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tsubaka inoue
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 2:08 pm


Name of weapon: Ryūjōmaru [Bankai no Jutsu Name: Kokyū Ryūjōmaru]
Who owns the weapon: Mamoru Kurosaki
Where it was found/Who made it: Made in deeps of mount azeroth (LAWL no!) it was made by my rpc's father passed it down to me
The Range of the weapon: 74 cm [not released] 100cm [Shikai no Jutsu] 150cm [Bankai no Jutsu (Attack Only)]
Weakness: Attacks can be easily dodge and any Raiton Jutsus
Description:It has a dark blue hilt and sheath, as well as a rectangular bronze guard.
Special Abilities:
~ Ryū Tenzoshu [+5 Agil]
~ Rengoku ("smelting/forging prison") Four geysers of flames erupt from the ground
~ Rasen ("spiral-shell (as of a mollusk) swirl") Air and violent energy surrounds him and engulfs anyone surrounding him. The energy itself can also hurt an opponent.
~ Ryū Tenzoshu v2 [+10 Agil, Accessible thru Bankai]
~ Kokyū Zesshō [Accessible thru Bankai] The blade of energy extends for about 50 cm.
Rp Sample:
Mamoru stood at his opponent already using the Bankai no Jutsu. "Ryu Tenzoshu," Mamrou said his speed increased greatly. "Kokyu Zessho," the blade became bigger using his charkra to extend it. He went for his opponent trying to strike him. He missed, "Rengoku," he shouted four geysers erupted and shot out flames in a row his opponent managed to dodge all of them. "Shunpo," he stated moving blindingly fast. When he reached his opponent his chakra stared to swirl, and he shouted, "Rasen!" The massive energy engulfed both Mamoru and his opponent. The opponent suffered massive damage because of this. "Kokyu Zessho," the blade was pointed down at his heart then it extended piercing it.

Of course that's not where the story begins, its where the story ends. The beginning of this story started out when I, the Hokage, got a message.

"Sir, there is a message for you, it is not addressed, do you want me to open if for you," said the mailman ninja.

"No, It is okay and no more but sir , I have a feeling who it is," Mamoru said.

"Yes sir," the ninja said while putting the letter down and leaving the office.

So what are up to this time brother, he thought while opening the letter. The letter stated
Quote:

Dear Brother Mamoru,
Meet me in the Forest of Fire. There we shall decided who is the head of the clan.
Sincerely,
Ichi

"Always fighting over the Head position, well I have to end this because if he doesn't he will keep belly aching about it," Mamoru said. He left a clone at his office so no one would notice that he was gone. He followed the chakra of his brother until they were in a large field.

"So brother you still think you have the guts to defeat my sword after we sparred with it so many time," Mamoru said.

"That's not why I'm here, I am here to kill you and take over Konoha. Geez so naive always acting before you think, always thinking I want your sword, to shatter it means your not a Kurosaki clan member anymore. Did you know that with out your sword Kido Jutsu are pretty much all you can do," Ichi said.

"Shunpo too, also various other jutsus I have mastered, you just focused on your sword and not the others, Bakudo #1 Sai no Jutsu," Mamoru said while Ichi became bound to his genjutsus. "Now you will die by my blade, Shikai no Jutsu!" he shouted pulling out his sword. His sword grew about 30cm more. "This shall be swift, Ryu Tenzoshu." Mamoru became but a blur to his brothers eyes but his brother broke free from the jutsu and slashed at his brother.

"My dear Mamoru, don't you know any better using the Shikai no Jutsu with a binding genjutsu. It makes it weaker that is why I was able to break free and kill you," Ichi said.

"You might have got me, but now you are dead, Bankai no Jutsu," he said while his chakra stared to swirl.

And that is the story of how I killed my brother, now I am the only one that remains of my clan.

[Better? I tried not changing the story but adding more to it]
[Approved? Yes? or No?]
PostPosted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 5:49 am


I'm reluctant to approve this because you're trying to incorporate a Bleach weapon into the guild.

I can deny it at the moment because your RP sample is terrible. Five more agility doesn't make you super fast, and also, what is this Shunpo? Explain all of it in the sample, don't just give it three words.

