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 Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 12:40 pm
Demon , Cizu and Youri eneter the village after breaking the boulder that protected it.
Villagers all had stopped thier movements looking at the trio as they eneterd the village.
"Umm, hi we have come from the village hidden in the leaf's to train here in hopes of becoming stronger" Demon says tying to stop the awkward silence.
The villagers all looked and stared at them, not seeming to have a response to what demon had said.
"heh, umm, if u could kindly point us to a master of taijutsu that would be highly appreciated " Demon said while scratching his head.
The vilagers all seemed to point to a single location, a large shrine which seemed to take up half the village.
"Thank u " Youri said smiling and bowed before moving to the top of the hill.
"Thanks " Demon bowed and caught up with Youri
"Well they seemed kind of dense to me" Cizu barked allowed knowing no one would understand him but Demon.
"You know, just cause no one can understand u but me, doesnt give u the right to say such mean things" Demon says
"whatever " Cizu says before jumping on Demon's head and going to sllep.
They come to the shrine's entrance at the top of the hill.Demon knocks on the door only to find it open, Inside thier are a large amount of monks all doing the same motions in unison.
"they look like ther working hard" Youri says
"Yea and i want to learn what they are learning" Demon says smiling
"Hello young travelers, welcome to the hidden arts training ground, the fact you are here must mean you have come to train, correct" a old monk says to the trio
"Ummmm, yea if u would kindy take us in" Demon says bowing
"Sorry the only way one can become apart of the temple is if he has gained the right to be here" the monk proclaimed
"Oh, ok "Demon said turning to walk away
"But i am intrigued by you, how did u get into the village" the monk asked curiosly
"The boulder blocking the village, i kinda broke it" Demon says laughing awkwardly
"That boulder is a 500 ton rock, it would take a hard force to break it" the monk said unsure of the boy was telling the truth.
" Well, i used one of the technique's of my clan, it's the strongets i have currently " demon said proudly
"i'll give u a deal child, if you can breack through a 1,000-ton boulder within three days, i will train u personally" The old monk says
"Fine by me, where's this rock" Demon says confident that he'll crush any obstacle in his way
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 1:26 pm
They walk further into the shrine till they reach a large room. The monk then goes to the center and sits down. He then pull's out a scroll and a pen.
"I will summon the rock from this scroll, it may take me a moment but while im doing how about u tell me why you came to this village" the monk said while writing on the old scroll
"you see, i came here to train my body to become stronger, i strted in my home village training, but i wanted to go to other villages to train, i knew if i was reported as a missing nin i would be hunted down and killed, but you see this isn't the case, i was sent off by the kage in my village so now im able to travel to the village of my choosing, i had heard of the arts villlage and thier masterful martial arts skills so i decided to come here as my first stop" Demon expained
"Now, what about the young lady accompanying you, why are you here" the monk said as he was finishing the scroll
"I'm not here to train, im here to watch demon and make sure he dosent do anything crazy or stupid to get himself killed" Youri says smiling
"Thats not true and i woudnt do anthing like that anyway" Demon says knowing he would
"Well, your stories are virtious in thier own way" The old monk says while chuckling, "It is done, Now if you all could kindly step back, i will begin the summoning" The old monk says
Demon, Youri and cizu(still asleep on Demon's head) step back away a free feet.
"Now, You who have given us air, water fire earth, Fleash, Blood, and bones, I call upon your power again to ask a measly act, will you kindly bring forth a Boulder, one of the proportions of yami, to this plane so that we mere beings may gaze upon the substance of your power and quiver before it" The monk yells as he performs hand signs
"Now i summon u, COME" the monk yells. Moments later a huge boulder appears outta smoke. Its huge and is much larger than the one that was protecting the village.
Demon is astonished by the boulder before him and is having second thoughts about what he had said earlier.
"Demon i know your strong, but i don't think your strong enough to break a boulder of that size" youri says turning to Demon
"Heh we'll just have to see" Demon says
"Now then, this boulder was transferred from King Enma's palace and it has the ability to suck chakra out of anything near it, one must be truly powerful to break this boulder" The monk says putting his hand on the rock =, not being affected at all.
Demon looks down and smiles" I'll take on anything you got , old man" He tells, still showing confidence in himself.
