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 Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 1:12 pm
@Toki - NO! No one could ever be Simon's subsitute, because I don't want anyone to break me like that again. mad
@t0sh - Ignore him. -snuggles-
@Yasuragi - Thanks so much! <33 I don't mind how long it takes at all.. heart
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 2:30 pm
Tokioka You don't have to be a substitute when you're with toki... cool
Not now.
Wait for Kitty to leave.
ninja
-drops a piece of paper with time and place and poofs away-
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 2:34 pm
t0shi0 Tokioka You don't have to be a substitute when you're with toki... cool
Not now.
Wait for Kitty to leave.
ninja
-drops a piece of paper with time and place and poofs away-
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 5:06 pm
t0shi0 Tokioka You don't have to be a substitute when you're with toki... cool
Not now.
Wait for Kitty to leave.
ninja
-drops a piece of paper with time and place and poofs away-
*pockets teh paper and poofs away* ninja @Niph: But t0sh wouldn't break you, she's a self-confessed lesbo who would never say no to a bit of girl-on-girl action. I heard it on the radio. ninja *poofs*
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Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 6:59 am
=O
Wah?!
I thought I anounced that on TV, not the radio. ninja
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Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 10:34 am
surprised
I am actually speechless, guys..
Like, WTF?!
I thought it was only the newspapers.. :smallninja:
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Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 3:52 pm
Well news travels fast... t0sh must've announced it on TV, then it got published on the front page of the papers... and um, then Chris Moyles was reading the paper and saw it! sweatdrop
Yeh, that's exactly what happened. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 6:11 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 2:31 pm
Pump of my Heart
There's an emptiness inside my heart,
I cant think of us apart,
You came into my life & took a piece of me.
& now in my dreams you're all i can see.
Every morning, night, & every moment of every day,
You're everything to me, what else is there to say?
My heart & my soul & everything i do,
Is in some way only for you.
You were my reason to live, now i want to die,
The only thing to do is hope i survive.
Hou could you do this, when you said you loved me.
Was that just another fantacy?
Why must i feel and live this way?
The burden becomes heavier with each passing day.
The weight on my heart is growing and growing.
& the pump of my heart is slowing and slowing.
& there you are not even pretending to care.
The pain is growing to hard to bear
um yea. its just something i wrote. i dont like it that much but what do you guys think? i will post some good ones later. too lazy to type more. my friend wanted my to post this one so i did.
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 1:47 am
@snow - I'm too lazy to do a proper critique right now.. but yeah.
It's quite clichéd. I mean, the rhyming actually works (which I find amazing at any time 'cause I can't rhyme to save my life) but it's quite.. overused. Perhaps consider the same intentions and ideas but with more original imagery or vocabulary?
PLEASE TYPE THINGS OUT PROPERLY. Like capitalise Is and use 'and' instead of '&'. It's forgivable in ordinary posting but it kills my eyes in poetry..
It's 'fantasy', not 'fantacy'. <-- just a bit of spelling-nazish Niph.
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 2:11 pm
Too hard to bear.
Waha.
Tosh can be nazi like too.
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 2:57 pm
Hmm, I missed that one.
-needs to brush up on Naziism-
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 3:19 pm
Snow - very nice poem...I might even post one of 2 of my sucky Primary school made poems that won into competitions....
And can't you guys let off some typo going on in that poem? At least you can read it, she's not doing some serious poetry here....
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 3:25 pm
ill post a better one later. i didnt want to post it but my friend really wanted me to. i dont like that poem but thanks 789
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Posted: Wed Aug 16, 2006 1:41 am
@789 - In my opinion, all poetry ought to be serious, and if you are going to attempt some form of literature you ought to do it justice by at least making the effort to spell things correctly.
@snow - I look forward to them =)
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