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ILessThan3MCR_hXc

PostPosted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 12:30 pm


*GASP!* FRANKIE!!!! *Hyperventilates*
Anyways This is Great!!!
Please Update Soon!!!
PostPosted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 12:36 pm


xxLTNxx
*GASP!* FRANKIE!!!! *Hyperventilates*
Anyways This is Great!!!
Please Update Soon!!!


Leeann, calm! It's just a story. It's not reality!

Punk vs Emo


ILessThan3MCR_hXc

PostPosted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 2:56 pm


BREAK_down_CHILD
xxLTNxx
*GASP!* FRANKIE!!!! *Hyperventilates*
Anyways This is Great!!!
Please Update Soon!!!


Leeann, calm! It's just a story. It's not reality!


I...Am...Calm!...
I'm Fine Now hehehe
PostPosted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 4:18 pm


*Sigh* I never thought I would make it past the first chapter of this story, and now look at it, chapter 9 and over 60 replies. This means so much to me seeing as it's only my first fan fic, I think I'm gonna cry *tear*..... Okay enough of the sappy crap! Time For..........


Chapter 9



I finally fell asleep after I had been imformed that Frankie had lived through the night. It was around seven in the morning that I fell asleep, and was only 10 when I woke up. Somone was calling my name, for a second I thought it was an angel or some sort of afterlife creature. I quickly opened my eyes, trying to catch a glimpse of whatever was calling me. Only to be suprised at the fact that Frankie was standing by my bed, he seemed almost transparrent. I stuck out my hand to grab hold of his, but was shocked when it went straight through his entire body. I screamed in terror.

"KYLA!" Gerard yelled, I woke up from my nightmare.

"Are you okay?" Gerard asked, his face covered with worry. "You look like you've seen a ghost."

"Where's Frankie!" I yelled, jumping to my feet. Gerard sat me back down on the bed. He looked straight into my eyes.

"He....he..... he died an hour ago." Gerard said, tears glazing over his eyes.

"NO! No he can't be dead! He Can't Be!" I screamed, as tears fell from my eyes. I ran out of the room towards Frankies new hospital room. I burst through the door only to see the shape of Frankies body, covered in a long white blanket. I fell to the floor, to scared to cry or scream I just sat on the floor sobbing. Gerard soon burst through the doors and quickly embraced my crouched over form.

"It's okay Kyla....." He said, I could tell he didn't believe himself.

"NO! It's Not! I-i-it's never g-going to b-be okay e-e-ever a-a-again." I sobbed, digging my face into Gerard's shoulder. I soon collapsed from fear. Gerard carried me back to my room and layyed me down on the bed. I fell asleep as soon as he placed my head down on the pillow.

"Now that you've been tortured, it's time to die." Sarah said as she placed her finger on the trigger. Right as she pulled the trigger back Frankie jumped into the path. The bullet going right into his stomach. He landed on my legs, curled into a ball from the pain.

"NO!" I cried out.

********

"Kyla! Your chest." Frankie said as he saw the blood seeping through my shirt.

"I'm fine Frankie." I lied.

"I don't know how long I can stay awake." He said.

"Please don't die Frankie!" I cried.

"I would never die on you Ky. I just really need to go to sleep, I'm so tired." He said, he closed his eyes and fell into unconciousness.

"I love you Frankie."

*********
It should have been me, not Frankie.

I woke up covered in sweat.

"FRANKIE!" I screamed, but I then remembered he could never hear me. No matter how loud I yelled, he would never hear me again. I knew what I had to do. I quickly scirbbled a note to Gerard and Mikey explaining where I was going, then got changed into one of Gerard's hoodies and a pair of jeans from a bag of clothes that my mom had dropped off before going away on her newest business trip. It had gotten dark out and I knew I shouldn't be walking around Jersey so late but I needed to get home. Tears started to flow from my eyes as I planned out what I was going to do. Suddenly I heard a framiliar voice call my name. I spun around and came face to face with Frankie.