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tsubaka inoue
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 8:55 am


@Despair: "Shunpo" is a jutsu for the kurosaki clan.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 10:15 am


Nevertheless, your descriptions are still vague. I want to know what exactly they can do. Not "Oh lol, speed increase, moar damage thar too."

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 2:04 pm


The general literacy of the whole weapon is terrible, but its relatively weak.

Also as a side note, if you can actually know every kido/hado/etc, as well as shunpo when your of the kurosaki clan, then you are far overpowered and that clan needs to be reevaluated.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 10:42 pm


Im currently changing some things with the clan right now.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 12:59 pm


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PostPosted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 4:08 pm


Name of weapon: er.....Cleaver Sword....
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Who owns the weapon: Ryuji Uchiha
Where it was found/Who made it: it was bought
The Range of the weapon: Close-Mid Range
Weakness: Err.....can't really think of any.....*cough*.......sorry? oh, er.....wait no, forget it. oh yea, raiton.....
Description: This sword is owned by Ryuji Uchiha. Ryuji, taking the time and effort to master this style, uses it perfectly, wielding it at teh speed of a katana, if not faster. From first appearances, it is just another large cleaver sword, nothnig significant about it. However, there is a useful effect. Using his chakra, Ryuji can change the appearance of his sword, giving it a black color with red designs. With this, the sword "absorbs" the oxygen in the air and transforms it into a different type of gas, a gas that allows sound waves to travel quicker. This goes hand in hand with his sound jutsus (+1 rank). Also, it makes it harder for the opponent to breathe and use jutsus that require oxygen, like suiton and fuuton element (-1 rank). Katon element jutsus also get a +1 rank in strentgh, the gas being highly flammable. However, it struck by water somehow, any water at all, the sword effect cannot be used during the whole battle. If struck by 3 raiton jutsus, at least D-rank, the sword breaks and must be repaired, which takes a whole day, real life and rp (meaning it just can't magically repair itself in the middle of a battle). Takes 3 posts to transform, and during that post, Ryuji must place the sword on the floor and cannot touch it or allow anyone else to touch it, or the sword effect gets nullified. The gas effects last for 10 posts, each of which Ryuji must give up 1 chakra point.

Name of weapon: Sound Gauntlet User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.
Who owns the weapon: Ryuji Uchiha
Where it was found/Who made it: Experiments done to Ryuji......
The Range of the weapon: Close-Mid Range
Weakness: When struck 5 times, hit with a C-rank jutsus, or attacked by a person with a 50 dexterity or above, the sound amplifier breaks, and mut be repaired by Ryuji personally, which takes 1 day same as above).

Description: This is a sound amplifier used by Ryuji. Obtained by experiments in the Sound village, Ryuji carries it almost everywhere he goes. By holding a finger to it, Ryuji can record sounds, from conversations to names of jutsus to animal noises. This can be very useful in his organization. He can also flick the gauntlet, releasing a sound of his choice, but often prefers the sound of a chiming bell. By using up 3 chakra, Ryuji can cause this sound to cause slight nausea and such (basically the same as Dosu). This gauntlet is much smaller than Dosu's, not taking up as much space. In fact, it is barely noticed by ninja he is fighting until its too late. Ryuji also uses this to block weapon slashes sometime.

Rp Sample: Ryuji jumped back quickly as the ninja threw kunai at him. Pulling up his sword, he deflected the metal knives. Thanks to his mastery of the weapon, he was able to lunge at his opponent, bringing his sword up to his left. The speed at which he moved......it was surprising that he could barely life the sword at all. Still, he didn't quit, and was even able to slice the chest of the enemy. Grinning, Ryuji continued to launch a barrage of attacks at his opponent, skillfully swinging his sword this way and that. After a few moments of this continued pattern, Ryuji stepped back and closed his eyes. He roughly threw his sword on the floor, the tip sticking to the ground, the weapon standing perfectly straight. There was a few moments of intense waiting before the sword, now black, gold, and red, was picked up. Ryuji, a grin clear on his face, swung the sword at open air, not really aiming at anything in particular.

