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The Wild Hunt
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 22, 2013 7:50 am


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                                          Name: Christian ✸ Uzumaki
                                          Nickname: Nothing!
                                          Age: 17
                                          Ethnicity: Greek
                                          Height: 5'11"
                                          Weight: 162 lbs
                                          Personality: Strange, Bubbly, Repressed, Heroic, Righteous (Should be noted that he's partially autistic)

                                          Sexuality: Homosexual
                                          Family: All the Uzumaki ♥

                                          Theme Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lcvIAgrLXjY
                                          Nindo: " I fight for justice because I love life, and life can only be sustained by those with morals. "
                                          Background Info:

                                          Other Info In a loving relationship with Kaiza Akimichi. Hates people who like to start trouble, or people who enjoy killing, or anyone who disregards life; he's a very compassionate person and really does hope to make everyone around him happy


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                                          Strength: Sealing, sealing, sealing. Christian is exceptional in defense. Not only is he the most efficient and most talented sealer alive today, but everything else along with that is enough for him to be considered the best defensive shinobi out of anyone.
                                          Weakness: Offense. His only offense is pretty much Joukai, that's it.
                                            ↬ Fears
                                          Fears a lot of things: too much to list.
                                          Village: Kumogakure
                                          Rank: Raikage ☁
                                          Class: Sealing Sage
                                          Bloodline: Uzumaki
                                            ↬ Stage
                                          Bloodline Head (mastered)
                                          Clan: Joukai

                                          Chakra Points: 365

                                          Missions Complete:
                                            S -
                                            A -
                                            B -
                                            C -
                                            D -
                                            E -


                                          Opponents Defeated:
                                          Battle Theme: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f3gH_iNTe94


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                                          Jutsu List:
                                            ↬ Number learned
                                            ↬ Number to be learned

                                          Ninjutsu
                                            Sealing

                                          a c a d e m y
                                            • Technique Name: Sealing Key Release
                                            • Technique Name: The Prisoner's Key

                                          g e n i n
                                            • Technique Name: A Survivalist's Eye
                                            • Technique Name: Mind Specter Technique

                                          c h u u n i n
                                            • Technique Name: Ghost Shadow Technique
                                            • Technique Name: Advanced Arsenal Sealing
                                            • Technique Name: Hidden Object Shell
                                            • Technique Name: The Prisoner's Binds
                                            • Ban (番 To keep watch)
                                            • Sai (塞, Restrain) —
                                            • Seki (斥, Repulse) --
                                            • Kyakko (曲光, Curving Light) -
                                            • Otomasen (音ません Soundless)
                                            • Kyōmon (鏡門, Mirror Door) —
                                            • Hiku (引くto pull)

                                          j o u n i n
                                            • Higashinishi Minamikita (東西 南北 East,west,south,north)
                                            • kuramasu (暗ます hide, slip away)
                                            • Owaru (終わる to come to an end)
                                            • Kakushitsuijaku (摑趾追雀, Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows) —
                                            • Tozansho (と残暑,Lingering summer heat)
                                            • Fuuinka (Fire Sealing)
                                            • Fuuinsui (Water Sealing)
                                            • Fuuindo (Earth Sealing)
                                            • Fuuinrai (Lightning Sealing)
                                            • Fuuinkaze (Wind Sealing)

                                          s a n n i n
                                            • sumiyakaji (速やか時 to speed time)
                                            • Technique Name: The Prisoner's Cage
                                            • Technique Name: Time Destruction Escape
                                            • Technique Name: The Clown's Mask
                                            • Technique Name: The Clown's Death
                                            • Technique Name: The Freedom of the Beast
                                            • Technique Name: Eight Trigams Sealing Style
                                            • Technique Name: Space-Time Calling Technique
                                            • Technique Name: Flying Thunder God


                                            Joukai

                                          a c a d e m y
                                          g e n i n
                                            • Holy Fire
                                            • Hiton: Yari (Light Release: Spears)
                                            • Blinding Fist Technique
                                            • Heaven String Impalement

                                          c h u u n i n
                                            • Lens of Light
                                            • The Light of Day
                                            • Light Twister Technique

                                          j o u n i n
                                            • Sentient Life
                                            • The Heaven's Garrison
                                            • The Brutal Sun
                                            • Light Arrow Multiplication
                                            • Hiton: Jouteiwana (Light Release: God's Snare)

                                          s a n n i n
                                            • The Rising Sun
                                            • The Sun Sets
                                            • Six Spears of Divine Absolution
                                            • In His Holy Name
                                            • Hiruko's Bow

                                            Taijutsu

                                          a c a d e m y
                                          g e n i n
                                          c h u u n i n
                                          j o u n i n
                                          s a n n i n
                                          Second Sub-Element
                                            Element 1

                                          a c a d e m y
                                          g e n i n
                                          c h u u n i n
                                          j o u n i n
                                          s a n n i n

                                              Other Info:


                                            Custom Jutsu
                                            Perfect Screen] 20-30 chakra
                                            This ability starts off by Christian waving his hand in front of him, as many times as he wants. Once he does this, a shield like screen ranging from three feet tall to seven will appear in front of him. The trick is that he can manipulate this shield with both hands. He can elongate it with his fingers, move it sideways with his left hand, and curve it with his right hand. This is essentially a support technique that he'll use when fighting in groups, or to fend off attacks as he runs or prepares techniques. He must be using at least one hand to maintain this shield. If neither of his hands are focused on the shield, it has five seconds before it's destroyed. It can be regained control of in this time. The length limit of the shield is 15 feet. Physical attacks that hit this shield are met with recoil and bounce back.


                                          Style:
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 22, 2013 10:04 am


Character Name: Kleine Heiland
Activity (on a scale of 1-10: 11

Character Rank: Jounin

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                                                                    Step One: The Wrath of the Old World

                                                                    No Particular Day, No Particular Month

                                                                    My name is Shinsei Karnata. I am the Shogun of Hi no Kuni, the lord of the Fire Nation and the leader of the Heiland Clan. They call me "the Terrible," because that's what I am. Or perhaps only by their perspective. What am I that they lack? That causes them to raise words beyond the titles that follow my birthright? It is my freedom. I have always been one to do as I desire, to abandon the trivialities of laws and rules. I have always been one to act based on what brings me pleasure. With elevated position the stakes rise, but not far beyond what they were before.

                                                                    As a young man I was known as Kleine. It was my birth name so I had no choice but to accept it. It brought me pride, you could say. It was a sort of primitive pleasure that I buried deep inside of me and did not speak of; that my name could be attached to feelings, of the past life and the past family in it. Eventually as my road developed and the obstacles changed, I gained a new family that came with my lineage: Karnata. I was no longer a Heiland to anyone, only the heir apparent and all that such entailed. I met with the lavished, posh bastards and their manipulative whores and professed my disgust with them. They schemed to try and kill me, favoring themselves for the position, but they could not. It was so cold and dark in their cells that they began to rest in for all time after their schemes were discovered. No one gave them food, either. They lived in there only with each other. They all faded to dust and died, unwilling to make the commitment to eat the flesh that they could.

                                                                    My reign began with the death of many people that considered themselves great, influential and powerful. Family members that didn't consider me family in the dark, but rose to call me brother when it suited them. Brother. I am not that. I was not that. My only brother is a trickster and a weakling but even he is better than what they were. Nobility and birthright are not what make a man. The moment people begin to think that they're more than human simply by name rather than their actions, they will fall from prominence and burrow into a blade. I knew this. I know this. I always have.

                                                                    When I first sat on the throne within the Sacred City, I felt my place desolate and dull. I charged people from all over the land to change the foundation of the land, to cultivate the people and teach them of a different way to live. One that tolerated the strong and abused the weak, one that reveled in war and pain; it was as if the Gods were striking down the miscarriages that walked across the realm. The Leaf would be harrowed with fire and blood for years to come until it was ready. It will be the land of the powerful and the worthy. Without strength and discipline you won't have food or a place to go, or arms to embrace you or laws to protect you. You prove yourself in this one life of yours or you die and meet your end.

                                                                    I am the flail of God. I am his executioner, the man who wields the blade that will divide what we believe and what we see. I am the wrath of the old world, come to destroy the new.

                                                                    Step Two: The Outside

                                                                    11, 1st Month, The Cold March

                                                                    I was once told that there's a billion different people in the world, with a thousand different complex emotions in each of them, and the complexities are ever-evolving and growing to refine themselves even more from within each man and woman. It seemed like people must be the most interesting of all animals, so attuned to their intellect that they create new worlds inside of their heads. But then I looked to the east, and then to the west, and I saw that their worlds are not so complex. Their stories do not even match up to the marvel of the world around them. Their illusions are cast upon them by means of desperation and fear. Their compassion is fueled by idiocy and simple-thinking. If we were to allow your average person to rule the fate of the world, then we would all die in a matter of years. They are not intelligent. They are only animals wearing masks, playing at men. When I realized this, I was completely stunned. The feeling of my delusion being cast aside brought me some form of pain -- you could say -- but also an intense pleasure. There was no need to allow my inhibitions to survive or thrive, and I felt free to simply reshape the world as I felt appropriate. So it began: the first campaign.

                                                                    We moved against the River Country. They didn't see it, how could they? Thousands of years of peaceful coexistence and then -- to their immediate dismay -- their wives had their wombs cut open with their children torn out, their sons were being enslaved and daughters thrown into the bay and told to swim. Swim, something you don't know how to do. Persevere. If you can't survive then you die, and you are of no consequence to the world.

                                                                    The men were nailed to the walls of the city, and I walked around the orb time and time again looking into their eyes. Seeing who had worth, who had strength. I refused to allow myself to believe that not even one man could be so far detached from their origin. In the face of them all, I ended up only picking one. He was only barely of age and had a weakness in his expression, but a fire that seared into him; his mind could turn the others to ash. He was a thinker, an inquirer, a wise man who could admit that he knew nothing. I asked him later that night: what do you believe, Ryuu? And he told me, "I believe in the earth and that it spans so that the two sides meet. I believe in the mountains and the deep floor of the seas. I believe the sky is blue, at least to my eyes. I believe that the sun often rises in the east and sets in the west at the fall of the equinox. I believe that I am alive, and that you're alive, and that people dream. And not much else."

                                                                    From that moment, I knew that he would be my wisest man. He quickly rose to my right hand, Hashao on my left, and a legion of soldiers and slaves behind me. My horde grew and my enemies thinned. I began to set my eyes on my spirit, so that it may be at peace for the battle that would come next; one that duly involved the fate of the world.

                                                                    Step Three: Imitations of Immortality

                                                                    26, 3rd Month, Dawn of the Lotus

                                                                    With nothing to unify them, my people will surely break apart. It may not be now. It may not be in the time where my son reigns or his son after. But the time will come when fear and authority are lost on the people and they will rise up and split as they once did. Some nations build their community based on tolerance, some on money and opportunity, some on faith and duty. Some factor in all, some factor in none and are fit to expire. Ultimately it all boils down to fear in some way, but that does not consume it all. There is a special element that is required to truly appeal to another human. It is applying logic and emotion to one plate, an intersection, a meeting between wisdom and heart. But how can such a thing exist in a country that only admires strength and nothing else? Perhaps you could say that our ability to ignore other factors implies great tolerance? Perhaps you could say that it implies opportunity for those who wouldn't otherwise have it?

                                                                    One thing I've always been unsure of is how to really understand a human's mind. It can often seem like a man has been broken and reserved, consumed by another person's will. Eventually however humans always choose themselves over others. If I can build admiration and respect for the strong and the worthy, instead of simply hatred and scorn for the lesser of men, then perhaps I can build a community spirit and also cater to the self-interest so evident in people. That will require the media, the manipulation of the masses and their thoughts, constantly directing it to the feats of others. It will make them strive to become better and if not, they will recognize their peers. It is the beginning.

                                                                    Education is required, generations of it, in order for people to leave behind what they have and remember the new order. But even then, they will look to the other nations and see people who claim to be free. And the other nations will declare us an enemy and pressure our people to think differently. It will not be enough. So with that in mind I have one remaining alternative.

                                                                    My people, the Konohakara, will believe that they are the apex of all humans. They are superior to the rest, blessed by God to send a message to the world. We will take slaves from other nations and create hatred and disrespect within our own borders. In the face of that, the brunt of my people will feel as if they are being locked into a corner by hordes of clueless peasants that fall jealous to their divinity. They will decide that -- naturally -- it is their right to war, to fight, to judge the fate of the world. And they will be eternally loyal to the man who perpetuates this belief. Eventually the foreign slaves within my nation will perish as they will have bore no children, leaving behind thought of unnecessary rebellion. In their wake my people will educate their own children on what it means to be from the Fire Nation, and my Empire will reign in immortality.

                                                                    That's my gambit. I can't afford to attempt at anything else. I need to think differently than the others before me. I'm not trying to create a stable, peaceful nation, but a land of hateful beasts with no regard for others. How can that be accomplished by love and community? Tell me that.

                                                                    14, 4th Month, The Intermission of the Lotus

                                                                    Do you ever wonder why you do what you do? What fuels you to act the way you feel is right -- your conscience, your culture, your lessons, your better judgment? I've always felt like it was something beyond that, a singular purpose known as self-sustenance. Was not man designed to permeate his own existence? Love, loyalty and protection -- people teach that they must all be mutual, that they must be emotions and desires shared by the ones that make up the whole. Have you wondered why that is? Why humans have morals that essentially abandon the idea of selflessness? It's because all of these 'positive' emotions are fueled by a greater desire. Men 'love and protect' women for the sake of physical pleasure and the creation of their sons and daughters. Women 'love and obey' men for the sake of protection and sustenance.

