Kesmi's pokemon journal

[Kesmi]

Belated Contest Post, Date was in April...

Enterance Appeal was a 7.

Attack appeal 1:

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"Ok Sekkou, lets show them what you're made ove." Sadie said as she leapt back a little from Sekkou as the darken flames around his shoulders burst into view. "Now! Use your Swift attack!" Sadie commanded.

*Sekkou nodded and turned opening his maw releasing a gusher of bright stars over the stage.*

"Now Use you embed upon them!"

*Not even reacting now. small bits of flame appear on the edges of his maw before small embers rained upon the swift stars making then glow red. The embered stars twinkle in the stage light before then vanish.*

*Sadie stood smiling at Sekkou as he turned and looked out at the croud again.*

Attack Appeal 2: (Score for this appeal was a 10)

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*sadie smiled as she watched the others do their small stunts and what not. From a pocket in her waist she pulled out a ball.* "Alright, just as we practiced. Use your Swift to keep this in the air." Sadie said as she tossed the ball into the air.

*sekkou watched the white ball fly into the air. Opening his maw he let loose a string of stars from his swift attack. Again and again they bounced off the ball keeping it aloft. The ball soon bounced over the vroud, Sekkou managed to keep it from falling.*

"Now! Use your Ember!" Sadie shouted.

*NOt thinking twice, Sekkou unleased a swell of embers at the ball making it burst. Confetti and sparkes rained down as Sekkou stood panting gently on the stange. Lowering his head he backde away, back to Sadie's Side.*

Final Ruling:

Hotaru-Neko

1. Sekkou:
Crowd Appeal: 7
Attack Appeal: 10
Judge Appeal: Creativity: 5 Understanding: 10

Final Score: 32

Comments: I loved the swift ember combo, the way you discribed it sounded very beautiful. ^__^ I drasticly bumped down the creativity points though, because I felt like both your Attack appeals where pretty simmilar, at one point I stopped reading because it had thought I had already read it. Next time I'd just like to see some vareation of attacks. Fire types love to show off, so show of those moves Sekkou! ^ ^

Ok, yes I kinda was half alive that day of posting my second appeal, but the next time I will try something new. 3nodding  

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A post for something special... ninja  

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Desperado's Unfortunate Past

The drums had just started to beat as the full moon had peeked over the surrounding mountains, thus starting the rituals of birth. It was like any other moon hatching. All the recently laid eggs were placed upon leaf and grass pillows out where the moon could kiss them with its silky white light. All the eggs were the same, none were any different from its neighbor. Some wiggled in anticipation of hatching, others remained silent and still conserving their energy for the initial break out.

The drum beat louder as the moon rose over the peeks to begin its paths through the skies its light slowly gliding across the ground. The rim where it met the shadows slackened as it came toward the ring of Ralts eggs that had been laying in waiting for too long to remember. The older Gardevoir and Kirlia danced around fires of blue and green dancing to the beats of the hollow log drums.

“Silence!” called a voice of an aged Gardevoir, the oldest of them all. “It is that time again where we welcome the new arrivals into our hearts and teach them our ways.” She called from her perch in a small knoll. “Let us remain silent as the moon grants the wishes of those that wish to hatch this night.”

After that everyone was silent, many crowding around the eggs, watching to see which would hatch first, which would look most like their own kind. For the eggs sake, all of them should look the same, identical to each other. The moon rose higher and the edge drew closer. Upon reaching the ring, the first eggs started to wiggle, the shells crack and soon glow just a little in acceptance of the moon’s light. It had begun…

’I can do this’ thought one of the young ralts who still laid in waiting for the moon to touch his shell. ’Piece of cake… Whatever that is…’

As the light now shown on all the eggs, many had hatched, others were having a bit of trouble, but managed. Soon nine young ralts stood looking up at their elder kin in wonder and the olders looking down in pride at the ralts. They were perfect, not a blemish to tell any apart, not a sign of difference in any of them, but one egg remained unhatched… one remained still hidden within its shell, was it ashamed to come out? No, it seemed not to be ready… Maybe… But no one seemed to pay attention to the last egg who wobbled helplessly…

”The eggs have hatched and the new generation has come!” declared the elder as the drums began to beat once more.

As the drums continued, the last egg had started to glow, its shell crack and soon shatter, leaving a small oddly colored ralts behind in its wake. His coloring was all wrong compared to the others, his head was blue with purple crests, his body was a tone of gray with a white upside down crescent moon. Standing the ralts looked around to find the place silent once more. All eyes were upon him…

“Ewww! It’s ugly!” Shouted one of the other ralts as it looked the odd male over. “Ewww!” Is shouted again backing away as if the newly hatched ralts was a disease of some kind.

“Silence!” shouted the elder as she had come down from her perch to look over the new ralts who looked clearly startled by the ‘welcoming’. “He is different, but not to be treated unkindly!” said the elder as she picked up the small ralts and bustled away with him…

There was a uproar of anger, frustration and misgivings as the elder walked away with the odd looking ralts that had been born that night.

>> Continuing

 

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One more reserved for one mentioned above.  

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Theme song

Desperado
By: The Eagles

Desperado, why don't you come to your senses?
You been out ridin' fences for so long now.
Oh, you're a hard one,
But I know that you've got your reasons.
These things that are pleasin' you,
Can hurt you somehow.

Don't you draw the queen of diamonds, boy,
She'll beat you if she's able.
Know the queen of hearts is always your best bet.
Now it seems to me, some fine things,
Have been laid upon your table.
But you only want the ones that you can't get.

Desperado, oh, you ain't gettin' no younger:
Your pain and your hunger, they're drivin' you home.
And freedom, oh freedom,
Well, that's just some people talkin'
Your prison is walking,
Through this world all alone.

And don't your feet get cold in the winter time?
The sky won't snow, the sun won't shine
It's hard to tell the night time from the day
You're loosin' all your highs and lows
Ain't it funny how the feeling,
Goes away?

Desperado, why don't you come to your senses?
Come down from your fences, and open the gate
It may be rainin', but there's a rainbow above you,
You better let somebody love you,
You better let somebody love you,
You better let somebody love you,
Before it's too late.

 

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One more reserved just in cast. ^_^  

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*Tumbles with Hopper after he had evolved.* He's sooo cute. ^_^  

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Fan art, sorta, from Wooga

Featuring Fury and Water...