The enemy ninja shrugged it off as a taunt, but as the battle grew longer, and Ryuji swung his sword more, the ninja found it hard to breathe. It was as if being breathing in some musty gas. Did he use some jutsu? Ryuji, suddenly stopping, took a moment to breathe in the air before nodding. Raising his sleeve, his metal gauntlet appeared. He fiddled with it for a moment, not doing anything but drumming his fingers on top the metal. Then, without warning, he flicked it. a large chiming could be heard in the arena, and the ninja suddenly opened his eyes. Be bent over and started vomiting, the sound waves causing a reaction in his body. Just as Ryuji was about to come in with the finishing kill, his sword lifted, the ninja jumped back and performed a few handseals. A water dragon came out and launched itself at the uchiha, though it was much weaker than it should have been. Still, it served its purpose, striking Ryuji's sword. His eyes grew wide as he looked down, the blackish sword now turning back to its regular silverish hue. "Crap....."

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 4:13 pm


Just to note, I'm not a weapon mod, but if you got that sword from Zabuza, by law of the Seven Swordsman that automatically makes you one of them... Just to say....
PostPosted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 9:53 pm


The Nerdbot
Name of weapon: er.....Cleaver Sword....
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Who owns the weapon: Ryuji Uchiha
Where it was found/Who made it: Stolen by Zabuza rofl
if thats not accepted, it was bought
The Range of the weapon: Close-Mid Range
Weakness: Err.....can't really think of any.....*cough*.......sorry? oh, er.....wait no, forget it. oh yea, raiton.....
Description: This sword is owned by Ryuji Uchiha, but was formerly the sword of the famous Zabuza Momouchi. Ryuji, taking the time and effort to master this style, uses it perfectly. From first appearances, it is just another large cleaver sword, nothnig significant about it. However, there is a useful effect. Using his chakra, Ryuji can change the appearance of his sword, giving it a black color with red designs. With this, the sword "absorbs" the oxygen in the air and transforms it into a different type of gas, a gas that allows sound waves to travel quicker. This goes hand in hand with his sound jutsus (+1 rank). Also, it makes it harder for the opponent to breathe and use jutsus that require oxygen, like suiton and fuuton element (-1 rank). However, it struck by water somehow, any water at all, the sword effect cannot be used during the whole battle. If struck by 3 raiton jutsus, at least D-rank, the sword breaks and must be repaired, which takes a whole day. Takes 3 posts to transform, and during that post, Ryuji must place the sword on the floor and cannot touch it or allow anyone else to touch it, or the sword effect gets nullified.

Name of weapon: Sound Gauntlet User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.
Who owns the weapon: Ryuji Uchiha
Where it was found/Who made it: Experiments done to Ryuji......
The Range of the weapon: Close-Mid Range
Weakness: When struck 5 times (by enemy ninja, not Ryuji), it breaks and a loud noise can be heard in a few couple hundred ft. This noise disables almost any ninja, even kage rank. Also, same raiton effect as above.
Description: This is a sound amplifier used by Ryuji. Obtained by experiments in the Sound village, Ryuji carries it almost everywhere he goes. By holding a finger to it, Ryuji can record sounds, from conversations to names of jutsus to animal noises. This can be very useful in his organization. He can also flick the gauntlet, releasing a sound of his choice, but often prefers the sound of a chiming bell. By using up 1 chakra, Ryuji can cause this sound to cause slight nausea and such (basically the same as Dosu). This gauntlet is much smaller than Dosu's, not taking up as much space. In fact, it is barely noticed by ninja he is fighting until its too late. Ryuji also uses this to block weapon slashes sometime.

Rp Sample: Ryuji jumped back quickly as the ninja threw kunai at him. Pulling up his sword, he deflected the metal knives. Thanks to his mastery of the weapon, he was able to lunge at his opponent, bringing his sword up to his left. The speed at which he moved......it was surprising that he could barely life the sword at all. Still, he didn't quit, and was even able to slice the chest of the enemy. Grinning, Ryuji continued to launch a barrage of attacks at his opponent, skillfully swinging his sword this way and that. After a few moments of this continued pattern, Ryuji stepped back and closed his eyes. He roughly threw his sword on the floor, the tip sticking to the ground, the weapon standing perfectly straight. There was a few moments of intense waiting before the sword, now black, gold, and red, was picked up. Ryuji, a grin clear on his face, swung the sword at open air, not really aiming at anything in particular.