"Y-y-y-you're dead!" I screamed. Frankie grabbed my hand.

"If I were dead could I hold your hand?" Frankie asked, a smile appearing on his face.

"But...but...the doctors.....you...they...but." I mumbled. "They said you were dead! I saw your body!"

"Did you see my face?" Frankie asked. I then realised I had never looked under the blanket to make sure it was Frankie.

"But at the hospital, you just had surgery." I stammered.

"Yes, and I woke up about three hours later. You know how much I hate hospitals so I left, I feel fine." Frankie explained. "Just after I had jumped through the window a nurse came in, seeing as I was gone she called in another nurse. The two decided to say I was dead, that way they wouldn't get in trouble for losing me." He laughed.

"You have to go back, what if something happens to your heart again?" I asked, panick running through my veins.

"Forget it. I'm not going back. Now why are you out here?" Frankie asked, he became very serious.

"I....I...." I couldn't tell him that I was going to kill myself, I had alreay put him through that before. I broke down crying in Frankie's arms.

"Shhh... it's okay. Come on I'll take you home." Frankie said, picking me up in his arms and carrying me down the street towards my house. After we had gotten to my house and I had calmed down I explained everything to him. He stared at me with his eyes full of hurt.

"I can't believe you wanted to do this again, Ky. I already walked in on you with a gun to your head once, why would you want to put Gerard through that?" I closed my eyes as more tears started to fall.

"I couldn't live without you Frankie." I said, raising my head and staring deep into his eyes. He leaned forward and soon our lips met. Suddenly Gerard and Mikey burst through the front door, me and Frankie had pulled away before they could see us.

"Kyla!" Gerard exclaimed, not noticing Frankie.

"OH. MY. GOD!" Mikey yelled, he DID see Frankie. Gerard turned his head, a look of terror coming across his face.

"Hey buddy." Frankie said with a smile.


Well hope you liked it, I really like the fact that Frank isn't dead. I tried really hard to make a valid reason why he wasn't dead, so I hope it wasn't too unbelieveable.Oh and FYI Leeann did all the corrections and stuff again (didn't forget yah leeann). Anyways Time For You To Do Your Part And Comment!! heart

Punk vs Emo


ILessThan3MCR_hXc

PostPosted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 4:30 pm


*Gasp!* You got me at this chapter, I thought Frankie died *tear*
I feel special hehehehe, credit to moi heart
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE WRITE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!
I'm fine...
PostPosted: Wed Feb 14, 2007 5:57 pm


Ooo! She has the hots for Frankie!

This should be fun.

12-String Pony


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 12:12 pm


UPDATE TIME!!! Okay so there isn't any Frankie and Kyla momments in this chapter but trust me there will be some in Chap. 11 so sorry if you were expecting some in this chapter. Anyways here we go again....

Chapter 10



"You...... but......" Gerard said, he then went completely white and fainted.

"Gerard!" We all yelled, Frankie pulled him up onto the couch. We tried everything to wake him up, but by the time midnight came we all decided to go to sleep. Frankie and Mikey went up to my room and the spare room to sleep, I stayed downstairs and slept on the couch across from Gerard.
The sun beamed into my eyes as it cut through the thin curtains of the living room. I looked around the room, Gerard was gone. I went upstairs, my room and the spare room were both empty. Suddenly I heard a faint sob coming from the kitchen, I quickly ran down the stairs and found Gerard, Mikey and Frankie sitting at the table. Gerard was crying and the gun that I had hid in Gerards hoodie to kill myself with was sitting in the middle of the table. My eyes widened as I saw tears start to fall from Mikey and Frankies eyes, they still hadn't noticed me. My sight then returned to Gerard's crouched over body, he was crying and it killed me inside. I ran for the door, the three of them saw me run and chased after me. I ran down the street, Mikey and Frankie had stopped a little ways back but Gerard was still running. I didn't want to talk to him, I didn't want to hurt him anymore, and I deffinetly didn't want to see the man I loved cry. Suddenly I was pulled to the ground, Gerard had tackled me to get me to stop.

