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Posted: Sat Sep 11, 2010 12:15 pm
More Guild wides
Name of jutsu:Hive mind Rank of Jutsu: B Range of jutsu: You'll see Element:aburame Description: The host will allow his insects to nest inside the head, around the brain, which will improve their relationship, and allow the ninja to recieve info from the ninja without them having to return to him. Sample:Does it need a sample?
Your Rank: Spec Jo Name of Jutsu: Scamper Rank of Jutsu: B Range of Jutsu: Jutsu's Element:Aburame Description: ((GUILD WIDE)) THis technique has two main uses. The first scatters the insects out on the ground around you. If any of them ar disturbed than they will swarm to whoever disturbed them and begin an attack. The second sends a team of insects scrambling across the ground at your opponent. If they get close enough they shoot up from the ground and knocks them into the air upper cut style. Note that these techs are just like formations, and require no chakra seals or words. Rp Sample Kay was engaged in battle with a taijutsu user who clearly was faster than he is. He stood still and his insects formed a protective circle around him, watching his the opponent intently. He made the mistake of stepping on one bug and they all swarmed him, attempting to suck out his chakra.
He managed to survive and ran away, and Kay touched the ground. The insects scampered across the ground and uppercuted the arrogant ninja.
Your Rank:spec jo Name of Jutsu: Swarm manipulation Rank of Jutsu: c Range of Jutsu: Jutsu's Element:Aburame Description: This jutsu works in conjunction with hive mind technique since it deals with brain waves. The insects will take any shape the user wants and fly at enemies. This is a handy dandy jutsu for confusion as they can take any shape within reason and wil the right amount of bugs. It again takes no chaklra seals or words to use. Rp Sample "Swarm manipulationo jutsu," Kay whispered to himself as the team of ninja dashed towards him. the bugs swarmed behind him and flew directly towards the enemy ninja. They took the shape of shuriken on the fly, and the ninja dodged them, fearing actual damage. The downside was that they changed direction and hit them from behind, attaching and begginning to suck out chakra. The swarm then formed a wave and attempted to overtake the three, who jumped over and attacked Kay with swords. He simply stood as the insects grabbed his leg, taking the shape of a mini shukaku and slammed him into the ground. ((Good enough to get the point?))
Your Rank: spec jo Name of Jutsu: Kikaichu buzzing disturbance Rank of Jutsu: C Range of Jutsu: depends on the enmies hearing. Jutsu's Element:Aburame jutsu Description: This jutsu can easily cause anxiety and paranoia to rise among enemies. With even a small group of kikaichu, an aburame can make the swarm seem a lot larger than they are by making his beetles buz extremely loud with extremely fast wingbeats. Though it does nothing than confuse, against a paranoid target it is known to cause insanity. As with my otehr custosm, it requires no chakra, seals, or words. Rp Sample "Their, their everywhere!" the old man screeched as the buzzing sound rose and Kay stepped closer and closer. He stared into the man's eyes, his glasses removed, and held out a hand. "Now do you understand?" Kay asked as the buzzing grew louder and more annoying. The poor old man was clearely loosing his mind, the buzzing causing him to think there were more insects than their really were. The poor old coot fell and began crawling and crawling, the buzzing growing louder until it ceased and the man's heartbeat rose. The small swarm crawled towards him, creepy horror movie music playing in his mind as the buzzing continued. "NOOOOOOOO!" he yelled as his eyes closed and Kay began to laugh.
Your Rank: spec jo Name of Jutsu: Kikaichu Typhoon Rank of Jutsu: A Range of Jutsu: Jutsu's Element:Aburame Description: At least half of the swarm will begin to fly in a circular motion as the jutsu begins. The insects coelesce into one singular typhoon and move towards the target. Once trapped inside, a target will be attacked relentlessly, their chakra nearly completely drained if they are inside it for more than three posts. This is avoidable, unless the target has a female insect, in which case it is unavoidable. Once inside, a c ranked jutsu can dispell it. No seals or words required. Rp Sample "You should always have an ace up your sleeve," Kay called as the kikaichu began flying counter clockwise in a large circle. These insects coalesced into a typhoon that began moving rapidly towards this unprepared enemy, also tagged with a female, and they were upon him in seconds, biting and sucking away chakra as he struggled to even move around...
