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Bloodline: Rinnegan
Why do you want it: Well I thought it would be a good Bloodline for my Akatsuki character.
What will you do with it: I will bring all Demons down to their knees say "Please god don't kill me" I will say "Sorry I must kill you once the demon is gone MWHAHAHAHAHAHA" Lol
What you know about it: Well I know that it is like the Byakugan in the fact that you can see allmost 360 degrees. Also if I remember right you get all 6 elements. If you have more then one body out you can see thought all the current bodies out. Making the best defense
RP Sample:
((Ok well I will rp as a really power character but I will only be an Akatsuki Chuunin So yeah.))
Cody walked into the building he could not see anything due to it being dark. So he walked over to the light switch and turned on the lights. Only to find himself surrounded by enemy's. Looking at the one that was walking out of the circle of enemies Happened to be the so called Nine tailed demon host. "So you are the Nine tails host" he said with a smile.

"Yes I am and why have you come here" the Demon host said as he grabbed his sword.

"I am here to capture you and take your demon like my Leader told me to do" he said as his akatsuki cloak started flowing in the wind. He then thought it would be smart to attack before the demon host could even speak. Grabbing his katana out and a few Kunai Cody threw five at him and he started dashing right at him.

The host then jumped up to dodge the attacks. Cody stopped right were the host was. The host had landed right behind Cody. They were back to back not able to see each other. "Well you will die by my hand" The host said.

Cody had his eyes closed as the host was talking his hand to his mouth making one single hand sign. Once the host finished Cody opened his eyes. He had smiled as the Rinnegan has shown. All the other enemies ran in fear of the Rinnegan. The host did not see the eyes. Cody formed one more hand sign and a Body of his appeared right above Cody in the rafters.

The host the pulled out a kunai and want to slice Cody neck. Cody smiled as he swung his katana up to his shoulder to block the attack. "Nice try but You are to slow" The host looked shocked as he thought he had the Byakugan.

Cody turned around with his eyes closed once mroe. "Well You shall see the Most powerful doujutsu in all of the ninja world." He said as he opened his eyes slowly. The host was shocked by the sight of the Rinnegan he could not move a muscle. "Well since your unable to talk I shall kill you right now." He said as he held his hand up to the Host and then he started to fly back into the wall. Cody had been using his Deva Realm the hole time. Then The deva relam jumped up and stood next to another Akatsuki member. Everyone thought that was his Partner. It turned out to be his other body.

The Animal Realm. He smiled as the animal realm started forming hand signs. A giant chameleon-chimera. The animal realm then jumped inside its mouth and the chameleon-chimera turned invisible. The animal realm did more hand signs to summon the Giant dog. The dog then ran up to the other body and it jumped on the Dog. "Well are you going to fight back Demon"

The demon got up he did not want to die but he did not want to have to use his demon power so he thought a Chidori would work. He did the hand signs and held his hand out. He started running at the dog and Deva Realm as fast as he could. He then yelled "CHIDORI" and hit the dog. The Deva Realm laughed as the dog just split in half. The Deva realm then just used the Gravity affect he had and Pulled the Host to him. "You are a useless host." He said as he threw him to his left into the wall.

The animal realm was hiding on the roof in the chameleon-chimera the hole time watching the fight. Cody then thought it would be best to use the Asura realm. So he summoned him. The Deva realm Would stay on one of the dogs as the Asura realm jumped on the other one.

The Asura realm had the missile technique. The Host then stood up he had the Nine tails Cloak on with one tails out. "Just one tail you think i am that bad of a Ninja You are the bad ninja here" The Asura realm said as he held his hand out and fired two missiles at the host. The host thought he could dodge them but sadly he miss took the missiles they were heat seeking. "Never under think you enemy." The Deva realm said as he jumped off the dog along with the Asura realm The Dog then combined and charged the host.

The host stood up and dodged the dog trying not to hit it. He then knew he had to avoid the Dog and go after the Deva realm. Since the Deva realm was not paying attention He formed a hand sign and made a Rasegan and charged the Deva realm. The animal realm seen this and Summoned the Hungry Ghost realm. He appeared in front of the Host. He opened his mouth and started to take in the Rasegan. The host jumped back and started turning to the four tails.

