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 Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 10:06 am
Croba can you tell me what things are incorrect in my profile so i can fix it please? sad (She makes me feel pathetic ) cry
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 10:09 am
Evil Ninja Leo Croba can you tell me what things are incorrect in my profile so i can fix it please? sad (She makes me feel pathetic ) cry Nuuu~! Leo, I'm sorry! 0x Trust me though, I've met people who are on a whole 'nother level of terrible. You're on an improving scale. Don't feel bad. D:
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 10:24 am
Metaphorically Insane Evil Ninja Leo Croba can you tell me what things are incorrect in my profile so i can fix it please? sad (She makes me feel pathetic ) cry Nuuu~! Leo, I'm sorry! 0x Trust me though, I've met people who are on a whole 'nother level of terrible. You're on an improving scale. Don't feel bad. D: Its ok.Im just really mad and upset about Ty telling Soul take my other RPC Soul and Ty didn't do his duty as a Hokage to protect a Ninja from attacking there own fellow ninja.....Im just so pissed right now at him.....and no one cared if my RPC died.....V_V I just really want this character to be approved so i can forget about the other one
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 11:19 am
Leo:
1. The Ninjutsu Class doesn't have access to the 'Agility' strength, please choose a different tertiary strength from the list provided in the Ninjutsu Class (Ninja class) post.
2. You need to choose a secondary and Tertiary element (and it cannot be Hyouton... you can't use Ice jutsu unless you have the Hyouton bloodline)
3. You need to link your bloodline to the post on the Kekkai Genkai page.
4. Your Shinobi skills need to match what comes from the Ninjutsu Ninja Class and your Bloodline.
Your Bloodline has been approved. Please make the above edits and repost your profile. I will then look over it again
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:52 pm
Jake Akazuki 
Full Name: Jake Akazuki
Nicknames: Frosty J
Age: 16
Birthdate: August 15th
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: White and Black mix
Nindo: "Peace and Love....That what makes me stronger"
Personality: Brave,Calm,cunning,a little Shy,and has a Cool attitude
Behavior: Good,Calm Cool,and Friendly
Biography: Jake was born in the Hidden Mist Village on August 15th on a very dangerous Blizzard. When He was 10 years old an Army was sent on a S ranked mission to go capture Jake. His Clan was Destroyed by the Army along with the village leaving flames and fallen houses everywhere. The guards found Jake hiding in hole full of broken wood. The guards was about to take Jake until Jake run into a large pound that his family had in the backyard and merged with the water. As the guard follows him stopping at the pound Jake fought back using his Clans ability by creating a large body of water formed as a large dragon head slamming himself into the guards and flooding his village and killing every last guard in sight. Jake appears on the ground on his knees crying over his dead family. He ran away out of his village and join an Assassin organization. There until he was 12 was killing people for money. One day he decided to kill the boss of the organization because he found out they was just using Jake and killed the rest with his Clans unique Water ability finishing by flooding the organization. After that he went on his own as a outcast being reticulated by his because of his Clans abilities. Once day Jake stumbled on the Leaf Village Gate. He walked in seeing change in himself and his killing ways.Surprisely it worked and Jake stayed in the village hoping to see peace and change in himself as a Shinobi
Village: Hidden Leaf Village
Rank: Genin
________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation
Summoning: N/A
Bloodline: [Suigetsu Clan]
Curse Mark: N/A
Weapon of Choice:
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu Class
Strengths:
● Chakra Control
● Intelligence
● High Chakra Reserves
Weaknesses:
● Elemental Vulnerability: Earth
● Weak Bodied
● Weak against Raiton (Lighting)
Shinobi Skills:
• Can learn Ninjutsu 1 less post than normal
• Can learn Suiton Elemental Jutsu with one less post (stacks with above)
• Slightly Stronger Suiton Elemental Jutsu
Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Water
- Secondary: Wind
- Tertiary: Fire
Chakra Color: Blue
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation
Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:
________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation
Non-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
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Water - Suiton
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Wind - Futon
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Fire - Katon
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities
Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