                                                                    Each hint of knowledge such as this is important to learn for a man such as myself. Whether they be concluded by means of science, reasoning, logic or even a spiritual projection, every thought that throws itself into the fray known as my mind is considered by me a gift from God. I have come to a complete understanding with Him; I finally see who He is. He has showed me all of the doors, and what is behind all of the doors. I am resolved to open each of them and experience their realities for myself.

                                                                    In my future I see a great, white light. I don't know where it leads. Perhaps home. Not Konoha, not Kusa or Yuki, but a place that I can build of my own will and shape the way I please. A place where the world can be reimagined. I hope that such a place exists, for although I am long from it, I yearn for it more and more with each passing day. I imagine pale creamy sands and clearer shores than the ones here.

                                                                    9, 5th Month, The Fall of the Lotus

                                                                    I saw a great statue of a man. It was in memory of the Hierophant of Kana, who founded the religion of the River Country. It is the worship of the great God of the Spring, a female entity that guides water and crops to the hands of the farmers. When I looked to my left and saw my generals, I commanded to them: tear it down.

                                                                    This is not a land that can worship the primitive creatures of the time before. Who is this river goddess? What relevance does she have? Does she also dwell in the land of non-existence alongside Amaterasu, Izanagi, Izanami and the rest? If not, then she'll have to prove it by smiting me down from my perch. I've been endangering these people, carving them out by the tons of millions. A chaotic maelstrom constantly approaches them, and I wish to look inside of their head to see the way they feel. How does it feel to watch your family torn from you, your friends, your nation, your identity? And to know that probably, you're next. And if not, an existence below the boot of the ones that took your life from you. Is that not the ultimate despair? How does such a thing feel? Is it as my family once felt when the hordes of shinobi invaded their land?

                                                                    It is a constant cycle of war and demise, so easily reciprocated. The one thing that is complex about it all is why it happens? If humans are fueled by self-sustenance, then what is the need for war and hatred? Why do they, and no other creature, feel something beyond survival? Why does it fuel them to endanger their survival, as well? It's not even a liberating factor. It exists solely for the purpose of degrading them and destroying the peace they fail at trying to create. Was it perhaps once different? Maybe one particular man -- such as myself -- existed outside of the norm and made the first act of war, forever creating a world of fear and hatred. If so, then I should like to meet him, and offer my gratitude for his efforts in creating the ideal world.

                                                                    Step Four: It's All A Big Dream

                                                                    2, 7th Month, the Second Summer Cycle

                                                                    My name is Kozuke, a slave from the River Country. A month ago I was taken by a Konohakara raiding party, one that was consequently led by the Shogun himself; Shinsei Karnata. He looked me in the eyes like he did the rest, but more, he sent his palms flying over my skin. I was 'ideal' by his words and so he took me for a slave.

                                                                    "Fetch me a different cloth, Kozuke," he commanded me. "Why?" I asked. I had become quite attuned to the way the man's mind worked. He enjoyed being asked questions, explaining his reasoning, letting others look into his mind. Perhaps because he thought it was so utterly perfect. This story wasn't going to be one that I'd enjoy. I heard only his voice. When he actually arrived and let me gaze upon him from the hallway, he was completely covered in red; blood. His skin was red, his hair, his eyelashes. He had a towel tied around his waist, implying he'd just gotten out of the shower. Sort of a waste of time if you were going to smear yourself again.

                                                                    He smiled at me, and told me: "I killed Moki." At that moment, if this was even just a few days prior, I would've immediately fell to my knees and began to cry. Moki was my best friend. He was the greatest, most loyal man I'd ever known. He wasn't that smart or attractive or strong, but he had a real passion for others that could never be replaced. And yet I found myself devoid of the power to feel anything but joy at where he'd gone. The afterlife, even if you only swum with the shinigami, was a better venue than the palace of this forlorn King.

                                                                    He stepped forward, and began to unwrap his towel from his waist. I stared blankly, and didn't move at all. I barely even breathed. When he was ultimately close, he removed the concealment and wrapped his bloodied body around mine. He asked: "Does that excite you?" He knew it didn't. He knew I hated it, hated him. Hated everything about him. But that only made him pursue me more. I don't know what it is that he wants from me, why he took my friends and has slaughtered them one by one. I don't get why he pursues me in such a manner, or pursues me at all. I just wish that I could be free again, perhaps even return home to help protect what little my people have left. I don't know. I just can't stand to be here anymore, with this man, this Shinsei Karnata. Kleine Heiland.

                                                                    Hours later, I'm looking at the ceiling. The Shogun sleeps beside me. I stand up and get myself dressed, hoping to find my way to my room before he opens his eyes. His torment only continues for as long as he can see me. If he can forget me -- if I can be cast from his sight -- he won't come bother me, at least not until he recalls from purely his morbid gut alone.

                                                                    When I'm in my room, I look back and begin to draw, begin to write. I start to detail my past experiences, and the ones I have now. I no longer complain about what I had, back when things were simple. I miss my little brother and my big sister, even though we used to fight all day and night over stupid things. I miss my mother even though she was a drunk, and my father even though he was never home. I miss my aunt and uncle even though they're sometimes a little crazy. I miss my grandmother who died in the raid, and my grandfather who died years before. I can't help but miss them all, I can't help but long for them to come back to me. I wish I could save them from whatever hell they reside, if they even still live at all.

                                                                    I painted Kleine Heiland all over sheets he offered me. I painted his face that contains a thousand years of hatred and pain. I painted his body that he uses to exploit mine. I drew the future I predict for him; with my brush, I slit his throat and tore him apart from page to page. He saw it and smiled at me. He came over me and did what he always did, and then took the pages to his room and hammered them in, one by one, day by day. He read my notebook as I slept, of how I longed for my family to return. He told me he'd find them for me. I told him, no -- please don't. I know what you'll do them. I asked him, why do you so deeply desire my hatred? Why does it make you go to the lengths that you have?

                                                                    He responded,

                                                                    Because I feel like it. And again, he overcame me. And again, he did what he always did. What he always did. What he always did. Again.

                                                                    I'm going insane. I can't take this anymore. I've come to a conclusion: take my own life, or let myself become absorbed by the evil. Embrace what he considers his devotion to me. Leave my old life and my old dreams behind. Live Konohakara. Die Konohakara.

                                                                    Step Five: It's All A Big Lie

                                                                    3, 7th Month, Second Summer Cycle

                                                                    My name is Miri, of the Tea Country.

                                                                    I remember the piercing gaze of the sun as it rose up in the sky and took its rightful place. My people always told me that the sun was a God, its wife a Goddess. At the dawn of every year -- the first day of the first month -- it would take the form of a mortal and attend a celebration with the people. We would play a game every year to determine just which man might be the sun himself, although it's always for fun and play -- we could never quite spot him out. Looking back now, I can't imagine that those days were anything more than a dream. This reality -- his reality -- is far different than those days.

                                                                    I will never forget my first sight when they came down upon us, as I laughed with my sister in the fields. I saw a horde of shinobi running down from our tall hill, throwing blades at us and screaming: charge, charge, charge.

                                                                    How could we ever be so naive to think that it wouldn't happen? That Konoha wouldn't come down on us bearing the same fangs as with the other nations?

                                                                    When it was all over, most of my family and friends laid dead. The young ones, the attractive ones, the smart ones, the strong ones -- we were kept alive. We were tied down and presented before "His Majesty", Shinsei. Most of us, even after being initially spared, died anyway. Some still lived, as slaves, as mongrels. I was taken as the Shogun's slave. Me. I was "chosen". He said from every city he razed, he took one person as his own as spoils, and if he couldn't find someone adequate... then he would kill every single person that still remained. He said that if the world ever wanted to survive him, that they would have to become ultimately strong. That they would have to all mirror me, and Kozuke, and Ritsu, and Kalati, and Oda, and Nara... the other slaves. They would all have to shape up into deadly weapons in the face of adversity. He said he dreamt of it.

                                                                    He dreamed of a day where the hordes of men came marching to his city, screaming his name, ready to remove him from the world. It showed that he had made his mark; he had created a generation of beasts to surpass their forefathers and beyond. I didn't bother asking why he wanted this. I didn't need to ask why, I already knew. He told me with the look in his eyes.

                                                                    He just felt like it. That's all there was to it. A man beyond all other men, a force of darkness that consumed not to survive, but to watch the darkness spread. He wanted a legacy. I understand that even the most complex of creatures have simple motivations. His was so simple that I couldn't even pity him for it. I only feared.

                                                                    If a person can enact such evil for something so trivial, then maybe there really is no hope left for the world. Maybe he's right and darkness will consume humanity, the people either becoming monsters to stop the monster, or taking up arms to join him. I can only imagine what such a reality would be like. Perhaps it would be much like my life right now, for your average person. It'd be full of fear and hopelessness. Yes, an absolute nightmare that cannot be escaped. I'm waiting for it to end. I'm waiting for him to end it. Because I can't. I have simple motivations too, and simple obstacles -- fear. I don't want the sun God and his wife to smite me, if I appear at their doorstep with a blade lodged into my own heart.

                                                                    This Empire is the dream of a man who could've hailed the greater good. He told me that when he was a child, he was loving and compassionate like no other. So what changed him? How can this all be as simple as a realization that God was evil? How can a blanket of light turn to a shroud of darkness with such a simple change of mind? There must be something else. There is something beyond this visage that calls itself Shinsei Karnata. Beyond the depths of what he wants us to see, there is a Kleine Heiland, and he is real and tormented by an affliction that I have never once seen.

                                                                    What we see is a lie. The dream. The reality. Everything. There is only one truth, and it is beyond our eyes. It is in the soul, a body that connects to the universe beyond.

                                                                    Step Finale: The Real You

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                                                                    "Kleine," she said. Her hair was dark black like the night sky. Her eyes were a summer sea color and she -- she was not from this world. She couldn't have been. She was too kind, too beautiful to be real. You remember that, don't you, Kleine? My son. She was your greatest friend as a child. She was my sister, and her name was Hysteria. "Auntie H!" You replied so jovially. You had known her to be such a bright face that was so full of love. Little did you know the deep issues embroiled into her soul that she and I both faced as the children we were.

                                                                    When I was a young boy growing up in the same palace you rest in today, my sister and I were the pride of the Fire Country. Our mother and father both loved us dearly and granted us much adoration. But there was another. It was our older brother, a b*****d son known as Kanu. He was the scorn of everyone around him, the sight of him triggering laughter in some, and hard gazes in others. You would've been so kind to him, back when you were a boy. You would've seen how much he hurt -- what pain he was in. I wasn't as kind or as wise as you were, and I only added salt to his wounds. Hysteria and I would tease him and bully him as if he were worse than filth. We were so horrible to him. We caused him so much misery. Why? Why did we do that?

                                                                    I turn my gaze to those days and can only feel regret. When I was younger however, there was a different feeling. My scorn for him became fear. One day as we grew older we realized that he had grown dark in the face of his misery. He had begun to dabble in the faith of Jashin, and he had learned the ways of the shinobi. He was the strongest of our family, quickly rising through the ranks and becoming a formidable opponent. He, like me, had two kekkei genkai -- Sharingan, and Heiland. He was absolutely dedicated to becoming as strong as he possibly could. We figured he wanted to escape the scorn and become a shinobi that could find respect. That was at first, at least. He began to evade us and when he saw us, he'd unleash rage and scare us even knowing the punishment for such offense. He grew more and more detached from us -- his own family.

                                                                    One day, he became so powerful that he was appointed to the rank of Sannin by the Hidden Leaf. And yet despite his raised stature, he tried as hard as he could to remain close to his family. He said he wanted to protect father. Around the same time, Hysteria began to grow exceptionally deranged. At first I didn't understand, but then I learned why.

                                                                    One night, as I lay in my room, he came to me and grabbed me by the neck. He pressed me against the mattress, and needless to say he invaded my body. He kept whispering to me, There's nothing you can do, b*****d. You were just born wrong.

                                                                    Words I used to repeat to him.

                                                                    I could say nothing of it. I began to notice the little things he did and why he did them -- his late night patrols, his examination of all the rooms. He was setting up traps, chakra signals, all sorts of things. We no longer had privacy in our own home. He was constantly watching, waiting for my sister and I to slip.

                                                                    I fought hard and kept trying to find ways to outdo him. Eventually I realized that the only way was to train myself, and I sought guidance under many great masters and quickly rose to prominence. There eventually came a day where I was stronger than him, perhaps as a gesture from God to save me from this hell. When the time came where I faced him, however, Hysteria was damaged beyond what could be fixed. She had become so absolutely distorted that reality was no longer the realm she walked on; he caressed her in her dreams, and in her sight she could see his body engaging with hers. She was so constantly afraid that she was going to die, that I was going to die, that mother and father were going to die. Even after the threat had gone.

                                                                    I took my brother's eyes and gained the eternal mangekyo sharingan. I became a warrior with absolutely no comparison.

                                                                    Eventually, Hysteria and I moved to the Heiland Compound to get away from our past. She never really recovered, however, not until I fathered you. There was something in your eyes that she so adored -- I don't know what it was, but you made her feel safe again. She began to return to normal, and she treated you like her own child, regardless of all your mother's complaints. She saw the sun rise and set once more, and danced in the meadows like she'd always wanted to. I thought things had changed. I thought our lives could be happy.

