|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 12:48 am
SorceressJacklyn tinymini7 SorceressJacklyn @Wulf: Your passives shouldn't be so. Give them a cost, duration, and cooldown. @Tiny: Too many strengths, not enough weaknesses. Gotta give something up in exchange for all that, not just the energy to activate. I edit it, giving each element its own weakness. Okay, that's a good start. You're a Fae, right? Because I don't think you need a +2 to your speed for a shield. As for the Earth one, I would say even a Fae flying between the rocks is still slowed down by -2 speed and at risk of hurting themselves. With the air shield, I'm thinking of it like a major boost that allow him to become somewhat like a trickster. The rock sure, -2 speed, but can I make it so that the rock is a little faster. I make 5 because they're human speed but since it is created by elementalist fae, can it be like a 8 speed rock? The Sidhe clan are mostly elementalist, so their natural speed are 13.
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 12:53 am
tinymini7 SorceressJacklyn tinymini7 SorceressJacklyn @Wulf: Your passives shouldn't be so. Give them a cost, duration, and cooldown. @Tiny: Too many strengths, not enough weaknesses. Gotta give something up in exchange for all that, not just the energy to activate. I edit it, giving each element its own weakness. Okay, that's a good start. You're a Fae, right? Because I don't think you need a +2 to your speed for a shield. As for the Earth one, I would say even a Fae flying between the rocks is still slowed down by -2 speed and at risk of hurting themselves. With the air shield, I'm thinking of it like a major boost that allow him to become somewhat like a trickster. The rock sure, -2 speed, but can I make it so that the rock is a little faster. I make 5 because they're human speed but since it is created by elementalist fae, can it be like a 8 speed rock? The Sidhe clan are mostly elementalist, so their natural speed are 13. I meant an extra -2 when you try to fly between the rocks. Anyway. The air shield is a shield, not a speed booster. It has nothing to do with being like tricksters. If you want a speed boosting skill, then make one. And your passive I'm gonna deny if your talent gets approved. That would be too ridiculous combined.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 1:06 am
SorceressJacklyn tinymini7 SorceressJacklyn tinymini7 SorceressJacklyn @Wulf: Your passives shouldn't be so. Give them a cost, duration, and cooldown. @Tiny: Too many strengths, not enough weaknesses. Gotta give something up in exchange for all that, not just the energy to activate. I edit it, giving each element its own weakness. Okay, that's a good start. You're a Fae, right? Because I don't think you need a +2 to your speed for a shield. As for the Earth one, I would say even a Fae flying between the rocks is still slowed down by -2 speed and at risk of hurting themselves. With the air shield, I'm thinking of it like a major boost that allow him to become somewhat like a trickster. The rock sure, -2 speed, but can I make it so that the rock is a little faster. I make 5 because they're human speed but since it is created by elementalist fae, can it be like a 8 speed rock? The Sidhe clan are mostly elementalist, so their natural speed are 13. I meant an extra -2 when you try to fly between the rocks. Anyway. The air shield is a shield, not a speed booster. It has nothing to do with being like tricksters. If you want a speed boosting skill, then make one. And your passive I'm gonna deny if your talent gets approved. That would be too ridiculous combined. If my talent get accepted, that mean if not then I get to keep it? I changed the air to instead 2 speed but boost to reaction speed and hearing. Is that too much or should I take out the hearing? Oh and I change and make it last 5 post instead of three, because of the underwater part when I reread it. I'm planing on doing some major water activity, involving drowning an entire landscape, if possible Edit: I changed the air to one feet radius
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 1:09 am