"Get off of me" I cried.

"NO!"

"Please! Just Let Me Go, I Don't Want To Hurt You Anymore!" I struggled to get to my feet, but Gerard was stronger. He held me still and looked straight into my eyes, I could feel him see into my soul. He leaned his head down and kissed me, tears running down both of our faces. I started sobbing uncontrolably. he just layyed there and hugged me.

"You could never hurt me unless you hurt yourself." He whispered into my ear, I started sobbing more. I couldn't believe I had actually wanted to kill myslef, I knew how much it hurt Frankie and it would only hurt Gerard more. I never wanted to do that to him. There were footsteps coming towards us, I thought it was Frankie and Mikey. That is until I looked up, even though my sight was blurry from tears I could still make out the figure of three boys. Luke and his friends, he grabbed Gerard by the collar of his shirt and picked him up off of me.

"What the f*** are you doing to her." He asked, seeing the tears running down my face and the smudged eyeliner from the last few days.

"I didn't do anything to her! I'm trying to help her!" Gerard said, freeing himself from Luke's grip. This made Luke madder than I had ever seen him. He punched Gerard in the face, I could see blood start running from his nose.

"GERARD!" I yelled. "LUKE LEAVE HIM ALONE!"

"What and let him hurt you even more?" Luke said as if he was doing a great task.

"HE NEVER HURT ME! NOW LEAVE HIM ALONE YOU F***ING PIG!" I screamed, this made him even madder. He raised his hand and slapped me in the face, knocking me to the ground.

"KYLA!" Gerard screamed. He let go of his bleeding nose and tackled Luke. I heard more footsteps and saw Frankie and Mikey running down the street. Frankie then punched one of Luke's friends in the ribs and Mikey kicked the other between the legs. The two ran away, then our attention turned to the two boys wresteling on the sidewalk. Luke now had another black eye and a bump on his forehead, Gerard had a scrath going from his forehead down the side of his face to his chin. Frankie grabbed Gerard and Mikey grabbed Luke. I then got to my feet and punched Luke in the face making him go unconcious, Mikey dropped him onto the ground and the four of us started to walk back to my house.

"Nice shot." Mikey said to me, putting an arm around my shoulder.

******

"OWW!" Gerard cried as I put rubbing alcohol on the cut on his face.

"Calm down. It's not that bad." I said as I finished cleaning the cut. "Now clean the cut he made on me from his ring." I pointed to the now bleeding cut on the side of my cheek.

"I'm gonna kill the guy." Gerard mummbled as he cleaned the cut.

"Everyone better now?" Frankie asked, poking his head through the door.

"Yeah we're fine, but Gerard is pissed." I said with a smile.

"Can I talk to Kyla alone for a little bit?" Gerard said to Frankie, it wasn't as much a question as it was a statement for Frankie to get out of the bathroom. Gerard turned to me, I knew what he was gonna say.

"Why?" Gerard asked, tears starting to form in the corners of his eyes.

"Because, I couldn't live without Frankie. He's the only family I have. My mom is never home, nor does she care about me and my brother is the biggest pain in the a** and besides he moved out a year ago and I've only talked to him once since. I couldn't handle the fact that the last person I had for familly was gone." I said, a tear rolled from my eye.

"What about me and Mikey?" Gerard asked, a hurt look coming across his face.

"Well of course there's you and Mikey, but..... it........ it's hard to explain" I sobbed as I burried my head into Gerard's chest, he wrapped his arms around me and lifted me up, carrying me into the living room. He sat down on the couch with me on his lap.

"We're all your family, and we're all here for you." Gerard said, I lifted my head up and saw Mikey and Frankie sitting on the couch opposite us. They both looked worried, I turned my gave back to Gerard. He looked more worried than both Frankie and Mikey.

