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itnachos11

PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:19 pm


Gaia Name: itnachos11
Character Name: Chan Lee
Gender: male
Age: 17
Race: wookie
Character Description: dark brown and black fur, blue eyes, 6'7", left robotic arm

Home Planet: Kashyyyk
Starting Planet: Naboo
Relations: none
Character History: Chan is a troublemaker. He murdered 2 younger wookies at age 10. He has been banned from his home planet for 5 years. He is known worldwide as a bad wookie. He went to a council meeting and tried to assassinate a jedi, getting his left arm cut off.

He is known by the wookies as "knight kill" because he killed the 2 wookies at night. But worldwide, they call him, darth lee.
He is quite friendless, except for a human named Chad Hulsin. together they were guite the mini gang. Each night, they took turns beating up the litle kids who walked by. One night, lee, was the one who got a beating from a kid with a club.

unknowing what would happen, he ran for it. Hulsin and him moved to a new area in naboo, one where it was densily populated. There they layed low. Waiting, waiting, for something good. and he whole time, it was in front of him....

Alignment: imperial
Occupation: dark jedi
Skills: mind reading, piloting, Force Sencitive

Weapons: blaster pistol, blaster rifel, 2 untouched red and black (both colors mixed ino one blade) lightsaber (because he doesn't know how to use it yet)
Ship: speeder
Personal Belongings: a crystal chainlike necklace, a droid named R7-D5, dark robes, 2 sabers

Roleplay Sample:

this is the middle of one



he quickly ran towards the stairs, unknowingly, he was running into a trap. So he ran down the stairs. eventually they caught up to him, pushed him down, and questioned him. he decided to answer using a skill that made him look like he was telling the truth, but he lied, his plan worked, so they let him go.

but that was the plan, to let him go, so he was running and running, eventally, the trap was sprung, he got caught by the mafia's leader. he could do nothing. slowly, the mafia leader pulled out a knife, started stabbing him. slowly and painfully, he died

sorry if this isn't good 3rd person, pm me if i nd more

The sample was....short, and the history is weak at best. However I will let it pass under a few key points you need to understand. First you don't start out as a Dark Jedi, you will have to figure out how to become one. Also I am accepting it because you did not kil a jedi, if you had it would not have been accepted. Accepted~Guilyn.

ok
PostPosted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 12:11 am


Gaia Name: Gelid Brutality
Character Name: Lielich
Gender: Male
Age: 139
Race: Yuuzhan Vong
Character Description: In accordance with Vong traditon and religion, Lielich is in possession of absolutely no mechanical technology. Infact, the very word offends him. His complexion is very pale, though only various sections of his skull, neck, and hands are visible; and those few sections are decorated in harrowing ritualistic scarring. The rest of him is clad in customary black living vonduun crab armor, which can resist blaster fire and lightsabers. Like all of his people, Lielich has been extensively genetically and biologically enhanced and manipulated by Yuuzhan Vong organic technology.
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Home Planet: N/A
Starting Planet: Coruscant
Relations: N/A
Character History: Lielich was born upon the Koros-strohna worldship to two Worker Caste parents, and as dictated by Vong tradition, was immediately subjected to gruesome organ-grafting, genetic manipulation, and many other potentially deadly whims of the Shaper Caste. After his extensive processing into the forced-evolution of Vong society, the Shapers to whom he was charged deemed him worthy of joining the Warrior Caste.
Immediately after joining the caste, his living armor was grafted to his body, as well as other organic enhancements which would benefit him in combat environments; such as visual enhancers, emergency hibernation, muscular augments, and manual adrenaline steroids. However, these changes to his body began to have severe effects on him.
During a scouting raid against an outer-rim trade station, Lielich was dispatched ground-level to head a strike against a turret battery which had prevented Vong forces from arial attacks. At this point in his military career Lielich had achieved commanding status. The strike was largely successful; however, at the climax of the attack, Lielich suddenly and unpredictably collapsed.
Lielich was largely respected and revered by his men, but they knew what his fate held. The organic technology employed by the Shaper Caste was viewed as holy, and by religious law if one's body was to reject these blessings, they were immediately raped of status and demoted to the Worker Caste as Shamed Ones, if they even survived.
To prevent this, his men made a decision which they felt would save their friend and brother from that life; they left him to die.
After the scouting party abandoned the burned and pillaged post to return to the worldship, the survivors slowly began to rebuild the facility. The people discovered Lielich's body, but believing it to be a corpse simply tossed it, box and all, on the next automatic garabage shuttle.
It was during this journey when Lielich came to.
Enclosed in an air-tight box, he had no choice but to assume his hibernation state until he could replenish his oxygen supply. For generations, Lielich knew nothing but darkness and the veritable casket he was burried in. With no live people managing the shuttle, he simply floated through space.
He lacked the ability to even cut his own life-support.
It was during this time that Lielich developed his crippling claustrophobia.
After one hundred and twelve years, the dumper was captured en route by a Givin scavenging crew. Concealing the vessel in their own ship's massive docking bay, the crew began to dismantle the dumper to siphon through scraps for anything of value.
Following hours of searching, they stumbled upon a cheap metallic crate. Removing it none-too gently, they proceeded to unseal the thing.
What they unleashed was something animal.
Upon returning from his hibernation state and absorbing the oxygen in the room, he opened his eyes. For the first time in over a century, Lielich gazed upon reality. Life had suddenly reappeared to him, and it was within his grasp.
Within seconds after the box was opened, his feral screams were heard throughout the ship. The crew never stood a chance.
Enclosed within an entirely mechanical vessel, Lielich felt as if he had awakened in some hellish afterlife. Somehow, he forced himself to make use of the ship's simple controls, and set an automatic course for coruscant.
During the weeks following, he ritually scarred every last one of his fingers to the bone.
By some streak of luck, the trade vessel was granted uninhibited clearance to the galactic capital.
Amphistaff at his waste, and hidden under the confines of some poor Givin's cloak, Lielich has made his debut.

Alignment: Neutral
Occupation: Crippled Warrior, Wanderer
Skills: Besides his extensive military training and modifications, Lielich possesses only one real trait worth noting in this galaxy; his racial immunity to the Force.

"The Yuuzhan Vong are not able to touch the Force or seemingly be felt through it, something the Jedi have found very mysterious, since all living things are supposed to have, in some way or another, a unique Force energy signature distinct from other species..." - Wikipedia

Weapons: Amphistaff:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Amphistaff#Amphistaff
Amphistaffs are the Primary anti-personnel weapons of the Yuuzhan Vong. Ampistaffs scales can produce an edge harder than a diamond's that can stop a lightsaber.
In addition to their default staff/spear configuration, amphistaffs can be wielded as a whip, wrapping around a target then biting it. The amphistaff's final capability is the ability to shoot poison. Anyone who wields an amphistaff can simply point it and prompt it to spray deadly toxins at a victim. Although amphistaff venom is far more effective when injected, the venom can usually kill the target by coming into contact with their skin.


Ship: None
Personal Belongings: None


Roleplay Sample:
Gelid Brutality
It's a fascinating thing, the modern streetlight. Standing alone in the midst of utter darkness, it holds itself imperiously as a bastion of reality, a dwindling star which stamps its foot in the most stubborn way against an onslought of twilight. Day is the sacred realm of man, and the streetlight is one of many testament's to his reign over the elements.


