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PostPosted: Sat May 29, 2010 7:42 am


@Asuna: I really appreciate the effort you are putting into this, and thank you for that.

Anyway, I hope to see your RPC's profile and your plan soon. I plan on tying this chapter to the next one so I would like to have some specific plot points set-up.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:23 am


Okay, so here's my proposed timeline for the the fight with Asuna's RPC.

- Asuna and Captains fight, Lieutenants and lower seats fight with the others.
- Asuna gains the upper hand, Hei uses Hougyouku to try and merge Asuna's Shinigami part with her Arrancar part.
- Hougyouku gets destroyed before it can do so, but temporarily weakens Asuna.
- Captains go in for the kill, but are interrupted by Taitei's RPC having made himself into a pseudo perfect hybrid.
- Weakened, the Shinigami retreat from Hueco Mundo and Asuna and company exit to the Human World because of Asuna's weakened state.
- Shinigami and Arrancar try to work out a plan to destroy Taitei's RPC, but then it is found out a rogue group of Quincies have been able to gain access to blueprints for the Kido Cannon-- an inside job.
- Before the Shinigami can stop it, it is fired towards Taitei. But because the Quincies' power can not substitute for Kido, it true power is halved, but it is enough to land a critical strike to Taitei's RPC.

From there I plan on inserting an idea created by Animi a while back.

Also, my suggestion for Taitei's pseudo perfect hybrid form is to be somewhat similar to Fura from the Superchunky from Hell chapter. It doesn't need to look like it, but it should probably be like it, a sort of massive amalgamation of countless of hollows-- just a suggestion of course.

Anyway, suggestion, criticisms, the works.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:50 am


Dante_Shadowolf
Anyway, here's my ideas.

- After the Exaequere arc we can have the Perfect Hybrid arc.
- If Hei still has the Hougyouku I was planing on sacrificing it to nullify Asuna's perfect hybrid status, by merging her Shinigami part with her Arrancar part, making her a more powerful Arrancar but still just an Arrancar.
- After the Perfect Hybrid arc we can have the Quincy's Kido Cannon arc and the Perfect Hollow arc.
- The Quincy arc will be about how a large group of Quincies acquired the blue print of the Kido Cannon. This can be done by means of a traitor either in the 5th or 9th Squad. The Kido Cannon will be fired towards Hueco Mundo, forcing both the Shinigami and Arrancar to temporarily work together. However the Kido Cannon is still fired, but since they possess no Kido users, the blast is not as powerful and only succeeds in creating an unstable energy storm in Hueco Mundo.
- Meanwhile, the energy storm is used by Taitei's RPC to transform himself into a perfect hybrid, but as the procedure is going underway, Hei nullifies the storm and leads to the procedure's failure, resulting into the creation of a powerful Gillian-like hollow, sort of like Fura, only this time having a power level exceeding that of Vasto Lordes.

After that it's still a blur.

Taigaa-tono
I'm sure Asuna will just loooove that. =3=

Quincy suck.

....


Dante_Shadowolf
Sarcasm?

Oh come on, let's at least squeeze them into the main arc. They'll be crew controlled and Hei can just obliterate the bulk of the group after the Kido Cannon is fired.

What's point are you replying to with the "...."?

Taigaa-tono
Sarcasm indeed. 3nodding

Bah.

The point where perfect hybrid is brought up again.

Dante_Shadowolf

What do you propose then? 'Cause Hei having a Hougyouku inside him is going to be bring some serious plot issues-- stupid Aizen.

Please?

You don't like it? I was hoping to connect it with something Animi had brought up a while back.

Taigaa-tono
What issues? Hei's has no wish granting or regeneration powers. It's not in his chest anymore, anyway.

Idk.

Why is it brought up again?

Dante_Shadowolf

But it's mere existence is a bit troublesome. And besides it's the only thing I can think of to defeat Asuna, unless you think Hei is up to the challenge?

Please?

Because it's simply too good a plot point to pass up, like Psioxy's Hell Society-- which I'm still hyped up over, despite Psioxy saying he doesn't want us using it.