Your Rank: spec Jo Name of Jutsu: Kikaichu Pupa Rank of Jutsu: A Range of Jutsu: Jutsu's Element:Aburame Description: After parasetic insects typhoon begins, this jutsu will be useable, under correct terms. The enemy will have to have been inside for at least one post, and they must have een weakened prior to it, such as more than five posts of battle. The insects will actually pick the foe up and he will be trapped in the vortex. If they can't break out within the next post after they are caught in the tornado, the next phase can begin. Meanwhile, the user will step inside the typhoon, placing a hand into it's walls as the poor enemy is thrown in the circle, and an enourmous amount of insects will be gathered there. The user will push his hand diganolly against the tornado, causing the group he gathered to swirl around the tornado, and then crush inward, curshing the enemy inside inside the kikaichu's grasp. No seals or words. Rp Sample The Aburame noticed the insects had carried his foe away and smirked. "Good boys," he said stepping through the hazardous disaster and looking to the sky. He place a hand in the current and then threw it against the tornado, swirling around and then crushing it down upon him, the entire structure now around the poor guy. "Remember the ace?"
Your Rank: special Jo Name of Jutsu: Kikaichu Finale Rank of Jutsu: S Range of Jutsu: Jutsu's Element:Aburame Description: This technique follows parasetic insects, pupa, and finishes the three attack combo. As the insects crush down upon him, the aburame will hold up a hand. The insects will push him straight up into the air, attacking him as they do so, and then disperse. As he falls back to the ground the sinsects will form two gigantic drills, one above and one below the enemy. The user wil twist his hand, beginning the spinning of the drills, and then make a fist, causing them to attack from both sides, boring into the enemy. This technique has potential to kill you, and if not it will severely impair you. Rp Sample "This is what I meant by the Ace," Kay said raising his hand as all the insects flew up, carrying the man violently with them until they were all either above or under him in the air. Kay twisted his hand as the formed to gigantic drills, and then he squeezed the hand into a fist as the insects began to bore into the man. Afterwards, the man fell, bloody and near his death, to the ground as the kikaichu flew around Kay, dispersing without his body where it once stood...
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 7:47 pm
Your Rank: special jo Name of Jutsu: Kikaichu deterioration Rank of Jutsu: A Range of Jutsu: Jutsu's Element:Aburame Description: This is one of the greatest jutsu an aburame has at his disposal. The kikaichu will seemingly eat away at the users body, turning him into a living swamr of kikaichu insects. This can last as long as the users chakra does, and it will take C ranked chakra every turn ((After an a rank start up cost)). THese insects will ne the same as any picked up after a mutation jutsu. ((See my other custom jutsu)). The downside is if the swarm is completely destroyed than the Aburame will be killed, but seeing as how it is a massive swarm, larger than usual, it will be diffucult. Requires a single handseal that must be held throughout one whole post. The rest are your posts as the swarm itself. This swarm is more dangerous since it is literally a single, hive mind that all carry out the same thoughts and can coelesce into different shapes. Rp Sample "Kikaichu deterioration," Kay managed as the Aburame's body began to literally turn into a massive swarm of insects. His enemies were ignorant, thinking that this was only one single swamr, and attacked with a simple fireball. They were suprised when the bugs evaded to the side and then took to the air, forming into hundreds of small balls flew at the men. They were skilled evaders, easily escaping all the attacks, but unable to fathom the brain power of the hundreds of insects working together. They scampered across the ground, the main swarm coming down with a mind breaking chorus of buzzing that they tried to ignore. One man jumped up, trying to get over the crawling inseects, but they were smart, all of them suddenly rising like a dome around him and entrapping him as a part of the main swarm also attacked. This while the other male hid behind a wall, unaware that a female was in his long hair. Before a minute, the swarm was all around him, screams and ninja tools flying around as he tried to escape fates hands.
