managed to become perfect Lokey clones.
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"Alright the max none mass kage bunshi no jutsu is about 5 clones so if you can manage that ill give you a deal and i wont charge you to teach you Mass kage bunshin no...deal?" Naruto said to lokey hoping that lokey would give up before he did better so he could go eat some ramen soon
"Deal." Lokey said focusing on performing the jutsu another time and got three puffs of smoke and what emerged from those puffs of smoke was three Lokeys just lying on the floor twichting slightly which was the only movement of life that was showing
After staring at the clones for only a moment naruto said, "I am pretty sure that you can do better then that."
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"I know i can do better then that to and im trying to its kinda difficult." Lokey said attempting to perform the jutsu one more time managing to get all three puffs of smoke to become actual clones.
"See ya did it didnt ya...now do it better." Naruto said to lokey
"I plan on it." Lokey said getting ready to perform the jutsu again starting to get noticabely ungry even through his determination.
"I should hope so if you dont have determination you wont ever learn this jutsu." Naruto said, "Would you care for another demenstration..." he asked more than a little smugly and more rudely then anything just like naruto.
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"Alright i suppose i could use another demonstration whats the worst that could happen." Lokey said to Naruto
"Alright now whatch closely." Naruto said performing the jutsu with great zeal he got all 5 clones to appear perfectly and they all said, "BELIEVE IT!!"
"Alright now let me try again." Lokey said and he performed the jutsu with greatzeal and got all 5 clones to emerge perfectly, "Hey i did it." Lokey said almost not being able to believe it himself even though he knew he had it
"Ya you did but now lets see how long they last." Naruto said each of his clones walked up to mine and hit them on the shoulder lightly and they all disapeared. "Well that just wont do will it Lokey?" Naruto asked
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"No it wont so now we will have to work on making my shadow clones last... Right?" Lokey asked naruto already knowing the answer to the question although he wasnt sure naruto would take much more of this training
"Correct, and the key to that is to focus energy into your clones instead of just chakra becouse if its just chakra the clones wont last becouse they have no vitality to speak of." Naruto said pointedly as if he knew everything there ever was to know about shadow clones
"Alright so now i have to focus energy and chakra into them." Lokey said performing the jutsu again and sending in energy and chakra so as to creat longer lasting clones.
Naruto's clones hit them in the shoulder again and they disapeared.
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"Alright lets try this again." Loeky said getting ready to perform the jutsu another time although he was beginning to doubt it himself wether he could do it or not
"If you dont get it right soon i wont teach you the mass shadow replication." Naruto said smugly just like he would
"Well then i guess i had better hurry." Lokey said performing the jutsu and creating all 5 clones perfectly, narutos clones hit them all in the shoulder and they didnt disapear then they hit them not quite hard in their gut and they disapeared.
"Almost but not quite." Naruto said, "Try again."
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"Ive set it before you aint got to tell me twice." Lokey said to naruto performing the jutsu and creating perfectly 5 more clones, narutos clones hi them all in the gut and they disapeared as if they were nothing more then faulty images of lokey
"That was the same as last time." Naruto said, "Do better or i wont teach you any jutsu at all."
"I will." Lokey said to naruto getting ready to perform the jutsu aalthough naruto was starting to get on his nerves a little bit he decided to hold his tounge and not say a word of it
"I should hope so." Naruto said.
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Lokey performed the jutsu to the letter and created 5 clones perfectly, the narutos hit them not hard in the gut and they didnt disapear so they hit them harder in the gut so that they would disapear.
"Like i said before i should hope you can do better then that." naruto said to Lokey.
"Im going to becouse im not going to give up even if death stood in my way... which i hope it doesnt... i wouldnt give up." Lokey said to naruto focusing on getting it right this time.
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"Alright then it seams that you have done better but i think you could do some more i want you to try one again with as much concentration as possible."
"If you would shut your mouth i would concentrate." Lokey said concentrating on the jutsu he performed it and created 5 clones, the naruto clones punched his clones in th gut and none of them disapeared but when they got hit in the face they all disapeared.
"Your getting closer." Naruto said, "One more try and i think youll have it."
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"Alright here we go." Lokey said, he performed the jutsu to the letter and creat 5 clones perfectly, when the naruto clones punched them in the face they didnt disapear but retaliated punching narutos clones in the face's and making them disapear.
"Alright you did it." Naruto said to Lokey, "Now ill teach you mass shadow replication."
"Alright its a deal." Lokey said making his clones disapear.
Kage Bunshino Jutsu 12/12
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 8:15 pm
((AngelofDeath. I'm sorry, but you need to have a post of 5 lines for that to count. Please add more lines or this technique will not count... Also, you cannot learn this technique without learning the Kage Bushin no Jutsu first.))
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Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 8:23 pm
Walking arund the village Neoshin heads to the ramen bar to get some food getting there he sits down and gets bowl of oriental flavored ramen and waits there looking at the outside "What a night it's been.... I still need some more trainning, so maybe i'll do tommorrow but now it's time to eat.." He gets his ramen and starts chowing down
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