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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2012 4:01 pm
Mhai, if I'm not mistaken, told me yesterday that I could approve her since we wanted to get screening finished. I hope you don't mind but I'm going to point out a few things. You still can't seem to decide on a personality type for Renee and are trying to work three or four distinctive personality types into a single character. I'm curious how kind and gentle girls can be fierce and violent at the same time? She's gentle but short tempered and will drag people by their hair?? At the same time, you have all these hints about romance and force her to dress in a sexy way for unexplained reasons, which makes her seem like she's got a bit of trampy flirt thrown in there but then you also say she pretends not to like romance and doesn't like boys. How does that work? If she doesn't like boys and doesn't want people to know she likes romance then why is she dressing in a way that says 'please stare at me' and flirting? If you want her to be gentle and kind, you need to drop her unkind/gentle traits like being violent, impatient, fierce, short tempered, teasing and blunt--not one of those things is at all gentle or at all kind. If you want her to be flirty then drop the things about not liking boys or wanting to hide that she likes romance. She dresses sexy and flirts. That is pretty openly letting people know she's into romance. It's almost like you've designed her exclusively for romance but are trying to make it seem like you didn't? But in the end, it's just contradictory. LoL. It's 100% okay to have a flirty character or a dreamy romantic. The only thing you can't do is pick out a male character and have her instantly start targeting only him. But otherwise, you're definitely allowed to have a flirt. Just wanted to clarify that in case you were worried. Right now, she has so many completely conflicting traits that I just kind of worry about how you're going to be able to RP all these contradictions. 8( Finally, did you know you used almost the exact same wording for her painting talent, as Angela's painting talent? ^_^; This may have been unintentional but try to refrain from copying other profiles because it can be really frustrating for other RPers to give their character what they feel is a fun, unique trait, only to have that same thing pop up on another profile. I am not at ALL against Renee being an artist, or characters having similar traits. But when anyone (this isn't just you--it goes for every person in the guild) uses nearly identical wording, that makes it seem intentional. So just please watch out for that. I totally get that it's possible to do that without realizing it because wording can just get stuck in the head. But watch out for that kind of thing, okies? =3
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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2012 7:26 pm
syllphiel_enna ｐｒｅｓｅｎｔｓ. . . 
Night Guillotine
ｄｅｐａｒｔｍｅｎｔ: Music
Music Teacher
"Let's open ourselves to new horizons!"⋆ ⋆ ⋆ＴＨＥ ＲＥＳＯＮＡＮＣＥ ＳＫＩＥＳ ＦＩＬＥＳ⋆ ⋆ ⋆ ｃｌａｓｓｉｆｉｅｄ ❥ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅ: Ni-chi ❥ａｇｅ: 23 years old ❥ｇｅｎｄｅｒ: Female ❥ｈｅｉｇｈｔ ａｎｄ ｗｅｉｇｈｔ: 156cm./55kg. ❥ｂｌｏｏｄ ｔｙｐｅ: AB ❥ｓｅｘｕａｌ ｏｒｉｅｎｔａｔｉｏｎ: Straight ❥ｓｔａｔｕｓ: Single ❥ｂｉｒｔｈｄａｙ: 30th of January ❥ｚｏｄｉａｃ ｓｉｇｎ : Aquarius ❥ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌｉｔｙ:
(under construction)
❥ｃｈａｒａｃｔｅｒ ｆｌａｗｓ: ✖ Childish
✖ Pushy
✖ Brutal
✖ ❥ａｂｉｌｉｔｙ: (ONLY 1 SKILL AND PLEASE ELABORATE) ❥ｔａｌｅｎｔｓ:
Playing Instruments
Composing Songs
Aikido
❥ｂｉｏ: (rough bio only)
Night came from a family who owns an Aikido school. Christine, Night's mother used to be a known pianist and composer before she became mentally ill after losing her supposed to be son due to a miscarriage. Upon losing the expected heir, the burden of the family was placed on Night's shoulder at a young age.
Growing up, she wasn't able to get to mingle much with children her age because of the rigorous training Night has to go through to become a master of their art. Her only way to (mentally) get out of the repeated cycle of her life is to go to the storeroom which is located in the deep part of the mansion where her mother kept her instruments.