                                                                    Perhaps it was a skewed reaction of yours to the adversity that you faced, or perhaps you did not even understand it, but I believe your compassion was a result of what you dealt with in the night. Her hands on you -- her abuse of you, as our brother did to her. I believe that further, when you discovered just what she had done, that was when your corruption began to set. All of the lust and anger appeared, and I could no longer recognize you as my son. But I still loved you. I always loved you. I never stopped. I hope that you can understand that this love carries a dream, as well; the hope that one day, you'll return to who you were before she did that to you. That you'll once again recognize him -- the real you.

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xxxxxxxxxxWU XING 金
[ Flesh and steel. ]


xxxxxHISTORY
Wei. That was his name; the name of the first man to invent the metal release, or the Wu Xing. Initially, he began as a famous earth element user somewhere in the Hidden Cloud. The land being full of rock and mineral, he was surrounded by nigh-infinite resources with which to fight his opponents. He quickly rose to the ranks of Sannin in the village, and then was sent off to do dangerous missions for the sake of his home.

Eventually, however, intel began to spread of his powers. They learned that earth was his [only] elemental affinity, and that he suffered in the areas of taijutsu, and genjutsu. They set up a trap to defeat him; a genjutsu that made the terrain appear as if all earthy substance, but when it was dispelled, he realized the grounds were made entirely of metal. No earth element user could manipulate metal, and the mass and thickness of the metal was too intense for him to pull earth out from beneath it. He was completely devoid of any ability, and left to rely only on his bukijutsu. Or so they thought.

At that moment, he stomped his foot against the metal in the ground, and felt through the materials from the outer layer to the inner core. He smirked, looked at them, and then from the ground, thousands of tons of the metal rose. Needless to say, he completed the mission. In its wake, a new element emerged.



xxxxxDESCRIPTION
A control of the "metal" release. This ability allows for the manipulation of metals so precious that no earth element user can use them. They can manipulate literally any metal as long as it is available, as well as convert earth into metals free of chakra.


xxxxxRULES
• You can only convert your own earth techniques into metal, unless you spend a reduced (by one) rank in cost to what their technique required. Once earth is converted into metal, you can freely manipulate it with high precision and speed.


xxxxxWEAKNESSES
• You may only be of the sage class. You are considered a metal sage, which prevents you from needing handseals for metal or earth abilities. However, this prevents you from learning any other elements.
• Metal counts as your sub-element.
• Your body is weaker to lightning when manipulating metal; it will conduct between your body and the link, hyper-enhancing the shock value and damage of the lightning technique. +1 rank



xxxxxSTRENGTHS
• +25% Chakra Reserves
• All metal techniques are boosted by a rank
• The metal element is aligned well with the use of the body; it is highly supplementary to weapons and the use of body motions. Because of this, you gain a +2 base to speed.



xxxxxPASSIVE ABILITIES
The Control: Your own earth techniques can all instantaneously be converted into the metal element, which applies the one rank bonus. Furthermore, all rock (excluding enemy-controlled earth) within ten feet of you can be converted into metal quite quickly.
Sticks and Stones: All large clusters of metal can be manipulated by simple body motions. All smaller clusters can be manipulated with your mind.
The Shift: A Wu Xing can manipulate the weight and size of metals. Because of this, they can change an outgoing projectile to be extremely large and heavy, or extremely light and only moderately sized. This can increase blunt damage, speed, strength, etc; it's up to your imagination. Obviously, smaller and lighter objects will be faster but will damage less upon impact.



xxxxxTECHNIQUES

Living Tremor Sense Passive
The Wu Xing can feel the vibrations against earth and metal within several hundred feet, at all times. This means they can easily predict movements around them, as well as counter other earth abilities being used against them. Their ability to sense the tremors in the earth is so attuned that they can literally feel differences in someone's heart rate and other such things; they can detect lies and tell if someone is ill.

The Shift: Watashi Passive-to-A
The Wu Xing can apply metal to their body, having it seamlessly cover and augment their muscles and bones. This is not nearly to the level of a Kaguya's bone manipulation. In fact, this is almost meant for an entirely singular purpose; they can use the shift, to quickly hasten their body momentarily and increase their flexibility, or increase the strength of their punches and their physical durability in exchange for speed. The shift is only minor, but can be enhanced by Innervate to increase capability. While this is active, the Ultralight Weight Technique cannot be used on yourself. This ability has the same exact statistic effect as the Ultralight, but can be done much more swiftly and can be shifted at will.

Innervate D-A
By applying energy to an object, the Wu Xing may enhance the metal within the object to increase its durability and power. So, for example, if you are throwing a shuriken, you could increase the power within it by using "innervate". This will make it similar to any other metal-faring technique. This ability allows the Wu Xing to be extremely diverse.

Ten Soldiers D-A
The Wu Xing will shape metal into ten discs, about twice as large as your average shuriken. These can be easily manipulated with their mind, and are of extreme precision and speed. They are meant to pressure the opponent into submission, or sweep in and finish opponents reeling from other attacks. They have intense cutting potential, and can be compared to flying saws, though they have a rough outward appearance.

Swift Grapple D-A
Most Wu Xing tend to have a sort of belt around them that contains more purified metals for their cardinal abilities, such as Ten Soldiers, and this. Swift Grapple is linked to their 'vine', a cord tied to their belt that can be extended up to sixty meters. It allows the Wu Xing to move around an area very quickly and with much more utility. It can also be hardened with chakra to either help it survive an attack, or to attack the opponent itself. The swift grapple moves extremely quickly, and can be flung at the opponent with high precision to catch them off guard. Furthermore, it can burrow into the ground and attack the opponent when they least expect it, quickly wrapping around them and easily crushing their body with its grip.

Steel Wall D-A
Quickly gathering all of the metal within the surrounding earth, you will create a steel frame in front of you, protecting you from attacks. The motions involve raising your right arm up, clenching your fist and holding it towards your chest. When you wish, you may launch this wall at the opponent by aiming your fist forward and intending to fling it at them. The size of the wall depends on the rank of the technique; about 10 feet tall and wide at C, and 100x100 at SS. It can be manipulated to spike outward or, really, anything.

Steel Cage D-A
Smashing your foot against the ground, you will send a row of steel at the opponent, which will chase them until it catches them (the moment of its arrival is the ideal time to dodge). Once it has caught them, steel spikes will spring around them, and will either imprison them or run right through their body.

Aki Smash D-A
Crafting metal around your arm, you will thrust your first forward and make impact with something. It can be an object, a person, or a technique. Regardless, a massive amount of kinetic force will be applied into the smash, which could easily break apart or disperse almost anything. This can also be done with your legs, but that is a rare case.

Falling Spider D-A
By quickly gathering the metal around you or beneath your feet, you may perform this ability. You will step back one, then rip the metal out beneath your feet, which will then lift you into the air. Your feet will remain balanced and connected to this object regardless of how it turns. This can be used to fling yourself forward for a short time, before it crashes hard against the ground. Used against enemies, this can be something of a steel monster flying at them, easily killing the unprepared. The impact damage will not hurt the metal manipulator, and they will seamlessly leap from the mass, perhaps even converting it to many blades to help finish a foe off.

Dancing Mad D-A
By continuously stomping on the ground with your feet, you will shatter the earth and metal around you, creating pillars of hunk metal floating in the air behind you. One after another, you may send these massive frames at the opponent, which will be strong, sturdy, and impact hard. This ability can also be used to send enemies around you off balance, as it sends tremors through the surrounding earth. You may also leap atop some of the levitating frames and have them act as footpads, flinging forward, a lesser version of the falling spider ability.

Stars Collide S
All of the precious metals within earth for miles around will begin to relieve themselves from their containment, squeezing out from the ground and rising to the sky. Quartz, emerald, sapphire, steel, iron, bronze, silver, copper, topaz, diamond, etc and beyond; all will rise to meet the sky. The Wu Xing can willingly omit earth within a certain radius, perhaps to keep his materials from being flung away. After this is complete -- which usually takes nearly a minute -- they will form into a massive sphere that will then expand to gargantuan proportions. It will appear as if a meteorite, crashing down against the earth. Anything within a mile of it would surely perish if they could not defend from the blow.


xxxxxADDITIONAL COMMENTS
"I am the greatest earthbender in the world! Don't you two dunderheads ever forget!"

xxxxxRESTRICTIONS
• You cannot begin manipulating a metal that is within three feet of the opponent's body. This means you can't simply kill them with their headband or turn their blade against them.


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xxxxxHISTORY
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xxxxxxxxxxSHIKOTSUMYAKU [KAGUYA]
[ strong and ruthless ]


xxxxxHISTORY
Shikotsumyaku (屍骨脈? literally "Dead Bone Pulse") is the kekkei genkai of the Kaguya clan, which gave them the ability to manipulate their own skeletal structure. They had free control over the cells responsible for bone growth and replacement, allowing them to manipulate their bones at will. They could protrude their bones out through their skin, change their bone density, and could even completely regenerate a lost bone. An example of this is seen with the Finger Bullet Drill (十指穿弾 Teshi Sendan?), which fires the user's fingertip bones like bullets. All this makes their bodies virtually indestructible, and any point of contact on the body could become as sharp as a spear tip, giving them a nearly perfect defense.


xxxxxDESCRIPTION

The Kaguya possess ridiculously honed and perfected bodies. Not only are they one rank stronger (+1), but also one rank faster (+1) and they possess amazing flexibility.

Their bones strengthen as they develop as a ninja, in a pathway like this:

Genin: Steel
Chuunin: Titanium
Special Jounin: Emerald
Jounin: Corundum
Sannin/Kage: Diamond

Your bones can meet a hardness beyond diamond, but only with the bloodline cursemark.



xxxxxRULES
• There are no rules!


xxxxxWEAKNESSES
• Terrible at genjutsu, below average at ninjutsu (all elemental ninjutsu costs 20% more chakra rounded down, and they're weak to genjutsu)


xxxxxSTRENGTHS
• Their stats, obviously (+1/+1)
• Ridiculously hard bones, and therefore almost invincible bodies at Sannin/Kage



xxxxxTECHNIQUES


Dance of the Larch No chakra cost
Karamatsu no Mai is a form of Taijutsu developed by Kimimaro to take advantage of his cursed seal and bloodline ability. It is the third of five dance forms. After activating the level one cursed seal form, Kimimaro will begin to extend multiple bones from his body. Both from his rib cage and his radius and ulna. Because they are hard as steel, these bones can act as a strong defensive mechanism against incoming strikes. Due to this they will also serve as an offensive attack to allow Kimimaro to move with little effort to impale his opponent.

Dance of the Young Ferns S-Rank
Sawarabi no Mai is the fifth of five dance forms. After activating the level two cursed seal form, Kimimaro quickly grows a multitude of tall spikes from his body to create a large forest of bone. While in this form he himself can merge into the bone trees to attack his target from whichever spike he wants.

Ten Finger Drilling Bullets C-Rank
Using the bloodline's unique Shikotsu Myaku (Corpse Bone Pathways) ability, the clan member will use their fingers to fire distal phalange bones as bullets. As the bones fly through the air, they will rotate and drill into their target once they make contact.

Dance of the Clematis: Flower B-Rank
Using this dance, the user will also form a large flowering bone spear which they can also use to pierce any shield the opponent raises. The spear is said to be nearly indestructible.

Dance of the Clematis: Vine B-Rank
The user will remove their spinal column from their back to create a flexible bone vine. Because the vine is flexible, it can wrap itself around an opponent to rip them to pieces.

Dance of the Camellia C-Rank
It is the second of five dance forms. Using the ability to manipulate their bone structure, the clan member will remove a long bone in the form of a sword from their shoulder. Because of the bloodline, the density of the bone can be increased many times so that it is as hard as steel. Using fluid and precise movements, they will then cut through any opponent within striking distance.

Dance of the Willows No cost
It is the first of five dance forms. Using the ability to manipulate their bone structure, the clan member will grow and extend a forearm bone through the palm of their hand to form a stabbing instrument. Using fluid and precise movements, they will then impale opponents.

Kaguya Ultimate Power: True Blood Unleashed S-Rank
A technique developed by the fabled "Godmodder meister" of NUR, said to bring out the true power and fighting spirit from deep within a Kaguya, void of emotions such as remorse, mercy, that'll interfere with one who intends to kill ruthlessly are departed from the soul when using this jutsu. The user forms a unique hand seal with both of their hands, and suddenly a fierce amount of pressure shakes the entire battlefield, making it seem as gravity has just intesified. This in turn makes the user transform into a being of some sort, though they will still be recognizable as their face usually doesn't change. The transformation varies upon each kaguya (pm The current Head of the Kaguya the transformation and what it does.They will tell you if it is accepted or not.)


xxxxxRESTRICTIONS
• You can't just unleash a massive, infinite amount of bones from your body using the dance of the larch. Use it intelligently; your bones are a bit painful to release, and they take time to regenerate. It's not instant.