In the after math, all the insects swirled into a small tornado, Kay coming together from the feet up to stare at his unconcious opponents.
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 2:58 pm
hive mind: declined. sorry, but it'll just prove to be too confusing with the system we have right now.....
Scamper: seems a little strong for a c-rank, don't you think? i mean, it swarms the opponent in basically one move. make it b-rank.
Swarm manipulation: i think we have a jutsu for this already, one that costs less chakra.
Kikaichu buzzing disturbance: it can be c-rank, if you'd like. approved/
Kikaichu typhoon: this will have to be an a-rank. it nearly depletes the target's chakra.....isn't that a little strong? so yea, a-rank. also, we still haven't decided a current system for the aburame clan, so this jutsu might be forced to change.
Kikaichu pupa: sorry, this is declined. again, its too powerful. basically allows you to kill any taijutsu user as well as anyone who doesn't know a c-rank offensive move.
kikaichu finale: approved.
kikaichu deterioration: ok, i'll approve this, but the user's body has to have some sort of restriction. like, -10 agility or something like that. otherwise, its approved
also, speak to Hikaro_rin about some aburame jutsus. a friend of mine and her developed some interesting jutsus for POTS and it would be a good idea to run your ideas by her first
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 3:05 pm
You mean Kuro? I actually got Hive mind from him. And trsut me, the kikaichu pupa can't kill, it really only causes all the bugs to crush down on him.
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 4:13 pm
hmm.....hive mind is approved, because i trust kuro's judgment. pupa is still declined though ninja
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 4:15 pm
Okay, but in light of this, am I allowed to just make the gigantic drill able to form like hail storm and then the two drills just descend on you, and if you have a female it will home slightly, but after getting sto close to the ground it won't be able home in anymore.
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 4:27 pm
uh.....sure. just make sure you don't abuse the ability
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 7:55 pm
Alright so what if I make it a five post closing in effect, the second of which is the last time it can continue to home before it goes on a collision course.
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 8:18 am
this batch is all new and not yet approved... enjoy!
Name of Jutsu: shadow meld Rank of Jutsu: C Jutsu's Element: Nara clan Description: The user steps into a preexisting shadow, like one cast by a large rock, and melts into it. The user cannot move, or perform jutsu, but becomes very difficult to track. This jutsu is easily detected by byakugan, and other traces such as footprints and smell still remain. This jutsu is designed for recon and infiltration. The preexisting shadow becomes darker, depending on the size. The larger the shadow, the less noticable the change is. This jutsu can only be used on sensible sized shadows, like a large rock, nothing much smaller than the ninja him/her-self. The Jutsu takes up the whole post, and cannot be used with other attacks or defenses. This skill costs 2 chakra every turn after initial use. If the shadow itself is broken (a bright flash, or otherwise making the shadow too small to hide in) then the jutsu is broken, and the clan member is revealed. Rp Sample Shika stepped into the shadows of the room where the meeting was to be held. She had managed to sneak past the guard outside and get in this room without raising alarm. Now all she needed to do was practice the new Jutsu she had designed specifically for this mission. She performed the familiar Nara handsigns, and stopped on the last one. Unlike normal Nara jutsu, this one did not branch out her shadow, but instead it seemed to dissolve into the existing shadow cast by the tall chair. She whispered, “Shadow meld no jutsu” and began to meld with the shadows behind a large banner that blocked the light from the single light on the table. The room was designed for interrogations, and thus the shadows were meant to intimidate, but to Shika it was a beautiful present. [interesting non-relevant interrogation] The meeting was almost over, when things turned for the worse. Not only was the captured ninja beginning to reveal important details, but the interrogators began to lighten the mood. Eventually someone decided to turn all the lights, and that was it. The lights made the shadow almost nothing, and Shika was revealed as if she had been standing there the whole time.