"Well, said child, Well said" The old monk says while smiling
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 6:11 pm
"Ok here are the rules child, you may only use your bare hands to break the rock, and using ninjutsu is out of the question, however you may use any abilities you know with your partner" The old monk says
"Demon looks up at cizu, How did you know he was my partner" Demon says puzzeled.
"Hehe, child i am much older than you and i have seen qute a few more things than you have, i can tell when ther is a bond between someone, just like you have a bond with the young girl" The old monk says smiling
Youri blushes "ha, i knew you liked me" She says smiling
"Right, the old man is clearly gone crazy" Demon says trying to shift the attention off him.
"I also have one more thing to tell you if you can break this rock using the technique i am about to show you then, i will permit you to train here as long as you like" The old man says
"What really alright then show me the move so i can master it and break the rock" Demon says smiling
The monk starts to build up a large flow of chakra, its so much that its actually visible to the human eye. Its a huge surge of chakra, so much that the floor tiles under him begin to break apart.
"Whoa, this old guy is strong" Demon says
"HAH, Burning Knuckle" The old man yells and attacks the wall on the side of him. The attack was so fast that fire appeared on the hand and when the attack coneected it completely destoyed the wall he attacked.
After the attack the old man turns around" in order for you to use this attack to your fullest ability you must be cleared of all meaningless thought's and do nothing but think about the speed and raw power of your attack, are you ready to begin the time "
"Im ready" Demon says smiling
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 7:42 pm
"Alright then boy, the time starts now" The old monk says
Demon quickly takes the stance that the old man had taken before him, he begins to build up chakra just as he did. After the intense training in the forest of death,demon's strength had improved and the amount of chakra he was able to get a hold of increased.
"Hahhhh, Burning knuckle" Demon yells, as he punchs the boulder head on. As soon as he makes contact with the boulder it glows and sucks all chakra that demon had used for the atack.
"Uhhh" Demon says falling back half awake after the sudden loss in chakra.
"Demon, are you ok" Youri says
Demon comes back to his sense's "I'm fine it was just a quick relapes" what the hell, as soon as my attack impacted the rock it was taken away like it had been sucked away like a leech" demon says to himself looking at his fist.
Ha, boy you have a long way to go" The monk says laughing, before walking away
Burning Knuckle 1/9
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 7:50 pm
Demon tried again and again, but every time the attack was sucked away.
"ahh, this rock is sucking my chakra like it was a sucker, how am i suppose to break it if i cant even touch it" Demon says frustrated by the obstacle.
"Demon, how about we attack togther" Cizu says up and about after his nap"
"No, i want to do this alone" Demon says determined to break the rock with the Burning knuckle move
"Fine, suit yourself, i hope you dont die on me" Cizu says while watching demon prepare to attack the rock again.
Burning Knuckle 2/9
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 8:04 pm
AHhhhhhh, Burning knuckle" Demon says before attacking the boulder a 6th time. The boulder did the same as before and simply drained demon of his chakra.
"Why cant i get this down" Demon says looking at his hand. After so many tries his chakra was low and if he kept pushing himself demon would die.
"You need to slow down boy, the first flaw in your technique is that you dont put enough chakra in the attack, the second flaw is that every time you mess up, your mind is clouded with doubt and frustration, you must keep an empty mind, and build up more chakra if you wish to attack correctly" The old monk says walking past with pounds of sacks
3/9 Burning Knuckle
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 8:24 pm
"Alright, i'm gonna finish this techinique if it kills me" Demon says while reaching into his ninja bag and grabbing a extra strength pill he had created in the forest of death.He ate it quickly and it then gave him an extreme amount of chakra and power.
"hahhhhhhhhh burning knuckle" Demon yelled as he attacked the rock with the full force of the power he had gained. In this state the chakra demon had was overriding the rock and it soon gave way to a large crackin one side.But that was all demons attack had done.
"Good job demon, you at least cracked it this time" Youri says smiling
"It wasnt good enough to break it though and i cant attack with all of my power again" Demon says scrathing his head
"Its ok you can keep trying tommorrow, lets go get somthing to eat" Youri says walking over to demon
"No, bring me somthing here i'll be staying here tonight, in this room" Demon says looking at Youri
"Umm, ok suit yourself, if you dont want the company of a beautiful girl that's fine by me" Youri says walking away and closing the door
4/9 Burning knuckle
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 8:57 pm
Demon instead of attackin the rock decides to sit down and meditate on his attacks and what he is doing wrong.