____________________________________
(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles
# Custom Weapons Allowed: 0
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color:
Forehead | Leaf l Navy Blue
Flack Jacket Style | Color: Gray
N/A l N/A
Kunai Holster Location | Color:
Right Leg | Navy Blue
Projectile Holster Location | Color:
Left Leg | Navy Blue
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 6
Makibishi: 10
Shuriken: 10
Flash Bombs: 4
________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation
Height: 5'6
Weight: 145
Body Build: Light
Eye Color: Bright Green
Hair Color: Gray
Family: They All Died In The Great Ninja War
Theme song:Kill Bill Soundtrack:Whistle
________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation
S Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 0
C Rank: 0
D Rank: 0
Posting Layout
[u][size=24][color=darkblue]L[/color][/size][size=18]eo[/size] [size=24][color=darkblue][/color][/size][size=18][/size][/u]
[size=10]Genin| Leaf l Suigetsu Clan l Water Jutsu l Ninjutsu class [/size]
[imgright]http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u248/Paola001_2007/anime-10.jpg[/imgright]
[color=red](TEXT HERE)[/color]
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:06 am
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 10:32 am
 Full Name: Zarud Helviiryn
Nicknames: ------------
Age: 17
Birthdate: 1992
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Caucasion
Nindo: Failure is the true killer...
Personality: Twisted, Evil, Doesn't care about anyone.
Behavior: Would sooner kick your face in than look at you...
Biography: Zarud has never been very friendly. He was raised by his tutors to do all it takes to complete his mission even if he has to kill his own squadmates to do it. Zarud trained in tactics and various chakra exercises to improve himself even before the academy. The only thing he lacked while growing up was any family members, this made him extremely independent. It also gave him little or no conscience allowing him to kill without mercy or fear.
Village: Sand
Rank: Genin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation Summoning: None
Bloodline: None
Curse Mark: None
Weapon of Choice: Puppet
Ninja Class: Puppetry Class
Strengths:
● Intelligence
● Chakra Control
● Agility
Weaknesses:
● Weak Body / Frail physique
● Low physical power
● Not a good team player
Shinobi Skills:
- Can replace a limb with a puppet limb, but abilities must be approved at the custom. (as a Custom weapon)
- Can learn all forms of puppetry jutsus
- May only have puppets of your rank
- Puppets can be broken.
- Only Kage or Sannin can learn the Human Puppet Technique.
Number of Puppets the User Can Control:
Genin: 2
Chuunin: 4
Jounin: 6
Anbu: 8
Kage or Sannin: 10
Human Puppet: 100
Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Suiton
- Secondary: Fuuton (learned at : Genin/Chuunin/Jounin)
Chakra Color: Red
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation Non-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
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Element - Suiton
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Element - Fuuton
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color: Forehead, Black
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Flack Jacket Style | Color: Overcoat, Black
Kunai Holster Location | Color: Right Thigh, Black
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Projectile Holster Location | Color: Waist, Grey
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: Left side chest, Grey
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Exploding Smoke Grenade: 6
Makibishi: 20
Shuriken: 10
Flash Bombs: 4 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation Height: 5ft 11
Weight: 147lbs
Body Build: Skinny
Eye Color: Orange
Hair Color: Blue
Family: Dead
Theme song: Avenged Sevenfold--- Bat Country ________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 11:03 am
Zarud:
~ Ok, all of the very short stuff is fine, but it'd be quite helpful if you put more damned depth into the character. Your biography is needs some work, it's like reading a one-liner RP. D: Improve it please.
~ Ahahahaha... No. You're a NINJUTSU user, not a puppet one, so you're not allowed to used puppets.
~ Which element are you most vulnerable to? List it.
~ Shinobi skills are to be filled with skills granted by your class, bloodline, or clan. Fill it.
~ As a ninjutsu user, you're allowed three elements.
~ Everything else is fine, but fix all of that-- mm'k?
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 11:12 am
Kay' but I only chose Ninjutsu since I thought it included Puppets as there wasn't a Puppet User Class. neutral
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 11:27 am
Alright all done.... The Puppet Master Class wasn't on the list so I improvised... sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 11:30 am
Holy s**t, you're right! There's no puppet user class! THIS IS BLASPHEMY!