Mal stepped into the light's safety, bathing himself of shadows. He blinked twice, and narrowed his eyes as he scanned the remainder of the sidewalk.
He was alone.
He seemed to deflate a little, and he pulled up his turtleneck sweater sleeve to check his watch. The night is young.
Shielding his right hand over his eyes, he looked up at the sign above him. Gyros Greek Cuisine. He licked his lips and rolled his shoulders, before gripping the door handle and stepping through.
A walking smile greeted him at the door, and almost put his hand on Mal's shoulder before he caught his eyes and let the hand slide to his thigh. Short men were so snippy.
"Good evening, sir; do you have a reservation?"
I'll break that mask if it shatters every last one of my knuckles.
"Cape, party of one."
The man's smile widened. "Now there is a party," he said as he ran a pencil down his list. He looked up, in obvious anticipation for a chuckle, at least.
"Aren't you just a riot."
The man's smile never wavered. Damn.
"I'm sorry sir, I don't seem to have you listed." He looked up, still smiling pleasantly. "Are you sure you made prior reservations?"
I love lying.
"Positive. Are you sure I'm not listed?"
The man made a show of checking again. "Yeah, I'm not seeing a Cape. Could you have made the reservation under another name?"
"I only have one last name."
The man nodded and tapped his lip with his pencil. "Well, things are running pretty slow tonight, so I am sure we can find you something. I apologize for the mix-up. If you could follow me, right this way."
Mal followed the man to a small table at the far end of the restaurant. It was a two-seater. He took a seat and picked up his menu.
"Can I start you off with drinks or an appetizer?"
"What do you have on tap?"
The man recited a list of major beer companies. Mal only wrinkled his nose.
"I'll just have a mint julep, please."
The waiter nodded, though it was obvious that hard alcohol was not on the menu, especially an obscure mixture. "Anything else?"
"Yes, I'd like a service card, please."
His smile only morphed into another mask; one of mock concern.
"A problem, sir?"
"Yes, as a matter of fact. I wasn't aware that they still hired your kind."
The man raised a brow. "My kind, sir?"
Mal leaned in. "That's what I said, cheeksplitter. Just make sure the card doesn't have pink unicorns and rainbows all over, if that's possible."
That was it, there it was. The man's smile faltered, the facade shattered. Now it was Mal's turn to smile. "Sir, I believe you've been mista-"
Mal held out his hand. "Just get my drink."
The waiter nodded curtly and left Mal to brew in sadistic satisfaction.


Very well done, do not go over on how skilled your character is in battle, main reason this is a roleplay thus you get stronger as you roleplay. Though this is a star wars roleplay combat is not something done every 3 posts just remember that. Accepted~Guilyn

Adjunct Birdcatcher


God Aries

PostPosted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 6:25 pm


Gaia Name: God Aries

Character Name: Silais Kairn

Gender: Male

Age: 20 Standard Years

Race: Twi’lek

Character Description: A tall, lean but muscular framed Lethan Twi’lek who stands at 6 foot 11 inches and weighs 235 pounds. He has several oddities about him, from his nearly pure white eyes to the three Lekku all of which are a lighter, almost orange, pigment then the rest of his skin. The Lekku though are usually partly cover by Rycrit bands, which start at the ends of them, keeping them tied together there, and go up in a circular pattern. His right cheek has a deep scar on it from when a training session went wrong that makes the Twi‘lek tattoos covering his face and neck.

Home Planet: Ryloth

Starting Planet: Korriban

Relations: Disowned.

Character History Silai’skairn was born on Ryloth as the first child of a poor but honorable family. His father was a instructor for the Temple Guardsmen and his mother was a music teacher who gave lessons to many of the other Sesk'vati clans. Shortly after he had reached the age of three his mother gave birth to his younger brother. Who became the favorite of the household, the clan, and even gained the favor of the temple priest. The tow brothers sparred constantly once they became older, sometimes this was done in the practice ring, others times is was down out of it. Aside from the obvious favoring place on his brother Silais had others reasons to dislike him. Most of which had to do with Silais being known as a freak and outcast but his younger brother being welcomed by everyone, even amongst the higher caste.

Silais ended up spending much of his time training and studying by himself. Sleep and time become memories as Silais dedicated himself to becoming better then his status. After all a three Lekku Lethan Twi’lek in the Sesk'vati caste was a bit like being a thin Hutt, it was not something deemed acceptable. Silais trained vigorously to not only sharpen his better and strengthen his muscles but to combine the two. Realizing that coming up behind an enemy and having the benefit of surprise were great combat asset Silais worked on making his feet move without a sound being made. But sneaking wasn’t enough, Silais studied how to kill silently and maybe evne more importantly on how to get in and out of a place without leaving a corpse.

These abilities weren’t enough though to win Silais the respect he wanted and longed for. His instructors ignored his progress in stealth and combat, his teachers often ’lost’ his work and claimed that Silais never turned it in. This made for an angry Twi’lek who quickly found training to not be brutal enough for his liking, at night he would sneak out to bad areas seeking out violence and trouble. During one of these night he ran into a Runan Priest who told him of Gerkak'tin and the Gerkak'vati. Silais became this Priest’s pupil and over the years learned his advanced skill was not just luck but was attributed to a higher power. Hearing this Silais followed the Priest to Coruscant where he learned of the Jedi first hand.

They were not new to him per say, often he heard tells of the Jedi taking Twi’leks to be trained, he just ignored it as a political move by the upper castes clans. Seeing them up close and personal Silais knew they had benefits but the teachings were to reserved, they reminded him much of Ryloth and he did not want that. Leaving the poor priest in an alley some where Silais went back home to Ryloth, now 17 years of age. When he came home his younger brother informed him that Silais had been made a Runan in agreement by the council and his family. Hearing this Silais beat his younger, and more stout, brother to the point his orange skin had started turning purple.

Knowing his crime was that of an Exile attacking a clan member, which would not be one of light punishment, Silais fled in a cargo ship. This ship was where he remained as the official ’deal fetcher’ of the crew for nearly two years, which allowed him much practice in sneaking around other ships and certain economic offices. Not following up with much of his religious past Silais had basically forgot about what the priest had taught him, until one day when the ship made a cargo run to Korriban. That was when Silais realized the old priest wasn’t wrong, just misinformed. Finding the Sith was like finding a new life for Silais and he planned on making sure he gains the respect he has always wanted.

Alignment: Sith

Occupation: Waiting Acceptance into the Sith. Previously worked as the official deal maker for a carog ship.

Skills: Fighter (melee and unarmed, doesn’t like blasters), Espionage (light on his feet and a talented liar), and Force Sensitive.

Weapons: Dual Light Sabers, both curved handles that can be connected to from a lightsaber staff.

Ship None
Personal Belongings: His Lyaer'tsa, why a weapon Silais does not carry it into battle. It is a personal reminder of where he came from and what he strives to get past.

Roleplay Sample:
Zelada'kluub was out wondering the streets of Coruscant near his hotel shortly after day break. Following his senses Zelada'kluub felt strongly drawn to an area that was almost overloaded with the presence of Kika'lekki. Realizing the place he wished to go was to far to be reached by foot, Zelda hailed a taxi and gave a instruction on the general area of where he wanted to go. Arriving not far from his destination Zelada was able to find the source of the erngy was coming from what seemed to be a religious building belonging to the caste known as Jedi's. Zelada had encountered a group of humans during his travel that explained the nature of the Jedi and had actually pointed him to Coruscant. Of course he had knwon of the Jedi previously from both scripture and actual accounts of a few Twi'leks leaving Ryloth over the years to study under the Jedi. Zelada even followed the aspects of a few Twi'lek Jedis who had or still were fighting in the war. Studying the building for a short while longer Zelada decided he would seek out a local cantina and see about getting some locals point of view on the current situation.

Everything looks good, however you will not be able to make two sabers until you are least a dark jedi knight o remember that. Accepted~Guilyn
PostPosted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 3:21 am


Gaia Name: Calibur X21

Character Name: Eren Sekot (taking the name of his home planet and thus parent)

Gender: Male

Age: 29

Race: Undefined, but by standard appearances and biology, human.

Character Description: He has thick dark brown hair, a few wavy locks falling over his dark brown eyes from time to time, his facial features finely chiselled but retaining a trace of his boyish looks. He wears a longsleeved black top, covered with a flexible protective layer of matt black pads over his upper torso, each pad joined by a linking material tougher than durasteel but lighter than paper. His fitted black trousers are made from the same material, but thicker and with the appearance of smooth, unreflective leather. They tuck into a pair of enhanced Chiss commando boots, strong and well moulded to his feet, the exterior a dark, obsidian-blue colour, with a binding device up the front of the shin region. From his belt, three sheets of the same protective material can unfurl in an instant and fall to his knees, protecting his rear and the sides of his legs. On his left shoulder sits a protective guard of the same blue colour as his boots, but hard and durable, made from a special alloy native to the unknown regions. In fact, his entire outfit was created during his travels there. The shoulder pad is highly detailed with green and red tribal patterns, while a thick, curved strap of the same design travels to a rounded end over his right pectoral, all the same material as the shoulder pad. On his back, the same strap pattern occurs, but to the centre of his back, forming a thin shield-shaped end down his spine. Around the back of his neck is a small, raised section of obsidian-blue, as if a solid hood, but more for show. His twin lightsabers, blue and viridian, are fastened to the back of his belt.