tinymini7 SorceressJacklyn tinymini7 SorceressJacklyn tinymini7 SorceressJacklyn @Wulf: Your passives shouldn't be so. Give them a cost, duration, and cooldown. @Tiny: Too many strengths, not enough weaknesses. Gotta give something up in exchange for all that, not just the energy to activate. I edit it, giving each element its own weakness. Okay, that's a good start. You're a Fae, right? Because I don't think you need a +2 to your speed for a shield. As for the Earth one, I would say even a Fae flying between the rocks is still slowed down by -2 speed and at risk of hurting themselves. With the air shield, I'm thinking of it like a major boost that allow him to become somewhat like a trickster. The rock sure, -2 speed, but can I make it so that the rock is a little faster. I make 5 because they're human speed but since it is created by elementalist fae, can it be like a 8 speed rock? The Sidhe clan are mostly elementalist, so their natural speed are 13. I meant an extra -2 when you try to fly between the rocks. Anyway. The air shield is a shield, not a speed booster. It has nothing to do with being like tricksters. If you want a speed boosting skill, then make one. And your passive I'm gonna deny if your talent gets approved. That would be too ridiculous combined. If my talent get accepted, that mean if not then I get to keep it? I changed the air to instead 2 speed but boost to reaction speed and hearing. Is that too much or should I take out the hearing? Oh and I change and make it last 5 post instead of three, because of the underwater part when I reread it. I'm planing on doing some major water activity, involving drowning an entire landscape, if possible If you don't get your talent, you can keep the passive. As for hearing... no. It would destroy your little eardrums to hear more than you already can.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 1:17 am
OK, what if I take that and the reaction and turn it into a somewhat invisibility, like chameleon? Hard to see but can still be seen, blending into the background. Or if that doesn't work, can I make it so that it make Aes become silence. Not sure how silence a buzzing flyer can be but I'm thinking silence to whatever the equvilence of a lycan here. Oh and if the talent got through, can I turn the passive into telepathy with the scarf? How about with one more person?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:35 am
RPC Name: Emma Johnson
RPC Rank: Student
RPC Class: Hunter
RPC Element: Wind
Weapon Name: The Anemoi's Bow
Description: A composite recurve bow made of wood/horn/resin. It's painted dark turquoise green and around the limbs, close to the tip of the bow, there's a red-gold band upon which is inscribed a few symbols from another language which, when translated, mean "Boreas" "Sirocco" [top ring] "Zephyr" and "Simoom" [bottom ring]. The draw weight is 45 lbs., when strung it is 1.34m long and unstrung it is 1.49m. It allows anyone who can manipulate the wind to add more strength to bow attacks. The strongest skill that can be used has a 1.3 multiplier to strength while the weakest is a 1.1 multiplier to strength. The multipliers don't accumulate. Since this bow combines the element with a weapon, casting any of the skills takes an extra 10 MP.
Rank: Once mastered, it is at best an S ranked weapon. Though it can be used as just a normal bow until the user learns how to control the different skills tied into the weapon.
Passives:
-. . . You can use it to shoot an arrow without calling on the wind. . . like Robin Hood. Though whether or not you can actually pull off a Robin Hood is another story and depends entirely on skill (or is it luck? Why you'd want to split your own arrow in two is beyond me though…. stare )
Skills:
-Gale Force: The user focuses the power of the wind in the arrow and releases it, sending an arrow sheathed in a sharp cone of air to fly towards the target. This arrow has an easier time cutting through any obstacles (made out of fabric, wood, or leaves only) that suddenly appear in its way without loosing any of the power of the shot. (D Rank)
-Cyclone Shot: An arrow traveling with hurricane speeds is shot towards the target. The speed of the shot depends on the users ability to wield wind magic. There's an extra layer of wind around the arrow allowing it to cut through weak metals (such as copper) but only dent or bend stronger metals (i.e. steel, iron). (B Rank)
-Mad Zephyr: The arrow can cut through most metals with very few exceptions (exceptions being if the armour is ranked S or higher. It can only dent S ranked armour). As the user prepares to release the arrow, the wind picks up violently around the bow, then as the arrow is released a super fast streak of pale violet light seems to fly from the arrow surrounded by a spinning shaft of air, which upon hitting the target knocks him back and the arrow after either penetrating the skin or being stopped by armour, expands for a fraction of a second, causing serious internal damage or leaving a dent in a ten centimeter diameter, and/or shattering bone. (S rank)
RP Sample: (as i did the first two in the custom skills section I'm only doing Mad Zephyr here…)
