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 Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 5:02 pm
Zabuza then came up to him and said "The explosion was very large but you need to work on the speed of preforming the jutsu now. You are way to slow in that department of preforming this jutsu" Zabuza then went back to his spot crossed his arms and continued to glare at the young Nobuyuki again
"Yes sir I will sir" Nobuyuki then preformed the handsigns faster and placed his chakra correctly faster also gather the chakra took 5 minutes and preforming the correct hand signs took another minute "Ok I have now lets do this!" Nobuyuki released the chakra and he got the same result as the last time he preformed it "Yes that was faster I almost have it!"
6/9 Water Explosion Jutsu
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 5:07 pm
"That was faster but you need to reduce the time gather the chakra down to 1 minute and the hand signs should only take 20 seconds" Zabuza started to shout at Nobuyuki again "What are you waiting for do you not want to master this jutsu? Do you not want to become strong?"
"No sir I want to become strong I will do as you say until the very end until my last breath of this training I will not disobey you I will follow all the training exercises" Nobuyuki quickly preformed the handsigns in 20 seconds in the time Zabuza wanted it but it still took 5 minutes to build the chakra he needed "Come on I need to move faster!" He then released the chakra making another great explosion come for the puddle near him "The explosion is good but the speed needs alot of work!"
7/9 Water Explosion Jutsu
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 5:14 pm
"The handsigns were good but you need to work on the chakra build up before you continue anywhere else with your training" Zabuza shouted at the young Nobuyuki "Now work on that and you should have this techinique down"
"Yes sir I will sir" Nobuyuki then preformed his handsigns again taking only 20 seconds as before "Ok I will get it this time" Nobuyuki reduced the chakra build up to 2 minutes almost there but not quite "Ok lets do this" He then released the chakra again making a great explosion just as the last two times before he did this technique "Ok I'm getting faster and I'm almost there!"
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Posted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 5:21 pm
"Ok almost there maggot now this should be the final time you preform it and you should have it down" Zabuza pointed towards the lake "But this time try it on something bigger I want a bigger explosion from you alright?" Zabuza shouted once again at young Nobuyuki
"Yes sir I will sir" Nobuyuki preformed the handsigns and quickly built his chakra this time he had mastered the speed it had been reduced to one minute "Yes I have it!" he then released the chakra towards the lake and a huge explosion bigger thanthe one from the puddle appeared and it towered over Nobuyuki and Zabuza "Yes I did it I did it now what is next Zabuza-Sensai?" He shouted towards his sensai who only had to teach him one more technique before his training was done
9/9 Water Explosion Jutsu
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 10:47 am
Hyukito Mitsuko
Mitsuko opened a bowl of Ramen and pondered on where to look for Raiga. The chance was slim that he'll actually teach her, but there was a chance. Her mother was married to some one of the Kuroski clan but left the clan when her father mysteriously died. Her mother has then insisted that Mitsuko keep her last name, Hyukito. After graduating from the academy, she found that nobody was willing to teach her. She had a hard time learning Suiton techniques, which were valued greatly in the hidden mist. Suddenly, a hulking figure in a black cloak appeared. Mitsuko guzzles the rest of the Ramen and walked up confidently to Raiga.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 10:57 am
Suddenly, the voice of a child spoke up:"Raiga, there is someone approaching." Mitsuko paused for a few seconds, surely that wasn't Raiga speaking? As Mitsuko approached the figure, a much deeper voice rang out:"Who are you? Are you from the Kuroski clan?". "My father was, but then he died, I came here to learn ninjutsu from you." said Mitsuko.
"And who was your father?'
"Kuroski Kimaru"
-long pause-
Raiga then gave a maniacal laugh. "Kimaru, eh? I was at his funeral, he was strong, but to kind. That's why he was a poor shinobi and got killed."
Mitsuko didn't really know her father, but still felt a bit of anger. "I'm here to learn ninjutsu, not to talk about my family!"shouted Mitsuko.
Raiga's eyes narrowed and he smiled menacingly.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 3:54 pm
Hyuga_Kazama ::Techniques::
Momochi Zabuza
Water Clone: 700 Skill Points
Hidden Mist skill: 800 Skill Points
Water Prison Technique: 1000 Skill Points (( Clan Technique ))
Water Explosion Skill:900 Skill Points ((Clan technique ))
Mizu Haku
Mist Instantaneous Body Skill: 500 Skill Points
Flying Water Needles: 850 Skill Points
Bringing Of Water: 1000 Skill Points
Demonic Ice Mirrors: 1200 Skill Points (( Clan Technique ))
Gouza & Meizu
Instantaneous Water Body Skill: 500 Skill Points
Hoshigaki Kisame
Exploding Water Shockwave: 1000 Skill Points
Water Shark Bullet Technique: 900 Skill Points
Bursting Water Collision Waves: 1800 Skill Points ((Clan Technique ))
Water Breathing Skill: 700 Skill Points ((Clan techniques ))
Kurosuki Raiga
Lightning Bolt Fang: 1000 Skill Points
Stone Avalanche: 800
Lightning Dragon Tornado: 1000 Skill Point Lightning Strike Armour, don't forget that
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 4:31 pm
"Lets see if your actually worthy of being my student." said Raiga. Mitsuko tensed, preparing for an attack. However, what Raiga had in mind was completely different. "Gather up your chakra into one spot." said Raiga. Feeling really stupid, Mitsuko did as she was told. As she concentrated her chakra, Raiga started talking to something behind him.