"Every time i attack the chakra is sucked outta me, But when i attacked with the help of the pill my attacks were increased ten-fold, but even with that increase in power my attack still wasnt enough to break the rock, i think i get why the old man told me to attack slower, by me first builiding up chakra i can put the full amount of power i need into the attack, and by concentrating and freeing my mind of all distractions i can unleash the full amount of chakra onto one spot in the rock. Ok i think i got it" Demon says standing up ready to give the attack another try.
5/9 Burning Knuckle
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 10:47 am
Demon quickly stood up after his meditation session. "I will master this move"
After he stands Youri comes running into the room"Demon, help there's rogue ninja in the village, we have to stop them"
Demon stands up and stares at Youri"How did they get into it, i thought...." Demon then thought back to when they first enterd the village. He had broken the rock protecting it.
"s**t, let's go" Demon says
"Cizu, come on get up"Demon says shaking Cizu.
"Ok, ok " Cizu says yawning.
The three then run out the shrine to the main section of the village.Theres a group of ninja destroying houses and other things.
"Stop, or i'll rip you guy's to shreds"Demon says yelling
"Heh, kid get outta our way, were ninja do you know what that means, we could rip you to shreds" a ninja says
"Heh, you guy's arent ninja, your brutes who attack people for there goods" Youri yells
"Little girls should keep quiet if they know whats good for them" another ninja says
" I'll take all of you on myself" Demon says not even thinking that these guys might actually have skill
"HEH fine," Then the whole group of ninja begin doing handsigns. "Fire stlye:Burning shuriken" The whole group says in unison.
They all rush in and threw flaming projectiles at Demon,Youri and cizu.
"Hah, wolf's Death Spin" Demon then proceeds to spin in a upright position knocking all shuriken away from him and his compaions.
"Ha, is that the best you got" Demon says after the jutsu
"What, this kid is a ninja" One ninja says
"Yep, and im not any ordinary ninja, im one whos gonna rip you guys to shreds" Demon says smiling evily He starts to build up chakra in his body
to get raedy for a jutsu.
"Wait, thats not chakra for one of our combo's he's planning on using that Burning Kuckle move" Cizu says watching Demon
"Hahhh, Burning Knuckle" Demon yells after he feels the chakra surge in his body
He runs faster than normal and has builded up alot more chakra than normal. "ive gotta clear my mind" Demon says to himself. He feels his hand start to burn "what is this bruning sensetion on my hand" Demon says to himself. He runs through the crowd of ninja and aims for just one. "Hahhhhhh" Demon connects his attack with the ninja, who gets blown away into a wall.
"Heh,easy" demon says
"He did it" The old monk says smiling on top of the stairs next to youri
"Ummm, when did you get here" Youri says surprised
"I've been here the whole time watching" The old monk says
"The attack was near perfect, all he has to do know is get used to the power" The old monk says tuning around and walking away
Burning Knuckle 6/9
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 6:00 pm
Torrest looked around the village with a dumb look on his face along with his mile long smile that seemed to stretch on to infinity. He watched as martial artists from other parts of the village tested their fighting abilities with one another, throwing each other, kicking, punching, doing a Full Nelson. Suddenly, Torrest would bump into the back of one of fighters, getting his attention. "What where your going to damn idiot," said the fighter, obviously drunk with sake. Torrest lifted hand and waved it infront of his nose, trying to get the smell away from him but the other man took it the wrong way.
1/12
Torrest would soon find a fist straight into his stomach and he was sent flying into a tree behind him, actually breaking through it. As Torrest tried to get up, he collapsed under his arms coughing from the force that knocked the wind out of him. "So, you're still able to move after getting hit by that ya stupid brat? Well then, lets see if you can handle more," said the man as he grabbed Ginsa by the top of the head and then felt himself being flung high into the air. As he watched the people upon the ground get smaller and smaller, he started having a thought grow inside of him.
2/12
Suddenly, a strike slammed into his back, sending him hurdling towards the ground almost like a blur but just before he hit the ground, a foot connected with his chest and he was sent flying high into the sky once more, this time flipping like mad as if a coin merely being tossed around by a careless man playing a game with a child. Suddenly, Torrest would feel the man's legs wrap around his neck and lock his head by the man's feet as they started to fall. His legs and arms were bound by the man's arms so he wasn't able to break out of it before the inevitable crash that shock the entire area around.