[…]Knowing that she might be unsteadied if she used this skill, she used her tail to wrap around the tree and anchor her to the spot. Then she concentrated on the thin line of exposed flesh at his neck and smoothly nocked her fourth arrow. She had one more left after this since she had already used up the majority of them on this guy's friends and didn't think this bumbling toady would require that she restock before approaching him. Her mistake. She better make this one count. Emma brought her draw hand back, her slightly curled fingers only centimeters away from her skin; the hand holding the bow, steady. She could do this. Had she been wearing anything but form fitting yet flattering clothing, it would be ruffling violently like the leaves on the tree at this point. He started to move, about to get to his feet, she had to hurry this up. The wind continued to pick up and she was thankful for her anchor when she released the arrow, seeing it streak across the gap in a pale violet light and hitting it's mark. She gave a predator's grin to no one in particular and swung down from the tree, landing lightly and quietly on her feet. There was no way he would survive that. Even if her arrow hit the edge of his chest plate, the sphere of destruction that followed would cut into his skin, ensuring his death. Her tail swayed behind her as she walked off, purring in satisfaction.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 11:45 am
xXx-Wulf-xXx RPC Name:
Noctis
RPC Rank:
Master
RPC Class:
Mind Blader
RPC Element:
Fire
Name of Weapon/Armor:
Villicus' Vision
Description:
Villicus' Vision is a small black vizor that goes over the eyes. It goes around the front of the head and covers the eyes and an inch lower. This is just the normal version all see. But once activated it transform, it becomes three visors that cover half the fore head and his eyes. The visors glow dark purple while the spaces between them become pitch black. Normal form is made of glass and another material. It's true form it's made of energy so the Mind Blader Pure Weapons Skill works on it.
Rank:
A or B
Passives:
No One But Me
Passive(Duh)
The Visors aura makes sure he can be tracked by the means of mental or energy reading. It blocks off his mind to mind reading and makes his energy un-see able. Though Scent still applies..
Skills:
True Form
C Rank
This Activates the visors true abilites and allows them to take affect. Once activated it takes D Rank to deactivate it. Last for 6 posts and has 6 post cooldown.
Sight Of Villicus
C Rank
Peoples,creatures, or anything that gives off energy aura. It could see though a foot of steel or walls in general. Last 5 posts and has three post cooldown
Three Swords
C Rank
The user charges his energy into the vizor and glows a dark purple. Once charged it unleashes three waves of the dark energy that was forming in the three visors. Once fired they will grow to 3ft in width and 1/2 foot tall.
Eye of Villicus
A Rank
The Visors spilt in two and open up, as they do this a purple eye starts to form. It slowly moves on to the target and look at it as it charges the beam. Once fully charged it fires out a large beam at the enemy, leaving burns.
Rp Sample:
The city at night always was beautiful with their lights and movement of them. His visor showed him so much more, large movements of auras moved though it and lights had a crona of aura around them now. Truly the beauty had no end to it.... Sounds of moving metal and footsteps could be heard. Noctis didn't need to turn to check who they were. His Legion was told to stay away when he was doing this. He looked though the visor, and spots two assassins dressed in black... He didn't need his cross for these morons... All he wanted was peace but no.... He waves his hand across the visor. It slowly changes as aura covers the three bars of the visor, his energy sight reacted sightly to it but nothing to different. The assassins rushed at him with weapons drawn. The three bars glow and Noctis rakes the visor and launches three waves of energy at the first. Connecting the waves bring him into the ground. The other close now was a problem. He steps back and dodges his slashes as the visors open showing the purple eye now."Die...." it charges and fires sending him back as his face is burned to a crisp. Noctis forms his sword and goes to the one to the ground and stabs him though his heart. This war was coming he could only take so many.... there Jackie But I want to keep first, I mean just keep people out of his head and his energy unseen
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 7:38 am
@Wulf: Villicus's Vision looks like what, cyclops's weird goggles thing? Also:
No One But Me - How does it block off his mind if it's only over his eyes?
True Form - I have no idea what you mean by three visors, but I'm gonna assume it looks very silly <.<
Three Swords - What do the waves of energy do? Do they change the color of things to purple or something?
Eye of Vilicus - What kind of burns does it leave?