Hold that note on your profile, this needs to be sorted out.
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 12:21 pm
Calm down. We have a Puppet Master Class, it's just not posted yet. jade was supposed to but she never did. For the time being, just leaves the Strengths and weaknesses off and fix everything else.
...I'll get back to you later tonight when I have the file (Its on my home PC)
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 5:55 pm
Ok i changed my New RPC's Clan to the Hyouton Clan. Im just waiting for it to be approved the RPC profile
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 7:54 am
Jake Akazuki
Full Name: Jake Akazuki
Nicknames: Frosty J
Age: 16
Birthdate: August 15th
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: White and Black mix
Nindo: "Peace and Love....That what makes me stronger"
Personality: Brave,Calm,cunning,a little Shy,and has a Cool attitude
Behavior: Good,Calm Cool,and Friendly
Biography: Jake was born in the Hidden Mist Village on August 15th on a very dangerous Blizzard. When He was 10 years old an Army was sent on a S ranked mission to go capture Jake. His Clan was Destroyed by the Army along with the village leaving flames and fallen houses everywhere. The guards found Jake hiding in hole full of broken wood. The guards was about to take Jake until Jake run into a large pound that his family had in the backyard and merged with the water. As the guard follows him stopping at the pound Jake fought back using his Clans ability by creating a large body of water formed as a large dragon head slamming himself into the guards and flooding his village and killing every last guard in sight. Jake appears on the ground on his knees crying over his dead family. He ran away out of his village and join an Assassin organization. There until he was 12 was killing people for money. One day he decided to kill the boss of the organization because he found out they was just using Jake and killed the rest with his Clans unique Water ability finishing by flooding the organization. After that he went on his own as a outcast being reticulated by his because of his Clans abilities. Once day Jake stumbled on the Leaf Village Gate. He walked in seeing change in himself and his killing ways.Surprisely it worked and Jake stayed in the village hoping to see peace and change in himself as a Shinobi
Village: Hidden Leaf Village
Rank: Genin
________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation
Summoning: N/A
Bloodline: [Hyouton Clan]
Curse Mark: N/A
Weapon of Choice:
Ninja Class: Ninjutsu Class
Strengths:
● Chakra Control
● Intelligence
● High Chakra Reserves
Weaknesses:
● Elemental Vulnerability: Earth
● Weak Bodied
● Weak against Raiton (Lighting)
Shinobi Skills:
• Can learn Ninjutsu 1 less post than normal
• Can learn Suiton Elemental Jutsu with one less post (stacks with above)
• Slightly Stronger Suiton Elemental Jutsu
Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Water
- Secondary: Wind
- Tertiary: Fire
Chakra Color: Blue
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation
Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:
________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation
Non-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
→
Water - Suiton
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→
→
→
→
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→
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Wind - Futon
→
→
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→
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Fire - Katon
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities
Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
____________________________________
(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles
# Custom Weapons Allowed: 0
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color:
Forehead | Leaf l Navy Blue
Flack Jacket Style | Color: Gray
N/A l N/A
Kunai Holster Location | Color:
Right Leg | Navy Blue
Projectile Holster Location | Color:
Left Leg | Navy Blue
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 6
Makibishi: 10
Shuriken: 10
Flash Bombs: 4
________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation
Height: 5'6
Weight: 145
Body Build: Light
Eye Color: Bright Green
Hair Color: Gray
Family: They All Died In The Great Ninja War
Theme song:Kill Bill Soundtrack:Whistle
________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation
S Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 0
C Rank: 0
D Rank: 0
Posting Layout
[u][size=24][color=darkblue]L[/color][/size][size=18]eo[/size] [size=24][color=darkblue][/color][/size][size=18][/size][/u]
[size=10]Genin| Leaf l Hyouton Clan l Water Jutsu l Ninjutsu class [/size]
[imgright]http://i170.photobucket.com/albums/u248/Paola001_2007/anime-10.jpg[/imgright]
[color=red](TEXT HERE)[/color]
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