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xxxxxxxxxxRANTON [黒い稲妻!]
[ THE VOID STORM ]


xxxxxHISTORY
Unknown history.


xxxxxDESCRIPTION

This bloodline was founded within Kumogakure. The special abilities of this clan are suprising due to the fact that it harnesses the power of storms. Having the fluidity of water and the powerful strength of lightning this kekkei genkai is truly a wonder to behold. Due to their fierce loyalty they have never had a member go rogue upon the village that they were born into.



xxxxxRULES
• Ranton users have a tattoo of the kanji "lightning" (雷) on their body
• Most Ranton users have a fierce loyalty, comparable to that of the Hatake.
• Ranton users have Raiton [ Lightning ] and Suiton [ Water ] as chakra elements.



xxxxxWEAKNESSES
• Receive increased damage from Fuuton
• Cannot have a Sub Element



xxxxxSTRENGTHS
• Strength of Suiton and Raiton techniques are increased
• Raiton used against them is weakened by one rank
• Are able to learn Suiton and Raiton with (-1) posts



xxxxxPASSIVE ABILITIES
• Black Lightning: Raiton techniques are black in color; they do blunt damage as well as shocking damage


xxxxxTECHNIQUES


Ikatsu [ Threatening ] Academy
A basic Ranton ability in which the user will slap an object and have a thunder sound emit from that spot. The noise is loud enough to overlap most other sounds for a brief moment. If used offensively, a slap directly to the opponent can cause temporary deafness.

Saegiritte [ Interrupting] Genin

Using one's hands as if they're using a slingshot, the user will pull back one hand and let loose. Three to five small white clouds will shoot towards the target in a straight line. Upon impact, the projectiles will stick and roll about the target as if an adhesive fluid. After setting for a short amount of time (1 post), the clouds will expand roughly two-fold, rendering the target a bit more susceptible to electricity, in addition to having some movement complications.
• Each cloud sticks for one post, Meaning the post after they have set is the post that is stuck to the opponent.

Kumogatta [ Cloud Formations ] Genin
A basic Ranton ability in which the user will create a human sized gray cloud, in any shape they desire, and push it off to drift for a little while (2 posts). Anyone or thing that comes into contact with this cloud will feel a moderate shock so long as they are within it.

Hikari no Kekkai [ Light's Barrier ] Chuunin
After the needed handsigns are performed, a plate of fuzzy light appears upon the user's chest. This light will strike down light to medium projectiles, and is capable of protecting against explosives by quickly shelling over the entire body.
• Lasts two posts.

Amagumo [ Rain Clouds ] Chuunin
This technique condenses moisture in the air to form an overcast sky. It should be noted that this technique does not cover much area, and after being performed it still takes roughly four [4] posts before the clouds form and break open. ( Only takes two [2] posts, if clouds are already present. )

Kumoritte [ Becoming Cloudy ] Chuunin
Stretching both hands outward, the user releases a continual mass of nearly pitch black clouds which almost utterly demolish visibility. This string of black clouds will continue for as long as the user's hands are outstretched, expanding at roughly 10 yards per post.
• Badly affected by the wind.

Reizaa Saakasu [ Laser Circus ] Chuunin
Manipulating their ability to mold Raiton and Suiton, the user will perform the needed handsign and release threads of "liquid lightning" from their freehand. Because of their composition and formation, these beams deal both impact and electric damage. The user is also able to bend these beams toward their target in order to deliver pinpoint strikes.
Each beam costs [5] chakra to form, and [5] chakra to bend.

Kumo no Fukushuu [ Arachnid's Revenge] Chuunin
Similar to [ Kumoritte, ] the user will release a string of black clouds from their hands at roughly 10 yards per post. However, unlike Kumoritte which is merely used to disable visibility, these black clouds hold a creeping secret. Within the darkness lurks hundreds of tiny "thunder legs;" chakra created creatures which give off a small amount of light and emit an electric charge from each of their eight legs. In small amounts, the feeling of their legs on one's body is almost therapeutic, but in leagues these critters are capable of delivering an intense shock.
• Badly affected by the wind.

Raiton: Kurobansa [ Lightning Release: Black Panther ] Jounin
The user performs a single handsign and tucks it close to their body, from here a substantial amount of black lightning will surge around their body and shoot from them. By aiming the still held handsign, the user releases a mass of black lightning in the shape of a panther-like creature to electrocute their target. Because of its size and overall power, the panther is capable of causing severe damage if full contact is made.

Raiun • Honba [ Storm Cloud • Home ] Jounin
The user releases black clouds from one hand while performing handsigns with the other. The spray of clouds will coil around and encompass on the user, forming a mass of electrically charged darkness. If anyone else ventures within the mass of clouds, they will almost instantaneously be assaulted by various electric surges, which will continue to barrage the body until said person leaves. Because of their nearly nonexistent weight, the user is free to move around at a lessened pace with this cover of electric pillows so long as they hold the single handsign. The jutsu covers their surrounds but not underneath them.
•Lasts for three posts or until the hand sign is released

Raiun • Douki [ Storm Cloud • Pulsation ] Chuunin
Extending the electric composition of [ Raiun • Honba, ] the user will use their free hand to deliver a solid palm thrust from within the clouds to send out a bulb of pure electricity at a rather high velocity. Unfortunately, because the clouds are so difficult to see through, the user typically has to have developed some method to get passed this, lest they literally be shooting in the dark.
• Obtained when [ Raiun • Honba ] is learned. Can only be used with Raiun Honba.

Raiun • Dendou Ranpi [ Storm Cloud • Electric Dissipation ] Chuunin
Rather than simply letting [ Raiun • Honba ] end, the user will supply additional chakra to the clouds before casting them off. Now, rather than simply fading away, the black clouds will cause an electric burst.
• Obtained when [ Raiun • Honba ] is learned. Can only be used with Raiun Honba

Hijutsu: Ryuuki Boufuuryuu [ Secret Technique: Rising Dragon Storm ] Sannin
The user takes aim with both hands, builds up chakra, and then releases a twisting torrent of black clouds at the target at an impressive speed. While twisting, the black clouds will separate and converge multiple times until they take the form of a dragon. This odd display can be rather confusing for opponents at first. When the attack finally makes impact, the clouds will cluster, swirl, and electrocute a rather well sized area due to the moisture held within them.


xxxxxRESTRICTIONS
• Cannot have a Curse Seal
• Cannot be of the Puppet Class
• Cannot be of the Medical Class



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xxxxxxxxxxSHOTON [水晶のパワー]
[ the crystal warriors ]


xxxxxHISTORY
Unknown history.


xxxxxDESCRIPTION

The Crystal Release is a rare and specialized field of elemental ninjutsu that can create crystal as well as manipulate already-existing crystals and crystalline structures. The users of this style are able to use Doton very efficiently.



xxxxxRULES
• Shoton users can only have Doton as an element
• Users can crystallize objects, Suiton, and Doton (If they use the same amount of chakra the opponent use to create it is used.)
• Users cannot crystalize living things, Fuuton, Raiton, or Katon



xxxxxWEAKNESSES
• Increased damage from Raiton by one rank
• Only one element: Doton



xxxxxSTRENGTHS
• Doton techniques are increased by one rank
• Able to use Doton techniques with no hand signs, same with Shoton
• Able to learn Doton with (-2) posts



xxxxxPASSIVE ABILITIES
• Crystal-like like hardness
Shoton users have stronger skin than others. Due to this they are slightly more Taijutsu resistant than others. Taijutsu techniques used against them are downgraded by one rank.



xxxxxTECHNIQUES


Kesshō no Yoroi [ Crystal Armor ] Genin
This technique allows the user to cover their skin with a thin sheet of crystal, protecting themselves from weak blunt attacks. This armor can also aid the user in performing stronger physical attacks. The crystal is transparent and can only be noticed by light reflecting off it. This does not happen by reflex, the user must perform the skills. Lasts for two posts.

Shōton: Kurenai no Kajitsu - [ Crystal Release: Crimson Fruit ] Genin
The user can create a dome of crystal to surround a target. It is highly durable from both external and internal attacks unless they are strong enough to break the crystal. Lasts for two posts.

Shōton: Mori [ Crystal Release: Lance ] Genin
This jutsu allows the user to create a large and sharp spear-like rod attached to their wrist, which she can use to impale her target. The lance lasts for three posts.

Shōton: Senbon [ Crystal Release: Needles ] Chuunin
The user creates long, sharp, and pointed bright pink and white crystals that shoot at the target at extremely high speeds with pinpoint accuracy. This technique doesn’t need the user actually grab the needles to be thrown. They are launched as soon as they are created

Shōton: Suishō Tō - [ Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Blade ] Chuunin
With this technique the user can quickly form a blade made of crystal on their arm, and use it in a manner reminiscent of a tantō. Blades can be formed on both arms if needed for an additional cost of five chakra. The blades are maintained for five posts.

Shōton: Uwagakesuisha [ Crystal Release: Crystal Wheel ] Chuunin
With this technique, the user creates a disk-shaped wheel made of crystal around them, allowing them to keep above water and race towards the enemy at high speed. This technique can be used to hit the opponent head on which would cause moderate blunt force trauma

Suishō Bunshin no Jutsu - [ Jade Crystal Clone Technique ] Chuunin
These clones are made of crystal, as one is defeated, it crumbles into many crystals. Clones made by this jutsu are also able to deceive most dojutsu users. Due to the fact the clones have a physical form like shadow clones. Making dojutsu users unable to tell which one is the real one.

Kesshō: Rokkaku Shuriken - [ Crystal: Hexagonal Shuriken ] Chuunin
The user creates several crystal shuriken and launches them at the opponent. The shuriken are six-sided with spikes at the sides of each blade, resembling snowflakes. The shuriken don’t need to be thrown by hand. Much like the crystal needle technique they are launched when created.

Shōton: Suishōheki Hachi no Jin - [ Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Wall Eighth Formation ] Jounin
This technique allows the user to encase a large area in crystal, thus trapping everything within it. This jutsu acts like a prison as well as many other crystal techniques. However if the user wants to trap their opponent and keep them from running from their fight. This is the jutsu to use. Covers twenty yards and lasts for four posts.

Shōton: Hashō Kōryū - [ Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon ] Jounin
The user crystallizes a material in the area, and then turns it into a dragon. It can be used as a means to travel or to attack a target. Several dragons can also be made and manipulated at once however they are weaker than one large crystal dragon. This technique is the equivalent of water dragon jutsu. Lasts until it’s destroyed or until the user releases it.

Shōton: Omiwatari no Jutsu - [ Crystal Release: The Gods' Crossings Technique ] Jounin
The user places their hand on a surface, creating a long stream of sharp crystals to bind and pierce a target. The crystals are able to track their opponent however they stop after fifteen feet.

Crystal Release: Growing Crystal Thorns - Jounin
The user creates growing thorn-like crystals that continuously grow towards the opponent's direction. Very similar to Iron sands branching technique only more rutheless. Ends after the second post.

Shōton: Suishō Meikyū no Jutsu - [ Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Labyrinth Technique ] SS
First the user creates a large number of crystal flowers. Then they can grow these flowers into a gigantic labyrinth consisting of red crystals. Enemies trapped inside it will mostly be lost because of the fact that the red crystals reflect their personal image as well as generates mirror images of the routes, paths, and details within the labyrinth, confusing and intimidating them. It is even capable of confusing most dojutsu users. Because of the crystal's stable molecular structure, a simple attack focused at one point is rendered useless, and its wide surface will disperse the force of wide range attacks, reducing their effectiveness. To overcome this technique, an attack that has impact force both wide and powerful is required to smash through it. Last for five posts.


xxxxxRESTRICTIONS
• You can only have Doton.


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xxxxxxxxxxUZUMAKI [u-zu-ma-ki!]
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xxxxxHISTORY/DESCRIPTION

The Uzumaki clan (うずまき一族, Uzumaki Ichizoku) was a prominent clan in Uzushiogakure. They were also distant relatives of the Senju clan and thus both clans were on good terms; an alliance that extended onto their hidden villages — Konohagakure and Uzushiogakure. The shinobi of Konoha integrated Uzushiogakure's symbol onto their uniforms and flak jackets as well as on the shoulders of their uniforms as a sign of friendship and goodwill between the two villages, and continue to do so to this day, in memory of their friendship even years after Uzushiogakure's destruction.

The bloodline of "Uzumaki" -- however -- did not die out, rather, it was carried on by small remnants who no longer resided within Uzushiogakure and kept their bloodline hidden to keep them safe from those who feared them. Eventually, when the world came to peace, the people of the Uzumaki Clan began to rise from the ashes again. They were led by the woman known as Takimi Uzumaki, wife to Arashi Uzumaki, who eventually taught her powers to her son and other clansmen before dying in a landmine accident much later after already bringing the Uzumaki back to glory. However, their bloodline still remains thin; it is extremely rare to see one of them, especially one with their bloodline's powers.