Name of Jutsu: Shadow Tracking Rank of Jutsu: C Jutsu's Element: Nara clan Description: The user performs the same seals as Kage mane, but when the jutsu connects it doesnt trap the other ninja. The user then performs another couple seals and the shadow thins out making it difficult to see. This makes it appear that the Kage mane merely failed, but the thin stretch of shadow holds the connection. This technique allows the user to keep track of another ninja as long as they remain in the same area (thread). This jutsu must be stopped before attempting other shadow grabbing moves such as Kage mane. Rp Sample Shika Nara was getting tired of this game, the ninja had managed to break free of her Kage mane without trouble, and was very good at hiding. He had made no effort to hide his shadow as he ran out of the forest, but he was fast and good enough at hiding that after he attacked she couldnt tell where the next was coming from. She didnt want to waste chakra trying to hold him, since he could easilly escape. All she needed was to find out where he was so she could send her team to ambush him. He ran at her again, this time from the front. Perfect. She performed the seals with incredible speed, and her shadow reached towards the approaching figure. “Hah! You know that jutsu wont work!” he shouted, and then his laugh became a roar of laughter when the shadow thinned out. “You can't even hold the jutsu anymore! You must be getting weak!” he ran back into the forest without attacking, but Shika knew where he was. She called her team on her headset, and told them the plan
Name of Jutsu: Shadow Barrier (night) Rank of Jutsu: A Jutsu's Element: Nara clan Description: This jutsu calls out a large shadow which surrounds an area in darkness. This version of the move can only be used in already dark places or at night. It becomes almost impossible for anyone trapped inside to see, and is broken if the user is hit by any attack. Because it envelops the area in darkness, there are no shadows inside, and other Nara jutsus cannot be used. Rp Sample Shika stared out at the mob surrounding her, and sighed. She knew there were too many ninjas here, even if they were just genin. Her hands formed multiple seals, and a her shadow stretched out in all directions, creating a large dome of darkness. She then proceeded to walk through the crowd being careful not to be noticed. She didnt want some hotshot to attack her and ruin the jutsu after all.
Name of Jutsu: shadow barrier (day) Rank of Jutsu: S Jutsu's Element: Nara clan requirements Shadow Barrier (night) Description: This jutsu is exactly like Shadow Barrier (Night) except it allows the user to create the dome in daylight or bright areas. Rp Sample Shika stared out at the mob surrounding her, and sighed. She knew there were too many ninjas here, even if they were just genin. Her hands formed multiple seals, and a her shadow stretched out in all directions, creating a large dome of darkness. She then proceeded to walk through the crowd being careful not to be noticed. She didnt want some hotshot to attack her and ruin the jutsu after all.
Name of Jutsu: Air current Rank of Jutsu: C Jutsu's Element: Fuuton Description: This jutsu is used to alert the user of tresspassers. The user calls a light breeze that surrounds a base site, and any tresspassers will break the flow, and alert the user. To any who walk through it, it would feel like little more than a light breeze. This move cannot be used if the user is outside of the area. This move is stationary, and is designed specifically to guard camp sites. Rp Sample Shika had set up camp, and sat down in the middle. The careless genin she had been tasked with escorting began setting up camp without a care in the world. Shika let them take care of the simple stuff and went to her own task of protecting the camp. Her hands slowly performed the necessary seals as she focused her chakra. “Air current no jutsu” she said calmly, as she focused on the soothing wind chakra. A light breeze formed around the camp, and she noticed a chill run down the genin's spines. “It's getting a little breezy all of a sudden!” one complained, but Shika ignored him. She would know if any intruders showed up, and that was all that mattered right now.
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 2:40 pm
Six: nah, that won't work. sorry ninja
Hikaro: YOU ARE HEREBY BANNED FROM THIS GUILD FOR MAKING TOO MUCH CUSTOMS!!!!
well, not really..... although i hate approving these, your customs do provide incentive for joining the less popular clans stare .....think you can do some for the yamanaka?
shadow meld: hmm....ok. its approved, but i'm still not sure if it should be used in battle.