Home Planet: Zonama Sekot

Starting Planet: Ylesia

Relations: Parent – Sekot; Mentor – mysterious Jedi master going by the alias ‘Thoren’.

Character History: Eren is not from known space. His home planet of Zonama Sekot is equally elusive. Although he hails from the Unknown Regions, his origins are not concrete. Zonama Sekot, the living planet, travels from star system to star system to find a home for itself, a place where it can be protected from those seeking to exploit it. Born from Sekot’s womb as the only human on the planet, Eren grew up with the planet as his mother, the force strong in his soul even as a baby. Many years ago, a wandering Jedi master found himself upon the soil of that world, as he searched the Unknown Regions for an answer to his personal and spiritual questions. He met with Eren, the only human and thus suitable representative of the planet.

His visit, the stories he told, his very existence, was what caused Eren to look further outside of his home, and he left with the man to uncover the answer to the latter's questions. From the ages of 17 to 26, the two traversed the great expanse of the Unknown Regions, but when his mentor met an impasse, where only he could proceed, Eren took his own ship and left to explore the galaxy his teacher had told him of. He desired to continue his friend's work in his absence, and so, found himself on the planet of Ylesia, on the edge of Hutt space, three years later at the age of 29 (present).

Alignment: Neutral

Occupation: Traveler, living primarily off credits retrieved from a dead smuggling vessel lost in the Unknown Regions, and otherwise sustained due to one or two odd jobs for various parties. In the years spent with Thoren, he learnt of the many complexities of the Force, although in theory only. Thoren never taught Eren in practice because he feared any possibility of Eren turning to the dark side. Instead, he gave his friend the knowledge and let him choose his path himself.

Skills: Force-sensitive, and particularly attuned to plants and animals.

Weapons: His twin lightsabers, identical in design, the Split Dimensions, are viridian green and turquoise blue, their power crystals (much like lambent crystals) having grown in the deep caverns beneath the surface of Zonama Sekot. He knows very little about how to wield them, but they are keep-sakes from his home planet, constructed by Theron for him as a gift for his hospitality. For the most part, he fights with his wits, physical prowess and BlasTech DL-44 pistol. However, he prefers not to fight, when it can be avoided.

Ship: Oh, it’s a piece of junk. Picked it up not long after ditching the ship he’d traveled in from the Unknown Regions. The previous vessel was…well, for lack of a better word, destroyed. These smugglers always attack first, pillage next, then ask questions later, if they have the brain capacity to formulate any.

Personal Belongings: Lightsabers, BlasTech DL-44 pistol, customized battle suit, standard green flight suit, rapidly dwindling funds.

Roleplay Sample:
He paused atop a weathered hill and gazed down into the floodplain beneath him. The sun was moving past the midday mark, the afternoon setting on. Clouds rolled lazily overhead, and as the young man took a draught of his water, his eyes picked out the forms of two wheeling vultures. He frowned. It was an odd scene for vultures, especially the deriatus mendoem species. The countryside was lush and vibrant, picturesque beauty stretching for miles in every direction. However, he was not one to ignore nature's message. Stopping his flask, he strapped it to the saddle once more and lifted himself up on his hands to look around. There was something...in the way the world was too beautiful, as if it was bringing out everything it could muster to show its magnificence, as if it could see its own demise. He set himself back in his saddle and tapped his heels against his horse's flanks. He had to reach the town as soon as he could.
...
His horse neared a stunted tree, its branches stripped of leaves, its trunk cracked and hollow. Dismounting, he led the beast to the ancient pillar and knelt facing the empty circle within the tree. Turning his attention to the ground he stared into the earth. As his hand passed over the surface of the bare ground his fingers scattered minute particles of dirt as they settled. He held his position for a time, eyes closed, and palms flat against the earth.

The dirt moved.
He turned his head slightly at the new sensation.

It moved again, a faint shudder as his hands were pelted by tiny fragments of dirt flung from their resting place. He opened his eyes and looked up to a shattered sky. Rays of golden light speared dark clouds in the distance, their fierce beams growing dull and thick, turning a deep orange. The sky was smeared the colour of red ochre and the clouds, once grey, became almost blue, as if the artist's dirty sleeve had dragged across his creation. It was a sight to behold, unnatural. In his life, he had never seen a sky to compare, and as he looked on, the ochre became something more.

He quickly drew himself back onto his steed and twitched the reins, moving the animal away from the tree. The branches drooped and the bark withered, the sides of the tree bending inwards. As the organism collapsed, it revealed the rest of the sky beyond, twisted. foreboding. All around him the world became a darker place and the beauty which had once shown itself was now a nightmarish shade of its former glory.

A good application, however rule 11 was brokn. You can not have a jedi parent in order for your application to be accepted. Please fix that and I'll look again. ~Guilyn

Ok, I didn't have a jedi parent, but I saw what you meant with the training and I changed that. As of now, instead, my character only knows about the Force and its nature, and knows that he carries the potential within him. I put that in the occupation section instead of the history.

Alright... No jedi training is allowed in your character history, however you haven't said he learned anything. Thus i will beleive he learned nothing and your character is accepted. Accepted~Guilyn

Thank you.

Calibur X21

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mizzlehotch777

PostPosted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:44 am


Gaia Name: mizzlehotch777
Character Name: Inder Harrik
Gender: Male
Age: 46
Race: Human
Character Description: about 6 foot tall, medium build, fit, black hair, pale blue eyes. He looks like he's seen much of space. His square jaw and pale eyes seem to look into your soul. He wears a leather vest with various odds and ends sticking out, all of them useful at times.

Home Planet: Corellia
Starting Planet: Endor
Relations: none alive
Character History: Born on Corellia, Inder was raised in a small suburb in Corel. He grew up comfortable, sometimes frequenting the sparceports to talk to the pilots. He loved their stories and dreamed of going to the stars to explore them himself.

He started school at 6 and graduated with honors at 18. He went to the Corel University to study astronomy and political science, earning his degrees in those fields at 24. After that he got a job at a local administrations building for the government, but he still longed to explore the stars.

He rose through the ranks quickly and efficiently. Becoming the assistant for the finances department. Once on a visit to Belladar for trade negotiations, his ship was attacked by pirates. He managed to escape, but his ship was badly damaged and he had to dock in a nearby spaceport. Aware of what was happening, he sold the ship's furnishings and electronics, making enough money to buy an old YT-2400. He couldn't fly this ship on his own, so he found a first mate, a droid named M3PY (Emmthree (if allowed, i'll put him out as a character as well, for now he is intertwined with the Diadem, meaning they share the same fate)). For a long time they have been running illegal goods for Hutts, as well as earning honest pay. They've come to Endor hearing that there might be some lucrative business at a local star port.

Alignment: Neutral
Occupation: Trader/Smuggler
Skills: Pilot, Negotiations (diplomacy, bluff and sense motive), Aware (Search, Spot, Listen)

Weapons:Customized SoroSuub S-5(Naboo Security Officer pistol), SoroSuub Firelance Blaster Rifle, combat knife
Ship: Modified YZ-775 Majestic Diadem
Personal Belongings: Majestic Diadem Corellian ID badge(out of date), a picture of his parents. Current cargo in his ship (none at this time), credit chip for 4,000 credits. leather jacket and vest.

Roleplay Sample:

Inder walked into the cantine and surveyed the area, looking for anybody that could give him trouble. Once he spotted any potential threats he sat down at the bar and order his favorite drink, Corellian Whisky. He took a sip of the beverage and instantly felt a little more relaxed. A little taste of home. "Gimme another one bartender. And leave the bottle." He offered up a hefty tip so the bartender would comply. Once he was finished he headed off to where a group of aliens was playing Sabbac. "Let's see if i can get lucky tonight"

If there are amendments i can make, please tell me. I am very anxious to play.