@Gataki: That thing in the description about strength multipliers through the use of wind would be a passive. Anywho, arrows don't cut, they pierce, and please set up the skills so they're in this kind of a format:
Name of Skill:
Rank:
Description:
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 7:47 am
The Talented Fool @Wulf: Villicus's Vision looks like what, cyclops's weird goggles thing? Also: No One But Me - How does it block off his mind if it's only over his eyes? True Form - I have no idea what you mean by three visors, but I'm gonna assume it looks very silly <.< Three Swords - What do the waves of energy do? Do they change the color of things to purple or something? Eye of Vilicus - What kind of burns does it leave? @Gataki: That thing in the description about strength multipliers through the use of wind would be a passive. Anywho, arrows don't cut, they pierce, and please set up the skills so they're in this kind of a format: Name of Skill: Rank: Description: Gosh, true form looks like what's on my avi's face, No One but Me: the reason it does that is an aura covers the body, which this aura negates the energy being seen, with the mind thing the aura keeps out all unwanted energies.(So no mind control) Three Swords is basic dark purplish aura that fires out and can leave 3rd to 2nd degree burns. The Eye leaves maybe 2nd to 1st
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 7:52 am
Quote: RPC Name: Emma Johnson
RPC Rank: Student
RPC Class: Hunter
RPC Element: Wind
Weapon Name: The Anemoi's Bow
Description: A composite recurve bow made of wood/horn/resin. It's painted dark turquoise green and around the limbs, close to the tip of the bow, there's a red-gold band upon which is inscribed a few symbols from another language which, when translated, mean "Boreas" "Sirocco" [top ring] "Zephyr" and "Simoom" [bottom ring]. The draw weight is 45 lbs., when strung it is 1.34m long and unstrung it is 1.49m. Since this bow combines the element with a weapon, casting any of the skills takes an extra 10 MP.
Rank: Once mastered, it is at best an S ranked weapon. Though it can be used as just a normal bow until the user learns how to control the different skills tied into the weapon.
Passives:
-. . . You can use it to shoot an arrow without calling on the wind. . . like Robin Hood. Though whether or not you can actually pull off a Robin Hood is another story and depends entirely on skill (or is it luck? Why you'd want to split your own arrow in two is beyond me though…. stare )
- It allows anyone who can manipulate the wind to add more strength to bow attacks. The strongest skill that can be used has a 2.0 multiplier to strength, the B Rank skill a 1.7 multiplier, and the weakest is a 1.6 multiplier to strength. The multipliers don't accumulate.
-At rank D there's a 3 post cool down; rank B, 6 post; and rank S is a 10 post cool down.
Skills:
Quote: Skill Name: Gale Force Skill Rank: D Description: The user focuses the power of the wind in the arrow and releases it, sending an arrow sheathed in a sharp cone of air to fly towards the target. This arrow has an easier time piercing any obstacles (made out of fabric, wood, or leaves only) that suddenly appear in its way without loosing any of the power of the shot. Skill Name: Cyclone Shot Skill Rank: B Description: An arrow traveling with hurricane speeds is shot towards the target. The speed of the shot depends on the users ability to wield wind magic. There's an extra layer of wind around the arrow allowing it to pierce weak metals (such as copper) but only dent or bend stronger metals (i.e. steel, iron). Skill Name: Mad Zephyr Skill Rank: S Description: The arrow can pierce most metals with very few exceptions (exceptions being if the armour is ranked S or higher. It can only dent S ranked armour). As the user prepares to release the arrow, the wind picks up violently around the bow, then as the arrow is released a super fast streak of pale violet light seems to fly from the arrow surrounded by a spinning shaft of air, which upon hitting the target knocks him back and the arrow after either penetrating the skin or being stopped by armour, expands for a fraction of a second, causing serious internal damage or leaving a dent in a ten centimeter diameter, and/or shattering bone.