"I love you." I said hugging Gerard.

"I love you too, thats why I don't want you doing anything to yourself." Gerard said, I watched as a tear fell from his eyes.

"We all love you." Frankie said, as he and Mikey got up to hug me too. I smiled, I finally had a family that loved me. Suddenly there was a knock on the door. I ran over and looked through the peep-hole. I almost screamed when I saw who was standing on the other side of the door.

"F-F-Frankie? I think y-you should see who's here." I said, shaking from fear.



Dun Dun Dun..... Who's at the door? You'll have to wait for chapter 11 to know. What happens to Frankie and Kyla? Will Kyla become suicidal again? Find out in the next chapter of TeEnAgErS
PostPosted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 12:15 pm


Like omg This Is Sooo Good!
Keep Up The Great Work!

ILessThan3MCR_hXc


Punk vs Emo

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 6:18 am


UpDaTe TiMe! So I really don't have anything to say here except that Leeann looked over the spelling and junk so don't blame me for the mistakes (lol). So Here We Go......


Chapter 11



Frankie walked over to the door and looked through the peep-hole. He jumped back in fright.

"It....it can't be! She's dead!" Frankie said. I pushed him behind the door and slowly opened it an inch.

"C-c-can I help you?" I asked trying not to stammer, but with no success.

"Hi, is Frank here?" Sarah asked.

"Wha-wha-what do you want!" I said, clutching th scar on my chest from when the surgeons had removed the bullet.

"Oh my god! No, sorry to scare you. But I'm not Sarah, I'm her twin sister Meghan." She said with a small smile.

"Meghan?" Frankie appeared behind me in the doorway. "What are you doing here?"

"I came to apologize for what my sister did to you. But can you blame her anger? I mean you did cheat on her and then sleep with her before dumping her the next day." Meghan said, I was shocked. Frankie never told me thast he had slept with her and dumped her the day after. I turned around to face Frank.

"YOU PIG!" I yelled as I slapped him, I ran up to my room and locked the door. I knew what Frankie was like, he could be a total pig towards women sometimes. But that didn't bug me, what bugged me was the fact that he lied about what had gone on between him and Sarah. There was a knock at my door.

"Come on Ky, open the door. Please?" Frankie pleaded.

"GO AWAY YOU LIAR!" I yelled. This made Gerard run up to my room. I couldn't make out what they were saying but I soon heard footsteps go down the stairs. I opened the door hoping it would be Gerard waiting to come in. But it was still Frankie, he put his foot between the door and it's frame and squeezed through the small gap.

"Please let me explain." He said. I just sat on my bed, I would let him talk but I wouldn't listen. He sat down on the bed beside me, taking hold of my hands and looking into my eyes.

"I'm sorry I lied, just please, please forgive me." He said. I leaned forward and kissed him. No matter how mad I got at Frankie it never lasted long. I didn't even notice the door open as Frankie and I deepened our kiss. But I did notice the sound of a glass drop. I quickly looked and saw Mikey standing in the doorway standing in shock.

"Wha-wha-what are you two doing?!" Mikey said. I jumped up and walked over to Mikey.

"Please don't tell Gerard, that wasn't meant to happen." I pleaded as tears formed into my eyes.

"What do you mean it wasn't supposed to happen?" Frankie said, he sounded hurt.

"I...I....JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!" I shouted as I stormmed out of the house. I turnned to look back and saw Gerard walking towards me.

"What are you so upset about?" Gerard asked when he had caught up to me.

"Stay away from me Gerard. I can't be with you." I said as the tears I was fighting to hold back finally fell from my eyes.

"What are you talking about." Gerard said, obviously hurt from these words.