I'm not in the mood to be picky, and without doing major length-wise nitpicking, your app is accepted by K. x3
PostPosted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 7:23 pm


Gaia Name:vegeta12
Character Name:O-bin Carnor
Gender:male
Age:17
Race:Human
Character Description: He has Black flowing hair. He is about 6ft 5 but don't think he is clumsy and is basicly built pretty well. He is a natural born fighter.
Home Planet biggrin antooine
Starting Planet:Korriban
Relations:brother
Character History: O-bin Carnor was born on the planet Dantooine. He was raised by a poor family with barley enough credits to buy food. He spent most of his life as a hunter. Fighting for servival he fed his with the food he brought. It was aparent that he was a strong force sensitive and one day would be exploted.

He eventually got a job as a spacer and soon his tarvels took him to the planet Korriban. Though that was not his destinantion nun the less the planets gravity pulled him in and his ship crashed into the Valley of the Dark Lords. shaken and confused from the crash he walked the planet known as Korriban for food and shelter. Sooner or later he came to a what was the entrance to the Dark Jedi Temple. That would be where his journey begins.


Alignment biggrin ark side
Occupation:Sith hopefull
Skills:pilot, force sensitive

Weapons:E-11 blaster rifel
Ship:is now a broken cargo ship
Personal Belongings:A braclet

Roleplay Sample:O-bin walked to the Dark Jedi Temple entrance. Still dazed and confused from the crash he looked at the door hazely and said, "What is this thing?". He then poked the door and shot open and what he saw would change his life forever. He opened his eyes with a agog and said "what is this?" he gasps in amazement. O-bin looked around and saw statues of old dark Jedi's and said "what are they?".

I'd love to see more description in your posts, but seeing as the mods are the only ones who ever read these, I'd love to see your character develop through RP. And can you cut down on the bold? xD You're in. ~K

vegeta12


Sir ShockY

PostPosted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 12:59 pm


Gaia Name: Chojiro Myameshi
Character Name: Rue Valkahn
Gender: Male
Age: Twenty Four
Race: Kiffar
Character Description: Although Rue appears to be Human-ish, there are many differences that could set him apart as a Kiffar. For one, and the more obvious, the tattoo that moves across his face. Two dark lines that spread from his forehead, down his left eye all the way to the bottom of his jaw, as well as another single line moving down his right eye then stopping to curve diagonally to the beginning of his jaw. The second of the two couldn't be identifiable with any race, his complexion is ghostly white, which causes most some level of discomfort as he appears as well... irregular.

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Home Planet: Kiffu
Starting Planet: Coruscant
Relations: None
Character History:
From the moment he was birthed into this world it was clear that something was wrong with him. Even as a baby Rue was completely pale in complexion, in all honesty some of the ones giving birth would have assumed him dead had he not been crying so loudly. And as per tradition, the markings of his mother were painted across his face. Two lined of black moving down over his left eye, all the way to the bottom of his jaw, as well as a final line moving down his right eye, curving diagonally towards the corner of his jaw and stopping.

His mother was a nice woman who fell in love with the child from the moment their eyes met, in her eyes he was perfect, not a flaw had befallen her sweet little Rue. His father saw things quite differently however, at first, he blamed the ones who gave birth for what had happend, saying that they somehow messed up and they should pay for what they had done. However, it didn't take long for his father's resentment to fall to the child.

Many years passed, Rue was now seven years old and dealt with hardships every day. If his father wasn't beating or screaming at him for doing something wrong, something out of the ordinary, then his fellow children were outcasting him from the group in which they played great warriors. If he asked to join in, he would be beaten and bruised, unwilling to fight back as per his mother's wishes, giving his father something else to be ashamed of.

It was around the age of eleven when he first learned of his powers, barely any in his particular bloodline had the ability of psychometry, but when Rue had told his mother what had happend, when he was trying to get some sleep and reached out to touch his pillow with his hand, how he had seen himself laying there, and laying there, tossing and turning, as if seeing what was going to, or had already happend. His mother was quick to act, taking him to a trainer of such arts, to teach him how to control this odd power.

More time passed and he learned how to use his psychometry. He could now see the history of objects with a mere touch and concentration, witnessing a previous owner to an artifact handed down through the generations, or even the last person that had held a vibroblade. The feeling of seeing the past was quite intresting and made him feel almost superior to all of those who didn't have this uncommon ability.

He was now seventeen years old and as per his father's wishes, was training everyday with swords around his home. He had been doing so for years now, and the feeling of having a melee weapon in his grip was more than exciting. The mere thought of being in a life or death duel with another person for whatever reason brought on feelings of heroism, he was almost to the point he was an equal to his father in battle, and his father trained more often than he had, stacked on with the fact he had been alive far longer. All this did was prove to Rue that he was indeed superior to his father, and that no one under him should ever talk down like he was a dog again, he was to take no more abuse.

A year passed and still he did nothing but train. No one would dare talk to the "pale one" at this point, not when it had been confirmed that he was a psychometrist. But he didn't mind this, the thought of having friends at this point would be no more than a burden on his mind. Friends were a weakness that could be exploited and taken advantage of, oh how his mind had darkened over the years, how an innocent child could become such a darkened person full of anger and hate just by not recieving enough attention.

The death of his mother was not something he took lightly, the one person Rue could count on, the only one who had ever thought that he could become anything he wished had parished, and all of his dreams along with her. He was now stuck with a man who hated the mere sight of him, as well as everyone else on the planet who looked at him as somewhat of a freak. It was night at the time, Rue had just finished training and had neglected putting his sword up, rather just leaving it outside on the ground. He no longer cared for rules, for the authority to govern what he should or shouldn't do. And with his father's mental state after his wife's passing, of course he was going to yell and scream about disopline and how he was deserving of whatever punishment he saw fit.

Rue snapped, he had put up with the abuse all of his life, and taken it with a smile in his own eyes, but no more. Without putting much thought into it, he reached down and took the blade into his left hand, still in the midst of his father lecturing him. It was obvious that Rue had drown out the old man, it was something he had gotten use to just nodding to his father's orders without actually listening to him, without hearing a word that he was saying. The look in Rue's eyes told his father that he wasn't paying attention and required some sort of punishment. The old man raised his left hand and brought it down to strike Rue over his head.

There were only two flashes of steel. After the first, the man's hand followed through with the slap, but hit nothing. Rather, he was more focused on the sight of his own hand flying through the air in the opposite direction. No matter, he didn't have time to feel pain before the second flash struck. The blade had ended up catching the old man in the throat, driven downward so the tip of the blade severed his spine for one last kick in the face. There was no turning back at this point, what had been done had been done. Rue just needed to gather all of the evidence, all of the items which he had touched so no psychometrist could come and tell that Rue had done such a terrible act.

Before long, Rue had everything at his side, the weapon that did it, his clothes, a cloak, even a large mask that his father had kept for personal reasons. One touch would allow him to see it's usage either way, and at least it looked somewhat valuable. Deciding that the best course of action for him to do would be to flee the planet, and being no ace pilot of any kind, he smuggled himself onboard a freighter following a personalized route for some special rich person that could afford the luxury. Rue didn't care where it was going, as long as it was far away from this planet and it's people.

Years passed, Rue had become somewhat use to hopping from ship to ship to get off of a planet he felt he had stayed too long on. He hadn't been caught yet, and with any luck it would stay that way. His father's mask now rest on his own face, he had viewed it's history as a rebreather some many years ago used by his father on different planets. Something he never knew his father did, travel. It worked for two things, if he ended up on a planet where the air was somewhat... less than breathable, he was able to survive, at least long enough to hop aboard yet another ship, and two, it was an intimidation factor. This specific model was dated, and while it worked fine, it was large and clunky, which made it appear as though it did something else. This was fine with Rue, solitude was what he did best.

By some unholy fate, he had ended up on Tatooine, a backwater desert planet that's only life were those dying or taking advantage of those dying, the scumpit of the galaxy. He couldn't stay at a place like this, not for long anyways. It took him all of a week to find a suitable ship to hop a ride on. In that week he hunted for food, scavenged, wandered and generally complained to himself about the heat.. he hated the heat. But he couldn't risk ending up on another planet as bad as this one, and with all of the odd looks he was getting, he had to depart very quickly before someone ended up figuring out he wasn't as tough to take down as his appearance gave off. And so he hopped aboard a ship, once more successful in being quite silent. All that would ring through his head was where the ship was headed, a planet full of life, full of action... Coruscant.
Alignment: Dark Side
Occupation: Wanderer.
Skills: Force Sensitive, Psychometry(Kiffar racial ability).