3/12
Torrest's body started to go limp as the man let go of the retarded boy body with a smile, thinking that he had killed him. As he turned, Torrest fell completely over to his side, eyes white as snow before an animal would come and mark it with their 'scent.' Suddenly, within the depths of Torrest's rather small mind came a jolt of electricity that ran down his spinal nerves to reach the heart. As it did, the heart was shocked into making a beat where the natural pacemaker started to run back to normal speed, pumping stopped blood throughout Torrest's body once more.
4/12
Anyone who would have seen it would probably thought that Torrest's life had ended with that dive bomb but as Torrest started to move once more while his head was bleeding from the top, his eyes were still dilated as he stood and the man that had just previous beat him down turned with a shocked look on his face while his friend asked him why he stopped. Torrest bent his knees as he spread his legs apart while bringing both arms to his sides while lowering his head, screaming although he wasn't making a noise.
5/12
"What the hell? You should be dead right now boy," cried out the man as he started walking towards Torrest, his hands balled up in fists. As he reached Torrest, he pulled back a fist and threw it at Torrest who side stepped it before moving forwards, slamming his own fist straight into the man's stomach, causing him to cough up spit, having not realized how much force Torrest can still slip into his attacks. As the man started to stagger backwards, Torrest kicked straight for the man's chin, connecting but the man didn't fall backwards, this time actually expecting it.
6/12
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 6:40 pm
"Freakin' idiot. What do you intend on doing by fighting a master martial artist," asked the fighter as he grabbed Torrest's ankle and then throwing him straight through a wall of a building nearby. Torrest started to stand in the wreckage but only as a bloody mass now due to the broken glass he landed upon. Reaching up, he ripped one from his shoulder before discarding it upon the ground and then advanced towards the man, throwing a fist behind him as he drew near and bringing it forwards towards the fighter's neck, not the face. This sudden change in tactics rather surprised the man as he was struck hard in the neck sending him sprawling once again.
7/12
Suddenly, he would find no time to retaliate as Torrest's foot connected with his face, sending him flipping through the air as Torrest continued running after him. Torrest would be right at his side just as the fighter bounced on the floor, at the exact moment Torrest would kick him once more like a soccer ball, sending him flying at a wall, colliding with it making him gasp for air. But he would have little time to recuperate as Torrest was back upon him, a fist curled up and pulled back in a ready position. Torrest then let the strike loose, slamming straight into the fighters chest breaking through the wall.
8/12
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 7:24 pm
As the man laid in pain upon the rubble upon the ground, Torrest started to get a sense on what he was doing and then fell back upon his bottom looking at the hole in front of him. "Did I do that? Momma always said that it was bad to break someone else's things... But is a house a thing," asked Torrest to the fighter's friend whom walked up besides him, still in awe of what Torrest had done to his friend. With a slow turn of his head towards Torrest, he showed the retarded boy the fear within his eyes before running into the distance in fear of what the boy could do to him.
9/12
"Okay! Bye, bye," called Torrest waving a hand and smiling widely but it all ended when the sound of moving rubble sounded from the hole. Looking over to it, the smile had left him as the man stood in the shadows with eyes filled with pure hatred and the intent to kill within them. He would suddenly appear in front of Torrest, a foot high above him which swung downwards in an arch from behind him connecting with Torrest's jaw and sending him flying into the distance. But as the man appeared above him to kick him into the ground, Torrest caught his foot with both his hands and then threw him high into the air.
10/12
The man gritted his teeth as he continued to rise in the air, a tad farther than when he threw Torrest and he gritted his teeth. "The hell? How does he have so much strength in him to do this," and at the end of that sentence he was kicked hard by Torrest who appeared above him sending him hurtling downwards towards the ground below at such high speeds. Everyone around stood in wonder on who was fighting the drunkard with such little mercy as he would to others. As the man was about to hit the ground, Torrest appeared under him at the last second before kicking upwards once more with both his feet this time, launching him even higher than before.
11/12
Suddenly, as the man reached the peak of his flight, Torrest appeared and gripped the man around the arms and waist, binding him while locking the man's head in place with his feet while they both started to speed towards the land below. "Oh SH~" He never got to finish as they crashed into the ground, the man's head creating a crater in a thick of trees. The man's face was pale now while one can see only the white of his eyes as his body started to become limb. "Sorry sir," said Torrest as he got off and walked back to the village.