All the realms came into one spot the Animal realm was looking behind the rest and the other watched the Nine tailed demon. As he hit four tails the Hungry Ghost realm walked closer to him. The host started to form a Chakra ball in Front of the Hosts mouth. He then luanched the Chakra ball at the Hungry ghost realm He then opened his mouth and tried to take in the Chakra blast he took most in but the died and stopped the attack at the same time.

"Well you manged to take out one of me" Cody said as he summoned the other bodies. "We will end this now." he said as his attacked his own summoning the Dogs Splitting them into many other dogs they attacked the Host. The host tried to defend the all but ended up getting bit by all of them. Once he fell alseep the dogs turned back into and and Disappeared. The Animal realm then had the chameleon-chimera reappeared and they put the Hosts body in the chameleon-chimera's mouth. All the Bodies but the Animal realm disappeared. He then started walking back to the base.

all approved!

Even if it is a diffrent Character. Rinnegan to my Akatsuki and Sanbi to my genin?

>.> Ok then I will take the bloodline.

Bloodline: Supekutoru Annaiyaku
Character I want it for: Edward Carnby, Hokage
Why do you want it: It would be a good bloodline for the Hokage to have, being one of the most powerful kekkei genkai residing in Leaf.
What will you do with it: Enhance Konoha's standing, striking against those who would attack us.
What do you know about it: Everything that is in the Kekkei Genkai forum. THat it has three stages, with the third stage being split in two, holy or hellish. Similar to the Inuzuka clan in that it gives a second person in fighting, as well as giving a chakra boost.
RP Sample:
Edward ducked his head into the next room and rubbed his eyes. The Genin Exams were about to start, and he still didn't have his trump ready. But already the boy could feel the sideeffects of activating his bloodline. He could feel the boil of emotions of those around him, and was slightly disgusted by some of them.
With a deep breath, the boy headed back into the Exam room in time to see a girl and a guy gget paired up. He had a slight crush on the girl, so as she got ready, he gave her a bit of advice.
"Your opponent is a pervert. And since we haven't really had the uhem....mature portions of training yet, I bet you can use that against him." She looked at him for a second, then nodded. Edward moved back to the sidelines, and watched with his eyes and felt with the emotional radar he had. He could tell when she began toying with her opponent, flirting and teasing him. When the two were in close fighting, Edward could easily see that the more she teased her opponent, the clumsier he got.
After her fight, his name was the next up. And sadly for him, he was put against the candidate for Rookie of The Year.
He braced himself in the ring. The girl across from him immediately launched into a chain of hand seals.
Crap! That's a high genin ranked move, if it hits I'm gonna be hurting! He leapt to the side as she leveled a Kamaitachi blast at him, rolling when he struck the ground. He came up and sent a whisper into his soul.
Without pausing, Edward rushed in his fists striking low at the girl's stomach. She caught his hands contemptously, and began laughing. Her laughter cut off abruptly when she felt hands around her throat.
Everyone around them was shocked. From the base of Edward's spine a shadowy black figure was stretching, looking faint. THe part that wasn't faint though was its outstretched hands, wrapped aroung the girl's throat.
"Yield or knock-out, your choice." She yielded as Edward grinned in relief.
"It worked...now everone will learn just how powerful one of the Supekutoru Annaiyaku can be."

it's good anough....let cory or jade approve next

I would disagree. (especially since the word is 'enough')

I am not the final word here, but I have a few suggestions.

1 - Punctuation. Kage should always be capitalized. Also, make sure you use the all important apostrophe! (Kage's for possessive, not kages)

2 - Sentence Structure. It is awkward.

This needs commas as well as changes to the wording.

How it should be: "He looked at the guards as he walked passed them before they stopped him, asking who he was and why we was here.

3 - Sense. C'mon man. A Kage...just falling to a smoke bomb technique (or whatever that choking ability is)? Without putting up an epic battle. That's just ridiculous.

4 - Intrigue. There is none. I don't even know what village this is, or why you are attacking the Kage, or even who you are. there is really nothing in the post that makes me want to know more about your character...and the action (if you can call it that) is uninspiring.

I would imagine this would be Cory's final call, as he created the Bloodline and is the first member to use it. Though, I would suggest you spruce up your RP Sample first.

The Kiseru clan's smoke does have a choking effect to anyone not from the clan. But this is not from smoke-bombs, but from their smoke JUTSU. The choking effects stack, and you may see how they do by looking at the Clan in the getting started sub-forum