Kaho-kun
I need help, my character feels just out of it. Like something is missing and on the large i've been ignored in the shop thread so i've come here for a little help any criticism is greatly appreciated. My sig has my link.
In my opinion, I think you should add something about how your charachter gets to the island. I don't think you have it, or at lest I wasn't able to find it.
Anyway, I was wondering if you guys could take a look at
my charachter if it's not too much trouble. It seems to be severely ignored. I think I've got a fairley good basis but I know that I need to add more. I just don't know where. Also, mind telling me what you think of the art I've got there so far? Thanks.
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