Weapons: Vibroblade.
Ship: None.
Personal Belongings: Mother's cloak (Dark blue cloak that covers body), Father's mask.

Roleplay Sample: Rue's footsteps echoed throughout the hallway of the building, down and around ever corridor in the area. He wanted to be noticed, to feel the eyes of those that wished to look in the face of fear, only to second guess themselves and run away, nothing gave him more joy. Without much effort on his part, he lifting both of his arms, outstretched to his sides in order to pull his fingers along the aged walls of this specific building, or more specifically to drag his fingers along the doorframe.

His ability at Psychometry was uncanny, he was definately one of the best at being able to grasp ahold of specific memories that he was after, and today was nothing special. As his hands would indent for the doorways, he would catch different images of people walking in and out, able to set aside the further back memories and replace them with the newer ones, those that had happend only a day before, maybe even moments before. He continued until he found the room he was after, his vision flashing with the image of a woman running inside in quite a hurry, as if trying to hide.

Under his mask a smirk crossed over his lips "No one can run.." was all that he muttered, turning towards the same room with the utmost excitement, he was going to finish his first job, get credits, buy something to eat, oh the sound of food was something to be thrilled over indeed. With a few taps of his knuckle against the hard, metal door he waited... only to be surprised when a Bothan male answered his call with a raspy "Yes?" There they sat, staring back at one another for a few moments.. he wasn't aware there would be more than one subject he would have to take care of... no matter, all would get their own in time. With a small bow of his head, he replied with "Wrong room.. apologies." and turned to walk away... all would get their own indeed.


Oh, my. I loved the app. (SCORE! You're a darksider! Character interact with me please? xDD) You're in. ~K
PostPosted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 4:33 pm


Gaia Name: Alfod_Rithel
Character Name: Mark Zaar
Gender: male
Age: 22
Race: human
Character Description: tall man of 6 feet, thin, somewhat muscular, blonde hair, blue eyes.

Home Planet: Coruscant
Starting Planet: Tantooine
Relations: Parents are long dead. Only child.
Character History: Mark comes from along line of bounty hunters. His parents both had a price on their heads for liberating several convicts from a Republic prison and selling them to numerous individuals who had hird them to perform this task. Ironically, they too were hunted and fled to Coruscant where they had Mark. Unfortunately, they were soon found by a bloodthirsty mercenary. Knowing that Mark was unsafe while with them, they made a difficult decision and left 3 month old mark on the footsteps of the Jedi temple and a hologram describing their tragic tale. Master Calron took Mark in as his padawan and Mark's Jedi journey began.
Mark had seen the hologram that is parents left him at the young age of 6 and was filled with sorrow and anger after learning that his parents were captured, killed and sold to the dean of the prison they raided. Calron tried his best to keep Mark from feeling such dark emotions, but after many years Mark's emotions failed to subside. Scared of what Mark might become, Calron preformed an extremly difficult force power to say Mark from himself. Using his massive amount of Jedi, training, Calron used the power affect mind to erase all of the Jedi training from Mark's memory. All of Marks intense training was now worthless. Mark was furious at his Master for what he had done. Calron told his infuriated padawan he needed to learn to control his emotions or he will never tread the path of a Jedi. Mark stormed out of the temple, made his way to the hangor, and took off in a Jedi Starfighter. Just as he's leaving the planets atmosphere, he realizes that his master was right. He immediately turns the ship around and speeds back towards the Jedi Temple. When he returns, he calls for his master no one responds. A Jedi approaches him and tells him something that will change Mark's life forever.
According to the Jedi, Calron had followed Mark into space to try to recover his apprentice. While in his ship, Calron is attacked by a space pirate cruiser and shot down. Mark was filled with rage over his masters death, but he then remembered the words of his master. At that moment he dedicates his life to completing Calron's final lesson. He leaves the temple with his belongings and joins a small mercenary group. Together, they travel the galaxy and capture many felons. Mark feels extremly unfullfilled, and when they arrive at Tantooine he decides to leave the group in order to search fr someone who can reteach him the ways of the force. Mark knows little of what lies ahead.
Alignment: Republic
Occupation: Pilot
Skills: Skilled dogfighter, but nothing too impressive. Also is skilled with mechanics due to his massive amount of time spent in a space cruiser.

Weapons: a blaster
Ship: Dosen't have one.
Personal Belongings: broken double-edged lightsaber. Mark also forgot how to construct or fix a light saber. Also, the hologram that his parents left him those many years ago.


Roleplay Sample: Mark walked slowly from the hangar with his hand on his blaster, ready to shoot whatever wanted to harm him. He had heard several times from his master to keep a firm grip on your weapon while walking down the streets of Mos Eisly. As he walks down the bustling bazzaar, he overhears the calls of many merchants and several outraged customers. Apparently someone was selling droid parts for a ridculous sum of money. He continues on and hears the music of a tavern. Mark follows the tune and enters the thug filled bar. Fortuantely, he blended in nicely and decided to take a small break. The memories of his master fill his mind, but he quickly removes the thought. Sorrow leads to the Darkside His thoughts are quickly interrupted by the bartender. Mark then gives him his order.

I'll just have some water, please. This planet's suns could melt the city of Coruscant.

I once knew a guy with the screenname Jedi Mark. He was intnesely cool but, I don't know how to say this...

"MANDALORIANS ARE DEAD."

If you pick a new race and re-vamp it from there, drop me a line. ^_^ ~K

Alfod_Rithel


Jedimaster Luke

PostPosted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 6:13 pm


Gaia Name djjedimaster13
Character Name Razor (last name unknown)
Gender male
Age 14
Race human
Character Description blonde hair blue eyes slim tall

Home Planet Tatooine
Starting Planet Naboo
Relations brother and sister in law
Character History Razor was born on a far away planet called Tatooine. during his birth his mother died, his father was so heart broken he comited suicide. leaving Razor with his older brother and his sister in law they werent able to live with out there parents and they had to survive in the deserts of Tatooine. as Razor grew older he become stronger he realized he had a strange power. an unusaul power no power of a normal human. he was always stronger than his brother and always ran faster than his brother.


Razor than realized he was no ordinary human he had special powers and abilities that as far as he knew no other human had. as time weant on Razor was able to get a job as a pilot transporting supplies to distint planets. one day razor was assigned to deliver a supply of special crystals to a place called Couresaunt. upon his arrival he kept getting those strange feelings again his head started pounding when he weant in side the themple like building where he had to make the delivery to, a strange man came up to him. Razor asked him who he was the man said thats not important but what is important is that you follow me he said. so Razor followed him the man asked do you ever get strange feeling in your head when your in certain places yes said Razor the man asked do you ever get a head acrh when your in those places yes said Razor the man said are you getting a head aceh right know yes said Rozor. the man said then you are a force sensitive. Razor could not belive his ears then does that mean im a Jedi yes the man said and this is the Jedi temple and thats where Razors training began.

Alignment light
Occupation jedi
Skills piloting,electronics, and cooking

Weapons lightsabor and blaster rifle
Ship x wing
Personal Belongings an old pendant that belonged to his mother

Roleplay Sample as Razor was walking around the city of Mos Eisly of his home planeet Tatooine two very strange men where walking next to him and they kept looking at him like they wanted to kill him. Razor quickly ran off the men did not follow him he eventually lost them.
I'd love to see some more capital letters. And a fourteen-year-old ace pilot flying the outer rim? Unless he's... Superbaby, I don't quite see how it's possible. I think you can do better with the application. ;3

~K
PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 5:26 pm


Gaia Name: Sgt.Sunshine
Character Name: Jaster Mereel
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Race:Human
Character Description:
Standing at a height of 5'11" he stands at a fairly average height amongst most humans nowadays. An oddity about him though is that his hair is as white as snow which is quite rare among his race. His skin has a dark tan from had work under the tatooine sun. He usually wears a simple black cargo pants, white shirt, black vest and a pair phrik bracers that he has obtained after finding a near empty mine shaft.

