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 Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:24 pm
RPC Name: Red
Bloodline being applied for: Nightmare
Give me some strengths and weaknesses from the bloodline: The bloodline gets a true form that must be approved. They cannot become cowardly or fearful without losing their powers. They cannot have summons. Their bloodline skills cannot be accessed until adept. Nightmares are stronger than normal, and have a shorter reaction time.
RP Sample (Be sure to include said strengths and weaknesses in your sample:
Red walked through his city, his hands dragging alongside his waist. His red hair trailed behind him as the wind blew at him full force. Currently, he was in a fight with an insurgent with wind magic. It barely even seemed to be affecting Red. Suddenly, the man with the wind magic just slumped down and the wind stopped. He was too weak. Red's pressure was affecting him, weighing him down and causing him great mental stress. He could hardly even use his magic anymore. Red didn't need to do anything else, really. This battle was over before the first punch was thrown.
[Good enough? I'm way too lazy to write more right now.]
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:26 pm
Raimundo vi Britannia Emotion, Jackie. Emotions are the weakness. Other then Dark energy, which was explained without actually directly saying it.
As highborn creator I again vote no on that.
You showed no weakness. Your summoning also seemed to be lacking something key. It basically just seemed like a subpar post. The writing was ok, but other than that it was missing stuff.
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:27 pm
sacred - approved
harky - approved
Rai - I'll let DG judge you since it's his bloodline
@ Fools - Accepted.
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:35 pm
]RPC Name: William Rayne
Bloodline being applied for: Highborn
Give me some strengths and weaknesses from the bloodline:
less Strength, More speed. Weak against opposite Magic. Strong with element. Can only be 1 of 4 specified classes.
RP Sample:
Light... Dark... It all made sense because we had light and dark. without Light, there would be no Darkness, and without Darkness, where would be no light. an age old saying that without evil, there would be no good. Then why does the Hero always fight evil? Why does one always have to face the Hardships of the darkness, and why is it that the good is always left with nothing. The Evil... the Darkness... It takes away from you everything.
"Why do I fight it?" William said, backed against a tree. William could only breathe and look up into the sky's light. William's cross danced over his chest as he breathed, rising and falling like the waves of an ocean. like a wave of life energy. The Cross was a gift to William, by the Gods. Rykros, Rykoort, Pital, They were his to follow. William stared at the air in front of him, willing it to spring to life and speak to him. Nothing happened to him of course, but he could wish. His Father, a Highborn had tested him at a young age, after he had seen the markings that suggested Highborn. He had been given the Runic tattoo of Rykros on his back, and had arms spread like wings. The gods had given him his Cross, and he was officially a member of the HighBorn race.
Suddenly, a man staggered out of the woods, an arrow in his side. William ran to the mans side as he collapsed. Looking over the man, He knew what he must do. "Rykros, lend me your strength." William's hand glowed as he healed the man's side. "Behind... You." Was all the man could say weakly. William turned fast, catching the man by surprise. What William had also surprised the man with, was the sudden weapon in his hand. Reblleion glowed lightly from the energy that was used to bring it back into this world from Banishment. William had pulled Rebellion out of thin air. And the clash of blades brought a resounding ting to the area. William was fast, he knew that, but for some reason, strength failed him. The man that attacked him was a Warrior as well, well Trained, probably the head of whatever was attacking the poor man. Either way, the man was overpowering WIlliam.
William's strategy though, kicked in. He backed up quickly, pulled away his sword and the downed man with him. William recovered quickly, and used his speed to appear behind the Enemy. It was easy from there. "Holy Slash!" and Rebellion split the air in front of the man, killing him. William turned quickly, seeing three men. He held out his hand as he saw them hold up guns. "Holy Shield!" He shouted, blocking bullets. William sighed and did the last thing to scare them away. William held the Cross close to his hand and shouted: "Archangel's Rebirht!" He shouted. The men were instantly confused, but it was only moments before their confusion turned to shock. William had grown angels wings. The men couldn't run fast enough. The wings folded back as Rebellion disappeared. William turned and went back to tending the wounded man. Darkness was dawning on this once peaceful land, and it weakened William like a piercing blade through a non-vital area. The Light Energy used today would be his greatest weapon in defeating the darkness.
((Weakness is not just in the class or bloodlines, but the character. They May be bloodlines, but everyone is different.
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:49 pm
RPC Name: Nothing yet
Bloodline being applied for: Fae
Give me some strengths and weaknesses from the bloodline: Very fast, magical being. Small, weak, attract to beauty, no weapon, and did I mention that they're small ... like three inches ... smaller than my ...
