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 Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:08 pm
Basically its first person etc.
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:10 pm
How....DARE YOU!!!!!!!! But I am pretty awesome aren't I, yeah, I am
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:10 pm
Oh, I see what you mean. (very Amusing at the end too btw)
Thanks for helping! Hopefully my RPing will be your second example rather then your first. sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:10 pm
No... they were both first person.
I guess, what I'm trying to say, is by style, I tend to add a ton of detail... and big words... which I exempted from those two examples...
God... when you learn big words... you tend to forget the smaller words.
xD
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:13 pm
Oh... and I'm a state certified Grammar Nazi!
Although... I tend to miss my own mistakes until later. DX
Wait... SHADE! YOU'RE NOT A GIRL!?
D:
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:15 pm
Nope, if you're making a reference to my avatar, I don't really see it... If your making a refernce to my Rpc, I have a collection.
VR: Vincente-guy
NUR: Vincente-guy
POTS: Aideen-girl
Revolution: Aideen-girl
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:18 pm
I... see boobs on your Avatar...
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:21 pm
Weird, I never really quite noticed the illusion
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:24 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:25 pm
LadyShirahime93 Oh... and I'm a state certified Grammar Nazi!
Although... I tend to miss my own mistakes until later. DX
LadyShirahime93
Style Two:
There was a blinding flash and I hissed in between my teeth, shutting my eyes against the white light before it burned out my retains retinas.
Knowing your own weaknesses is the key to victory!
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:26 pm
Grammar nazi eh? You spelled retinas wrong. =p
And the styles you used are basically what I call emote style, and forum style. Short and long. I'm somewhere in the middle...
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:29 pm
@Shade- . . .
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Perhaps it was the clothes...? D:
@Assassin- Yeah.. see...
Although, originally I spelled that word wrong, and had to use spell check. ><
They gave me the wrong word... D:
Though, I'd have to say, my weakness is 'Spelling' rather than grammar.
I am a horrible speller.
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:45 pm
Horrible at grammar ok at spelling. To tell you the truth I spelled Grammar wrong I spelled it Grammer. >.> Sad huh. I thank Spell check. There was a time i spelled purple wrong. I spelled it pruple
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:47 pm
heh, pruple...anybody know how many Rpc's we can have?
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:50 pm
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