"I KISSED FRANKIE! OKAY! Now leave me alone! I don't want to hurt you anymore, I've already caused you enough pain. Now forget you ever met me." I ran away, this time Gerard didn't follow. He just stood there and let me go. By the time I had gotten where I was going it was nearly midnight. I had been stormming around the town all day and finally decided to stop at the local park. The same park me and Gerard had gone to when we first met. I sat on the swings that we had sat on. Tears flowwing from my eyes again. I still couldn't believe I had broken up with him. I was snapped back to reality by the ringing of my cellphone.

"H-h-hello." I said.

"Kyla, thank god you're okay!" Mikey exclaimed. "Where are you?"

"At the park, why?"

"Gerard has been searching all over town for you, he's really worried." Mikey said.

"Tell Him To Leave Me Alone!"I yelled as I hung up the phone. Suddenly I felt a pair of arms wrap around my waist. I screamed in terror.

"Shh..calm down." Gerard whispered in my ear.

"I said to leave me alone." I said, not turnning around to look at him.

"Come on, I forgive you for kissing Frank. Now please come home?" Gerard said, I could hear him start to cry. I got up and ran out of the park.

"KYLA WAIT! WATCH OUT!" Gerard yelled. I turned and saw a pair of headlights coming towards me, suddenly I was hit and knocked to the ground. I thought I had been hit by the car. That is until I looked up and saw Gerard laying ontop of me. I wrapped my arms around his back and started to sob into his shoulder.

"I'm s-s-so s-sorry." I sobbed.

"It's okay. Come on lets go home." Gerard whispered as he helped me to my feet.

"KYLA!" Mikey yelled as he ran to the door, giving me a hug. I hugged him back.

"Sorry for scaring you." I said.

"It's fine as long as you're okay." He said with a smile. I stepped back and hugged Gerard.

"I'm perfectly fine." I said, a smile now appearing on both mine and Gerards faces. I heard a loud thump and saw Frankie jump the last few steps of the staircase. He looked upset.

"I have to go. Later guys." Frankie grumbled as he slammed the door to Gerard and Mikey's house. I felt terrible.

"Don't worry about him, he'll be fine." Mikey reassured me.

"You're right." I said. We sat on the couch watching old family movies that Mikey had found in the attic. Most of which were baby video's of Gerard, which Gerard wasn't very happy about. After an hour and half of home videos we all decided to go to sleep. Gerard led me to his room and we fell asleep on his bed in each others arms.
I awoke to the feeling of Gerards breath on the back of my neck. I slowly turnned around making sure not to wake him. I leaned in and kissed him causing him to smile a goofy smile. I let out a small laugh and curled up into his arms falling back to sleep.

"Five dollars says she screams." Mikey said.

"I say she's gonna laugh." Gerard said.

"No, she's probably gonna murder us." Frankie said, I was so relieved to hear Frankie wasn;t upset anymore. I opened my eyes, everything seemed normal, that is until I looked in a mirror. Somehow the three of them had found a way to cut my hair short and dye it white without me waking up.

"WHAT THE F*** DID YOU DO TO MY HEAD!" I screamed, as I turnned around. The three of them had already boltted up the stairs.

"JUST WAIT UNTIL I GET MY HANDS YOU THREE! THEN YOU'LL BE SORRY!" I yelled as I ran up the stairs.



Tee Hee, The short white hair was just sort of a random thing which I'm hoping will help me with some writers block I've been having. Also because I'm dying my hair white and cutting it short. So Time For Comments! heart
PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 9:17 am


Lol how very creative.
Keep up the great work!

ILessThan3MCR_hXc


12-String Pony

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 11:40 am


Ooo, this is great, keep it up! heart
PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 1:58 pm


hahaha I read this all today and when ever anything got too emotional for me I watched funny you tube videos!! heart J'adore heart

Millinery


moon_child_27

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 2:22 pm


haha, you know what's cool? My name's Meghan...
PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 2:28 pm


LOL! AWESOME!

Punk vs Emo


moon_child_27

PostPosted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 3:06 pm


Well, i've never really liked my name...I've always wanted it to be Gwen...

my name's never been very awesome until now!
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