RP Sample: (as i did the first two in the custom skills section I'm only doing Mad Zephyr here…)
[…]Knowing that she might be unsteadied if she used this skill, she used her tail to wrap around the tree and anchor her to the spot. Then she concentrated on the thin line of exposed flesh at his neck and smoothly nocked her fourth arrow. She had one more left after this since she had already used up the majority of them on this guy's friends and didn't think this bumbling toady would require that she restock before approaching him. Her mistake. She better make this one count. Emma brought her draw hand back, her slightly curled fingers only centimeters away from her skin; the hand holding the bow, steady. She could do this. Had she been wearing anything but form fitting yet flattering clothing, it would be ruffling violently like the leaves on the tree at this point. He started to move, about to get to his feet, she had to hurry this up. The wind continued to pick up and she was thankful for her anchor when she released the arrow, seeing it streak across the gap in a pale violet light and hitting it's mark. She gave a predator's grin to no one in particular and swung down from the tree, landing lightly and quietly on her feet. There was no way he would survive that. Even if her arrow hit the edge of his chest plate, the sphere of destruction that followed would cut into his skin, ensuring his death. Her tail swayed behind her as she walked off, purring in satisfaction.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 7:53 am
xXx-Wulf-xXx The Talented Fool @Wulf: Villicus's Vision looks like what, cyclops's weird goggles thing? Also: No One But Me - How does it block off his mind if it's only over his eyes? True Form - I have no idea what you mean by three visors, but I'm gonna assume it looks very silly <.< Three Swords - What do the waves of energy do? Do they change the color of things to purple or something? Eye of Vilicus - What kind of burns does it leave? @Gataki: That thing in the description about strength multipliers through the use of wind would be a passive. Anywho, arrows don't cut, they pierce, and please set up the skills so they're in this kind of a format: Name of Skill: Rank: Description: Gosh, true form looks like what's on my avi's face, No One but Me: the reason it does that is an aura covers the body, which this aura negates the energy being seen, with the mind thing the aura keeps out all unwanted energies.(So no mind control) Three Swords is basic dark purplish aura that fires out and can leave 3rd to 2nd degree burns. The Eye leaves maybe 2nd to 1st Add the bits for Three Swords and the eye thing and one more thing, what's the max range of the eye beam thing, and how huge is it?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 7:59 am
The Talented Fool xXx-Wulf-xXx The Talented Fool @Wulf: Villicus's Vision looks like what, cyclops's weird goggles thing? Also: No One But Me - How does it block off his mind if it's only over his eyes? True Form - I have no idea what you mean by three visors, but I'm gonna assume it looks very silly <.< Three Swords - What do the waves of energy do? Do they change the color of things to purple or something? Eye of Vilicus - What kind of burns does it leave? @Gataki: That thing in the description about strength multipliers through the use of wind would be a passive. Anywho, arrows don't cut, they pierce, and please set up the skills so they're in this kind of a format: Name of Skill: Rank: Description: Gosh, true form looks like what's on my avi's face, No One but Me: the reason it does that is an aura covers the body, which this aura negates the energy being seen, with the mind thing the aura keeps out all unwanted energies.(So no mind control) Three Swords is basic dark purplish aura that fires out and can leave 3rd to 2nd degree burns. The Eye leaves maybe 2nd to 1st Add the bits for Three Swords and the eye thing and one more thing, what's the max range of the eye beam thing, and how huge is it? Max range is most likely 20-25 feet and it's 2 by 2
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 8:02 am
gataki_xx Quote: RPC Name: Emma Johnson
RPC Rank: Student
RPC Class: Hunter
RPC Element: Wind
Weapon Name: The Anemoi's Bow
Description: A composite recurve bow made of wood/horn/resin. It's painted dark turquoise green and around the limbs, close to the tip of the bow, there's a red-gold band upon which is inscribed a few symbols from another language which, when translated, mean "Boreas" "Sirocco" [top ring] "Zephyr" and "Simoom" [bottom ring]. The draw weight is 45 lbs., when strung it is 1.34m long and unstrung it is 1.49m. Since this bow combines the element with a weapon, casting any of the skills takes an extra 10 MP.
Rank: Once mastered, it is at best an S ranked weapon. Though it can be used as just a normal bow until the user learns how to control the different skills tied into the weapon.
Passives:
-. . . You can use it to shoot an arrow without calling on the wind. . . like Robin Hood. Though whether or not you can actually pull off a Robin Hood is another story and depends entirely on skill (or is it luck? Why you'd want to split your own arrow in two is beyond me though…. stare )
- It allows anyone who can manipulate the wind to add more strength to bow attacks. The strongest skill that can be used has a 1.3 multiplier to strength while the weakest is a 1.1 multiplier to strength. The multipliers don't accumulate.
