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Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 3:36 pm
O.K., here's a story that I came up with about the MSU. It's only the first chapter, and I still have to work on the others, but here's the first one for now:
Chapter 1: The Beginning
"Begone, filthy demon!" Saint b*****d cried as he plunged his blade into the ice demon's chest. The demon cried out in pain, and to retaliate, sent a shower of ice his way. It almost hit him, but luckily, Archmage made a protective barrier to shield him. "You think you can get rid of us that easily? You're wrong, and now it's time to pay the price," Archmage said tauntingly. With that, he muttered an incantation, and soon a ball of fire appeared before him. He threw it down, and then a giant cross made of flames appeared. "Now, go back to hell." The flames then engulfed the demon, and it cried out in agony. "Who are you foolish people who oppose us?" the demon asked. "We are the MSU-Monster Slayers United, and you are just another low-level demon we just defeated," Saint b*****d said. After saying that, he plunged his sword into the demon's head. "You will be sorry! We'll be back to destroy you!" the demon cried. It then disappeared, leaving only a small burnt place on the ground. Saint b*****d then sheathed his sword. "Well, shouldn't we head back home?" Archmage asked. The two friends then disappeared as Archmage casted a teleporting spell.
Later in Astral Samurai's office...
"Did you destroy it?" Astral asked. "Yes, the only trace it left was that the alleyway is partially covered in ice and that a couple of people saw it before we got there. "Well, I guess Phil and I will take care of that later. I guess there is nothing else for you two to do, so you can go. Oh, and Archmage, Haru wanted to see you in the art room," Astral said. They walked out, with Archmage heading towards the art room. It was a huge room, used mostly by Haru Mania, for different things needed to be made for the MSU. It had all sorts of projects, most of them halfway done and lying around, with the finished ones usually put in the display area until a use is found for them. As of now, Haru Mania was working on a banner to be put in the entrance area. "Oh, hi baby," Haru said. "I'm still working on the banner. Are you hurt from the fight?" "No, it was just a level two ice demon. It didn't really put up much of a fight, but..." Archmage trailed off. "But what?" "Well, it said,'We'll be back,' but there was only one so..." "Oh, don't worry about it, it's probably nothing." "Well, I'll see you later; I've got to go down to the lab." "Bye, I'll meet you down there later."
Meanwhile...
"Did they suspect anything?" "Not a thing sire." "Good. Everything's going according to plan. Now it's time to get ready for phase two. Go tell everyone to get ready." "Yes sir!" "Very soon, I will destroy you Monster Slayers United! Mwhahahahahah-ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha... *coughs* Gotta stop doing that..."
End of chapter 1
Oh and for the record, no one asked me to do this, I just had a random and crazy idea. Also, I need something to do during school...
Oh yeah, I'd love any opinions you have of it 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 4:40 pm
Firstly, St. Bast doesn't use swords. Hammers... big hammers.
Secondly, there aren't that many actual demons left wandering the world. Mostly just mundane stuff... vampires, werewolves, slime monsters, cans of tuna, zombies, ghouls, giant intelligent friendly talking spiders, etc.
Thirdly, Archmage talks a lot more than that... I mean, a lot more...
Also, there should be a lot more insulting and banter... damn near constantly, actually. ninja
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Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 4:47 pm
Thaddeus Firstly, St. Bast doesn't use swords. Hammers... big hammers. Secondly, there aren't that many actual demons left wandering the world. Mostly just mundane stuff... vampires, werewolves, slime monsters, cans of tuna, zombies, ghouls, giant intelligent friendly talking spiders, etc. Thirdly, Archmage talks a lot more than that... I mean, a lot more... Also, there should be a lot more insulting and banter... damn near constantly, actually. ninja Yeah, Haru told me that he uses a hammer, I just forgot to change it sweatdrop Gotta change that too... O.K., it was just the first chapter... Let me fix it...
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Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 4:52 pm
Flame Maniac blah blah blah Oh yeah, I'd love any opinions you have of it 3nodding What is this doing int he Art Thread? Try the Fireplace instead.
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AstralSamurai Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 7:36 pm
Well, Haru said that it was a form of art and said for me to put it in here...
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Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2005 7:57 pm
Flame Maniac Well, Haru said that it was a form of art and said for me to put it in here... We have a specific thread dedicated to story telling, it's called "The Fireplace." So go post your story there.
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AstralSamurai Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2005 1:15 pm
hello*stares at art* biggrin
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 3:15 pm
i have drawings i would like to share if Haru doesn't mind
*notices Elemental*
oh...hi
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 7:02 pm
vampiric_feline i have drawings i would like to share if Haru doesn't mind *notices Elemental* oh...hi That would be just peachy biggrin Post them in here ^_^
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Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2005 10:16 am
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2005 12:15 pm
So... what do you guys think about the special addition to the first page? wink
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2005 7:21 pm
Haru Mania So... what do you guys think about the special addition to the first page? wink yeowza.
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2005 9:30 pm
As long as you don't try to draw any of the dudes, the swimsuit edition is Thaddeus Approved. ninja
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Posted: Thu Mar 17, 2005 9:33 pm
Oh I love it Haru. ^_^
You're the bestestestest. ^_^
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Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2005 10:10 pm
Thaddeus As long as you don't try to draw any of the dudes, the swimsuit edition is Thaddeus Approved. ninja What?! Why would I exclude the boys?! That'd just be terrible D: Expect many of you to be wearing man panties kidding ^_^;; unless that is what is wanted XD
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