RP Sample:
'How can men fight against me?' The cocky fae thought to himself as he whiz around the platoon of men, who's by the way is stupid enough to think that he can catch up to a fae on foot. 'Stupid human, so stupid they are.' Some would think that being 3 inches and not being able to carry any weapon are a disadvantages, but to him, they're pretty good advatages. He flew between the branches of the many trees occupying the forest ground, making sure that he is going slow enough that human would think that they have the chance to catch him, but fast enough that whenever they tried to, they can't. He let out a loud laugh, that to the human ear sounded like a giggle. The trap is set and ready to take its prey. He jetted toward the nearest human and flew around his head, laughing as he dodged the many hands that tried to catch him. When he is sure that he have gotten their attention and made them mad enough, the fae make a run, fly, for the opening several meters away. The humans, so furious at him now, dashed after the tiny demon. They reached the opening and made a leap to catch him, who is now hovering not far away, pretending to not see them. The next thing the fae heard are screams of flying men. He snickered and looked down under his feet, at the 200 feet drop, and stuck out his tongue at the hunters, who's now the hunted. To make thing even more fun, he began blasting bolts after bolts of lighting at the falling bodies. Each bolt would consume a large amount of magic, but being a magical creature that he is, he can waste a few drop.
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 5:27 pm
I'm basically going to be blunt.
Start from scratch.
Reread the bloodline.
I'm going to give you one last chance to get this thing before I tell all crew to ignore highborn requests from you.
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 6:20 pm
Holy Crap. I don't even think you know your Own Bloodline. I have half a mind to Portal my Axiom character here. Jesus.
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 6:22 pm
Raimundo vi Britannia Holy Crap. I don't even think you know your Own Bloodline. I have half a mind to Portal my Axiom character here. Jesus.
Yea, do that. Save me the trouble.
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 9:43 pm
iHarkyInferni-kun RPC Name: Arkadius Suidakra
Bloodline being applied for: Were-Beast [Werewolf]
Give me some strengths and weaknesses from the bloodline: Better senses, stronger at night, sharp claws, and fur is like armor in full transformation. Also they're weak against silver, weaker and slower in the daytime, cannot transform during day.
RP Sample:
Arkadius was running through the woods, the hunters hot on his trail. He had killed a couple sheep a few nights ago in his lycan form, and now these hunters were after him. Arkadius ran into a corner and turned around, seeing that the hunters had caught up with him and blocked off all means of escape. "s**t...." muttered Arkadius. He tried to find a way out, but there was nothing. He saw no choice but to fight back. He looked up at the sky and saw the large, full moon beaming down his face. Arkadius hunched over and put his hands to the ground as hair began to grow all over his body. His hat fell off, revealing a pair of ears. His muscles grew large and tore his shirt off his body. A tail punched through the back of his pants. He stood up as a large werewolf. "You little shits wanna take me on? Bring it...." he growled, his voice low and guttural. The hunters came in with spears, but Arkadius simply dashed back slightly and then hopped up, landing on the head of one of them. He bent his head down and then bit the man on the throat, tearing a chunk out and then jumping off. The hunters stood their ground and inched closer, but Arkadius roared and they froze in terror. Lunging forward, Arkadius swung his massive arms and smashed the skull of one hunter then breaking the arm of another. He roared again, but this time barking could be heard in the forest. Suddenly, ten wolves jumped out of the forest and landed around Arkadius. "Don't expect to take on just one wolf and not have to fight the whole pack. We run together and we will never leave each other to die. Now, let's hope your pack of humans holds up against mine." Immediately, the wolves lashed out at the hunters and overwhelmed them. Arkadius just stood and and laughed before he got bored and walked away from the scene, knowing that his pack would finish the job.
This battle wasn't over however. There was one more hunter off in the distance. A hunter that had a bow was watching as Arkadius was running away. He nocked an arrow and pulled it back. A shimmer came from it as the moon hit it. The shimmer could only come from one thing; silver. The hunter fired the arrow and it pierced Arkadius in his right thigh. The silver made Arkadius feel faint. He fell to the ground and threw up, forcing his body to revert back to its normal form. "What the ********! Why...is...he using...silver...arrows..." muttered Arkadius. He tried to get up, but his body wasn't working. Arkadius crawled for a while and made it back into the forest away from view of the archer. He sat there for a while. He was too weak to pull out the arrow so he left it in. Arkadius soon passed out and then woke up to the sun beating down on his and his wolves laying near him. With the sun out, Arkadius was even weaker than before. "Please, my friends, pull out this arrow. It won't hurt you like it does me. Please...help me..." he said as his wolves ripped the arrow out from his leg. They helped him up and then dragged his near-lifeless body back to their shelter.
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 10:29 pm
RPC Name:
Darius J. Fitz
Bloodline being applied for:
Draconian
Give me some strengths and weaknesses from the bloodline:
Draconian are considerably tall compared to other bloodlines, they have tough scales making for a tough opponent, and they are powerful creatures, but they are slow, and can become entranced by music or gold/jewels.