Skills:
Quote: Skill Name: Gale Force Skill Rank: D Description: The user focuses the power of the wind in the arrow and releases it, sending an arrow sheathed in a sharp cone of air to fly towards the target. This arrow has an easier time piercing any obstacles (made out of fabric, wood, or leaves only) that suddenly appear in its way without loosing any of the power of the shot. Skill Name: Cyclone Shot Skill Rank: B Description: An arrow traveling with hurricane speeds is shot towards the target. The speed of the shot depends on the users ability to wield wind magic. There's an extra layer of wind around the arrow allowing it to pierce weak metals (such as copper) but only dent or bend stronger metals (i.e. steel, iron). Skill Name: Mad Zephyr Skill Rank: S Description: The arrow can pierce most metals with very few exceptions (exceptions being if the armour is ranked S or higher. It can only dent S ranked armour). As the user prepares to release the arrow, the wind picks up violently around the bow, then as the arrow is released a super fast streak of pale violet light seems to fly from the arrow surrounded by a spinning shaft of air, which upon hitting the target knocks him back and the arrow after either penetrating the skin or being stopped by armour, expands for a fraction of a second, causing serious internal damage or leaving a dent in a ten centimeter diameter, and/or shattering bone.
RP Sample: (as i did the first two in the custom skills section I'm only doing Mad Zephyr here…)
[…]Knowing that she might be unsteadied if she used this skill, she used her tail to wrap around the tree and anchor her to the spot. Then she concentrated on the thin line of exposed flesh at his neck and smoothly nocked her fourth arrow. She had one more left after this since she had already used up the majority of them on this guy's friends and didn't think this bumbling toady would require that she restock before approaching him. Her mistake. She better make this one count. Emma brought her draw hand back, her slightly curled fingers only centimeters away from her skin; the hand holding the bow, steady. She could do this. Had she been wearing anything but form fitting yet flattering clothing, it would be ruffling violently like the leaves on the tree at this point. He started to move, about to get to his feet, she had to hurry this up. The wind continued to pick up and she was thankful for her anchor when she released the arrow, seeing it streak across the gap in a pale violet light and hitting it's mark. She gave a predator's grin to no one in particular and swung down from the tree, landing lightly and quietly on her feet. There was no way he would survive that. Even if her arrow hit the edge of his chest plate, the sphere of destruction that followed would cut into his skin, ensuring his death. Her tail swayed behind her as she walked off, purring in satisfaction. Change the strength modifier passive so it has some form of cool-down period; it'd have to be increased with the higher multiplier. Also you can increase the multiplier a bit, the strength of the enhanced shots would only be between 5.5 - 6.5.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 8:04 am
xXx-Wulf-xXx The Talented Fool xXx-Wulf-xXx The Talented Fool @Wulf: Villicus's Vision looks like what, cyclops's weird goggles thing? Also: No One But Me - How does it block off his mind if it's only over his eyes? True Form - I have no idea what you mean by three visors, but I'm gonna assume it looks very silly <.< Three Swords - What do the waves of energy do? Do they change the color of things to purple or something? Eye of Vilicus - What kind of burns does it leave? @Gataki: That thing in the description about strength multipliers through the use of wind would be a passive. Anywho, arrows don't cut, they pierce, and please set up the skills so they're in this kind of a format: Name of Skill: Rank: Description: Gosh, true form looks like what's on my avi's face, No One but Me: the reason it does that is an aura covers the body, which this aura negates the energy being seen, with the mind thing the aura keeps out all unwanted energies.(So no mind control) Three Swords is basic dark purplish aura that fires out and can leave 3rd to 2nd degree burns. The Eye leaves maybe 2nd to 1st Add the bits for Three Swords and the eye thing and one more thing, what's the max range of the eye beam thing, and how huge is it? Max range is most likely 20-25 feet and it's 2 by 2 it can be 20 then feet, put that in and it's approved.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Fri Aug 12, 2011 8:18 am
The Talented Fool gataki_xx Format fixed, word choice edited, anything else? Change the strength modifier passive so it has some form of cool-down period; it'd have to be increased with the higher multiplier. Also you can increase the multiplier a bit, the strength of the enhanced shots would only be between 5.5 - 6.5.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