She would go to the storeroom to get instruments during afternoon breaks when her father is busy teaching the 'normal' students and play with her mother. Music has also been Night's way to bond with her since Christine only responds properly when she hears something related to the field she loved so much. It's not that her father is absolutely against music, it's just that, it reminds him of what his wife used to be and thus his guilt feelings as to what came about his beloved haunts him whenever he sees Night play.
Her father molded her to be the next head of the school only to find out that she has chosen another career path which is to become a music teacher. She had an argument with her father and decided to leave the mansion to pursue her chosen path.
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✔ Treetops and balcony
✔ Music Scores
✔ Stuff toys
✔ Spicy food
✔ Random happenings
✔ Events
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✖ ❥ｅｘｔｒａ ｉｎｆｏｒｍａｔｉｏｎ:
(under construction)
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 19, 2012 10:36 pm
Colleen is approved, obviously. XD
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2012 10:03 pm
Hey girl! I noticed that you have edited your character but wasn't sure if you were finished. The only thing that seems incomplete is the husbandry thing? If she's finished, you can consider her approved. Just one note--be sure you're aware her green hair is dyed green. With everyone as Humans we're going to be mostly keeping everyone's hair to normal colors. Anyone with really off the wall colors like green or purple or blue--they'll all be considered to have dyed their hair. =3 Otherwise, if she's finished, you can post up a profile thread. Her dorm roommate will be Churuine. ^^
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 6:43 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Hey girl! I noticed that you have edited your character but wasn't sure if you were finished. The only thing that seems incomplete is the husbandry thing? If she's finished, you can consider her approved. Just one note--be sure you're aware her green hair is dyed green. With everyone as Humans we're going to be mostly keeping everyone's hair to normal colors. Anyone with really off the wall colors like green or purple or blue--they'll all be considered to have dyed their hair. =3 Otherwise, if she's finished, you can post up a profile thread. Her dorm roommate will be Churuine. ^^ Just finished her :3 I added that her hair is dyed,along with finishing her husbandy =3
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 7:07 pm
Your Bunnie Babe StrawberryZ0mbie Hey girl! I noticed that you have edited your character but wasn't sure if you were finished. The only thing that seems incomplete is the husbandry thing? If she's finished, you can consider her approved. Just one note--be sure you're aware her green hair is dyed green. With everyone as Humans we're going to be mostly keeping everyone's hair to normal colors. Anyone with really off the wall colors like green or purple or blue--they'll all be considered to have dyed their hair. =3 Otherwise, if she's finished, you can post up a profile thread. Her dorm roommate will be Churuine. ^^ Just finished her :3 I added that her hair is dyed,along with finishing her husbandy =3 Alrighty. =3 She's approved now. <3
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 8:33 pm
I finished my other character's profile. If there's any problems, let me know =3
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 9:15 pm
ChocolateXCheese ｐｒｅｓｅｎｔｓ. . . 
Reiner Holt
ｄｅｐａｒｔｍｅｎｔ: Music Department
Student
"..."⋆ ⋆ ⋆ＴＨＥ ＲＥＳＯＮＡＮＣＥ ＳＫＩＥＳ ＦＩＬＥＳ⋆ ⋆ ⋆ ｃｌａｓｓｉｆｉｅｄ ❥ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅ: None ❥ａｇｅ: 16 ❥ｇｅｎｄｅｒ: Male ❥ｈｅｉｇｈｔ ａｎｄ ｗｅｉｇｈｔ: 176 cm; 69 kg ❥ｂｌｏｏｄ ｔｙｐｅ: A ❥ｓｅｘｕａｌ ｏｒｉｅｎｔａｔｉｏｎ: Straight ❥ｓｔａｔｕｓ: Single ❥ｂｉｒｔｈｄａｙ: March 2 ❥ｚｏｄｉａｃ ｓｉｇｎ : Pisces ❥ａｐｐｅａｒａｎｃｅ: Reiner is average in appearance with short brown hair and dark colored eyes. He’s always wearing sweaters, coats, and scarves no matter the weather, keeping the lower half of his face covered at all times to hide the wires and bruising. But, despite that, he is an open book, his expressions easy to read by his eyes alone. Although, he does have a bad habit of staring at peoples’ shoes instead of their faces. ❥ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌｉｔｙ: Reiner feels that he is insignificant, but he doesn’t dwell on that at all. He tries hard in everything he does to make up for that, but is always cautious not to step on anyone’s toes in the process, often ending up inadequate because of that.. He has never been the social type, avoiding confrontations because he had a tendency to freeze up around others, and the only “friends” he had only bothered to get to know him for their own purposes, but he didn’t mind in the slightest. He’s accustomed to having every hour of every day planned out in advance, so when things happen and move things out of order, he’s prone to small nervous breakdowns. He’s much more at ease around others when they speak and don’t expect any sort of response from him, because he absolutely refuses to even attempt to speak. Very rarely and only when absolutely necessary will he respond, but usually in short, one-syllable words. ❥ｃｈａｒａｃｔｅｒ ｆｌａｗｓ: ✖ Withdrawn
✖ Self-conscious
✖ Perfectionist - Not in the sense that he’s obsessed with making things perfect, but if he sees something unusual or a flaw of some sort, it will bother him to no end.