Please let it be noted that the Uzumaki were hunted to extinction for great reason; they were gifted by a bloodline on par with even the sharingan.



xxxxxRULES
• All Uzumaki MUST belong to the Sealing Master Class (included in this bloodline)
• All Uzumaki have a special saying that they were born with -- this saying is literally their first word, and although these sayings rarely have meanings, the Uzumaki tend to repeat them almost every other sentence (example: Naruto's Dattebayo or Kushina's Dattebane). This "catchphrase" must start with either a "t" or a "d" and the second letter must be an A, with the third and fourth being "t"s
• Uzumaki generally have red or blonde hair, however this is not a requirement
• The Uzumaki are even better than Heiland's at controlling bijuu
• Just to clarify -- the Uzumaki can NOT control bijuu! They can keep them from going insane, but they can't make them follow their orders, and there will be no techniques capable of doing this!
• This bloodline cannot be activated until Chuunin rank because sealing is depicted as an "elite" power; this counts as your sub-element
• The learning limits for Ninjutsu/Genjutsu are separate from Fuuinjutsu:

      D-Rank: Ninjutsu 15, Genjutsu 3, Fuuinjutsu 20
      C-Rank: Ninjutsu 20, Genjutsu 5, Fuuinjutsu 25
      B-Rank: Ninjutsu 25, Genjutsu 6, Fuuinjutsu 30
      A-Rank: Ninjutsu 30, Genjutsu 7, Fuuinjutsu 35
      S-Rank: Ninjutsu 35, Genjutsu 8, Fuuinjutsu 50
      SS-Rank: Ninjutsu 45, Genjutsu 10, Fuuinjutsu 70


xxxxxWEAKNESSES
• It is true that the Uzumaki are accurate at throwing projectiles -- however, their general taijutsu isn't really very good, and they cannot learn any taijutsu styles -- but may learn two weapon styles [fully]
• Uzumaki may only have one element -- however they may use any attacks absorbed by sealing techniques -- but only ONCE per absorption. They may also have two sub-elements.
• Only Special Jounin and above may use space-time fuuinjutsu!
• Generally weak against the unpredictable earth element as it is rarely ever a straight-forward blast of chakra -- thus making sealing it difficult unless you want to spend the chakra on sealing that whole portion of the earth
• Very weak at lower ranks, even Chuunin and Special Jounin, as this is a building class where you start off weak and eventually grow to be very formidable. Although sealing specialists can be useless without great talent, ones with talent can surpass many other shinobi with hard effort and work.
• The class lies on preparation; someone not always prepared with their seals in place and their strategies intact will do very badly with this bloodline. Planning is a must, setting is a must (good to lure opponents into planned territory), stealth is a must and a quick eye is completely necessary.



xxxxxSTRENGTHS
• The only shinobi in the world capable of freely using space-time jutsu; however I use the word "freely" loosely -- it still costs a fair amount of chakra and even the highest Kage can become exhausted from overuse
• Although the Uzumaki only have very small chakra cost reductions [subtract 1/4 of the cost] on sealing techniques, they are gradually capable of sealing energy from the environment around them. Meant to prolong battles and slowly debilitate their foes as they draw down their chakra with sealing techniques, the Uzumaki are the best at lasting long and using over-enlarged amounts of chakra. By activating their tattoos, they will gain fifteen chakra from the environment every post. This connection to nature also gives them a sense of nature; they can feel disturbances in chakra.
• As the Uzumaki often use sealing techniques by means of "rites" and "rites" can be placed onto weapons, the Uzumaki are very accurate when it comes to throwing projectiles for they often use them as the sealing points for their techniques
• Fuuinjutsu can be used without speech; you do not have to speak the technique you are using, you also don't have to use handseals for these techniques
• Capable of sealing their techniques into allies for [one time use] even if the ally doesn't have that element -- however, this must be done and prepared out of battle
• Fuuinjutsu technique training is halved
• All Fuuinjutsu are stronger by [1] rank
• Slightly enhanced perception due to their born-training of always needing to be aware and prepared
• Slightly faster than others of their rank because of their reliance on speed and quick timing



xxxxxPASSIVE ABILITIES
• All passives are listed in strengths/weaknesses


xxxxxTECHNIQUES
( Almost all techniques are canon but have been renamed simply to sound better)
Technique Name: Sealing Key Release
Rank: Free
Description: The Uzumaki may use this technique to remove THEIR OWN SEAL and theirs only. By placing their hand upon that seal, they burn it off (doesn't leave scars/burns) and seal a kanji symbol back into their scroll, occupying some of the scroll's body.

Technique Name: A Survivalist's Eye
Rank: C
Description: A low-ranked and simple technique, the Survivalist's Eye allows the user to implant vision into a single one of their scrolls that will send them brain messages (similar to the Mind Specter) if something is amiss or they see anything peculiar. The most useful part about this technique is how there is no actual "eye" appearing, and the seal looks completely like normal so unless you're Pope Benedict the Third you're not going to notice that it can see you. The eye has three levels of brain messages; level one is a low level awareness and it will say "Think", level two is an alert awareness and it will say "Feel", level three is a fearful awareness and it will say "Know". If the seal says "Know", the Uzumaki will most definitely come to protect the seal from falling into the enemy's hands.

Technique Name: Mind Specter Technique
Rank: C
Description: A technique that can only be used on one person at any given time and must be re-applied if it is to be used later, the Mind Specter technique is an ability where the Uzumaki may link their speech into someone's mind. It's a seal that takes the form of a kanji tattoo on the target's neck (kanji for "wind"), and this allows the two to inter-communicate through thought. The seal never runs out unless manually removed by the Uzumaki, and is generally placed onto an ally before battle.

Technique Name: Ghost Shadow Technique
Rank: B
Description: By sealing a portion of their energy (which can be rested back to normal) into their shadow and allowing for the shadow to gather general energies from the nature around it, the Uzumaki can stock up to 40 energy in this shadow which can be used later in battle at any time by performing a simple handseal. This technique can be used at night or indoors and it overlaps other shadows; becoming as dark as possible as if to stand out. This -- however -- can make the user's movements more predictable, and this technique takes 1 post for only 1 chakra point, meaning it takes 40 whole posts to stock up for later battle use.

Technique Name: The Prisoner's Key
Rank: Depending
Description: An esteemed Uzumaki technique to assert their dominance over other sealing specialists, the Uzumaki may destroy barriers made by opponents using the same amount of chakra they put into it. However, this does not work on all barriers -- Uzumaki barriers cannot be broken by this technique and neither can S+ barriers. It also requires one post of complete focus and thus is extremely dangerous to use in most combat unless aided by allies.

Technique Name: Advanced Arsenal Sealing
Rank: B-S+
Description: This technique is capable of doing more than just sealing objects like weapons; but sealing chakra-implanted objects and even techniques. This technique, at its best, is capable of sealing even bijuu into items (such as the pot Shukaku was sealed into) rather than hosts. Simple sealing like sealing jutsu or chakra weapons for later use is fine and easy. However, on the level of sealing even bijuu or large chakra masses will require [3] posts of prep time. Let it be noted that the object the bijuu would be sealed into would need to be treated extremely delicately -- thus it cannot be sealed into a weapon or something you could use like that. This can be used to transport bijuu to residential areas safely so that a jinchuuriki may be found in peace.

Technique Name: Hidden Object Shell
Rank: B
Description: An invisible technique, this creates an orb barrier around an object by forming a few simple handseals. The orb is completely invisible until hit, where it will reveal itself to be a glowing yellow ball before returning into its see-through state once more. Despite its low rank, the size of this barrier contrary to chakra consumption means it is actually quite powerful; and most physical or jutsu means cannot destroy this ball. However, it's too small for anyone but children to fit into, so it is clearly made to either protect young children/babies (such as potential jinchuuriki) or cargo and other small objects you could think of in your free time.

Technique Name: The Prisoner's Binds
Rank: B
Description: A technique used for a long time to restrain targets and even bijuu, these chains are incredibly powerful and specifically meant to lock around the demon's massive frame. The chains come from the user's body and can be used freely generally to wrap around targets at fair speeds, but to completely suppress an opponent's movement you must cease your own movement as well. This technique costs B ranked chakra per post to uphold and is nearly impossible to free yourself from once caught.

Technique Name: The Prisoner's Cage
Rank: A-S
Description: This is an extremely powerful barrier jutsu that is meant to keep hostiles or even allies out of its range. It's large and can be used simply by molding several complicated handsigns, and is nearly unbreakable except for against other sealing masters (after spending 3 posts of sealing the barrier into a scroll it will dissipate) thus making this ideal in keeping yourself or your allies safe in a troubled time. This technique was used by Kushina Uzumaki to keep the Konoha ninja from the dangerous field of the Kyuubi, and exponentially increases the potency of the Prisoner's Binds technique by creating it from the walls of this barrier. It's very exhausting on the user, however, and it can only be used once a week (real-time).

Technique Name: Time Destruction Escape
Rank: S
Description: The Time Destruction Escape is a technique where the Uzumaki will place a large seal upon any object (includes clones) and this seal will be prepared for later use. This seal can be used one time and one time only (meaning if you want to use it multiple times in battle, you must set up multiple seals) to immediately transfer the sealer's organic body into the object, creating a Kanji mark for "life". During this time, the user will only have a ghost-like, "go-through" body of chakra that takes his/her features, colors and shape -- much like facing some Ghostly form of the Uzumaki. Although one may think this technique is perfect to use for a dodge -- which it is -- it has much more dangerous uses at its disposal. The seal's transfer between the Uzumaki and itself is immediate; he/she can immediately re-materialize, even inside of the enemy's body. Often used to seemingly slip through an opponent's body only to crush and burst them from within, this technique is unpredictable and deadly indeed. It can only be used three times a battle, and for two posts each time, during which the opponent is in a very vulnerable state. However, if the seal is destroyed while the body is still contained within it and the Uzumaki does somehow not know and transfer it back in time, his/her body will be destroyed forever and he/she will be stuck in this ghostly state which will dissipate five posts later.

Technique Name: The Clown's Mask
Rank: S
Description: A time-space teleportation technique, the user will place a seal upon an object -- any object, including another person -- and after placing this seal, the Uzumaki has the ability to teleport to wherever that seal currently is. The user will disappear into a swirling black (much like a black hole) and then reappear regularly at that location -- however, this technique cannot be used on an object over four-hundred feet away and thus you cannot magically skip country to country using this. Also, the object must have been legitimately marked some time -- you can't just appear anywhere and say "he/she marked it during his travels". If mods ask for evidence of your marking in some post then you must give it to them. The seal is rather obvious as it is the Uzumaki clan symbol surrounded by four black lines like a cross, so it's hard to hide. This technique may be used in conjunction with the Time Destruction Escape.

Technique Name: The Clown's Death
Rank: S
Description: The Clown's Death is a variant of the Clown's Mask that transports other people instead of yourself. It is very close-ranged and requires a few seconds to completely suck any enemy in, but it involves a swirling black hole emerging from your left eye that will send the enemy into an alternate dimension. The attack is a deadly one-hit kill, as there is no way to escape this dimension unless the attacker returns to it and lets you go free. However, it is so close ranged that it can only work on enemies within five feet of you, and if they escape (very, very difficult under almost all circumstances) you've wasted a ton of chakra. Using it, however, takes a smaller amount of time to use than with the Clown's Mask, and if strategically performed, it can mean an almost complete chance of death. It's a very risky technique to perform, however, and since the Uzumaki are terrible at taijutsu, getting into close range is not ideal. It should be noted however that the technique can also be used to contain allies that need protecting, and as such this technique can, on the flip side, also eject objects from the realm.

The technique cannot be initiated immediately, it needs one post of focusing on said target before it can be released. However, once caught, an enemy will most likely never be able to escape unless their speed is insane.

Technique Name: The Freedom of the Beast
Rank: S
Description: An extremely powerful sealing technique, there are two ways to use this; one benevolent, one evil. This technique is used to break the bindings of a demon and a vessel. This can either be used to break a demon free of someone's control (for example, an Uchiha/Senju) or it can be used to release a demon from its jinchuuriki. By placing their hand (must have their own blood on it as well as the opponent's blood if they're a jinchuuriki) on the opponent's chest and surging black tattoos onto their body, they break someone's binding with a demon and free it from its "hold". This can be used to free demons from jinchuuriki even if the seal was done by another Uzumaki. During childbirth, jinchuuriki are much more vulnerable to this technique, and it requires only half the chakra without needing to obtain their blood. However, most hosts won't die from this technique unless the demon was very powerful (7 tails and higher), and this puts the Uzumaki in danger of this technique as well since they can't control demons.

Technique Name: Eight Trigams Sealing Style
Rank: S
Description: The ultimate demon sealing technique capable of sealing even the Kyuubi into the host with minimal rebellion from the demon, this is the Uzumaki's most prized technique in the world. This is one of the secrets to their expansive demon control, and is a nearly unbreakable seal that not even other Uzumaki can break, regardless of chakra or rank (the Freedom of the Beast can break it, however). This technique -- however -- can be weathered down as time goes by, so the Uzumaki may need to re-strengthen the seal every now and then. When the "key" to this technique is used, the jinchuuriki's control over their demon will enhance, leading them into the eventual path of what seems like full control.

Technique Name: Space-Time Calling Technique
Rank: S
Description: A technique meant to be used on extremely powerful ninjutsu, this technique is capable of sealing away even a tailed beast ball and calling it to another location. Requiring only a few complex handsigns, this technique can be a lifesaver if you're willing to use the large amounts of chakra. This ability requires concentration for larger attacks, so that you can choose their destination, and can seemingly appear out of nowhere.

Technique Name: Flying Thunder God
Rank: S
Description: This powerful technique involves placing a seal on any object (including humans). You will be able to transport to this object almost instantly from practically any distance. The issue of this is its unpredictability; you may end up teleporting into a very dire situation, and even if used on an enemy, they may have a back-up plan that could even instantly kill you if you warped at the wrong moment. However, it's a powerful and unexpected technique, an instant transportation that can leave the enemy dead or barely alive and even protect you from death. It costs a great amount of chakra, though, so it's unwise to use and abuse it.


xxxxxSEALING SAGE

The "second stage" of this bloodline goes only to the bloodline head, and is considered the "Sealing Sage" class. In exchange for the ability to use any elemental jutsu (can still use their second sub-element), their sealing, barrier and space-time jutsu are reduced by a cost of 10 chakra (total; it doesn't stack with the other 25%), and they get a special sage ability of their choice, as long as it's been approved by the Captain. The current sealing sage is Christian Uzumaki, who has the ability to lay down seals on anything he makes any contact with, even contact with his hair, weapons and clothing. He can essentially step on the floor and leave a seal there, or his sleeve brushing against your shoulder could place a seal on you as well.

