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 Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 1:14 am
very nice kiara... makes me want to ask... but since curiousity kills I'll refrain...
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 1:27 am
ErinsChaos very nice kiara... makes me want to ask... but since curiousity kills I'll refrain... Can't have curiousity killing off our members. *shakes finger at curiousity and cracks her whip at it* Out out out! Leave poor Erin alone! xd Glad you liked it Erin. ^_^
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 5:21 pm
Here's an older poem of mine.
"Be there if I need you, I shall do the same
Turn my frown into a smile with mention of your name
Listen to my woes, make them seem not so bad
I surrender you my shoulder whenever you feel sad
Don't worry bout the hard times, they happen to us all
Each of us would catch the other if ever they should fall
Laugh at my ill humor when others' eyes would roll
You know that I will laugh at yours even when it's far from droll
Worry not about me. I will be alright
I know that we can outlast any sadness. Any fight
Let me listen to you. Open up to me.
Only then will you realize what a good friend I can be."
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 5:24 pm
awwwwww very nice... three cheers for good friends!! Hip hip horray!
hip hip hooray! Hip hip HOORAY!!
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 5:49 pm
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 12:12 am
K.. finally got another one....
She is lost in a world she did not create
Someone pointed the way, but she opened the gate
She knows how she got here, but not how to return
For you see she doesn't want to, and it makes her stomach churn
This wonderful place, filled with laughter and joy
She pretends to cute, even cocky and coy
For here she can be whom ever she dreams
But does everyone know she's not what she seems?
Hence she is lost behind her costume
If they found out, would it spell her doom?
Would they hate the true her? These are her fears
Thinking about it now gives way to tears
But she continues to go on, playing her charade
And time marches on like an unending parade
She flows with the beat, what else can she do?
Just sit and wait for someone to break through?
To tear off the costume and rip off her mask
To look in her eyes and simply ask...
Who are you?
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 1:29 am
ErinsChaos K.. finally got another one.... She is lost in a world she did not create
Someone pointed the way, but she opened the gate
She knows how she got here, but not how to return
For you see she doesn't want to, and it makes her stomach churn
This wonderful place, filled with laughter and joy
She pretends to cute, even cocky and coy
For here she can be whom ever she dreams
But does everyone know she's not what she seems?
Hence she is lost behind her costume
If they found out, would it spell her doom?
Would they hate the true her? These are her fears
Thinking about it now gives way to tears
But she continues to go on, playing her charade
And time marches on like an unending parade
She flows with the beat, what else can she do?
Just sit and wait for someone to break through?
To tear off the costume and rip off her mask
To look in her eyes and simply ask...
Who are you?*wipes away a tear and smiles* That was beautiful... thanks Erin. *hugs*
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 2:45 am
I'm glad you liked it... whee I've got another one here... it's supposed to be the response to that one... though it's not quite as good... and much more me...
Who am I? I hear you ask
You are not deicieved by my mask
But it to is a part of me
As is the costume that you see
Everything I say and do
'Tis all a part of me too
So what is the answer that you seek?
Am I a nerd? A prep or a freak?
Do you want a nice sterotype?
'Cause I don't believe in that hype
For I am a dreamer
An Emo, Princess and Loser
I'm a D&D nerd
Who can sing Freebird
I'm twenty-six but still a child
Not immature, though I can be wild
And I can be sexy and funny and mean
And I dream of being treated like a queen
I listen to Rock, Country and Blues
But I'm betting that you still haven't a clue
The answer you seek I can not share
But if you really truly care
Stick around and you may find
The answer you want in your own mind
Stay with me and you will learn
That who I am you must discern
I hope you will find it a worthy cause
To stick around and see my flaws
So now answer me this before I go
Do you really want to know?
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 6:36 am
You're right, that does suit you more. But it's still very good. Tell you what, since the first poem was written for me, I'll write a response that's more me. Then we'll each have one. ^_^
You've looked beneath the mask I wear and tossed it clear away
I sit here looking lost and scared as I hear what you say.
You've asked me who I really am. To show the me inside.
I spent so many lonely days perfecting how to hide.
But here I sit in front of you, it's time I let you in.
My fears have hidden for so long like some forgotten sin.
So now I shall reveal myself as you sit and hold my hand.
I pray that you won't turn away, but rather stay and understand.
I'm not the glamorous centerfold you find in magazines
I've never graced the broadway stage or starred in a movie scene.
I'm not the towering pillar of strength, leadership and pride.
Peel away the catsuit, there's a timid mouse inside.
I'm not the face of confidence that seems so self assured.
Far beneath the surface, I am shy and insecure.
I hide behind my characters. You meet them every day
I swear it's really me you hear with every word they say
It's just that fantasy just seems more interesting to me.
Imagination offers more than what you really see.
Yet here I sit and bear my soul. My heart an open book
I hope you'll stay and a while with me now that you've had a look.
Though outgoing sarcastic smirks are part of my disguise.
It's my genuine heart that looks back at you when you gaze into these eyes.
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 11:49 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 3:38 pm
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 10:09 pm
Anyone else have some poetry to share with us? Or comments on the stuff already posted?
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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 7:37 pm
I close my eyes, I can see where you are.
A whisper in the wind, I feel you thinking of me.
Why two people so connected be so far apart?
The rain falls, I feel your tears.
Darkness fills the sky as the sun goes down, I feel your loneliness.
Walking along a queit path, I feel your lost feelings.
But, why is it two people so connected be so far apart?
I walk forward along a path I know you can not follow.
It brakes my heart that I must.
When we are togather, I know you feel safe and free.
Why does hurt that we must part?
I only want you to know.
I love you, and I will never turn you away.
Thank You.
I just wrote this I just had to pull this out. This is not about Daniel he is just a friend. It does edit needing.
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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 11:05 pm
Wow Zercia... *wipes away a tear* That was... beautiful....
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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 11:16 pm
ErinsChaos Wow Zercia... *wipes away a tear* That was... beautiful.... Thank you It was just something I had to pull out of me tonight
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