"Ranmaru, does she have the same type of chakra as mine?"
"Let me see, yes I think so, though there are different types she can handle too."
"Is that so?"
Raiga then told Mitsuko to stop. "Alright I shall teach you a few techniques, but whoever you kill with these techniques, you must invite me to their funeral." Fully convinced that Raiga was criminally insane or at least mentally unstable, Mitsuko just noodded her head.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 8:24 pm
"I shall teach you the most destrctive technique first." said Raiga. "This way you can destroy anyone that dares to oppose you." Mitsuko was about to say how she wasn't interested in killing every opponent, but then she caught the insane glint in Raiga's eye and shut herself up.
"First of all, you must create a rotating current around you with your chakra." At this, Raiga clasped his hands together and a small tornado formed around him. Mitsuko tried this and succeeded to some extent. A small dust cloud picked up around her feet and started whirling. However, Raiga was not impressed. "Don't be naive, if you can't do this you might as well go home to your mother!"
For once in her life, Mitsuko felt genuine anger. "My mother is dead!" shouted Mitsuko as her chakra picked up more dust and spun around her. Suddenly, Mitsuko was flun off her feet by the force of her own chakra. "what do you call that!?" Shouted Mitsuko, "a suicidal technique?"
Raiga smirked and answered:"the second step is to spin with your chakra."
At this, Raiga started spinning, and soon Mitsuko felt a suction force pull her towards the tornado of Raiga's chakra.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 8:35 pm
"This is not the full power of the jutsu." said Raiga as he stopped spinning. "However, you must always create a suction affect to draw in your enemy. Never create a repelling affect." Mitsuko wandered what the next step was. Once you draw your opponent in to the vortex, your opponent can definitely strike you.
Knowing what she was thinking Raiga intervened. "Enough, I shall show you the full power of the Lightning Dragon Tornado." With that said Raiga made several hand seals and started spinning. "Rairyuu Tatsumaki!!!" The tornado grew and grew until the top formed the head of a dragon. Then the entire column glowed with electricity. Even though Mitsuko was far away, She had to hold on to a nearby tree to prevent herself from being drawn into the painful vortex of lightning.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 8:55 pm
"raiga!stop" cried the childish voice from Raiga's cloak. Almost immediately, the spinning stopped and Raiga appeared. "Ranmaru, are you alright?"said Raiga, rushing to the cloak. Mitsuko watched intently as Raiga unfolded the cloak and brought out a little boy of 6 or 7.
Misuko nearly choked on air. Why would the leader of the Kuroski clan, one of the seven shinobi lords of hidden mist, carry a little boy on his back? The boy quickly put Mitsuko out of her misery:"Raiga and I work as partners, I'm his eyes and he is my arms and legs." Mitsuko decided not to ask too many questions but to concentrate by learning the technique. She performed the correct hand seals and created her own tornado.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 9:03 pm
Raiga was amazed at Mitsuko's improvement in the last few days. However, he was extremely bored and haven't gone to any funerals for weeks. Mitsuko's tornado has enough lightning power, but after she forms the dragons head, she would alwaays lose control, sending out random bolts of lightning and a strong wind. She would then fall back, depleted of chakra, and open a bowl of Ramen. Her progress isn't slow, but Raiga was getting impatient.
Mitsuko hated training under Raiga. Whenever she was close to acheiving the desired result, Raiga would smile maniacly, only to roar in anger when she fails to complete the technique. Ranmaru was the only one offering constructive feedback, but it didn't help her situation.
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 9:18 pm
"Can't you give me anymore advice?" asked Mitsuko as she failed for the 5th time that day. "Just do it! I can do it so easily!" shouted Raiga, not really being helpful. With a sigh, Mitsuko concentrated her remaining chakra and started spinning. "Ninpou: Rairyuu Tatsumaki!!" After a few seconds, she had the dragon formed. This time however, she changed guided the head toward a nearby tree, just when she was losing control, she send the head into a steep dive and released her chakra. The force of her attack made a crater in the ground and the tree was turned into splinters.
Raiga turned as if nothing had happened and said the long-awaited words:"better, but not perfect." Mitsuko forced herself into a standing position and smiled. Her hair was standing up all over her head and her vision was blurry. Just before passing out, she said something she wanted to say for a long time.
"In your face."
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Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 8:40 pm
yoshi_mitsuko "Can't you give me anymore advice?" asked Mitsuko as she failed for the 5th time that day. "Just do it! I can do it so easily!" shouted Raiga, not really being helpful. With a sigh, Mitsuko concentrated her remaining chakra and started spinning. "Ninpou: Rairyuu Tatsumaki!!" After a few seconds, she had the dragon formed. This time however, she changed guided the head toward a nearby tree, just when she was losing control, she send the head into a steep dive and released her chakra. The force of her attack made a crater in the ground and the tree was turned into splinters. Raiga turned as if nothing had happened and said the long-awaited words:"alright, let's move on to the next technique." Mitsuko forced herself into a standing position and smiled. Her hair was standing up all over her head and her vision was blurry. Just before passing out, she said something she wanted to say for a long time. "In your face." Lightning Dragon Tornado/Rairyuu Tatsumski learned 8/8 1000 skill points ((If it's 8 posts, you only get 800 skill points. And please don't just randomly place how much skill points it is. We mods will do that. Thank you.))
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