12/12
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 9:25 pm
Demon walk's back into the room.
"I'm gonna master this move, ok let's try it again. Demon takes his stance. After training for a whole day straight he had gotten used to the stance and the chakra build up.
"Demon's gotten good at the build up, i think he'll master the move" Cizu says watching Demon build up his chakra once again.
"He's really different than when he was in the academy" Youri says smiling.
"It looks like you really got the hot's for demon, hey know any cute dog's" Cizu says smiling with a sleazy face.
"I do not like demon, he's just my friend, nothing more" Youri says turning away from Cizu blushing
"Right, i think you do , well anyway, i'm going to sleep it's to late for me to be up and i need beuaty sleep anyway " Cizu says laying down and ywaning.
"Hahhhh, Burning Knuckle " Demon says before attacking the boulder. When it conects this time, his chakra is at it's peak and his hand become's inflamed. When his attack reaches the rock there is a loud booming noise, followed by a sudden steaming sound. You then hear a hard thump.
"What was that" Cizu barks instantly waking up from the sound.
"It was Demon" Youri says astonished at the power demon showed.
After the smoke cleared, Demon looked over at Cizu and Youri. "Heh, ok that's one step in the right direction." Demon says smiling.
Burning Knuckle 7/9
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 9:57 pm
All night Demon pounds away at the rock. It was starting to crumble. Demon was getting complaints from the residents tlling him that he was making to much of a racket. "Well, close your ears" Would be his reply to every one of them who came to him tlaking of noise.
"You know sleep is part of training" Youri says yawning.
Demon was tired. He was barely standing. "No, i can ke...." is all you would hear because after that he fell into a deep sleep that would last half a day
"Demon, get up, Demon" Youri says shaking him.
"Huh, what " Demon says waking up from his long sleep.
"Demon, you 've been asleep for almost a whole day" Youri says smiling at him.
"Really, wow," he says not realizing whta that meant" What the hell, half a day, why didnt you wake me up" Demon says quickly getting to his feet.
"You needed your rest, i didnt know you'd be sleep all day" Youri says in a voice that makes it seem like she enjoyed demon being asleep.
"Whatever, i have to continue my training" Demon says getting up.
He gets up and walk's over to the large rock in the center of the room" i've taken out about half of this rock, i will finish before i take my next rest" Demon says begging to Build up his chakra
"Hahhhhhhhh, Burning Knuckle" Demon yells before impacting the rock with his burning fist
Burning Knuckle 8/9
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 10:10 pm
Demon does this all day until there is nothing but a small portion of the rock left." Heh, almost done, just a couple more poundings and it'll be complete"
"Well boy have you finshed the task i have asked of you" Says the monk enetering the room.
"What, it hasnt been 3 days yet" Demon says
"Yes, it has, boy" The old monk says raising his eyebrow.
"Noo it.... wait it has been three days, i cant belive i lost track of time" Demon says covering his hands with his face. "i cant belive this crap".
"Oh, its ok bot i have a way for you to still have the deal if you wish it" The old monk says smiling
"What, what is it " Demon says excited.
"If you can break the rest of the rock with one attack, you will keep the deal, if not then then king enme's rock will suck all chakra out of you, killing you instantly" The old monk says with a grim look on his face"Choose boy"
"Heh, i choose the deal, bring it on" Demon says turning away from the monk and looking the rock. "Oh, wait let me get something" Demon runs over and gets a super strength pill out of his bag. "Okkkk, lets do this" Demon smiles before eating the pill. He then get's a large boost in power.
"Hahhhhhhhhhh, Burning Knuckle "Demon yells. With the boost in power he rushes in about to pucnh the rock. Not only does his hand become inflamed but his whole arm does as well.All the clothing on his arm get incenerated. Demon connects with the boulder creating a large explosion that shook the whole shrine.
"Whoa, thats way more power than before" Cizu barks begging back off the rock.
"Ok old man now then wheres the next move i must learn" Demon says walking out of the smoke smiling.
When the smoke cleared there was nothing there but a few pebble's and a large black mark.
"Hhahahaah, good job child" The monk says laughing.
"Good job Demon" Youri says running into him and giving him a hug.
He's more powerful than i thought, lets begin his real training The monk thinks to himself.
Burning Knuckle 9/9
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