The enemy ninja shrugged it off as a taunt, but as the battle grew longer, and Ryuji swung his sword more, the ninja found it hard to breathe. It was as if being breathing in some musty gas. Did he use some jutsu? Ryuji, suddenly stopping, took a moment to breathe in the air before nodding. Raising his sleeve, his metal gauntlet appeared. He fiddled with it for a moment, not doing anything but drumming his fingers on top the metal. Then, without warning, he flicked it. a large chiming could be heard in the arena, and the ninja suddenly opened his eyes. Be bent over and started vomiting, the sound waves causing a reaction in his body. Just as Ryuji was about to come in with the finishing kill, his sword lifted, the ninja jumped back and performed a few handseals. A water dragon came out and launched itself at the uchiha, though it was much weaker than it should have been. Still, it served its purpose, striking Ryuji's sword. His eyes grew wide as he looked down, the blackish sword now turning back to its regular silverish hue. "Crap....."
Ah! Work to be done! well, let's first start with the sword. While it can be similar in looks, I would request and suggest that you do not say you received it from Zabuza. The absorbing effect would require a Chakra cost to activate as well as a maximum amount of posts in which the effect can stay active. Please specify whether or not the gas is flammable. Fire feeds on oxygen but can also grow in strength from other gases. As it stands, I do not know whether to give Katon +1 or -1 rank. Is the repair an in game day or a full day in the real world?

Now onto the Sound amplifier.To break it: It must be struck 5 times, be hit by a c-rank or higher technique, or a weapon strike/fist strike by a character with at least 50 in dex/strength respectively. If it breaks it will not release any sort of sound to disable any ninja. It's broken and anything that would have caused the sound to be amplified is broken as well. The nausea effect will be treated as a D-rank Jutsu thus costing 3 chakra not 1 and you will also need to state a range for the effect. It may not be as bulky as Dosu's but it will still be a noticeable size. It may appear as a bracer or some other item but can not be as small as a watch.

After the necessary changes I will review it once more.

duckmasta
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2010 2:19 pm


edited. and yea, the sound amplifier isn't supposed to be really small, but small enough that people won't suspect as a weapon, probably just a fashion style. Dosu's was big enough that people knew something was up
PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2010 6:14 pm


The Nerdbot
edited. and yea, the sound amplifier isn't supposed to be really small, but small enough that people won't suspect as a weapon, probably just a fashion style. Dosu's was big enough that people knew something was up
I approve the sword but I'm going to set up a discussion on how "sound" Jutsu work and what it's weaknesses are. For instance it might be weak to earth jutsu and strong against suiton.

EDIT: On second thought 1 chakra cost for 10 posts for a +1 rank to two types of jutsu and a -1 rank to two types is vastly overpowered. change it to 3 chakra for five posts and your good. if you have any problems with this change let me know and i will discuss it with you.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2010 2:52 pm


