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 Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2014 6:07 pm
Don't have a ton to say about Tim. Sorry for missing the match in EWA recently. sweatdrop You've always been fun to work with and we were tag team champions for a while in WWFG. I think you should try sticking with a single character rather than changing every few months, that's just me though.
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Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2014 6:30 pm
Me and Tammy had a fun match in WWFG going on recently! Lots of even amounts of back and forth made it enjoyable! I think the criticism would be with the story or character as I'm never sure where Boxer is heading!
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Posted: Wed Jan 22, 2014 8:30 am
Since I'm at work, I'm afraid you can only get a few one liners from me.
I think the fact you can juggle pultiple characters is great. Though I feel they sort of bleed into each otherso I think you could try to give more defining characteristics outside of gender.
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Posted: Wed Jan 22, 2014 9:42 am
I've not seen very much of your work, so I won't begin to make suggestions as to expanding your talents, but I've been curious to work with you since seeing you pop up around here, recently. You're clearly a competent writer from what little I have seen, and I've heard only good things from what others have told me. Plus, you seem to be a pretty laid back person, approachable for a recluse like me, so I think the development process would be pretty natural. Hope we get a chance to work with one another in the future.
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Posted: Wed Jan 22, 2014 9:45 am
Yukari Clepsydra This oughta be good Firstly, I'm probably going to be only doing 2 tournaments a year
Scrapping KotR, KotDM
BitW is tempting to scrap
Tag Invitational is staying
Legendary isn't a tournament per-say
I know my posts are lacking, I've been drained RP wise of course I've been RPing constantly for the better part of two decades
There is that....Now for the criticing! There's several inconsistencies in your RPing, in addition to your constant fading in and out of activity hurts your cause. I think if you've got an idea for a promo, you do it then and there. Not post the topic with 'will edit later' and not post in a topic for two months. There's also another thing I've noticed When you're gunning for a championship, whether it's a low card one or a world title, you put your all into it Your match quality increases, your promos are meaningful But when you obtain your goal.... That magic fizzles out, and you become lax in the matches and promos. Seemingly fine and content in where you're at. I think you need to work on meeting at the middle, and work on not half assing it too much. You'll get further, and be a champion longer. Working on the activity helps too, but like you said. Always room for improvement. Admittedly, I'm not the best when it comes to activity. I see gaining the title as a goal, never as a point in the story. I should focus on that more; thanks for pointing it out, Chrono. You may be an a*****e, but you're one of those good assholes. ...You know what I mean.
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Posted: Thu Jan 23, 2014 2:33 pm
Since Dion's merely replying to what I said and I already critiqued him.
I'll critique Salem.
Where to start, firstly you lack self confidence so much so that you have to have people read your promos/segments THE moment you post them
and if they don't respond right away you get upset.
Also if they do something like 'I'm not feeling it' you get upset.
Everyone's going to have an off day, not everyone's going to be able to see your stuff the exact moment you post it.
You do good work, but your overbearing desire to impress everyone is a bit unnerving.
You can't please everyone.
The faction thing? Also it's not working, generally your factions tend to have either Warner or Leone, which make no sense
considering prior to the faction forming you beat the hell out of each other for a few months and then go 'Nope we're friends now'
And then activity comes and b***h slaps all of you.
In short
You're a good writer, gain some self confidence
Cool it with the factions
Stop trying to please everyone
Be more active, pay attention to roll calls
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Posted: Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:33 pm
Yukari Clepsydra Since Dion's merely replying to what I said and I already critiqued him. I'll critique Salem. Where to start, firstly you lack self confidence so much so that you have to have people read your promos/segments THE moment you post them and if they don't respond right away you get upset. Also if they do something like 'I'm not feeling it' you get upset. Everyone's going to have an off day, not everyone's going to be able to see your stuff the exact moment you post it. You do good work, but your overbearing desire to impress everyone is a bit unnerving. You can't please everyone. The faction thing? Also it's not working, generally your factions tend to have either Warner or Leone, which make no sense considering prior to the faction forming you beat the hell out of each other for a few months and then go 'Nope we're friends now' And then activity comes and b***h slaps all of you. In short You're a good writer, gain some self confidence Cool it with the factions Stop trying to please everyone Be more active, pay attention to roll calls Good for the occasional ********, which the last one was years ago. Don't keep up with much except how you keep your ship afloat from time to time. Might have words with you, but I know how to give props.
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Posted: Fri Jan 24, 2014 10:30 pm
You come up with memorable feuds and you're not afraid to take things just close enough to the edge of too far without going over. I think when you really try, your hardcore matches are some of the best out there. You've also been open minded to other people's ideas when it comes to contributing to storylines you come up with yourself, which is nice.
That being said, I think you're a little guilty of saying and doing heel-like things while claiming to be face for the sake of being a hardcore character, so it feels forced sometimes. I think the biggest area of improvement that I can see you achieving would be to sell injuries and spots better. You tend to bounce back too quickly. I also think that your characters tend to share too many similar characteristics but that may be chalked up to just style and that's totally fine.
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Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 9:47 am
There is a lot that could be said about Schev. A lot of great things.
I have no idea where to start, really. I could talk about how the guy is smart and fun to have around. I could talk about how he is versatile enough to have a 5-star match against a mop and a bucket. And his characters? I have always been a fan of Shadow and how the character is built well enough to be dark and sadistic on day and be a big comic relief the day after without losing sight of the essence of the character, which requires the great skills that he has.
Makes me wish I had more than a match every four years with him!!! Bookers, take note.
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Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 9:51 am
I never really saw Mystique and I don't know if Mystique has seen my work but from what I hear you're someone I DO what to see and experience in a match sometime soon. Who knows what the future holds.
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Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 12:09 pm
Shadow already got one from me
Mystique
There aren't many people I'd come out of retirement for, but Mystique is one of them.
She's put on stellar promos, for months and got people talking all without having a match.
Simply put, she is that good.
Daemon
I think you try and do too much at once and that ultimately does more bad for you.
Sure Bison is a breath of fresh air, and Boom is a humorous character
I think together they'd be a dominating tag team, I think seperate they need the right chemistry with the right person to really get them elevated
Though keep in mind that you have Killman and Tim on the Backburner that would also assist. Not many small guys left around
Think about that...
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Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 2:54 pm
Daemonsparta:
You and I have had a great match earlier last year and I think you've improved quite a bit from reading that match with Disciple. Once you know where you want to go with your characters then I am sure your gonna be a World Champion some time in the future.
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Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 3:16 pm
Harli, you seemed to have retired once or twice last year. Between those times, you seemed more rejuvenated than when you were grinding and sometimes a world champion. That said, I find you could use some work on you inner beauty in the character. We want to feel Australia (not really). We want to see what can truly come from an older Harli who's been around the block a couple of times.
Chrono, you're retired. Fagnard.
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Posted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 8:09 am
SwagSummerofSummersofLove is so full of swag that he brings a little bit of summer and love with him in each of his posts, twice! Makes me laugh and I enjoyed the brief story MMI were doing in EWA with me and a couple others! Good to see ya back from retirement so let's see what happens going forward!
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Posted: Sun Jan 26, 2014 5:32 pm
Cartwright, what can I say about this guy that isn't already common knowledge? Very entertaining, never had a match with you I didn't enjoy..the only problem is we have never had a feud take off despite planning a few. Plays a face or heel very well and has shown more growth as a role player then anyone I can think of when I think of those who have been amount us from the beginning.
Criticism...BRING BACK EEW!! But that might just be a pipedream.
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