Sealing Sages also have a special ability that is similar to the arsenal seal; they may transfer seals through things such as water, gasoline, walls, etc. Any object that can convey the elements is almost fair game, but air and other gases are not acceptable.


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XXXX UNTAPPED POWER
As a class themselves, the Uzumaki have an untapped power. This untapped power is not meant to solidify their strengths, but back-up their weakness. Normally, the Uzumaki have weak offense. But this untapped power is meant to weaken that load. Every three posts, and only three times per battle, the Uzumaki may draw in a powerful amount of natural energy into their body, and release this raw form of energy as a Jounin ranked blast of blue light. It is about the size of the Great Fireball technique, and is mostly meant to draw the enemies chakra down as they defend against it. The natural energy is drawn by inhaling and relaxing your body, and released by placing both palms in front of your chest, faced at the enemy.


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xxxxxxxxxxTHE SHARINGAN
[ sight beyond sight ]


xxxxxHISTORY
TL;DW


xxxxxDESCRIPTION

The Sharingan
The Sharingan's powers, while formidable, come in stages and require certain events to unlock. The first of which is the initial unlocking of the Sharingan. Those who wield the Sharingan are not blessed with it at birth like some other bloodlines. It must be obtained, and the only way to obtain it is through an event that puts great stress on the wielder. It make be something as simple as a teacher pretending to kill the wielder all the way to an attempted rape. When the Sharingan is first unlocked, It has 1 tomoe, which gives the wielder heightened perception. This allows the wielder to catch any movement, no matter how minor, the opponent may make. After extensive training with the first stage, the wielder unlocks the second tomoe and the ability to mimic and learn any jutsu they witness using the eye. After even more training in the with the second stage, the wielder unlocks the final stage of the basic Sharingan. In this stage, the Sharingan now has 3 tomoes and the ability to see through genjutsu and tell if others are in a genjutsu by reading their chakra flow. This ability is not to be confused with the Byakugan's ability to actually see the chakra system of a person, just the fact that the person has chakra. In addition, you may see things that are you chakra colour, as long as it's above ground.

The Mangekyou
When the wielder meets certain requirements or a certain event is witnessed, the Sharingan evolves beyond the basic for to become the Mangekyou Sharingan. While the basic Sharingan is the same for all people, the Mangekyou Sharingan varies from person to person, being tailored to their specific fighting style. Instead of gaining tomoes, the Mangekyou gets its own unique pattern. Along with the special bonuses from this new eye, the wielder also may now perform the Sharingan's mighty jutsu. But this power is not without a drawback. If the wielder overuses their Mangekyou Sharingan, they will slowly lose their eye sight till they are completely blind, making the eye useless.

The Eternal
The final, and by far most powerful, evolution of the Sharingan, the Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan. This variant is one that few have, and are even willing, to obtain simply do to how you obtain it. While unlocking the Mangekyou may vary from person to person, there is only one way to obtain the EMS, stealing someone else's Mangekyou and combining it with your own. When one gains the EMS, all vision impairment is retored and blindness is no longer a risk. In addition to regaining their sight, the wielder gains a powerful skill that is specifically tailored to their style. Legends have been told about some of the powers that have resulted from this, making this variant one to truly be feared.



xxxxxRULES
• Sharingan must be unlocked through RP
• May only copy 15 jutsu, 20 at Mangekyou, and 30 at Eternal
• Mangekyou and Eternal must be applied for in the custom form
• Mangekyou or EMS Transplants do not change effects
• Mangekyou Transplants must be covered or they will burn chakra and vision.


xxxxxWEAKNESSES
• Wielder will eventually go blind unless they gain eternal
• Transplants may only learn 1 of the Sharingan Jutsu


xxxxxSTRENGTHS
• Heightened Perception, Reaction and Reflexes
• May mimic and copy jutsu
• Gain special abilities tailored for the user



xxxxxPASSIVE ABILITIES
• Sharingan Perception
While the Sharingan is active, the wielder is able to see even the slightest movements made by their targets, making them near impossible to trick with a sleight of hands move; this includes being able to see chakra, even underground.

• Jutsu Mimicry
While in battle, the Sharingan can let the wielder mimic a jutsu that was used in the previous post as long as the wielder may use that jutsu for an additional 50% chakra. The user may mimic a jutsu that is not of an element they possess, as long as it is below their rank, for double the chakra cost. Any jutsu mimiced lose 1 rank in power

• Jutsu Copying
While observing a jutsu be performed, the Sharingan may copy the chakra patterns used to perform the jutsu, allowing the wielder to gain instant knowledge of how to perform the jutsu. In order to learn the jutsu, it must be a jutsu the user is normally able to perform, meaning only jutsu of their element, clan, or bloodline.

• Genjutsu Identification
Due to the ability to see one's chakra flow, the wielder of the sharingan may see when one's flow is being disrupted by a genjutsu or tell when they themselves are under one, allowing them to break out of them easier.




xxxxxTECHNIQUES


Kyouten Chiten B-rank
Using the copy and counter features of the Sharingan, the wielder may not only cancel a genjutsu they are under, but may even turn it on their opponents, leaving them trapped in their own illusion.

Requires Mangekyou Sharingan

Tsukiyomi A-Rank
A powerful genjutsu used by the Sharingan wielders to achieve amazing results. If the opponent makes eye contact, they will be locked in an illusionary world; one that the Sharingan wielder controls. In this world, the opponent is at the total mercy of Sharingan user, as they are able to submit the opponent to any form of torture they can imagine for what seems like 72 hours, though this is really only a few seconds in real time. This genjutsu is incredibly hard to break without an outside force acting upon the victim. Although, a high ranked Sharingan user may break from this jutsu quite easily. This jutsu lasts for up to 3 posts, with each post acting as 1 duration of 24 hours.

Requires Mangekyou Sharingan

Amaterasu S-Rank
Amaturasu is a Ninjutsu technique which uses the Mangekyou form of the Sharingan eye to create a powerful black fire. It has been said that anything within the Mangekyou's vision will burn to ash if consumed by the fire. The fire itself is said to burn for 7 days and 7 nights. Because of the amount of chakra needed to use the technique, it can only be used on a very limited basis daily. Though it is regarded as the strongest of Mangekyou's physical attacks. This move may only be used twice per a fight with a 5 post cool down between each usage.

Requires Mangekyou Sharingan

Susanoo S-rank
Susanoo is different for each person. Before you learn this jutsu, you must apply for a custom Susanoo.

Requires Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan

Kagutsuchi S-rank
This jutsu is an off-shoot of the Amaterasu jutsu. Instead of being used for offensive purposes, this is used as a shield capable of blocking any move, devouring it before it hits the user.

Requires Mangekyou Sharingan



xxxxxUNLOCKING THE SHARINGAN

xxxSharingan
1 Tomoe- Gained when sharingan is initially unlocked. User gets the Sharingan Perception passive. The number of posts used for training while using the sharingan is divided by 1.25
2 Tomoe- Gained after 10 posts of training with the 1 Tomoe variant. User gets the Jutsu Copying and Jutsu Mimicry passive. The number of posts used for training while using the sharingan is divided by 1.5
3 Tomoe- Gained after copying 5 jutsu and 15 posts of training with the 2 Tomoe variant. User gains the Genjutsu Identification passive. The number of posts used for training while using the sharingan is divided by 1.75

xxxMangekyou
For all Mangekyo, you must be at least Jounin rank
Custom Mangekyou must have unlocking conditions

For those who do not wish to make a custom may use one of the following

Itachi's Mangekyou - Copied 10 genjutsu and killed your closest friend. User learns Genjutsu 25% faster and Genjutsu cost 25% less.
Kakashi/Madara's Mangekyou - Copied 10 Ninjutsu, have won 7 fights, and have 1 kill. User learns Ninjutsu 25% faster and ninjutsu cost 25% less.
Izuna/Madara's Brother's Mangekyou - Copied 5 Ninjutsu, 5 Genjutsu, and possess 1 Taijutsu or weapon style. The user learns Taijutsu and weapon styles 25% faster and taijutsu and weapon styles cost 25% less.

Sight Loss
[Special Note: Transplants lose twice as many posts]

Custom Mangekyou
Activating takes 2 points away
Lose 1 points per post

Itachi/Kakashi/Madara/Izuna/Madara's Brother Mangekyou
Activating takes 1 point away
Lose 1 point per post

Susanoo: Takes 5 points away for every post it is active.
Amaterasu: Takes 3 points every time used.
Tsukiyomi: 2 points for every time used.

150pts: perfect sight
140pts: Mild sight loss, can see almost like normal if some things move too far out of range then they become blurry.
120pts: Things that aren't moving are mildly blurry.
60pts: Things that aren't moving are even more blurry
30pts: Can only see things perfectly up to 10 feet
0pts: Blind

xxxEternal
Must have Mangekyou
Must wait at least a month before going from Mangekyou to Eternal
Must Apply for eternal in the custom area
Must steal someone else's Mangekyou


xxxxxMEMBERS
Head of BL: Yumi Uchiha (Panthers7)
1. Hisaki Uchiha (r a i n- C R U S H E D)
2. Xen Uchiha Yami (xXThe_Epic_MuffinXx)
3. Nayely Hatake Uchiha Dragconic (Alicia Joana)
4. Akane Uchiha (The Lady of Nirvana)
5. Hisana Uchiha (The Lady of Nirvana)
6. Hikari Uchiha (Soap Disco)
7. Kasumi Raikou Saiz (bb3000ae)
8. Andriel Valtieri (Valentine Valtieri)

Implantees
1. Hana Chiru (_Manpish_) - Eternal Mengekyou Sharingan
2. Vincente Valtieri (Valentine Valtieri) - Three Tomoe Sharingan
3. Kazuo Hatake (Scrapples) Eternal Mangekyou Sharingan
4. Kuro Tenpi [Blackscar_swiss] Mangekyo Sharingan
5. Hiro Senju [Hiro] Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan


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xxxxxxxxxxRANMARU'S DOJUTSU
[ blood red eyes ]


xxxxxHISTORY/DESCRIPTION


Ranmaru has a kekkei genkai ability similar to the Byakugan. It includes penetrating vision, disrupting eye-based kekkei genkai, and a unique chakra particle extension. He had the ability to use his vision abilities to penetrate the walls of his small shack and view the outside world and perform Genjutsu that can fool even the Byakugan. This ability does not appear to have the range of the Byakugan, but it actually has the ability to counter that Hyuga trait. Ranmaru's vision is also able to locate and track others by sensing chakra, pick up chakra from long distances, and notice changes in an individual's chakra. It is also able to sense how many of them are present.

Ranmaru's vision has heightened perception and analytical powers not unlike the Sharingan, meaning Ranmaru can comprehend any details he sees to predict the opponent's next move. This ability contributed mainly to Raiga being so formidable in battle and becoming one of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist. He can also see one's life force, allowing him to determine that Raiga, who had recently fallen in battle, was still alive,and he was able to transfer part of his own life force to Raiga. When activated, Ranmaru's eyes momentarily glow red.



xxxxxRULES
• There are no rules!


xxxxxWEAKNESSES
• Doesn't really help with anything other than sight and some genjutsu


xxxxxSTRENGTHS
• Allows the user to interrupt with all forms of Bakyagun effects, stopping its abilities. Allows real chakra clones to attack.
• Strength against genjutsu; allows you to detect it more easily

STAGE TWO STRENGTHS
• The user can see ten times further than before
• They can see through anything (walls, the floor... clothing, etc). This includes genjutsu. They can also see chakra, and can see the enemies chakra system.
• Their genjutsu is increased in strength, and the enemies can't Kai out of genjutsu cast by them.



xxxxxPASSIVE ABILITIES
• +1 Rank Genjutsu Strength
• Genjutsu Resistance (genjutsu used on you are -1 rank)
• Other misc things listed in the strengths, varying based on stage



xxxxxTECHNIQUES


Yomi (Underworld) A-Rank
Description: A genjutsu that involves the eyes. If the user's opponent looks at the user's eyes, he or she will be casted into a genjutsu without even knowing it, unless he or she could tell when they are in one. This genjutsu can only be described as living hell. After looking into the users eyes the surrounding area disappears and a fiery dark land that never ends forms around them, In this genjutsu the user can attack the enemy in anyway. Though, a mastered Ranmaru User that has not enough chakra can pass out, only required for those of Jounin and higher. This genjutsu cannot be Kai'd out of.

Bounshi Sepuku (Eye Concealment) A-Rank
Description: Using this the user can conceal their chakra and body, but as soon as the user attacks they are visible again. The user can NOT attack in this form. Could be used for stealth missions.

Kyounkan Ritsuzen (Assassin's Horror) A-Rank
Description: An eye technique. Also, a Genjutsu. Once the user looks into the enemies eyes with the Blood Red Eye time slows down for that enemy it seems as though you are moving at a high speed, or the enemy has been slowed down. This genjutsu cannot be Kai'd out of.


xxxxxSTAGE TWO
Once a Ranmaru wielder reaches Jounin rank, their eyes awaken a second stage; the red in their eyes seems to flare to life, making overexaggerated dramatic effects like swirling or even looking as if energy were leaping out from their iris. Beyond the aesthetics, they gain the strengths listed above for stage two.