Home Planet:Tatooine
Starting Planet:Coruscant
Relations: Mother(status:unkown), Father(status:unkown)
Character History:
Born on the desolate world of Tatooine he lived a quiet life....a rather simple life. Day in and day out his family and himself would work the moisture farm until sun down. As the days went on his patience for such simple work began to wear as well. One day he had finally had enough of the tiresome days of working the field and quickly gave it up and left without a word in a search for something new. Only when he reached the local spaceport did he realize his foolishness of lack of funds and what his family must think. Returning home he found his home empty.....there were clear signs of a struggle and he could find nothing of them. After searching for days he finally gave up he gathered all he could and took off.

Alignment: Neutral
Occupation: Mercenary/bounty hunter
Skills:
-Adept at piloting
-fairly skilled with a wide range of weapons, even better with his own.
-excellent at marksmanship
-partial mechanical skills...only simple problems.
-force sensitivity(latent)

Weapons:

Phrik Bracers contains:
-Flamethrower
-Grapple line
-Tranqulizer gun
On hand:
Dual Bryar pistols
DC-17
VibroSword
VibroBlade
Ship:
Aegis Horizon-class Star Yacht((Jade Shadow Variant))
((See here for more information
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Jade_Shadow))
Speeder Bike
64-Y Swift 3 repulsor sledAura

Personal Belongings:
-Astromech droid to assist in navigation of the
Roleplay Sample:

It was a rather cold and rainy day on Coruscant, which was suprisngly better than others when on the lowest levels of the place. As the rain washed away the most awful of smells jaster let out a low sigh as he waited on a nearby roof top watching...always watching through the T-shaped visor of his helmet as random amounts of information were shown as people walked by his hiding place. In one square a holonet feed another a local bounty list. Looking down the street once more he sighed again as he was about to rise to leave for the night as he saw him. Out of the glimpse of the T-visor he saw his paycheck. Walking down the street was a simple Wookie. Garbed in a simple belt as they had little need for other clothes as their fur was so thick.

Watching him he slowly brought up the list to check if that last drink hadn't messed with him. Sighing in relief as he got a confirmation he quickly jumped down from his spot. Noting the surprise of some people as they saw a fully equipped Mandalorian supercommando or so it seemed.

Pushing the bar doors open where he had reccently saw his prey enter he quickly scanned the area noting him to be sitting in the corner chatting it up with what was most likely a dancer. Carefully he began to make his way towards the wooke careful to not be detected. As soon as he was close enough he fired several tranqs into the flank of the wookie. Unfortunately for Jaster though the wookie happened to glance at him before he fired. Outraged but the act the wookie stood tall rushing him in pure anger. Swearing violently he quickly jumped back just avoiding the spot where the wookie had thrown all his weight leaving a crumpled bar stool.

As the lookie lay there upon the remains of the stool he glanced down at it kneeling down closer wary of the fact that he might still be concious. Checking his pulse and breathing he sighed with relief as his prey was still alive. Standing tall he said,"Well looks like I get to eat tonight."



No. Mandalorians. It doesn't matter how hard they rock. It's a canon establishment that they simply don't exist any longer. I loved your app, and I want really badly to accept it, but I can't under these terms. >_> Contact me, and we can negotiate. ~K


I edited everything but the rpsample since it really doesn't matter and has nothing to do with the character but rather myself as a rper :3

You're so very much in. ^_^ Thanks! ~K

Sgt.Sunshine


Mr. AmsteL
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 1:12 am


Gaia Name: Mr. best dutch beer in the world
Character Name: Bertus steigerpijp
Gender: Male
Age: 72
Race: Human
Character Description: Bertus is just the standard old folk
Bald head, small beard, and sunglasses to prevent people from seeing his wrinkly eyes. He wears a blue jedi robe, and almost always holds his lightsaber in hand.
This be him: User Image

ADDITION: Rank: jedi padawan (yes, a 72 year old one)

Home Planet: Rodia (as far as he knows)
Starting Planet: Jedi temple
Relations: He is in love with his teddybear, who he thinks is a beatiful twi'lek
Character History:
Bertus was adopted by a Rodian trader at a very young age. Noone remembers where the trader actually found him, but it is known that Bertus was somewhere on a street, half dead, not even a half year old.
The trader (yes, trader, not smuggler omigosh a fair rodian) took care of the kid and soon the young boy healed. When the kid was 5 year old, everyone who knew him saw th kid managed to use the force a bit while playing with his toys.

His 'father' knew what to do and brought him to the jedi on Coruscant, which gladly took him as a student. He was an avarage student, not really special in anything, but he wasnt a bad jedi either. When he was 20, Bertus went on trial with his master. They had to reclaim something from a temple on Yavin IV. It was the last thing Bertus had to do before he could be promoted.
Unfortunatly, when walking in, a brick fell out of the wall, hitting Bertus straight on the head. Noone threw the brick, or pushed it, there are no complot theories. just bad luck
After months of fighting for Bertus's live, it seemed he recovered completely.. but when they withdrew him from his bacta tank, they discovered they were wrong.
His body was perfect, but his memory gone, and he crazed out. Bertus tought he was a jedi master, and waved his lightsaber all over the place. All other memory was just erased. The jedi took the saber away and put Bertus in a psychic patient institute. But he could still use the force, and used that to break out and return to the jedi temple, where he told he succeeded his mission by breaking away from the 'imperials' as he called them, that captured him.

To the jedi it was obvious Bertus would always stay a jedi master in his mind, and wave his saber all day. So they gave him a plastic lightsaber, which he waved around with at least 4 hours a day, and let him be in his illusion to be a great master. Knowing he'd just stay in the temple, he couldn't be of many harm, but he couldn't be of use either.
Besides that, Bertus needs at least 3 glasses of alcohol a day, or he completely flips... and if he does, he can become crazy and misuse its force powers.
from time to time, bertus can be of use to students. He does read a lot in the jedi library and he does remember that knowledge... on most questions about the force, he does know an answer, no matter of he's old, senile and crazy

Alignment: Jedi
Occupation: padawan
Skills: drinking, knowledge, waving a plastic lightsaber in the impression it's a real one

Weapons: a plastic saber
Ship: none
Personal Belongings: plastic saber and a pink teddybear

Roleplay Sample: Bertus sips his cold beer and relaxes..
"damn, does that taste good..."

Oh my gawsh. xD I really should push it on you to do better with your RP, but since I know who you are, and because this isn't exactly your first application, I'm not going to try. You're in. ~K


Right right, I'll enlenghten it, because it's you:

RP sample:
Bertus sips his cold beer and relaxes..
"damn, does that taste good..."

Suddenly, a girl comes into the room. Bertus stand up from his very relaxing, soft and fuzzy chair and places his beer on the small table next to it. He greets the girl, and of course, she greets in return.
"Bertus, I hate to tell you this but... your RP sample is too short.. MAKE IT LONGER!

NOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!"


Bertus, mentally unstabile as he is, flipped hearing this and had only one reply. He grabbed his lightsaber from his belt, activated it, and immidiatly pounded the girl on her head. He ran out of the room, to his quarters, still screaming
"That should get you, you sith!"

Once Bertus arrived in his quarters, he locked the door and went to his lover that was sitting on the couch. When he was next to her, he swung his beatifully glowing blue plastic lightsaber trough the air activly while telling her about his encounter with the sith today. Of course, the pink teddybear gave little response, but that didn't matter. He heard response in his mind, and Bertus his day was once again a good one
PostPosted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 8:03 pm


Edited version:
Alfod_Rithel
Gaia Name: Alfod_Rithel
Character Name: Mark Zaar
Gender: male
Age: 22
Race: human
Character Description: tall man of 6 feet, thin, somewhat muscular, blonde hair, blue eyes.