Shadow Tracking: approved
CONGRATUALTIONS
!!!http://www.gifbin.com/bin/1237811519_chuck-norris-approves.gif
Shadow Barrier (night): make it a post limit, like 5 posts. also, the jutsus should take 1 whole post before being able to surround an area in darkness.
shadow barrier (day): same as above, though it doesn't have to b s-rank
Air current: approved, but it should have a post limit, unless used by NPC's.
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 5:13 pm
scream Nerd... you didn't check the custom crying puppets crying crying crying crying crying
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Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 6:13 am
if you really want more jutsus to approvve i suppose i could. twisted shadow meld: i agree, it isnt for use in battle. ill put something in there about that. shadow barrier: i dont remember why i made them seperate, and unless i do ill just make them the same jutsu ok?
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Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 8:01 am
yea, those shadow barriers can be the same jutsu if you'd like
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Posted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 7:06 pm
Just For Rei Quote: Your Rank: Jounin Name of Jutsu: Unlimited 8 Trigrams: 361 Palms Rank of Jutsu: S Class Range of Jutsu: None Jutsu's Element: None Description: By combining the knowledge of all 8 trigrams techniques, and all the techniques of the Hyuga clan, the user correctly assaults all 361 chakra points of the opponents human body. By using the burst in chakra technique, they gain the speed and strength necessary for this attack. After using it, they rush in at the foe and strike with precisions, at least ten of the points at the start. Then they begin to swirl around them, and in a matter of seconds, completely strike all of the foe's chakra points, effectively cutting off their chakra for the next ten posts. Rp Sample A strong uppercut was thrown towards the man as it hit directly, sending him flying back to a tumble. The man known as Rei Hyuga had been fighting for quiet some time, a mang he was supposed to arrest and capture. This man hadn't killed anyone... So Rei didn't think it fair to kill him. But fighting him without his sword was difficult, since he seemed to be able to block ever single attack and effectively counter. Even for the awesome strength of the Hyuga clan, this was proving challenging. He easily pushed off the ground and landed on his feet, still skidding back from the force of the punch. He was covered in scratches and bruises... The other man not having even one. Rei spit out to the ground, chuckling and looking pretty beat up. "Heh... Y-you're good." He whispered to himself. "It's been a while since I had to go all out... But you earned it." The man he had been fighting left no emotion on his face, offering no care that Rei had just said he was going all out. A sigh escaped his lips, "Geez guy, show a little enthusiasm." The man quickly rebuttaled, saying that he had wished to fight a swordsman of the mist, not some stupid chunin who thought he could win. "...Ouch bud, that really stung..." Rei was the head of Kiri's Anbu, so to be insulted like that... Just wouldn't do. His leg length went outwards a bit as he crouched a bit low. "Alright then... I'll show you the power of a 'chunin'." His stance took the stance of the eight trigrams, sixty four palm... No wait. His body change with his arms slowly starting to turn to the side... Eight trigrams one hundred and twenty eight palms? Maybe... No... He went even further, completely turning his arms inward towards himself, the chakra flow starting to build inside him. A powerful burst of chakra might be felt around him, his chakra increasing, his body's movements seeming more precise. His leg seemed to pull inward now, looking like he'd push off of it. He suddenly vanished... His speed obviously having peaked. He now stood in front of the man... "Ten palms..." the man's eyes widened as he had felt the ten strikes to his body, slightly being pushed back. "Twenty palms!" He yelled out, suddenly being behind him as he struck ten more times for a total of twenty. "Forty palms!" His movements were unreal as he boosted in somewhat of a cyclone like tornado around the man, striking constantly over and over again. The man could feel the pain kicking in full throttle, coughing. His body looking like it was being hit from all sides. "Eighty palms... One hundred and twenty palms......... Two hundred and forty palms...." Faster and faster his body went, the increase in speed showing tremendously until finally. "Three hundred and sixty..." He appeared right in front of the guy, his arm back stretched. With a full force swing forward, he unleashed one