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 Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 10:35 pm
Alright, I just started reading this today (no idea what took me so long. probly the whole being 32 chapters long thing) and all i can say is: Alright, I just started.... oh, nevermind. stepping aside from my terrible jokes, great story. I hope to read the rest(I got up to chapter 15) tomorrow, keep up the good work- but give me a chance to catch up!
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 10:48 pm
Yea! I got a new reader! Thanls for the compliment! Dont worry you will have plenty of time to catch up I have no clue when the next chapter will be completed unless I work my a** off right now.
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 11:03 pm
Out of Rating
1 Being the Highest and 5 Being the Lowest, Please Comments Also Appreciated
1. Storyline.4.5
2. Character Usage.4
3. Humor.5
4. Action.5
5. Romance.4.5
6. Drama.4
7. Suggestions?2.5
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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 1:54 pm
Funky Monkey Bill Out of Rating 1 Being the Highest and 5 Being the Lowest, Please Comments Also Appreciated 1. Storyline. 4.52. Character Usage. 43. Humor. 54. Action. 55. Romance. 4.56. Drama. 47. Suggestions? 2.5Uhh, Bill, 1 is the hightest, 5 is lowest.
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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 4:29 pm
Lifeless-Fox Funky Monkey Bill Out of Rating 1 Being the Highest and 5 Being the Lowest, Please Comments Also Appreciated 1. Storyline. 1.52. Character Usage. 23. Humor. 14. Action. 15. Romance. 1.56. Drama. 27. Suggestions? 3.5Uhh, Bill, 1 is the hightest, 5 is lowest. I knew that.
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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 4:37 pm
Funky Monkey Bill Lifeless-Fox Funky Monkey Bill Out of Rating 1 Being the Highest and 5 Being the Lowest, Please Comments Also Appreciated 1. Storyline. 1.52. Character Usage. 23. Humor. 14. Action. 15. Romance. 1.56. Drama. 27. Suggestions? 3.5Uhh, Bill, 1 is the hightest, 5 is lowest. I knew that. Nice.
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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 5:57 pm
Phew, done. too bad they didn't get to kick echo's butt though. nice ending to chapter 34 though biggrin
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Posted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 9:01 pm
Lifeless-Fox Funky Monkey Bill Lifeless-Fox Funky Monkey Bill Out of Rating 1 Being the Highest and 5 Being the Lowest, Please Comments Also Appreciated 1. Storyline. 1.52. Character Usage. 23. Humor. 14. Action. 15. Romance. 1.56. Drama. 27. Suggestions? 3.5Uhh, Bill, 1 is the hightest, 5 is lowest. I knew that. Nice. I was testing Seaphron. He failed, but at least you passed.
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Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 1:59 pm
cool I sent my comments in.
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Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 2:03 pm
Wow! I just finished to read aaaalll this loooooonng story, and all I can say is : OMGWTFBBQ!!! domokun
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Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 6:40 pm
@FMB -Thanks for answering, I hadnt seen them, but I still wouldnt have noticed right away.
@LF - Thanks for pointing that out.
@Akuyoko - Wow... You read it already? I dont know what to say what did you think?
@Betman - Thanks!
@DD - Wow another reader, is the OMGWTFBBQ good or bad?
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Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 7:29 pm
Yeah, great story Seaphron. But you're in trouble now, you and FS have made me want to make a story... all I need is an idea.
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Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 9:30 am
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 9:14 pm
1. Storyline - 2.5, I like it, especially since I know what's to come!
2. Character Usage - 2, you have like 40 characters and I think that you do a decent job. I havent seen Bodewyn in awhile though or Dragn.
3. Humor - 3.5, I don't think that you go for humor honestly but the jokes that are there definitly make me laugh.
4. Action. 1, I especially liked Chapter 18!
5. Romance. Pretty good, for the three that you have.
6. Drama. Pretty good, I like how you forshadow things, do you mean to do that?
7. Suggestions?
Put down your damn wiimote andwrite the next chapter.
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 1:23 am
Sorry it has been two weeks but here is Chapter 35!
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