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xxxxxxxxxxTHE SENJU
[ we like wood ]


xxxxxHISTORY
The Senju clan descended from the younger of the two sons of the Sage of the Six Paths who was born with the "body" of the Sage, inheriting his father's strength of will and physical energy and believed that love was the key to bringing peace to the world. The Sage grew to favor the ideals of his younger son over those of his older son, who believed that power alone was the true key to finding peace. Therefore, on his deathbed it was the younger of the two brothers that the Sage chose to name as his successor. The elder brother, bitter and hateful at having being denied what he felt was rightfully his to inherit, attacked his younger sibling. The Uchiha clan would descend from the elder brother, resulting in the bitter centuries-long rivalry between the Senju and the Uchiha.


xxxxxDESCRIPTION
Under most circumstances, the Senju are famed for their deepened chakra pools (similarly to the Uzumaki) as well as their abilities in Mokuton (Wood Release), Medical Ninjutsu, and their powers over Bijuu. However, their clan has received the title of "The Clan with a Thousand Skills" (「千の手を持つ一族」, "sen no te o motsu ichizoku"). From this, it can be inferred that the Senju possess the potential to be well-versed in all areas of combat.


xxxxxRULES
• Users of this Bloodline must have the Water and Earth elements unless they have the Elemental Specialist path.
• Typically, users of this bloodline will be incredibly charismatic.
• Members of this bloodline use the 'Senju' Class, a well-rounded class that doesn't specialize in any one area of combat. The only way to change this class is to become an Elemental Sage.



xxxxxWEAKNESSES
• Their wood is weak to Fire Jutsu.
• As a well-rounded clan, they don't excel incredibly in any one area of combat..



xxxxxSTRENGTHS
• If using the 'Elemental Specialist' section of the Senju Class, the single element is boosted by one rank in strength and speed.
• Heightened physical and mental stamina in battle.
• Well-versed in combat.



xxxxxPASSIVE ABILITIES
• Immense Chakra
By inheriting the 'body' of the Sage of Six Paths, they also inherited his vitality and survivability. Because of this, their chakra is increased substantially. (+15%)

• High Aptitude
Members of the Senju clan are not restricted to 'Learning Restrictions' based on class, meaning that every style/sub-element is available to them.



xxxxxTECHNIQUES

    Genin-ranked:
  • Mokuton: Shibu Shuriken [Wood Release: Branch Shuriken]
    A skill where the user has a branch emerge from the ground and swing towards the opponent. Released from the branch is bits and pieces of bark, that spiral off and transform into shuriken.

  • Mokuton: Moku Kawarimi no Jutsu [Wood Release: Wood Replacement Skill]
    A skill that is a build up upon Kawarimi no Jutsu, in which the user creates a dummy made of wood as they disappear. When the opponent attacks this kawarimi no jutsu version, will disperse into bits and pieces of wood hitting the opponent.

  • Mokuton: Moku Bunshin [Wood Release: Wood Clone]
    A skill that causes a bunshin made of wood to emerge either from the body or the ground. These clones can easily be tracked by the user, and they have a direct link with the user. When this bunshin is struck by taijutsu, half the damage is returned to the opponent. The clone can also transformed into a pill that when swallowed, the user and the caster of the pill can communicate through thoughts.

    Chuunin-ranked:
  • Mokuton: Soutei Hashira [Wood Release: Binding Pillars]
    A skill that causes various branches to emerge up from the ground. These pillars bind the opponent as they wrap around them. Making them incapable of moving so that they cannot escape.

  • Mokuton: Shichuuka no Jutsu [Wood Release: Four Pillar Home Skill]
    A skill that is used in order to create a shelter out of wood. This can be used in order to quickly make a shelter for a traveling shinobi, however it can also be used to change the flow of battle. Altering the surroundings to one the user can move around better.

  • Mokuton: Shichuurou no Jutsu [Wood Release: Four Pillar Prison Skill]
    A skill creating a large forrest of bamboo around the opponent, encasing them inside a prison of wood. The sides, are very hard to break through and metal weapons even have a hard time cutting through. If using a fire jutsu in order to break free, the user just causes the prison to catch fire and wait it out with unbearable pain.

  • Mokuton: Moku Shouheki no Jutsu [Wood Release: Wood Barrier Skill]
    A skill that creates various bits of wood to emerge from the ground, creating a cave type barrier around the user capable of absorbing large amounts of damage in the process. After the attack is over, the user can simply slip out the back side and continue with the battle. This jutsu can also be used, to make a complete barrier and also trap people inside.

  • Mokuton: Shi-do Torakkingu no Jutsu [Mokuton: Seedling Tracking Skill]
    A skill where the user can create a seed made from their own chakra. Able to sense where this seed is at all times, the user can plant this seed upon an opponent in battle and track their movements so the opponent can never get the drop on them.

  • Mokuton: Moku no Yoroi [Wood Release: Wood Armor]
    A skill where the user can create an armor made of wood, however this armor is a special type of armor. Weighing less then conventional steel armor, it is actually stronger then steel. Being heavily infused with Wood Chakra, making it very resilient to taijutsu damage. Ninjutsu blades can penetrate this armor.

  • Serial Pillar Houses Technique
    This technique is a larger scaled version of the Wood Release: Four-Pillar House Technique where, instead of creating a single house, the user creates multiple houses at once. Because of the sheer volume of structures created with this technique, it appears to exhaust him rather quickly. The user can create an entire section of a village with this technique.

  • Smothering Bind Technique
    This technique is similar to the Wood Release: Great Forest Technique, as it also transforms the user's arm into several wood tendrils which can be used to capture and restrain an enemy. It can be made large enough to capture a giant squid and strong enough to capture even taijutsu specialists of the same rank as the user.

    Jounin-ranked:
  • Mokuton: Moku Keiteki Denka no Jutsu [Wood Release: Wooden Rhino Charge]
    A skill where the user creates a large rhino from the ground, being approximately four and a half feet tall and six feet long, with a large horn that is about three inches in diameter and three feet long. The rhino charges towards the opponent, having a bunshin type of intelligence. Normally after charging into something stone or stronger, it dissipates into a pile of broken wood. However, it can easily plow through a forest.

  • Mokuton: Take Yaiba Joushou no Jutsu [Wood Release: Bamboo Blade Rising Skill]
    A skill where the user infuses their chakra through the ground, creating pillars of bamboo underneath the ground. As the opponent rushes towards them, the user releases this jutsu. Having multiple hollow bamboo spikes to emerge from the ground in order to impale the opponent from various angles. Spikes can reach a maximum of five feet tall, and there can be a maximum of thirty spikes

  • Mokuton: Kyuutai no Jukai no Jutsu [Wood Release: Orb of Genesis Skill]
    A skill where the user creates an orb of wood around themselves, acting as if it is some type of barrier. However, the barrier is actually a farce as when the opponent(s) get close from all sides various small branches emerge outwards in various striking motions to deflect all oncoming attacks from hitting the user while inflicting damage. branches are created all around.

  • Mokuton: Chakra Akyo Ki no Jutsu [Wood Release: Chakra Drain Tree]
    A skill which creates a large tree out from the ground, this tree being approximately fifty feet tall and having a diameter of fifteen feet. This special tree, knows in tune with the users chakra. So the user can run up the side of this tree without even using chakra, however any other shinobi that touches this tree in any way will have some of their chakra drained each moment they continue touching it.

    S-ranked:
  • Mokuton: Jukai Koutan [Wood Release: Birth of Dense Woodland]
    A skill where the user summons forth a great mass of woodland from the ground. This dense growth of woodland can roam around and constrict an opponent or even crush an opponent under its wake.

  • Mokuton: Mokuryuu Rendan no Jutsu [Wood Release: Wooden Dragon Barrage Skill]
    A skill that is a widespread attacking jutsu, where the user brings forth various dragon heads from the ground. These dragon heads are created out of wood, and essentially pin down the opponent onto the ground slamming them in the process. It is rumored this jutsu was used to help subdue Jinchuuriki.

    SS-ranked:
  • Mokuton: Kajukai Kōrin [Wood Release: Advent of a World of Flowering Trees]
    Taking advantage of the innate properties of Wood Release — to be able to force trees to grow on any surface in an instant — the user creates a dense forest of flowering trees. The pollen produced by these flowers is then released into the air and when inhaled, renders any afflicted target unconscious.

    With enough willpower, it is possible to regain consciousness. However, in order to counter the technique fully, either the trees themselves must be destroyed completely or the target must continue to remain elevated above the dispersed pollen. It takes three posts within the pollen to be rendered unconscious. If the user's willpower is strong enough to regain consciousness, their body still feels sluggish, reducing strength and speed by one rank while in the pollen. The pollen stretches out as high as the tallest tree, which is 400 feet in the air. The user of the technique is immune to the pollen.



xxxxxADDITIONAL COMMENTS
A very well-rounded bloodline for those people who want a well-balanced RPC. I feel that the current version of the Senju bloodline is...empty. It needs more flesh.

xxxxxRESTRICTIONS
• Must use the 'Senju' class.
• Cannot have an Angel/Demon/Curse Mark/Implant.
• The Senju are considered to have skill in all areas of combat. However, they aren't normally 'elite' at these areas of combat like other classes, though they can still easily hold their own.


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XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXSENJU CLASS

The ninja of the Senju bloodline are fearsome in their own way; they are well-versed in all areas of combat. They are ninjas of balanced nature, and can decently hold their own against nearly any opponent.

XXXSTRENGTHS
VERSATILE - Members of the Senju Class are able to learn various types of techniques. On top of that, their speed and strength is quite impressive. Because of this, the Senju are considered quite fearsome.


XXXWEAKNESSES
LACK OF SPECIALIZATION - The Senju are not 'exceptional' at anything with their base power. It takes a creative and skilled mind to use the Senju to their full potential.
SET NUMBER - The Senju--while they learn many things--don't have as much in every aspect as the normal ninja.
NO UNTAPPED POWER - Being a powerful class based on massive diversity, they just aren't focused enough on any one thing to make an even decent untapped power.

XXXBONUSES
Jutsu take less hand seals to perform.
Can learn everything in two less posts.
Moderately resistant to Genjtutsu.

XXXLIMITATIONS
- Multi-Elemental Path: Can learn three elements of Jutsu (Two of them must be Water and Earth if choosing this path). The final can be any one of the other main jutsu elements, including Medical. They may learn a total of 60 jutsu from all of their elements combined at Kage-rank. This does not include their Sub-Element. Bloodline Ninjutsu are not counted either; the Senju may learn all Wood Release jutsu.
Genin: 15 Total Jutsu
Chuunin: 20 Total Jutsu (Second Element Unlocked)
Spec. Jounin: 30 Total Jutsu
Jounin: 40 Total Jutsu
S-rank: 50 Total Jutsu (Third Element Unlocked)
Kage: 60 Total Jutsu

- NOTE: The Senju have another path to take in terms of Ninjutsu. The second path--called the 'Elemental Specialist' path--doesn't require the elements of Water and Earth, but the Senju can still use Mokuton techniques. They may learn all the jutsu of a single element--including medical--and be able to perform these techniques without hand seals. This would be their only element. An example of this would be Tobirama Senju's unbridled mastery of water, or Hashirama Senju's mastery of Medical techniques.

Additional Note: If a Senju were to become an Elemental Sage, they would have two limitations from the three below this note. The above two are the two 'sections' to the Senju class, and aren't 'actual' limitations. They're simply choices to make when you first build the character.

- Members of the Senju Class do not use puppets or puppetry jutsu.

- May learn a total of six Weapon/Taijutsu styles of their choice. The Senju are not limited by 'Class Requirements' needed to learn specific styles.

- The Senju can use certain amounts of Genjutsu at certain ranks. They have good skills in using Genjutsu, but their illusions can be escaped using Genjutsu: Kai. They can also escape most all illusions using Genjutsu: Kai, the only exception being illusions that cannot be escaped at all using Kai.
Genin: 5
Chuunin: 10
Spec. Jounin: 15
Jounin: 20
S-rank: 25
Kage: 30


XXXUNTAPPED POWER
Nothing!


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xxxxxxxxxxJINTON: PARTICLE RELEASE
[ and now for my disappearing act... ]


xxxxxHISTORY
Unknown history.


xxxxxDESCRIPTION
Dust Release (塵遁, Jinton; Viz "Particle Style") is an advanced nature kekkei tōta, an advanced version of kekkei genkai, which is created through simultaneous use of the earth, wind, and fire natures. The techniques of this nature initially form as a small three-dimensional object (e.g. a cube, a cone, etc.) composed of chakra that forms between the user's hands. When the technique is released, the form expands and surrounds the target. This nature allows the user to manipulate molecules, giving them the ability to disintegrate anything on a molecular level within the boundaries of the three-dimensional form.

