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 Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2004 3:34 am
 Please let me know what you think as this is my first edit. I would like to improve, thanks.
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2004 4:27 am
Azziado Please let me know what you think as this is my first edit. I would like to improve, thanks.
it's not bad at all. The upper body armor could use a little more shading. It looks a bit flat. Shading on the edges would make it look a bit rounder.
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2004 4:49 am
I love the flaming effects you used on the sword... very classy, shame they got cut off at the top... any chance you could shorten the sword to avoid that?
thanks Cyn and Mercy for the kind words on my latest edit. The hair might seem solid, but that's the way it goes I'm afraid. blaugh
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2004 10:15 am
cynbaby Azziado Please let me know what you think as this is my first edit. I would like to improve, thanks.
it's not bad at all. The upper body armor could use a little more shading. It looks a bit flat. Shading on the edges would make it look a bit rounder.
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2004 12:30 pm
looking better, Oz. You should now probably add some darker shadows over to the right of the clothes.
See at the moment both shoulders of your ava are the same lightness... this would imply that they're lit from straight on, which they're not.
Since you did the edit facing the left, your light source is on the right of him, you seem to have picked up on that well in the cloth part at the bottom, since one side is darker than the other.
Just follow that same principle on the vest, and you'll be on track.
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2004 5:02 pm
Vorty looking better, Oz. You should now probably add some darker shadows over to the right of the clothes. See at the moment both shoulders of your ava are the same lightness... this would imply that they're lit from straight on, which they're not. Since you did the edit facing the left, your light source is on the right of him, you seem to have picked up on that well in the cloth part at the bottom, since one side is darker than the other. Just follow that same principle on the vest, and you'll be on track.
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2004 7:17 pm
shocktv3 Potto The Magnificent A sith (for those not familiar with that mumbo jumbo, a sith is half human, half alien
the sith are an ancient order devoted to the dark side of the force. domokun Stop being stupid and start realizing that the world doesn't revolve around star wars. Words can have more than one meaning.
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Posted: Sun Aug 22, 2004 11:43 pm
 Alright, I feel very happy with my final edit. I hope I got everything this time around. You might not be able to tell but I also edited lots of other things that were bothering me. The only regret I have is not being able to get his two braids to look like braids. It’s cool and I’m finished with this edit, time to move on to my next one. Thank you very much for your insight and very specific constructive criticisms/feedback. Cheers
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Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 6:01 am
most welcome Oz. Keep up the good work! 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 2:54 pm
Another mask for you all. This brings me tantalisingly closer to finishing the set! I give you: The Gibdo Mask!
 comments and criticisms, anyone?
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Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 5:53 pm
My latest edit request, here's an anthro-angelic cat sweatdrop 
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Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 7:03 pm
Potto The Magnificent Potto The Magnificent shocktv3 Potto The Magnificent A sith (for those not familiar with that mumbo jumbo, a sith is half human, half alien
the sith are an ancient order devoted to the dark side of the force. domokun Stop being stupid and start realizing that the world doesn't revolve around star wars. Words can have more than one meaning. im sorry shocktv3, i apparently didnt pick up on ur obvious sarcasm. i forgot that i am on vacation rite now, and am allowed to relax a little bit.
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Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 8:17 pm
shocktv3 Potto The Magnificent Potto The Magnificent shocktv3 Potto The Magnificent A sith (for those not familiar with that mumbo jumbo, a sith is half human, half alien
the sith are an ancient order devoted to the dark side of the force. domokun Stop being stupid and start realizing that the world doesn't revolve around star wars. Words can have more than one meaning. im sorry shocktv3, i apparently didnt pick up on ur obvious sarcasm. i forgot that i am on vacation rite now, and am allowed to relax a little bit. Yes, yes, sweatdrop My appologies. Anyways, here's a comic to release the tension: 
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 7:56 am
lol... bless those fan girls. xd
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Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 2:53 pm
Vorty lol... bless those fan girls. xd If you like that one, there's a whole section of them in my museum wink
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