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 Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:01 pm
((So...umm..what person are you attacking?))
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:19 pm
[[Well, logically... I would normally suspect the opposition because he's basically being protected by the purifiers. So, to be attacked by a defender is expected.]]
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Kind Stranger rolled 3 10-sided dice:
6, 2, 8
Total: 16 (3-30)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:27 pm
((I am using two minions now, but they are really attaking only one by one, not simultaneously. Is that alright?))
Boulder 1: 5 Boulder 2: 5 Kin: 27
Kin smirked at making impact with his strategic kick, but soon found himself falling prey to the enemy's very own attack. Luckily for him, his quick reactions were able to make him form a certain distortion in the atmosphere to make a strong shield, repelling the bursts of energy. With a quick sigh, he set a footing on the earth, only to be surprised by Ryn's sudden clawed attack. A malicious smirk crossed his face, as his boulder monster dispersed and reformed in between them, taking the hit. He then flew up into the skies about to strike when he saw the fellow purifier attack the draconian, and smirked. 'I'll leave the winged monster to him. I'll go take care of that other pest.'
Fire bursted out into him and he all but frowned as he reenabled his atmospheric distortion once again. In an instant, the cyborg fought as well, making Kin more upset. He could well understand the pleasure of fighting one on one, on isolating the enemy, or even isolating himself among enemies, but these acts merely portrayed something of crossing the line and he wasn't the type of being to tolerate such things. He merely stared at the mounted guns, and frowned at their hopeless attempt to kill him. His other boulder monster disolved and took in the hits, swallowing the five men all at once, suffacating them and burrying them to hopeless deaths.
In deep anguish he summoned the very same boulder minion to swallow the cyborg as well, all the while he unleashed his lightning strikes at full throttle on both deffenders.
((The first two are for Mark, from Kin and his minion, while the last one is for Ryn.))
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Sauronbane rolled 1 10-sided dice:
3
Total: 3 (1-10)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:53 pm
HP:11
Ryn spun as a wolf like human charged him, and leapt up, the blade skittering across his scales, and causing him to bleed, only to see more lightning fly his way from Kin. Snarling, he leapt skywards, deflecting the lightning away with his void like wings.
"I AM SICK OF THIS!", He roared, his rage boiling up again, but this time he didn't breath fire. He merely floated in the air, his eyes flicking between the three foes that were all trying to kill him.
"One, two, three... Who shall I destroy?", He said, his grey eyes cold, and hate filled, still flicking around the battle field, and looking for his sword.
Suddenly he dive bombed, directly at the metal being, raking his claws at its eyes.
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SirBayer rolled 2 10-sided dice:
7, 1
Total: 8 (2-20)
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 8:13 am
HP:40
"Quite wrong, my friend," Mark told the machine. "Every last bit of power I have comes from life, not from machinery. Nothing in me is dead. Weak points, sure, but this hit to the head... well, it's done something, but not much." He stumbled backwards, only to feel the lightning sear into him, this time with essentially every bit of its power. Something else came upon him, covering him in darkness and crushing him slightly in the process.
Well that was bad.
He had been driven into the earth, but he could still see dirt. He never did like digging, but when it was inevitable...
A few moments after his imprisonment, he burst from the earth next to the creature that had swallowed him up, picking up his arms and aiming one at the man in the sky while the second he aimed at the living boulder he had just escaped.
((Numero uno for Kin, numero dos for boulder monster, whichever one it is.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 4:18 pm
((What are his armaments? Are they energy blasts, just like before?))
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 4:45 pm
((Yes, the energy machine guns.))
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TanManDown rolled 1 10-sided dice:
1
Total: 1 (1-10)
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 5:12 pm
For several minutes, Amadeus just stood on the outskirts of the raging battle, paralyzed by fear and wonder all at once. He watched the combatants ceaselessly try to kill each other, and wondered what they were doing and why they were fighting. It was then that he thought perhaps maybe, just maybe, that one of these "sides" in the battle was the source of the explosion in the Pentagon. If that was true, then it was them Amadeus must help destroy.
But which side was good and which side was bad?
He heard the word "Purifier" thrown around a bit, but he didn't know of Purifiers came to purify earth of humans, or if they came to purify earth of the... things trying to kill the humans. A few more minutes of this went on, until Amadeus watched several soldiers come out, only to be attacked by an earth golem summoned by one of the battlers.
After observing this event, he was quickly able to deduct who was good and who was bad. After all, why would those defending humanity kill five people in one blow?
Finding some cover behind a large chunk of earth (undoubtedly launched there from the explosion earlier), he readied his gun, took careful aim, and fired several controlled bursts at the puppeteer of the earth golems.