powerful final strike on the guy's stomach. "One palms!" The man's entire body seemed to lightly up with chakra from being struck in all of his tanketsu, before he was forced back, he flying a couple yards back. Rei stood, breathing heavily from the end of his attack. "Geez... Is that Chunin power?" Quote: Your Rank: Jounin Name of Jutsu: Burēdodansu Rank of Jutsu: Jounin (Think of it as a sword style's skill, not really needing any chakra to do this) Range of Jutsu: None Jutsu's Element: None Description: The user must have three swords when using this technique (holding two in their hand and one on their toes). The user starts by getting around to the back of the foe, then wrapping their blade around their head so that it's to their throat. Then they pull the blade, slitting their throat and starting to spin around with the blades, spiraling like they are dancing. They hold the blades outward so that they slice the foe's back, by the end the foe should have a slit throat, and 3-6 slices (depending on how many times they spin) on their entire backside (including back of legs). It also helps to ward off multiple foes. Rp Sample Jobs only got harder and harder the higher rank you got right? Yea of course they did. That's why as the third strongest person in the village, Rei would have some pretty hard a** missions, right? Yea well... Why the hell did it have to come down to assassination? A sigh escaped his lips as he stood in the middle of the room, looking around in the dark. He was surrounded, and he knew it. His great Byakugan helping him see in the dark, the eyes that looked at him getting ready to strike. It would be rather annoying to kill... He hated it. But these guys were in his way, and if he didn't kill them he'd fail the mission. He could knock them out, but he felt the deserved to die, especially after the fact that probably every single one of them had seen death before, death from their own hands. This meaning they have killed... And deserved to be killed. "Well... You just gonna stand there like pansies or are you gonna attack?" He prompted, waiting for them to finally lay assault. A yell came from behind him, someone finally attacking. He stood still, like he didn't know it was coming. With a quick and sudden turn around and one quick slash, the blade of his Inazuma sunk into the gut of the man, causing him to fall backwards from the force and tumble to the ground, dead. His blade and struck into the ground, standing out of it. "Cool, another blade." He whispered, chuckling. In his left hand he held his special blade, the blade that made him rather famous, Inazuma. It was the lightning blade, and it made him a swordsman of the mist, the lightning Akuma. In his right hand he held a normal blade, it long and having a black handle. His eyes slowly started to scan the darkness, but without moving. Another man yelped, starting to come from behind again. Rei sighed... This man was moving too slow. With a quick spin around with a somewhat dancing maneuver, his blade went up to the man's neck as he spun to his back. His foot outstretched, grabbing the third blade that the previous man had dropped with his toe. "Burēdodansu..." He whispered on the wind as the blade that had been to the man's throat flowed across, slitting it. His body began to whirl in an elegant tornado like fashion, striking the man twice in the back, and once on the back on the knees. He fell down in pain, dieing from the places injured as he fell to the floor, blood still pouring from his neck. A grin held on Rei's face. "Who's next?" He yelped, waiting for the others to assault. As expected, they had known that alone they couldn't win. They four of them decided to strike, all trying to gang up on Rei with their swords. "Not cool..." He whispered, his foot extending in a kick like fashion, his body spinning again. His left arm pushed out, cutting two across the chest with deep wounds, his leg kicking up to slice another upwards, and his right arm pushing backwards to stab one in the face. He had killed them all, in one fell swoop. The others saw, he only smirking as his foot went back down, he taking a normal stance. "That it?"For All Hyuga Quote: Your Rank: Jounin Name of Jutsu: Kaminari Yashi Rank of Jutsu: C rank Range of Jutsu:none Jutsu's Element: Lightning Description: A long ranged Pin point strike. By focusing lightning chakra into the tips of the user's fingers the user thrust's their hand out, sending a bolt of lightning chakra. Once it hits, it will shut down about five chakra points in one hi, the electricity spreading to shut them down. Rp Sample "Damn... This is turning into a real predicament." Ya know... Fighting a long range person really had been his failure. He always sucked at long range... Though it was only natural, since he was after all a