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Name of weapon: Poseidon’s Fingernail
Who owns the weapon: Vercingetorix “Orca” Saishuu
Where it was found/Who made it: The blade was created through old lost jutsu that have become extinct. The hilt is made from a complex set of sealing jutsu’s that can be unleashed to give the blade extra powers that haven’t been uncovered yet, and the blade is made from the strongest sea creatures tooth.
The Range of the weapon: 50 feet
Weakness: Katon can dry out the blade making it become completely solid and making it blacken and become dull. Doton can clog the pores on the blade and weigh it down and stopping senbon from coming out.
Description: Poseidon’s Fingernail is one of the legendary blades made in ancient times by unknown means. The blade has extremely small pores on it that allow it to hold water and water chakra inside of the blade. Through the pores water senbon can be shot out at great speeds. The blade breathes and thinks as if it were alive. The pores on the blade create a cheese grater effect when the sides hit an opponent. The blade has a constant weight that is practically weightless no matter how big the blade gets. When hit with Raiton, the electricity charges the water for extra damage instead of doing damage to the user. Even if it’s shriveled by katon jutsu it can be brought back to life by being hit with a suiton jutsu of equal power. The more water that the blade absorbs the bigger it will get but the weight stays the same. The amount of water chakra within the blade determines its size. The less chakra the smaller the size, the more chakra the bigger it gets. The user can manipulate the water within the blade to change its shape, meaning that the user could make it extremely long and thin as a wire, or extremely short and so wide it goes off to the sides.
Rp Sample:
Orca had seen the wounded traveler at a distance but he had never been one to trust easily. He had, from the moment he saw him, suspected that something was up. As Orca neared the man, the man jumped at him and multiple assassins emerged from the nearby bushes. Immediately the one who had been playing the hurt traveler shot off a jutsu made of fire that hit Orcas sword directly. These assassins had done their homework it seems. Orca’s sword was extremely susceptible to fire jutsu. Orca let loose a feral grin and placed his palm on the side of the black and shriveled blade. His hands began to glow a soft cyan blue as he filled the sword with water chakra. Immediately the blade reformed to its former size. Orca grinned wider and wider as his sword got bigger and bigger. The assassins all charged at once to catch him off guard while he repaired his sword but it was too late. Orca swing the now much wider and longer sword in a wide arc, neatly cutting at least half of the would-be assassins in half. Orca turned to the other group of assassins attacking him and with a flurry of motion from his open palm he knocked them all down. As he fell one of the assassins shot a bolt of lightning at the blade, hoping to shock Orca. Orca’s macabre features shone through as the blade became electrically charged. He swung the blade and little sparks left the blade in the arc it followed. Orca hadn’t aimed at them. It was only to show the effects. The other living assassin tried to encase Orca in a rock but there was no use. Clumps of dirt clogged the pores of the sword and made it much heavier but it wasn’t anything Orca couldn’t handle. He quickly placed his palm on the blade and watched as it thinned and got longer and longer until the blade was thin as a wire and seven feet long. Orca grinned a deadly grin as he swung the blade, decapitating the men in front of him and with a fleur of his sword he cut the last assassin, hiding in a nearby tree, waiting to cast a genjutsu on him, cleanly in half.
PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2010 8:12 pm


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Name of weapon: Poseidon’s Fingernail
Who owns the weapon: Vercingetorix “Orca” Saishuu
Where it was found/Who made it: The blade was created through old lost jutsu that have become extinct. The hilt is made from a complex set of sealing jutsu’s that can be unleashed to give the blade extra powers that haven’t been uncovered yet, and the blade is made from the strongest sea creatures tooth.
The Range of the weapon: 1 mile
Weakness: Katon can dry out the blade making it become completely solid and making it blacken and become dull. Doton can clog the pores on the blade and weigh it down and stopping senbon from coming out.
Description: Poseidon’s Fingernail is one of the legendary blades made in ancient times by unknown means. The blade has extremely small pores on it that allow it to hold water and water chakra inside of the blade. Through the pores water senbon can be shot out at great speeds. The blade breathes and thinks as if it were alive. The pores on the blade create a cheese grater effect when the sides hit an opponent. The blade has a constant weight that is practically weightless no matter how big the blade gets. When hit with Raiton, the electricity charges the water for extra damage instead of doing damage to the user. Even if it’s shriveled by katon jutsu it can be brought back to life by being hit with a suiton jutsu of equal power. The more water that the blade absorbs the bigger it will get but the weight stays the same. The amount of water chakra within the blade determines its size. The less chakra the smaller the size, the more chakra the bigger it gets. The user can manipulate the water within the blade to change its shape, meaning that the user could make it extremely long and thin as a wire, or extremely short and so wide it goes off to the sides.
Rp Sample:
Do I REALLY have to? D;
I really don’t want to… I will if you absolutely have to make me…
Everyone needs to provide an Rp sample. I honestly don't care whether it's a 3 pages long or three paragraphs. As long as the sample provides a decent showing of the blades abilities and how it will be used. I will recommend that you most definitely change the range on that weapon though.

duckmasta
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 08, 2010 4:14 am


Is that range better? I'll do the sample when I get home.
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