((Huzzzah! He finally made it to the Pentagon! Let's hope he doesn't die. >_>))
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Kind Stranger rolled 2 10-sided dice:
6, 1
Total: 7 (2-20)
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 5:31 pm
Boulder monster 1: 4
Boulder monster 2: 4
Kin HP: 27
Kin raised up his arm and dispersed the energy blasts with his space distortion, grinning as he started to enjoy the battle even more. He noticed at the corner of his sight a mere mortal trying to shoot him down, and smirked as he commanded his other earth monster to devour it, covering for him when the young man tried to shoot him down.He chuckled softly as he could feel his control over his two minions slipping away, getting excited. "I have no time meddling with weaklings" he spoe to himself, and merely commanded his boulder monster to continue towards the man, and swallow him, while concentrating ont he metallic being in front of him. He opened his eyes wide and strieved to pierce intot he enemy's mind, striking down fear to paralyze him weaken.
((First is for Amadeus, and second is for Mark.))
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TanManDown rolled 1 10-sided dice:
2
Total: 2 (1-10)
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 5:42 pm
((Dammit... 6 on the first roll? Amadeus is soft, y'know. >_>))
HP: 14
Amadeus went wide-eyed when he saw the golem take the damage from his burst (well... part of his burst. Most of it seemed to miss anyway) and charge him. He had just enough time to get out of cover and start running when the thing devoured him. It was like being caught in a sandstorm... times a million. Dust and earth was all around him, suffocating him and trying to infiltrate his lungs and nostrils. Keeping his mouth firmly shut, Amadeus held his arm to his eyes, pulled out his sidearm, and fired point-blank (he had no other choice, seeing as how he was inside the damn thing) into gut of the golem.
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SirBayer rolled 1 10-sided dice:
1
Total: 1 (1-10)
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 5:55 pm
((I presume that was a roll for fear?))
HP:40
Mark looked him in the eye... and didn't flinch. Granted, it was frightening, but it hadn't had his opponent's intended effect, apparently, as it was alltogether too simple to reach into his own mind and crush the image. "That all? I think this shouldn't be hard, then." He raised an arm again, letting loose yet another barrage of firepower.
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Kind Stranger rolled 3 10-sided dice:
4, 2, 6
Total: 12 (3-30)
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 8:49 pm
((That fear was an attack. Even if it's just mental, it still messes up the mind lol, so it counts as damage.))
Golemn 1 HP: 3
Golemn 2 HP: 2
Kin HP: 27
Kin gazed over the human and grew excited at the surprise that he was still able to break free, and sent a sharp wave of wind the moment he was able to stand, for the mere pleasure of toppling him over, but in the heat of the battle, he didn't manage to control himself as to make the burst of wind whip in a more leathal manner.
One of his earth golems covered him immediately and happily ate the bursts of energy. It grinned and laughed boisterously before charging at the cyborg. Kin stared down at his opponent with contempt forcing more into his mind, not caring about whatever fear the thing had inside him. All he wanted was some mind disruption that would give the enemy one heck of a headache, and create disturbing stresses that would make the enemy fear in wonder why he'd shiver for no apparent reason. This was something that Kin would enjoy even more than caussing fears to come true - to implant new fears in his enemies' minds, and how much more could he savor the enjoyment of such things than doing it to a more challenging, more fulfilling, more powerful beings? And it would be rather interesting for him to see if the cyborg could overcome the fear he had cast and still evade his earth monster's powerful punch.
((First is to Amadeus, and the other two are to Mark, from Kin (first) and the golemn (second).))
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TanManDown rolled 1 10-sided dice:
5
Total: 5 (1-10)
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 9:58 pm
HP: 10
The dust was suffocating him worse than ever. Amadeus was starting to spasm. He knew he couldn't remain in the belly of this beast much longer, or else he would black out, and the golem would pound him until he finally died. In a desperate attempt to escape, he crouched and launched himself in a random direction as hard as he could. Fortunately, it seemed as if the golem hadn't anticipated this, as Amadeus was able to break free from the whirling dustcloud of doom. Sucking down enormous quantities of air, the soldier didn't waste time in pulling out his assault rifle and unloading the remainder of his clip into the beast. Then he did his best to high-tail out of the area. Unfortunately, his best wasn't very good, considering that he had just nearly been suffocated to death.
((*crosses fingers for a roll between 2 and 6*))
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 10:32 pm
((Erm... what does "clip" mean in that post?))
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Posted: Thu Aug 30, 2007 10:37 pm
((Clip, as in Clip of bullets I do believe!))
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