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 Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 5:03 pm
Let's have some fun! This beat is sick!
Hello! biggrin
I wanna take a ride on your disco stick!
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 5:09 pm
3nodding How is everyone?
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 5:11 pm
Let's have some fun! This beat is sick!
I'm glad that the weekend is here. biggrin
I wanna take a ride on your disco stick!
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 5:54 pm
scream It's about darn time too! whee Yay no work!
stare Ok so I got this idea that will ensure I will never have to work again. mad So I'm gonna build me a lab under the ground of my apartment and try to take over the world....on a budget!! AND I will write a book on how I did it! 3nodding Therefore making a ton of money. surprised With....little work....as possible...... sweatdrop Right so I didn't think that through all the way.
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 6:20 pm
Let's have some fun! This beat is sick!
You could always marry a rich guy. xp
I wanna take a ride on your disco stick!
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 6:38 pm
Lol, don't worry, we all have moments of disillusionment. Like everytime I look at my art and think: "How the hell am I going to make a living off this peice of crap?" sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 6:40 pm
AceXIII Lol, don't worry, we all have moments of disillusionment. Like everytime I look at my art and think: "How the hell am I going to make a living off this peice of crap?" sweatdrop
I do that with some of the stories I write. It's like "I thought I was good, but this is just crap!"
I wanna take a ride on your disco stick!
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 6:43 pm
crying You two are lucky though. I don't have an artistic talent.
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 6:53 pm
tina138 crying You two are lucky though. I don't have an artistic talent.
I can't draw at all. I spent 10 minutes the other day just drawing a rectangular building. xp
I wanna take a ride on your disco stick!
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 6:53 pm
Four hours later, Ace collapsed into her desk chair, breathing for what seemed like the first time since they opened Tina and Elle's cybernetic skull. The procedue had been successful, well as far as they could tell at the moment. Elle and Tina were still connecting to their new, indepent bodies. It would be some time before they knew how well they would adjust.
It had been the most nerve-raking experiance, risking her friend's lives while simultaniously working alongside Daemon.
It brought back so many memories, namely the one that had but Elle and Tina into that same body. The last procedure they had ever preformed together.
It felt so right. Like the world was falling back into place again.
If only it could last...
"Such is the advantage of an artificial body."
Daemon leaned against the door frame, staring with an almost empathetic look at his exhausted ex. He hadn't felt such a thing in a very long time.
Ace just cast him a weary glance.
"If it means keeping me grounded, I'll deal."
Daemon shook his head.
"I'm as grounded as I ever was. Only, I'm seeing the world from atop a mountain, while you are still stuck low in the valley. Why not rise with me?"
Ace didn't even bother.
"You know why." she replied, turning to the now whistling kettle. Despite the fact that the tea was scalding, she immediately took a sip upon pouring the cup. She didn't wince, didn't say a word as the burning liquid slipped down her throat.
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 7:00 pm
@ Special: Judging by your RP skills, Special, I can say that you are an excellent writer. Your characters are very well rounded and dynamic and most importantly, very human.
@Tina: Art is everywhere in everything. Just because your specific talent doesn't fall under the "Fine Arts" umbella, doesn't mean it isn't, so to speak, art.
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 7:02 pm
gonk now thats an extream hatred!
biggrin Ace-sempai! How is my writing? confused Bad I know
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 7:09 pm
Let's have some fun! This beat is sick!
Laura grumbled angrily as she glanced once more at her shimmering former lover. She had been sitting in the same chair for hours, waiting for something to happen. She had hoped that going against her memory would lead to her freedom, but it did not seem that way. Finally running out of patience, Laura shouted, "Fine! Let's get this over with!" Jumping out of her seat, Laura walked over to her old lover. She raised her hands in preparation for spell-casting. Once again she could not call upon her innate magical power. Completely frustrated to a near rage-like state, she channelled her full concentration into calling upon her magic. With sheer will power alone, Laura felt her magic return to her. Taking in a deep breath and looking right into her former lover's eyes, she sighed, "I'm sorry that I have to do this again."
I wanna take a ride on your disco stick!
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 7:10 pm
tina138 gonk now thats an extream hatred! biggrin Ace-sempai! How is my writing? confused Bad I know Grammarically and structurally your writing is fairly sound. You're characters are most certainly unique and interesting, but have yet to show a very wide range of emotions; however this could pretain to the appropriate situation not presenting itself for them to display such. I admire your skill in writing creative and entertaining actions sequences, a skill I have yet to master. Ummmmmmmm, yeah that's what I think.
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 7:14 pm
Let's have some fun! This beat is sick!
You sounded like an English teacher right there. xp
I think that with my writing, I just always feel like I'm using the same words over and over again, so my writing seems repetitive to me. I can definitely admit that I make some dynamic and interesting characters. biggrin
I also think that your action sequences are good, Tina. 3nodding
I wanna take a ride on your disco stick!
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