taijutsu specialist. "I don't gotta choice do I... Damn." He didn't care for many long range jutsus, but in these sorta situations he had no choice. He pulled his hand up, pushing his fingers together like he was going to strike a tanketsu. He focused his chakra into the tips, they starting to glow and spark like they were filled with lightning. "Lightning Palm is good for this sorta situation..." he spoke to himself as he quickly pushed out of the tree he had been hiding behind, and thrusted his hand towards the foe. A very fast bolt of lightning shot out at a very quick pace, one that caught the foe off guard. They were hit directly in the stomach... Direct hit. Using his byakugan he watch as some of them seemed to be shut off. "Heh... No problem." He tumbled back behind cover by another tree. This match was as good as won. Quote: Your Rank: Jounin Name of Jutsu: Byakugan Version 3: Ryuusei Seikuken Rank of Jutsu: Jounin, but passive skill as long as you have Byakugan Range of Jutsu: None Jutsu's Element: None Description: A sort of, Ultimate State of the Bykugan, where as, the first version (360 vision) is best as fighting multiple enemies, the second version (Telescopic vision) is best as fighting long range and tracking, the third version, the Ryuusei Seikuken, is actively one best for fighting against a stronger opponent. By focusing the view of the byakugan's vision to only around one's self, to somewhat of a skin tight layer, the user can cover all weak spot's around their body. By creating this Byakugan, the user can dodge out of the way of an attack at the exact last second needed. This allows for less wasted movements, and stronger reaction time. But it requires complete focus, and will only be activated once the person is completely focused on the opponent. If they are hit even once, they are knocked out of focus and can't activate it again for a 3 more posts. More then one opponent makes it hard to use against. This technique is so rare, that it cannot be known unless the person has learned it from someone who already knows it. The creator of this technique, is Rei Hyuga, he does know it. Rp Sample Focus... He needed focus... This sort of battle was not to be won lightly. A great battle was going on right now, between two high class leveled fighters, one being a man who wanted one of the swords of the mist, Inazuma, the blade of lightning. He had many assassination attempts, but this had the strongest he'd had for a long time. So he wanted to use one of his strongest attacks... Or rather, type of attacks. This guy over all had stronger movements, faster swings of the sword, was an overall great adversary. But... Rei was the third strongest fighter in Kirigakure, and he wouldn't take that lightly. So the time for talk was over... Now was the time to focus on the task at hand, defeating this man. He took the stance of the normal gentle fist style, but his face was... Emotionless. His eyes looking soulless. He looked calmed and cold... the eyes of his own special Byakugan. The man let out a loud and angry yell as he rushed forward, swinging his sword with great speed and strength in a vertical slash. The blade came directly in the way of his body, literally millimeters away from his face... But his body suddenly moved, sliding away to the right side. His whole body dodging the blow with increased precision. With un-seeable speed he struck the man's arm three times with pinpoint strikes. His blade was sticking in the ground from the force of the blow... And his arm wasn't responding. Rei had countered in direct points to make his full arm go numb, he letting out a frustrated grunt. His Ryuusei Seikuken Byakugan was really handy for people stronger then him... It was obvious who'd win this match. He was indeed as strong as they say... The title of The Kaminari Oni, wasn't lightly gained.
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 2:22 pm
Crow:
Unlimited 8 Trigrams: 361 Palms: Denied. Shutting chakra down for the whole battle? put a post limit on it, like 10 posts or something. chakra is basically what the majority of ninjas fight with, unless they are tai or weapon spec. either way, add a post limit or add a better cost.
Burēdodansu: make it jounin and its approved.
Kaminari yashi: approved. btw, we still need a a byakugan chakra point system. we'll talk more about it in the crew forum, but if its not too much trouble, i think i'll leave the job to you, since you are the clan head.
Byakugan Version 3: Ryuusei Seikuken: hmm....i'm still a little skeptical about this.....make it give chuunin rank chakra and then its approved. also, is there a post limit? if there is, you can probably cut down the chakra cost, but if not, make it drain chuunin rank chakra before activating it.
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