Anyway, I'm going for a short walk, my legs are starting to atrophy from staying in bed.


That's what I had to say in PMs... dunno why I gotta post it again. >.>
PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:51 am


Side Note: Honestly, I'm so confused with the hybrid thing. I have no idea if Asuna is even up for it or not.

Which puts me in a bind to accept anything or not. Perhaps you two should collaborate, then present it to me.

Because with Asuna's new Arrancar thing, I don't see why the hybrid is useful.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 9:54 am


See? Posting what you said in the PM's wasn't so hard?

Anyway, I have complete trust in Asuna that she is up for it. 3nodding
PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:11 am


Personally I think that the idea of suddenly changing the target of the hybrid from Asuna to Hideki just makes us as a crew seem like we're super desperate for a perfect hybrid to exist.

Also, it almost presents the image that Hei has the capability to hybridize himself. An image that will become that much more apparent after what Sarah has planned after he comes back to life. I'm sure she hasn't told anyone yet, but she told me at least...

The quincy being randomly added in greatly irks me, not just because I share Sarah's dislike for Quincy, but because it's just that, completely random. It just makes it obvious that someone just wants Quincy in the RP when there's no real need to have them. My thought that they are pointless is just brought about by my first point of the hybrid character changing targets being desperate.


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PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:16 am


Actually Asuna already is the perfect hybrid, Hideki will just want to recreate it on himself-- fails and viola.

Since I have no idea what Taiga plans for Hei, I can't comment on that.

sweatdrop

Yeah, sorry about the Quincies, but I ran out of ideas.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 10:30 am


Still, introducing another hybrid char is as plot armor as Yuki becoming a Vizard right after Hei doing it. Now, if she were to become one later for her own reasons... then it'd make more sense.

The plans matter little, the aforementioned image of hybridization is still very present with what you already know about Hei.

Which basically solidifies points one and two.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 4:32 pm


Wait... I already am the hybrid? I thought there was gonna be a plot going toward that, but it seems I already lost it on paper before I even fleshed my own ideas out..


Wait, why would Hei throw the Hyougoku at somebody to stop them? That's like Sasuke plucking his eye out, tossing it, and screaming "SHARINGAN."

I'm not getting the hybrid arc based on what you're saying, Dante.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 4:34 pm


My major concern was, even if Asuna is made into a hyrbid, that would only give her a zanpakuto. She'd still have to train forever and a day with somebody who knows how to unlock Shikai and Bankai.

Was there going to be no RP leading up to how she becomes what she is, leading Taitei to try it on himself? as for being weakened, like... what happens after? gonk

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:30 pm


@Anna: Plot armor? I'm afraid that is a new term to me. sweatdrop

No, the secret plans still matter.

@Asuna: *shrugs*

I figured since in Bleach the Hougyouku was called the Breakdown sphere, and was originally designed to break down the wall between Shinigami and Arrancar, using it would cause Asuna's Shinigami part to fuse with her Arrancar part. Giving her an increase in power, but taking away her Shinigami powers.

That is, of course, the desired effect, but it will only result in Asuna's temporary weakening.

Yes, if you want Taitei and yourself can RP it. As for the Shikai and Bankai, I can think of something if you want.

My apologies for any confusion, I'll be more than happy to answer and questions. Provided they are asked in a simple manner as I have just woken up and I cannot process complex sentence structures yet.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:38 pm


Get on MSN

I mean.. dude, I DONT HAVE Shinigami powers! Where are those coming from is what I don't understand.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:38 pm


I still find the whole thing strange... Since with Asuna's new hollow thingy, her RPC is already powerful enough.

Or something.

IDK.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:42 pm


These guys suggest that, not me! I just work here.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 02, 2010 5:44 pm


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Well, that's mostly because my original plan for this was to create a RPC perfect hybrid, then let someone else use it to RP.

In any case, we can simply do without the zanpakuto powers then, perhaps even the whole perfect hybrid thing.
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