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 Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 7:58 pm
Chapter 34 Added!
Any Ideas for a Title anyone?
I came up with, "A Race for Time." But I am not sure if I like it though. PAGE 50 KICKASS!
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Posted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 8:23 pm
hoshit xd References to Masamune's Book AND the Kinky Wind cuff Adventures of Forsaken and Koosei rofl and oh it's Mother Dearest we're off to save mai mummeh
nothing much to say really =D just awesome work.
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 5:24 am
Hmmm, just like normal doctors here working long hours and passing out rofl Good chapter seaphron.
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 7:27 am
Quote: The faint sound of wind could be heard dying down. BEST LINE EVER!! lol I love how you just left that open. and your own response after hearing it. xd Priceless! yay. Skull's alive. smile I AM glad that he survived.
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 7:32 am
Koosei Quote: yay. Skull's alive. smile I AM glad that he survived. Suuuuure.... crying Nice chapter Seaphers. except for the bit where Nami hit me..Also, are you and Altae going out with each other? wink
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 7:47 am
Nice work Seaphron, I'm glad Skull lived. As for the sound of wind dying down, I would assume that there was a window left open, and Forsaken had just closed it when you knocked on the door 3nodding , at any rate I'm sure there was nothing kinky going on pirate
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 7:53 am
ForsakenSwordsman Nice work Seaphron, I'm glad Skull lived. As for the sound of wind dying down, I would assume that there was a window left open, and Forsaken had just closed it when you knocked on the door 3nodding , at any rate I'm sure there was nothing kinky going on pirate
of course... >_> riiighhht...
I believe you! millions wouldn't... >_>
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 7:56 am
Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] ForsakenSwordsman Nice work Seaphron, I'm glad Skull lived. As for the sound of wind dying down, I would assume that there was a window left open, and Forsaken had just closed it when you knocked on the door 3nodding , at any rate I'm sure there was nothing kinky going on pirate
of course... >_> riiighhht...
I believe you! millions wouldn't... >_>
Sounds like someone is a little jealous....of FS's window closing skills that is <_< xd
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 7:58 am
ForsakenSwordsman Sounds like someone is a little jealous....of FS's window closing skills that is <_< xd
must be ninja window closing skills >_> did it SO damn fast half your shirt fell off and you closed it with such SKILL it didn't make a sound as it closed =P
Forsaken the Window Ninja.
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 8:01 am
Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] ForsakenSwordsman Sounds like someone is a little jealous....of FS's window closing skills that is <_< xd
must be ninja window closing skills >_> did it SO damn fast half your shirt fell off and you closed it with such SKILL it didn't make a sound as it closed =P
Forsaken the Window Ninja.
It takes many years of training to become a window ninja. If you get good enough you can move on to closing doors and perhaps putting down toilet seats. ninja
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 8:11 am
ForsakenSwordsman It takes many years of training to become a window ninja. If you get good enough you can move on to closing doors and perhaps putting down toilet seats. ninja Nah I'll stick to my Sporks razz
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 4:19 pm
@Draken - Thank ya!
@Ms.Godstone - Thank you, I hope all doctors arent like that!
@Koosei - Thanks, but I think that is the end of the joke.
@Skull - Thanks, sorry but I had to she seemed like she would be a good choice to beat you up. And to answer your question in the story i was going to suggest that it would happen, I intend to do it with other characters at all if no one obliges to practice writing romance.
@FS - Thanks, a window... yeah that is what I was thinking the whole time.
Anybody think of a better title or shoudl I just go with what I got?
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 4:39 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 7:35 pm
Thansk Fish! Quote: Feedback Form
Since I now have a 50 Page topic supporting this I figured it was time for one of these. If you have read any of the Cult story that started them all, please fill out this form.
Out of Rating
1 Being the Highest and 5 Being the Lowest, Please Comments Also Appreciated
1. Storyline.
2. Character Usage.
3. Humor.
4. Action.
5. Romance.
6. Drama.
7. Suggestions?
Thanks for the Info!
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Posted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 7:54 pm
I liked how you included Centuries' Chronicles TM in your story. That gave me an idea for this story but then I remembered that you wrote it, not me, and I thought: "damn..." But anyway, I liked the chapter. And then there was the line as Koosei previously mentioned. xd
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