Home Planet: Coruscant
Starting Planet: Tantooine
Relations: Parents are long dead. Only child.
Character History: Mark comes from along line of bounty hunters. His parents both had a price on their heads for liberating several convicts from a Republic prison and selling them to numerous individuals who had hird them to perform this task. Ironically, they too were hunted and fled to Coruscant where they had Mark. Unfortunately, they were soon found by a bloodthirsty mercenary. Knowing that Mark was unsafe while with them, they made a difficult decision and left 3 month old mark on the footsteps of the Jedi temple and a hologram describing their tragic tale. Master Calron took Mark in as his padawan and Mark's Jedi journey began.
Mark had seen the hologram that is parents left him at the young age of 6 and was filled with sorrow and anger after learning that his parents were captured, killed and sold to the dean of the prison they raided. Calron tried his best to keep Mark from feeling such dark emotions, but after many years Mark's emotions failed to subside. Scared of what Mark might become, Calron preformed an extremly difficult force power to say Mark from himself. Using his massive amount of Jedi, training, Calron used the power affect mind to erase all of the Jedi training from Mark's memory. All of Marks intense training was now worthless. Mark was furious at his Master for what he had done. Calron told his infuriated padawan he needed to learn to control his emotions or he will never tread the path of a Jedi. Mark stormed out of the temple, made his way to the hangor, and took off in a Jedi Starfighter. Just as he's leaving the planets atmosphere, he realizes that his master was right. He immediately turns the ship around and speeds back towards the Jedi Temple. When he returns, he calls for his master no one responds. A Jedi approaches him and tells him something that will change Mark's life forever.
According to the Jedi, Calron had followed Mark into space to try to recover his apprentice. While in his ship, Calron is attacked by a space pirate cruiser and shot down. Mark was filled with rage over his masters death, but he then remembered the words of his master. At that moment he dedicates his life to completing Calron's final lesson. He leaves the temple with his belongings and joins a small mercenary group. Together, they travel the galaxy and capture many felons. Mark feels extremly unfullfilled, and when they arrive at Tantooine he decides to leave the group in order to search fr someone who can reteach him the ways of the force. Mark knows little of what lies ahead.
Alignment: Republic
Occupation: Pilot
Skills: Skilled dogfighter, but nothing too impressive. Also is skilled with mechanics due to his massive amount of time spent in a space cruiser.

Weapons: a blaster
Ship: Dosen't have one.
Personal Belongings: broken double-edged lightsaber. Mark also forgot how to construct or fix a light saber. Also, the hologram that his parents left him those many years ago.


Roleplay Sample: Mark walked slowly from the hangar with his hand on his blaster, ready to shoot whatever wanted to harm him. He had heard several times from his master to keep a firm grip on your weapon while walking down the streets of Mos Eisly. As he walks down the bustling bazzaar, he overhears the calls of many merchants and several outraged customers. Apparently someone was selling droid parts for a ridculous sum of money. He continues on and hears the music of a tavern. Mark follows the tune and enters the thug filled bar. Fortuantely, he blended in nicely and decided to take a small break. The memories of his master fill his mind, but he quickly removes the thought. Sorrow leads to the Darkside His thoughts are quickly interrupted by the bartender. Mark then gives him his order.

I'll just have some water, please. This planet's suns could melt the city of Coruscant.

I once knew a guy with the screenname Jedi Mark. He was intnesely cool but, I don't know how to say this...

"MANDALORIANS ARE DEAD."

If you pick a new race and re-vamp it from there, drop me a line. ^_^ ~K


I like it! Welcome to the RP. <3

Alfod_Rithel


Souno

PostPosted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 3:50 pm


Gaia Name: Souno
Character Name: Souno Stanton
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Race: Human
Character Description:
Souno is six foot two and has redish/blonde hair. He is fair skinned and has light blue eyes. His long hair is constantly in his eyes and accents his bright smile that he always wears. He has a muscular body and many scars from fights as a child.

Home Planet: Dxun (the moon by Onderon)
Starting Planet: Korriban
Relations: He has his twin brother Tchai; Who decided to become a dark Jedi
Character History:
Souno was born on the moon of Dxun and raised by his loving father and mother. He was trained as a native warrior and grew up as such. When he was still a young teen he went for a walk with his brother one day and found an abandoned Sith Temple that was supposed to have been destroyed. He and his brother entered and changed their lives, and their relationship, forever. Once inside they found many skeletons of ainchent warriors, their lighsabers still rusting in their hands. Deep inside the maze of tunnels they found a cloud of dark energy that eminated from the cave itself. It cause their emotions to rage and instigate violence in their lives, but Souno resisted it. Unfortunately his brother did not. His brother let his emotions consume him and soon was running deep inside the cave where he found old sith holocrons preaching against the jedi. It influenced him down the dark side.
When the two boys finally came home, they found their camp decimated. Upon entering the camp they found their parent's bodies defigured by their attackers, whom they soon identified. The empire enslaved them and brought them to Korriban where they have lived ever since as slaves working for a local bar on the planet's surface. There they learned much about the galaxy and soon got into the service of a local trader who bases his operations off of Korriban.

Alignment: Republic
Occupation: Jedi
Skills: Force Sensitive, stealth, Survival

Weapons: he has a small blaster pistol and his father's old blaster
Ship: He doesn't own a ship
Personal Belongings: He has no belongings, besides a beautiful black crystal that has been passed down through the clans on Dxun for generations.

Roleplay Sample: You'll get it after the next profile. It involves both characters.



Gaia Name: Souno
Character Name: Tchai Stanton
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Race: Human
Character Description: Same as Souno, they're identical.

Home Planet: Dxun
Starting Planet: Korriban
Relations: His twin brother Souno.
Character History
Tchai was born on the moon of Dxun and raised by his loving father and mother. He was trained as a native warrior and grew up as such. When he was still a young teen he went for a walk with his brother one day and found an abandoned Sith Temple that was supposed to have been destroyed. He and his brother entered and changed their lives, and their relationship, forever. Once inside they found many skeletons of ainchent warriors, their lighsabers still rusting in their hands. Deep inside the maze of tunnels they found a cloud of dark energy that eminated from the cave itself. It cause their emotions to rage and instigate violence in their lives, while Souno resisted it, Tchai did not. He let his emotions consume him and soon was running deep inside the cave where he found old sith holocrons preaching against the jedi. It influenced him down the dark side.

When the two boys finally came home, they found their camp decimated. Upon entering the camp they found their parent's bodies defigured by their attackers, whom they soon identified. The empire enslaved them and brought them to Korriban where they have lived ever since as slaves working for a local bar on the planet's surface. There they learned much about the galaxy and soon got into the service of a local trader who bases his operations off of Korriban.

Alignment: Imperial
Occupation: Dark Jedi
Skills: Force Sensitive, stealth, Survival

Weapons: He has his blaster from home and an ainchent sword that was rumored to possess dark powers
Personal Belongings: A hunting knife and his mother's old necklace

Roleplay Sample


This sample contains a battle between Souno and Tchai. Every paragraph is from the other's perspective.


Souno stepped out of the hotsprings and ran a hand through his wet hair. He was frusterated by August's mood, but he just didn't have to words to cheer her up right now. It was all so different here away from the forest. He shook his head and watched as drops of water fell towards the ground, but he froze them before they hit and caused them to spin around him slowly, reflecting the sun. Rainbows danced accross the cement path as he walked towards the gates and saw his brother off to one side. He really felt the need to just expend all of his energy. "Maybe I'll go to the Arena...." He wandered over in that direction and looked around him at the people there. "And now i just need a person to spar with...."


Tchai stood up from the grassy patch of grass near the arena where he had fallen asleep staring up at the sun. "I need somewhere to be, how about the arena!" He rolled up onto his back and sprung up onto his feet. He looked over at the entance and saw his brother looking around. "Hoo rah! A nice spar with my 'wonderful' brother! I can't wait to see him bleed." He rolled his eyes and strolled over to Souno, "Looking for a partner?"

Souno looked over at Tchai and sighed, "It's about time that we simply fought here. I hear they have a forest arena here. Let's crank up the rain and turn on a storm. We'll duke it out till inability to move or otherwise." He looked Tchai up and down before walking over to the arena.

Tchai followed his brother and once they got to the arena he cranked the rain to downpour, spun the wind up, and let loose the thunder and lightning. He felt a cold wind blow past him and watched the trees blow. "Just like home, eh?"