RP Sample:
"... Are you sure you want to do this...?" he stated quietly, his voice gruff. He didn't want to attack the young boy, but he would if he had to. The boy simply stared at him with intensity, now showing his fangs. "Looks like there's no evading this...," Darius muttered as hi wings sprouted from his back. Watching the man intently, Darius waited to see what the boy would do. With a smirk, the young were-beast began to charge at the Draconian, obviously aiming to strike his chest area. Opening his mouth slightly, Darius began to hiss out a mist of acidic saliva (Acid Spit). Without realizing it, the boy would then rush into the mist, and the acidic mist seeped into his eyes, causing a burning sensation. In pain, the boy began to yell as he cupped his hands over his eyes. As he was distracted, darius then spread his wings and took flight into the sky (Flight). As the burning dyed down, the boy began to wipe tears away from his eyes as he looked around, noticing Darius had seemingly vanished. But from above, a ball of fire the size of a soccer ball would fall from the sky, followed by three more (Flameburst). As the boy heard flames cracking above him, he quickly looked up to see the fire balls falling, dodging all four using his heightened instincts. However, those were simply distractions set by Darius. From the boy's side, the Draconian came swooping in, his jaw opened and bearing his fangs (Monster Bite). Before the boy could react, Darius had managed to bite hard into the flesh on the boy's arm, so much force that it managed to break his arm. Darius then followed up with a swing from his tail coming from behind the boy to trip him. Laying there in agony, the draconian sighed, sorrow clear in his eyes. "Sorry... I said I did not want to fight," he stated in remorse. As the boy soon fell unconscious due to shock, Darius picked the boy up in his arms and walked him to the nearest village with a hospital.
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 9:16 am
I didn't see any real weaknesses, but assuming I can approve them, it's approved. Just keep in mind the weaknesses. Also this bloodline might be getting some much needed crew attention later, so be sure to be ready to have to change things if things are changed drastically. The wolf pack skill doesn't really do that, but I saw your summons so I'll go with the sample. Assuming I can approve this, it's approved.
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 4:26 pm
tinymini7 RPC Name: Nothing yet Bloodline being applied for: Fae Give me some strengths and weaknesses from the bloodline: Very fast, magical being. Small, weak, attract to beauty, no weapon, and did I mention that they're small ... like three inches ... smaller than my ... RP Sample: 'How can men fight against me?' The cocky fae thought to himself as he whiz around the platoon of men, who's by the way is stupid enough to think that he can catch up to a fae on foot. 'Stupid human, so stupid they are.' Some would think that being 3 inches and not being able to carry any weapon are a disadvantages, but to him, they're pretty good advatages. He flew between the branches of the many trees occupying the forest ground, making sure that he is going slow enough that human would think that they have the chance to catch him, but fast enough that whenever they tried to, they can't. He let out a loud laugh, that to the human ear sounded like a giggle. The trap is set and ready to take its prey. He jetted toward the nearest human and flew around his head, laughing as he dodged the many hands that tried to catch him. When he is sure that he have gotten their attention and made them mad enough, the fae make a run, fly, for the opening several meters away. The humans, so furious at him now, dashed after the tiny demon. They reached the opening and made a leap to catch him, who is now hovering not far away, pretending to not see them. The next thing the fae heard are screams of flying men. He snickered and looked down under his feet, at the 200 feet drop, and stuck out his tongue at the hunters, who's now the hunted. To make thing even more fun, he began blasting bolts after bolts of lighting at the falling bodies. Each bolt would consume a large amount of magic, but being a magical creature that he is, he can waste a few drop.
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Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 4:52 am
RPC Name: Vulcan Fullbuster
Bloodline being applied for: Crow
Give me some strengths and weaknesses from the bloodline: Some weaknesses are their curiosity which could in fact be a bad thing, often seen as a "foreign devil", if their animal dies their base stats permanently go to 1/1.
Some strengths, include 7/7 stats which makes them capable of rivaling even the most fierce bloodlines in brute force. And, they get a huge animal companion... Which is pretty Bad-A if you ask me. They can access each others minds, and a few skills.
RP Sample:
Vulcan rushed forth toward his three opponents, that rushed at him too, despite his class he refused to hide, not this time. He rushed at them with his inhuman speed, holding no weapons. He jumped high into the air over the head of the first one, which not only surprised him causing him to look up- but surprised the one rushing behind him leaving him completely open. His feet came down with crushing force into the ninjas chest,crushing his ribs as his body hit the ground with the extra 245 lbs of pure muscle on top. The first one didn't have time to react to the giant snake that slithered with speed that was extremely hard to see. Its fangs sank into the mans skull ending his life, he didn't waste any poison as his bite alone would kill him. The third stopped in his tracks. Seeing a snake dislocating its jaw and devouring one of his comrades, and the other crushed under toe, must have been a real mind blowing experience, but the snake shouldn't have ate him, though it had hardened scaled to block most attacks on the outside, its insides were still soft and weak, he hadn't known that what he had swallowed would actually have a bunch of explosive weapons. The explosion was sudden, and unexpected. Vulcan screamed in pain as he gripped his forehead, he suddenly grew weak, and then a blade ran across his neck, ending his life. He had allowed his comrade to die, and he had died along with it...
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Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 10:21 am
@ Full - I don't see the Crows up so let me check on them for you.
@ Tini - Approved
@ Rai - He's not being overbearing. Some description on the weaknesses would go a long way. If DG says start from scratch, then start from scratch. Secondly, he's not doing this to be mean. I told you before not to be rude. I really don't want to have a problem Rai. But even I think your sample is lacking. I'm not saying post four pages, but more descriptions would be better and probably get you approved.
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Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 11:53 am
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