✖ Nervous
✖ Squeamish - Blood, dirt, guts, slime, fingernails, feet, etc. There are many, many things that disturb him. ❥ａｂｉｌｉｔｙ: ❥ｔａｌｅｎｔｓ: Reiner can play the violin. That’s it. He isn’t too spectacular at it, but he tries. ❥ｂｉｏ: Reiner’s life was fairly average for the most part, his father working as an accountant and his mother working as a waitress at a nearby restaraunt. He was often home alone, and it was rare for him to see both of his parents home at the same time since one had the day shift, and the other the night. Since neither were satisfied with how their lives turned out and could not find a way to make it any better, they let all their hopes ride on Reiner.
They pressured him in everything he did, wanting him to strive for perfection, and achieve nothing less. Not wanting to disappoint them, and also naturally being very diligent, he did the best that he could. Since he basically relied on his parents’ decisions, he ended up trying many different ‘hobbies’ (all of which his parents wanted him to use for a career). His favorite by far was music, though he wasn’t too great at it. He would practice more than anyone and try hard, but he found it difficult to put any passion into it.
Things were already difficult enough with the stress his parents forced him under, but then he just had to throw his unluckiness onto the heap of troubles. As he was taking a shortcut while running some errands for his mother, he just happened to bump into the wrong person. He was quickly mugged by a man who clearly had no intention of letting him live to tell the tale. The mugger’s brass knuckles did a number on him, but he survived and was grateful for that.
Having been so used to his life being a set path for him, it was a very rough bump in the road. Due to his self-consciousness, ever since then he has worn scarves to cover up the wires holding his jaw in place while the bones set, often wearing warmer clothes as an excuse to justify the scarf. His parents felt sympathy, but at the same time, did not want to baby him. So, they pushed him twice as hard and sent him to The Resonance Skies Academy to pursue a career in music. ❥ｌｉｋｅｓ:
✔ Organization/Schedules
✔ Peace
✔ Talkative people (he’s a natural born listener)
✔ Scarves
✔ Cold weather
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✖ Heat
✖ Awkward silences
✖ Chaos
✖ Open areas
✖ Being the center of attention ❥ｅｘｔｒａ ｉｎｆｏｒｍａｔｉｏｎ:
- Though he usually wears normal, solid color scarves, he’s accumulated a large collection of unusual ones that he keeps just because (including some with hearts, polkadots, sequins, etc.).
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 9:44 pm
Phaea I finished my other character's profile. If there's any problems, let me know =3 PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFT. Mhai said she was going to do it. *baps her* I will have a look at him. emotion_donotwant I'm sure he's fine; your characters are always perfect. <3
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 9:46 pm
Approvalsauce. =3 You know the drill. XD
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 9:51 pm
Approved. His roommate will be Peter and stuffs. Um....sign the rules thread. D=< And post in the profiles forum and what not. emotion_awesome
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 9:53 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Approvalsauce. =3 You know the drill. XD Awwwww~ <3 Thank you! Setting him up right now xD.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 9:55 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Approved. His roommate will be Peter and stuffs. Um....sign the rules thread. D=< And post in the profiles forum and what not. emotion_awesome HA! Beat you by a minute. >=D Eheheheh.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 10:45 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Phaea I finished my other character's profile. If there's any problems, let me know =3 PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFT. Mhai said she was going to do it. *baps her* I will have a look at him. emotion_donotwant I'm sure he's fine; your characters are always perfect. <3 GAAAAHH! Dx I'm sorry.. bap me good! D8 I shall do it next time *rolls at the floor whinning*
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 7:24 pm
Pint-sized weirdo is approved. emotion_awesome
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