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 Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 10:09 pm
Eh, why not, please don't judge my too harshly, I've never tried something quite like this before.
Well I see a game all you kids wanna play,
so I'll give it a shot, maybe you'll rue the day.
The day Shia came down to chat with you all,
Dropping words like dominoes waiting to fall.
I may be a newb and I may not want to fight,
you may think that I'm weak, but I think that I'm right.
There has to be a much better place,
where fighting is wrong, so get out of my face.
Oh, pardon me, I didn't mean to offend,
please give it no thought, I will make an ammend.
Like I said, I'm new, I don't even know the rules,
you probably think people like me are fools.
But I still try, I'm persistant, at least,
so try to take a bite of this yummy word feast.
I'll pass it on down to my partner in crime,
say howdy to Nemu, now it's her rhyme-time!
Yeah, like she said, my name's Nemu, hiya!
I'll be spitting out words so fast your ears catch on fire!
The mike's gettin hot and I'm gonna perspire,
if I'm not careful I might even expire!
I'll try to cut back, no need to wear myself out.
If this doesn't go bad, then please, gimme a shout.
I've seen lots of bad wording, and lots of bad grammar,
from people who mutter and people who stammer.
I guess that passes as cool, but I think that it's not.
Good spelling and literacy are what's really hot!
But we're a rare breed, in this day and age,
now 'tude and anger are what's all the rage.
They want to put me back in my cage,
but I want to be free, to broaden my range!
Well that's it for me, I'm late for my nap,
so that's all for now, now I'll shut my yap!
(Heehee, I wonder how bad I'll get flamed/hammered/mauled for something like this? Oh well, let it never be said I don't try new things. Also, I'm pretty sure I thought of this all myself, but if I had read and stolen a rhyme or two, sorry, didn't mean to!)
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 4:08 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 6:25 am
xDDD You guys are getting it well, you just have to start rhyming about something that's real now instead of stuff like, "Being new" or "I hope this is good."
Shut your yap Miroku xDD Tsuki is the rhyme god now. :]
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 6:43 am
Alright, I'm a lay another down...
Hit like a comet, take their sight hindered,
I spit fire leavin' the mic burnt n' cindered,
Can't catch me I'm a man whose gingered,
Flippin' the floss over the candy littered,
I leave the game, chilled n' frozen like a blizzard,
Leavin' the dead raw for the gizzard, I raise my own crypts,
Shot down my own crips, haunt like a ghost leavin' my own whisps,
I turn you dawgs in to cats, leave you with lisps,
Like Selvester, Suckerin' Suckatash these rips,
Flarin' n' Crisp, I cook guppies like Long John Silver,
So why don't you hush puppies stop listen and shiver,
Freezin' points, leave no less than blisters, Frostbite bittin',
Every subzero lyric I'm writin', but killin' as fast as Lightnin',
So deadly it's frightenin', but don' worry the future is brightenin',
Whitenin' the corona, I play with ice n' flames constantly goin',
Give you nosebleeds from the temperature switch I'm throwin',
Mowin' the competition and replacin' with seeds I'm growin,
Keep the beat rollin', for the cypher to never stop flowin'.
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Posted: Sat Feb 17, 2007 8:24 pm
But You see those dont cut it in reallife
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 2:52 pm
miroku902 But You see those dont cut it in reallife but you dont cut it in real life or on gaia
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 3:06 pm
Leave the crowd silent, I spit super sonics,
Educatin' emcees like hooked on phonics,
Electronics, I run the damn media,
Rap god, Young Hurricane, check the encyclopedia,
Spread the cyphers like bacteria, give rhyme infections,
Ain't gonna help to update your virus protections,
Immune elections, vote the pandemic to stage,
1, 2, and 3, got death expectency, for every emcee in the cage.
Quick one. o.o
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 2:53 pm
This rap is about the strange things I've been thinking ever since I became popular at my new high school. I've become very paranoid and...what not. I think it's pretty good.
I'm seeing a couple things wrong with the way that I'm livin
So take a walk with me I just need a second opinion
I'll introduce to my friends I gotta see if you noticed
are they loyal or do they all have some different motives
I'm just stuck right and I don't feel anymore
Ever since jr high I can't tell what's real anymore
I'm paranoid so excuse me if I seem to be nervous
but everybody from my past now is tryin to resurface
tryin to kindle
I won't let them into my limo (of popularity)
I got cousins I've always hated tryin to pass me a demo
Maybe I'm wrong, come and walk with me I need your opinion
Me and them never spoke before so I don't see what's so different
Dudes I don't normally recognize start extending there hands
and I'm trippin ready for beef when he was only a fan
cause its people in my school said they don't like how I'm reppin
let me know how strongly you feel, will I be needin a weapon
as so sort of protection
should I carry a pen and pad
and ask everybody in the f***in Guild for their suggestion
I'm lettin my people know that Markese raley is gifted
but they ain't know that Markese Raley existed
but its cool man
cause certain cats named Markese Raley are so hateful
and certain cats named Markese Raley ain't grateful
all he say is I don't chill anymore
ever since I went higher he don't think I'm real anymore
continued...