Souno didn't even look back at Tchai as he stepped into the forest and was soon jogging between trees and felt the rain soaking him, but the cold didn't matter. He was already to cold to be bothered by anything so trivial as rain. He came to a clearing and stopped and sat cross legged in the center. The rain building up on his skin and starting to freeze.

Tchai glared at his brother as he disappeared into the forest. He took after him and was soon soaked, with the steam rolling off of him from where the cold drops hit him on his skin. He put his hands up and fire whirled around them to engulf his body and illuminate the paths ahead of him.

Souno stood, his body was covered in ice from shoulder to foot. His head was bare, and his hair was in icy strands. His eyes peered ice blue and matched the tone of his shoulder plates that curved up from his shoulders like horns and seemed to be seemlessly connected to his arms and hands. He looked lithe despite the added bulk of the ice and he wore a swinging cape of ice that blew with the wind. He stepped out of the clearing and headed into the darkness.

Tchai looked around at the forest, "This will take far too long." He held his hand up to his eyes and when he lowered it his eyes pulsed red. The world was suddenly mostly black except for a few spots among the trees where heat gathered. He was looking for his brother, and he was damned if he wouldn't find him.

Souno held his hand up to his eyes and concentrated, he knew that his brother would be using his useless heatvision here. He also knew that he had the opposite of heat vision and could see things from the amount of cold that they put off, and in this forest, his brother would stick out like a sore thumb because of his high body heat. He opened his eyes and they pulsed an icy blue that immediately picked out the form of his brother approximately two hundred yards away from him. He nimbly created footholds up a tree next to him and scaled the tree to its branches where he sprung from branch to branch towards his brother.

Tchai damned his brother's low body heat and stopped looking for him. He simply released multiple streams of flame in all directions and watched them weave their way through the trees. The intensity of the flame was great enough to evaporate the water on the trees. He was now surrounded by light and his brother could never creep up on him. Tchai laughed at his brother's stupidity in accepting this offer for a duel.

Souno sat above Tchai and watched him relax, sure that he wouldn't be snuck up on. He knew that with one blow the battle could be over, but he didn't want it to be that easy. He slolwly lowered himself behind his brother and dropped into the moss around the base of the tree. He extended his hands and watched as ice surrounded his brother's feet without touching them. He held out his right hand and felt ice solidify into a tall quarter staff that he held firmly in his hand. He reached forward and tapped his brother on the shoulder.

Tchai felt the hand on his shoulder and spun around, lashing out with his foot. Suddenly he was falling, having slipped on the ice, but caught himself on ths slippery surface. He rolled away from his brother and sprung to his feet, fire flinging from his hands. "How did he do it!?"

Souno's staff whirled as the fire glanced about it, he was spinning it fast enough that he could practically see Tchai clearly through the wiz of it's ends. He grew tired and concentrated as he released his grip on the staff. It remained spinning in the air, and was soon moving fast enough that no fire was seeping through it. He pushed it back towards Tchai and watched as his flames rebounded back on him.

Tchai pushed all his might into the fire, but he was nervous. His brother's staff was a formidible thing to deal with. He quickly sent out two trailers of fire around either side to distract him. He hadn't bargined on his brother sneaking up on him.

Souno glanced at the trailers coming towards him, and dodged out from behind his staff before letting it slip out of the way of the stream of flame. It hit the tree behind him and set it ablaze despite the rain and ice coating its surface. He extinguished the flames with two swipes of his staff before turning back to his brother.

Tchai straffed behind a tree and sprinted away into the darkness, he wasn't going to win this skirmish. He looked around with his heat vision and spotted an intensely hot area some distance into the forest. He stepped out and was amazed at what he saw. It was a giant tree that seemed to be livid with fire. It stood easily fifty feet across and at least a hundred feet high. He was amazed that they had one here, the only other ones he had ever seen had been back home in the Amazon. He stepped up to the tree and put his hand on its surface and felt the fires inside pulse against his skin, wanting him to be theirs. "Not today, but I will use you to descimate my brother." He envisioned the fires consuming the forest and he felt the earth raze beneath his face and the trees nearest to it erupted into flames.

Souno followed Tchai slowly, he wasn't in a hurry. Suddenly heat blotted out his vision and radiated out from the center of the forest. "What?" He stood stunned as trees erupted into flames in concentric circles from a large source of heat. "This is too much Tchai..." He shook his head and ran, it was all he could do. As the ice fell from his body and he ran faster he knew what he was going to do. He was going to go back to the hot springs and cheer up August. It was alot easier than killing his brother today.

Tchai's world was livid with flames, it was too much for him. Too much power to take in. He was sucked into the tree where he was infused with even more fire and his world went black

!!!!

Tall, muscular brothers fighting on opposite sides after losing their hometown?! I'd go to that movie, if just to see the angst. xD I loved the RP example: you're in.

~K
PostPosted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:39 pm


Gaia Name: KlunkJr.
Character Name: Guran Noraness
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Race: Gungan
Character Description: Guran, like all gungans is very tall and extremely lanky. His amphibous skin is a swamp green color with orange lines going around in his skin. He wears a Dark Jedi tunic, or thats what he calls it, in reallity his shirt is a black tunic and he wears black breaches, but he doesn't wear any shoes. His eyes are mounted on the short stalks like Jar Jar's. His skin is adorned with tattoos that are dark side in origin.

Home Planet: Naboo
Starting Planet: Korriban
Relations: None, they were all killed in an accident.
Character History: Guran was born on Naboo to farily high up in order Gungans. He liked the power he had been born into. When he was about 10 years old his parents were killed in an accident, but he thought that the speeder that hit them had hit them on purpose. So he decided he would have his revenge and when he was able to he hunted and killed the Nabooians that had hit his family. He was quickly arrested, tried, and convicted of murder. They tried to lock him up, but somehow, he didn't know how at the time, his anger caused the jailors to not be able to touch him. He then took off running and escaped the wrath of the Naboo.

When he got away he stole, lied, cheated, and murdered his way into being a high pay bounty. He killed the bounty hunters that chased him until none would take the job. He eventually learned of the Sith acadamy on Korriban. He decided to make his way there, but to get there he needed a ship. So he did what he always had, he stole a Naboo starfighter and took off for Korriban, hoping he could get the Sith the teach him how to harness his anger and use it make him stronger.
Seraph has taken Guran on as an apprentice in the Sith ways.
Alignment: Sith
Occupation: Dark Jedi Apprentice
Skills: Great mechanic, decent pilot, and force sensitive

Weapons: He carries a blaster like Han Solo's stapped to his left leg, but he also carries two vibroswords, which are slung across his back, for close range combat. He has now created his lightsaber which is a staff saber that can seperate at th middle to make two seperate blades, they also have long pieces of sharp metal at the top that jut forward far enough to kill someone without turning on the blade.
Ship: A Naboo Starfighter painted black instead of yellow.
Personal Belongings: He has little more than the clothes on his back, his stolen astro droid that came with the ship designated R7-H3, his weapons, and a picture of his family to remind him of why he has become who is his.

Roleplay Sample:

Guran had killed the people who had killed his family. He didn't care for them, they killed his family so he killed them. Not long after he heard sirens coming from outside. Guran just stood there looking at the corpses taken by some kind of sick pleasure in his deed. This was his calling to kill those who got in his face. Soon after the NSF came in and arrested him for murder.

A few days later Guran was tried and convicted of murder and sentenced to death. "You may place me behind bars, but you won't be able to hold on to me, even now." He said with an evil grin. The NSF security gaurds tried to touch him and as he said, they wer unable to place their hands on him, he burned with some infernal fire. He tapped into the force not knowing what he was doing and managed to escape the court house.

He thn spent along time on his own, hunting and being hunted. Soon enough he caused even battle hardened bounty hunters to fear him. He then learned from the underground grape vine, of a society that taught people that exibited powers such as his. So he decided to try to find them. He learned they had a base on the planet Korriban.

So he went on his way and killed a pilot and stole a modified Naboo starfighter which was painted balck. He seffered his share of wounds at the time too, but he managed to steal and escape with the ship, when he was safely away from the planet he jumped into hyperspace headed for Korriban.

Quite an old ship you got there. Anyway, good luck in flying it! You're in!
MrAmsteL

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