| Enjoying the Tournament fights so far? |
| I think they are all doing well. |
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5% |
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| I don't have cable. |
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| Looking forward to the next set of fights. |
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| Has anyone been issued a DQ yet? |
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5% |
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| Ran out of popcorn, so I'll be right back. |
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35% |
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 Posted: Tue Jul 02, 2013 11:42 pm
Goin Down N Flames DarkKingJilly Welcome to HvH! I hope you feel welcomed here. smile I noticed a couple of things in your profile that I wanted to address. Your indestructible wings and reflective ability need to be balanced. Defending yourself is important but I think it'd be fair for your wings to absorb only so much damage before getting weaker. Or have a post limit to how long you can stay in your cocoon. Also, I don't think it's fair for Aurora to be mobile when in her cocoon state. Lastly, be mindful of your hearing abilities. If you can hear one conversation you can hear them all. Mostly this all applies to if you ever fight another character. We all exercise creative lenience during the story. smile Ok Thank you...I am new at this and I was having I HATE YOU WITH A PASSION help me out...ill make the necessary changes to make it better. I am always open to improving and making changes Welcome to the guild! Hope you don't mind a few other pointers and a bit more criticism. Intangibility is a very powerful ability that when used in battle has to have it's own limitations. The most obvious is you can't come in contact with anything physical, your own weapons included unless you specify it goes intangible with you, nor your opponent. And me personally I wouldn't use magical attacks while intangible, in a fight at least, to avoid being called over powered. I mean we can't hit you but you can fight us with fire or light is OP. This is just me nit-picking and you can ignore this part if you want to, but it would help if you spaced out your profile a bit to make it easier to tell where the description of one power ends and the next starts. I hope you don't take this as us picking on you or anything, just a few friendly tips.
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Posted: Tue Jul 02, 2013 11:43 pm
I will mention what you have posted here in my next post devil thank you. as for goin down in flames yea I am helpin her with her profile she is going through a rough draft and I havent even worked on Infernos yet.....its been so long I wanna say Inferno should have a old gandalf beard lol but I know that isnt possible. Over the weekend her profile will be balanced and whatnot.
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Posted: Tue Jul 02, 2013 11:47 pm
No, I want her to have you guys look over it because she wants to become more involved and learn more about roleplaying. As I said its a rough draft so the more stuff you guys point out the better. I havent had much time to sit down and explain a lot to her due to makin changes in the guild. Over the weekend I plan to show her explains and whatnot.
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Posted: Tue Jul 02, 2013 11:50 pm
Well just let me know once you've updated the few things me and Jilly have already touched on and I'll see if anything jumps out to me. I don't have any problems helping explain things like that.
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DarkKingJilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 12:13 am
I'm not really that concerned about the profile right now. I'd rather see Flames in the story first before fixing up how her character works.
Unless she's planning on picking a fight with someone right now. Wouldn't that be exciting? Haha~
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Posted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 1:11 am
Ya know I really wish we still had the meebo bar so we could still use the messenger that was built into it.
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DarkKingJilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 1:20 am
Yeh. It was incredibly useful.
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Posted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 1:29 am
I'm pretty tired so I'm going to be winding down. I'll post tomorrow if you get one up before then. Otherwise...I'll be lurking for a bit.
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DarkKingJilly Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 1:41 am
DarkKingJilly I'm pretty tired so I'm going to be winding down. I'll post tomorrow if you get one up before then. Otherwise...I'll be lurking for a bit. Fair enough. I'll be up for awhile still. And I'll check back randomly. So if you get another post I'll probably reply before you get back online.
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Posted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 7:24 am
just tell me when, and where to post, and i will make it so~
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Posted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 8:17 am
Kira Skyra just tell me when, and where to post, and i will make it so~ Whenever you can in the Hell thread. Read over the stuff done by Jilly, and Willows post.
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Posted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 8:21 am
I HATE YOU WITH A PASSION Kikyo's Castle was remodeled into Ukia Manor, and moved to the back of the city so that the mountain range was behind it/part of it. Outside didn't change, just the way it looked on the inside.
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Posted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 9:15 am
am i in heaven or hell still o_o? are we still in the same action scene we were in? or have we returned to a different point in time? cause last i left Kira he was running towards the battle to be had THAT WAS EBILY TAKEN AWAY FROM ME crying
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Posted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 10:25 am
Kira Skyra am i in heaven or hell still o_o? are we still in the same action scene we were in? or have we returned to a different point in time? cause last i left Kira he was running towards the battle to be had THAT WAS EBILY TAKEN AWAY FROM ME crying Oh, you'll get a fight soon enough. You're still in Hell of course but you're objective has clearly been changed. You can stay in Hell or go back to Heaven...it's really up to you.
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DarkKingJilly Vice Captain
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