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 3:00 pm
If i take you to meet Aasem would you notice
if he was out for my best interest
or am I just a cheap knock-off of Joseph
I don't know like I told you, can you tell me bout me
Why are these other people all trying to throw hate on me
Where was the hate back when I wasn't on my feet
A corny bald head nobody
just a bum on the streets
I don't recall all of the pokin back then
and I don't understand
I was still jokin back
so I gotta get up and run for tryin to get my ma and pa up out of a slump
and be a better son
I don't know man, I can't handle this anymore
Ever since jr high I cant tell what's real anymore
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 6:44 am
Maddiox 3 If i take you to meet Aasem would you notice if he was out for my best interest or am I just a cheap knock-off of Joseph I don't know like I told you, can you tell me bout me Why are these other people all trying to throw hate on me Where was the hate back when I wasn't on my feet A corny bald head nobody just a bum on the streets I don't recall all of the pokin back then and I don't understand I was still jokin back so I gotta get up and run for tryin to get my ma and pa up out of a slump and be a better son I don't know man, I can't handle this anymore Ever since jr high I cant tell what's real anymore why did u put my name in it
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 4:22 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 10:02 pm
Ace Your comments to me where urber gay You never heard me talk or freestyle in real-life stare
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 2:51 pm
You guys need to spit something real.
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 6:18 pm
Droppin' curve balls, strikin' out G's in tha' parkin' lot,
Lippin' to serve jaws, wipin' smirks off them talkin' hot,
Decay n' rot, watch your face deteriorate in shock, by my corrosion,
Blow up with a bang for your case, smack with an explosion,
Number one chosen, Wisely spokin', spit cyphers so some shorties start stokin',
Bring heat packed, backed up in the stack for the game smokin',
Sit back and soak up sun rays, from my rhyme blaze, heres the lotion,
Jewels bringin' Ice Age, blind out your visions with haze, leave your systems frozen,
I ain't joken, step outta line, lets see you laugh with bones broken,
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 6:27 pm
Okay, this is a rap that I've been working on for quite some time. It's about fighting. Not street fighting, but roleplaying fighting. And I use the "N" word a lot in this. And don't call me a racist, I'm black okay. I just don't have a black avatar for....personal reasons. Don't hesitate on telling me your opinin. Whether it's good or bad. Oh, and it's kinda violent, so reader disgression is advised....bi-otch!
Man, I sense a bad vibe in the air
My act's changed
Time to think like Macgyver
and manuever like cranes
first I'll dodge you and pivot quick
handle my business
cause I'm a mutha f***in warrior
can you dig it?
up down and around
you'll quite done son
because I maxi pad heel
don't need no air force ones
LET'S GET IT!
I'll fight the fight till there's no fight left
because the only thing that's guaranteed in life is death
I can tell you ain't the type to act hyper or less
you and 20 people can all take a pike to the chest
I'll bring it to your address *****
honor my name
i'll but your teeth to my foot and kick your jaw in your brain
the same when I spit it
leave your rhymes twitchin, laying on the floor
my minds gone, caught a sock swingin...uh....forget this verse...
man this ain't no two way strip p***k
get your boots laced quick, man up...
your switch walk, b***h talk
deserve you on a mat, see
cause in your pants man it looks like a taxi
perhaps we don't act so calm
havin skills is risky
like having sword fights with Magic Johnson
I'll pack it then stomp
duck and act fast
I got enough fire in my heart to start a f***in backlash
IT'S THAT BAD
you say it's not right but it's the truth
i'll two piece your boss now and cut it off at the roots
you already knew
F*** up the beat?
please don't f*** with your crew
mods come
man F*** 'em up too
DO WHAT YOU DO!
go to sleep in my street?
***** get your feet rocked
I'll leave you twitching like f***in crack head in de-tox
yeah, my heart is boulder and my blood is redder
cause when I'm good I'm good
but when I'm bad I'm better
Regardless of that
i'll rock you to sleep
you won't be back
I, myself don't sleep like an insomniac
not worried, i'll hurry
you'll be back on the mat
only one stoppin me is God
chump that's that
BUT THAT'S NOT IT!
the blood's boiling and your knees weaken
and your heart starts racing and your teeth start bleeding
instinct is key, cause it's the final round
you're better off f***in your self up
fight club style, POW!
just leave with style
or observe with how a fist in your mouth
you only speak with vowels
throw in the towel
please, you ain't breathin too well
look at your face, your skulls like a liberty bell
on the floor, on your knees leakin
reachin for help
look at your crew, runnin with the speed of gazelles
call Drago
not even he can me down
i'll spend about 12 thousand gold and I'll build my own cell
you yellow bellied fake ninja i'll see you in hell
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