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SilentSerenata

PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:04 am


Pad Chief
Sukyan is still phonetical (imagine saying it. It's Su-Kee-Yan. Basically scan) I looked at it and found that Investigate had a Japanese equivalent. It's not a problem just a future consideration. I don't mind adding the Kido in its current state at all.


If the name is still causing an issue then I have a suggestion (a bit wacky though): Onmyōdō (陰陽道) or Inyodo, which both translate to ‘The Way of Yin and Yang'.

This basically reads to me as the flow of life in any kind of living being.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:21 am


Don't worry too much about it. It's just something I want people to watch out for in future submissions.

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SilentSerenata

PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:34 am


Kido Number: 40

Kido Class: Bakudo

Kido Name: Satetsu (砂鉄; Iron Sand)

Kido Chant: Thy journey is done, thy night and day are one. Old King, old soles, thou shall bind thee!

Appearance: Spiritual energy forms as small particles of sand which eventually accumulate around the victim’s legs, first from their feet then up to their thighs.

Effects: The sand immobilises the victim’s legs by strongly binding them onto any surface with an iron grasp. It is simply a mass of spiritual energy and thus will not require any terrestrial ground for the sand to bind onto. It can therefore also form whilst the victim is in the air.

Satetsu can be used on multiple targets at once though its power diminishes with numbers greater than 10. Targets must lie within a radius of 20 meters (approximately 66 feet) from the castor.

Flavour Text: Displaced on a troublesome mission to eliminate a gathering of Hollows, or “small fries” as he had called them, a 8th Seat Shinigami decided to immobilise all his enemies in one swift go so that he could enjoy his Sake for the rest of the day.

Credited to: SilentSerenata  
PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:38 am


It's a very strong Kido actually since it can immobilise a great number of enemies in one go.

I'd say bump up the number by about thirty.

Unless of course I'm misunderstanding the strength of the hold. If the hold is weak and would serve only as a short deterrent for enemies then just bump it up by ten ranks.

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SilentSerenata

PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:48 am


Pad Chief
It's a very strong Kido actually since it can immobilise a great number of enemies in one go.

I'd say bump up the number by about thirty.

Unless of course I'm misunderstanding the strength of the hold. If the hold is weak and would serve only as a short deterrent for enemies then just bump it up by ten ranks.


Thanks for the feedback; I bumped it about 20.
EDITED - refer to above.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 1:51 am


Okay I'll add it in now. I had to shift it up a number because 40 was already taken though.

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keichaos

PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 10:11 am


I saw the discussions about naming Kido in Japanese. Are we required to make a Japanese translation for the Kido's, Pad...?
PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 10:22 am


Nope. Else I'd be breaking my own rule.

It's just when you name then in Japanese I'd like you to (It still isn't a rule) be mindful of the fact that phonetic Japanese words (like Hamburger) aren't exactly worth translating and so you should make the choice when naming Kido whether to use an English name or use synonyms in Japanese.

It still isn't a rule though.

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keichaos

PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 10:40 am


Oh, okay. I just got a little nervous about it since I didn't want to cause more trouble for you about the renaming and all.

I've skimmed this other Kido something about a poison? Do we have a poison-based Kido now...?
PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 10:43 am


Yeah. There are a few Kido which have poison abilities.

Bare in mind of course they'll never be as good as a Zanpakto for poison.

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keichaos

PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 11:00 am


Oh, understood. So, here's another present for you, Pad. Although, I'm still blank on the anti-poison Chiyudō.


Kidō Number: 30
Kidō Class: Chiyudō
Kidō Name: Burst Recovery
Kidō Chant: "In this dark night, let the man who remains lost be brought back to the warm light. Thirty-five steps. Twenty-two hands. Ten banes. One heart."
Appearance: When this Chiyudō is conjured, a massive burst of light emanates from both arms of the conjurer. This white light will basically channel down from the caster's arms and into the chest of the patient, where the arms of the healer is advised to be at. The light then "enters" the chest of the patient and takes immediate effect.
Effects: The Chiyudō basically functions like a medical defibrillator in the Human World. The light, which comes from a condensed and concentrated amount of Reiryoku, channels from the healer and into the patient's chest. Therefore, as soon as the light manifestation enters the system of the patient, it sends a massive jolt of electricity that allows the patient's heart to essentially restart whence it stopped from doing so. While this is one of the low-level Chiyudō, it is not commonly advised to be performed by inexperienced healers for an uncontrolled amount of Reiryoku injected to the body of the patient may cause his/her internal systems to fully collapse beyond potential recovery.
Flavour Text: It was one of the most unpopular Chiyudō upon its earlier conception. Developed by Shinigami medic Mayuko Omaeda, it caused quite a scandal in its first official development. Since it was not well-developed in its early stages, it caused several patients' deaths due to improper Reiryoku control. This was due to massive amounts of energy coursed through the body of the patients thus causing their inner organs to basically "melt". Mayuko, although charged for these accidents, was not taken to prison due to the Gotei's interest of its further development. Several years later, she finished the development of the Chiyudō to what it is today. She was later on awarded for her efforts on introducing what became a very important Chiyudō.
Credited to: keichaos
PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 11:04 am


Oh man you know I love new Kido.

It's a nice one. I'll add it in soon.

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keichaos

PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 11:07 am


Thanks! 4laugh

How's your Hado and Bakudo coming along?
PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 11:09 am


I had a member approve them and then just approved them myself.

I'm going to work on the artillery division Kido tomorrow. Not that everyone can't use it but it's made for them mostly. It'll include things like mortar fire Kido and Kido mines.

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keichaos

PostPosted: Tue Jul 10, 2012 11:19 am


Oh... Artillery Kido?

I'm throwing you one emergency Bakudo. It's a high-level one, Pad. So I'm going to push my luck.
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