Dust Release techniques seem to require a certain amount of time when preparing the three-dimensional object, making it possible to prematurely halt the technique before it is completed, but once it's finished, the technique can be fired with astonishing speed. The hands also play a crucial role in preparation of techniques, interfering with the user's arms can hinder the technique. Dust Release techniques also appear to be rather chakra-taxing.



xxxxxRULES
• The Jinton users are born with the ability to use three elements in their blood (earth, wind and fire). Although you don't gain your third element until Jounin rank, you can still use the Jinton at any rank. Those who are a part of the ninjutsu class and the Jinton bloodline can obtain up to [four] elements at Jounin rank. This is the maximum amount of elements for any bloodline currently known in the guild.
• You must use your hands to create every Jinton technique. Although they don't require handseals, it takes some while to form it in your hands and then release it. The creation is somewhat similar to the rasengan.
• The Jinton is not a solid mass; this means that something trapped inside of the Jinton's radius can escape it. It's not as if they're trying to break through a wall when exiting the perimeter. However, exiting the radius of a Jinton technique once you've already been surrounded by the jutsu is extremely painful and will leave second degree burns against any exposed skin, and first degree even through your clothes.
• You cannot substitute out of a Jinton technique or use a transportation jutsu, but if you know a teleportation jutsu on the level of the Flying Thunder God you can escape. The force of warping through the Jinton will still leave you in a state of pain, however.



xxxxxWEAKNESSES
• Lots of chakra, considering its level of chakra concentration and the general strength of the techniques
• Foes who can predict where your attacks are going to originate from will have little problem dealing with your bloodline. Also, considering you can't use genjutsu, it's very difficult (if not relatively impossible) to conceal the preparation of the technique.



xxxxxSTRENGTHS
• Almost all techniques, even low-ranked ones, have the potential to quickly kill the enemy
• Some jinton techniques are impossible to destroy once you've already cast them. Although they can be destroyed before they're used by destroying the sphere in the caster's hands, once the caster has released the technique, certain ones are indestructible (they'll mention if they are). This means there's no such thing as destroying the technique, only escaping it.



xxxxxPASSIVE ABILITIES
Genin & Chuunin: Size of your structures are only about [ 3 ] yards or [ 9 ] feet large max.
Jounin: Size of your structures are only about [ 5 ] yards or [ 15 ] feet large max.
Konin: Size of your structures are about [ 8 ] yards or [ 24 ] feet large max.
Sannin: Size of your structures are about [ 10 ] yards or [ 30 ] feet large max.
Kage: Up to [ 30 ] yards or [ 90 ] feet in radius



xxxxxTECHNIQUES
[The first two jutsu are perquisites for learning the rest of the jutsu.]

Jinton: Butai Sujuu no Jutsu - [ Dust Release: Elemental Manipulation ]
Rank - E
This jutsu allows the user to manipulate all three elements (they can't manipulate them in the normal fashion; all it means is that they can merge them) that they have at once which allows them to use the power of the kekkai tota: The Dust release to the fullest of their abilities. All users must learn this jutsu before they can fully and openly use the power of their Bloodline.

Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu - [ Dust Release: Detachment of the Primitive World Technique ]
Rank - D
This skill must be learned before one can learn the variation that are the true attacks. This skill forms a small sphere of chakra in the user palms. That orb is what creates the signature attacks of the bloodline. In other words, this is another skill you must learn, if you do not, than you cannot use any of the jutsu below.

Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Tama - [ Dust Release: Detachment of the Primitive World Technique, Spherical Variant ]
Rank - B
Create a sphere or orb structure, with a sphere of chakra located at its centre, between the palms of his hands. The structure expands rapidly in size when being propelled towards its intended target and traps them inside its confines. The chakra sphere then seems to explode with a tremendous amount of force, while the exterior walls of the structure effectively restrict the size of the blast radius, resulting in the destruction of just about everything and anyone caught within as they are pulverized into minute particles of dust.

Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Ensui - [ Dust Release: Detachment of the Primitive World Technique, Conical Variant ]
Rank - B
Creates Cone structure, with a sphere of chakra located at its centre, between the palms of his hands. The structure expands rapidly in size when being propelled towards its intended target and traps them inside its confines. The chakra sphere than explodes resulting in injuries and or the destruction of the material within the confines of the shape.Which in terms again results in the injuries or just about full destruction of that was held within the confines of the shape.

Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Enchuu - [ Dust Release: Detachment of the Primitive World Technique, Cylindrical Variant ]
Rank - B
Creates a Cylinder structure, with a sphere of chakra located at its centre, between the palms of his hands. The structure expands rapidly in size when being propelled towards its intended target and traps them inside its confines. The chakra sphere then seems to explode with a tremendous amount of force, while the exterior walls of the structure effectively restrict the size of the blast radius. Again like the other variants, injuring & destroying what is inside.

Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Kinjitou - [ Dust Release: Detachment of the Primitive World Technique, Pyramid Variant ]
Rank - A
Creates a pyramid structure, with a sphere of chakra located at its centre, between the palms of his hands. The structure expands rapidly in size when being propelled towards its intended target and traps them inside its confines. The chakra sphere then seems to explode with a tremendous amount of force, within the confines of the shape, in terms injury or destroying just about anyone or anything inside.

Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Rippou - [ Dust Release: Detachment of the Primitive World Technique, Cubical Variant ]
Rank - A
Creates a Cube structure, with a sphere of chakra located at its centre, between the palms of his hands. The structure expands rapidly in size when being propelled towards its intended target and traps them inside its confines. Just like the Variants before it the chakra sphere explodes within the confines of the structure. Also Because of the expanded area of space, the explosive force is more powerful.

Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Kukei - [ Dust Release: Detachment of the Primitive World Technique, Rectangular Variant ]
Rank - A
Creates a rectangle structure, with a sphere of chakra located at its centre, between the palms of his hands. The structure expands rapidly in size when being propelled towards its intended target and traps them inside its confines. Like the other variants the chakra sphere in the center explodes within the structure cause damage to anything or one inside. It is a bit stronger then then cubical variant.

Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Rokkaku Purizumu - [ Dust Release: Detachment of the Primitive World Technique, Hexagonal Prism Variant ]
Rank - S
Creates a massive Hexagonal Prism structure, with a sphere of chakra located at its centre, between the palms of his hands. The structure expands rapidly in size when being propelled towards its intended target and traps them inside its confines. Like the other variants the chakra sphere in the center explodes int he structure. Because of the massive size and area of the structure the blast is much more powerful.

Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Hakkakkei Purizumu - [ Dust Release: Detachment of the Primitive World Technique, Octagonal Prism Variant ]
Rank - S
Creates a massive Octagonal Prism structure, with a sphere of chakra located at its centre, between the palms of his hands. The structure expands rapidly in size when being propelled towards its intended target and traps them inside its confines. Like the other variants the chakra sphere in the center explodes int he structure. Because of the massive size and area of the structure the blast is a bit stronger than the Hexagonal Prism Variant.

Jinton: Supa OP Bakuhatsu Doomu - [ Dust Release: Destruction of the Primitive World Technique, Super OP Explosion of Doom ]
Rank - SS
The Jinton user cups their hands, and out of it comes a total sphere, with another sphere inside of it. They expand the sphere outwards; up to the size of a basketball. The expansion process takes about three seconds, and three seconds after it's expanded you can release the radius of the technique at the desired location. This technique takes only a few moments to kill whatever is inside of it in a super OP explosion of doom, and it's... an extremely powerful ability.


xxxxxADDITIONAL COMMENTS
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xxxxxRESTRICTIONS
• Considering this is a kekkei tota, an advanced and almost anciently powerful bloodline, it does not allow you the time to train in a clan (no clan)
• You cannot learn any genjutsu or medical jutsu. Your chakra has only learned to be controlled in one specific manner; in ninjutsu. You can be of any class excluding those heavily tied in with medical/genjutsu. They can't be a part of the freelancer class.


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                                          Name: Simon Semta
                                          Nickname: Snow White
                                          Age: 18
                                          Ethnicity: Roman
                                          Height: 5'11"
                                          Weight: 163 LBs
                                          Personality: Unable to find a balance; Simon is Wicked, Kind, Loving, Hateful, Sexual, Sterile, Happy, Sad, Angry, Calm. He is everything and its outverse property. He's unable to balance his emotions because he has no self control.

                                          Sexuality: Homosexual
                                          Family: Simon was legitimately lost as a child. His mom just took him to a mall one day, and the next day he was in the arms of a kidnapper. He was never harmed adversely by his pretend-parent, but living with him for so long meant no freedom for almost his entire childhood. He would read all of the books in his house, though. And when he wasn't looking, he'd practice ninjutsu. Eventually, he learned enough techniques to be able to take his captor on, and win. He never found his family because he didn't look. He... has resentment towards them for their lack of responsibility.

                                          Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j_PPjgVnIUk
                                          Nindo: "******** you."
                                          Background Info:

                                          Other Info Hates cats, hates dogs, hates most other animals... loves most food, although he's a big critic on most people's cooking; being a sort of a chef himself. He generally likes most people, but people who are unstable like him are his real favorites. He doesn't have that "room for one" attitude most people have. He totally embraces people like him, because only they can survive and thrive through his emotional fits.


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                                          Strength: Elements. Simon can obtain up to 5 elements at Jounin rank, and he relatively excels in each of these. He can also use the infamous Jinton: Particle Release, which stands to be his primary method of battle.
                                          Weakness: Genjutsu (sucks at it), Taijutsu (below-average), other misc stuff
                                            ↬ Fears
                                          Fears heights. Fears the wrath of Kim Jong-un.
                                          Village: Kusagakure
                                          Rank: Jounin
                                          Class: Ninjutsu
                                          Bloodline: Jinton: Particle Release
                                            ↬ Stage: Bloodline Head


                                          Chakra Points: 324

                                          Missions Complete:
                                            S -
                                            A -
                                            B -
                                            C -
                                            D -
                                            E -


                                          Opponents Defeated:
                                          Battle Theme: ]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1GRDm5KUBRI


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                                          Jutsu List:
                                            ↬ Number learned: ?
                                            ↬ Number to be learned: Lots moah brudduh

                                          Ninjutsu
                                            Fire

                                          a c a d e m y
                                            • Fire Release: One

                                          g e n i n
                                            • Boiling Point
                                            • Mythical Fire Flower
                                            • Flash Fan Technique
                                            • Flame Resistance Technique

                                          c h u u n i n
                                            • Powerful Fireball Technique
                                            • Aerial Explosion
                                            • Pulse Blast Technique
                                            • Flame Sphere Technique
                                            • Burning Rush

                                          j o u n i n
                                            • Fire Lily Technique
                                            • Hellfire Clap
                                            • Piercing Hellstrike

                                          s a n n i n
                                            • Fire Instant Transport Technique
                                            • Pandemonium


                                            Water

                                          a c a d e m y
                                            • Water Mirror Technique
                                            • Water Manipulation
                                            • Water Trick

                                          g e n i n
                                            • Water Puddle Technique
                                            • Water Shield Technique

                                          c h u u n i n
                                            • Water Puddle Transportation
                                            • Water Reflection Clone Technique
                                            • Water Chains Technique
                                            • Breathing Underwater Technique
                                            • Hidden Mist Technique

                                          j o u n i n
                                            • Water Prison Technique
                                            • Water Shark Blast Technique

                                          s a n n i n
                                            • Water Body Control


                                            Earth

                                          a c a d e m y
                                            • Earth Military Movement Technique
                                            • Swift Earth
                                            • Stone Bracers
                                            • Earth Transformation

                                          g e n i n
                                            • Inner Decapitation Skill
                                            • Rock Thorn Bed
                                            • Ram Head
                                            • Mud Weights
                                            • Earth Mound Creation
                                            • Earth Rope Technique
                                            • Earth Tremor Sense

                                          c h u u n i n
                                            • Earth Release: Mud River
                                            • Hell Zone: Rock Shard
                                            • Earth Dome
                                            • Ground Shockwave Technique

                                          j o u n i n
                                            • Earth Plate Barrage
                                            • Rock Army Shield
                                            • Lava Moat
                                            • Lava Swimmer
                                            • Earth Spear

                                          s a n n i n
                                            • Added Weight Rock Technique


                                            Wind

                                          a c a d e m y

                                          g e n i n
                                            • Propelling Winds
                                            • Air Pocket Bursts

                                          c h u u n i n
                                            • Shinku (Vacuum)
                                            • Low Air Pressure Technique
                                            • Tornado Trap

                                          j o u n i n
                                            • Great Infinite Sandblast Breakthrough
                                            • Assassin's Rush

                                          s a n n i n
                                            • Violent Wind Palm


                                            Lightning

                                          a c a d e m y

                                          g e n i n

                                          c h u u n i n
                                            • Lightning Transformation Technique

                                          j o u n i n
                                            • Lightning Sage Technique

                                          s a n n i n
                                            • Sigh of the Yellow Dragon


                                            Particle

                                          a c a d e m y
                                            • Jinton: Butai Sujuu no Jutsu
                                            • Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu

                                          g e n i n

                                            c h u u n i n
                                              • Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Tama
                                              • Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Ensui
                                              • Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Enchuu

                                            j o u n i n
                                              • Jinton: Super Mega Pew Pew Laser Beam
                                              • Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Kinjitou
                                              • Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Rippou
                                              • Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Kukei

                                            s a n n i n
                                              • Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Rokkaku Purizumu
                                              • Jinton: Genkai Hakuri no Jutsu, Hakkakkei Purizumu

                                              Taijutsu

                                            a c a d e m y
                                            g e n i n
                                            c h u u n i n
                                            j o u n i n
                                            s a n n i n
                                            Genjutsu
                                              Element 1

                                            a c a d e m y
                                            g e n i n
                                            c h u u n i n
                                            j o u n i n
                                            s a n n i n
                                              Element 2

                                            a c a d e m y
                                            g e n i n
                                            c h u u n i n
                                            j o u n i n
                                            s a n n i n

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