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Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 8:26 pm
Zu-kun I believe she was talking to Maya. sweatdrop Oh...Well my comment still stands! sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Jan 06, 2009 8:53 pm
Lmao Lu~ An angry unicorn to guard the Meho axe? XD
I'll rework a sketch for Natamo's partner then. I don't want to change Mayoka, but I won't be able to use him. The stats would be the same; the only thing I'm going to change, then, are the background/personality and tricks. I'll definitely have to think on it a lot longer though. XD
Lol silly..
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Posted: Wed Jan 07, 2009 12:39 pm
So uhh...Am I in or do I still need stuff fixed? O_o
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Posted: Wed Jan 07, 2009 6:07 pm
Gaia Name: Catapault Character Name: Tsutomegi Manuke Clan: none Element Affinity: Fire Age: 13 Sex: Male Birthday: Spring 3 Theme Song: Kimi ni Juice wo katte ageru by Group TamashiPhysical Description: Manuke is a scruffy looking guy with the face of a playful puppy. His light brown hair is messy and cut a little below his ears. He has bright blue eyes and usually a big grin. His pale skin is covered in a layer of dust. He slouches really low when he is relaxed, but straightens up when he gets irritated. He is 5'2 and 94 pounds. Clothing: Manuke wears an open brown jacket that extends just above the knees, covering a loose white, sleeveless shirt that has a few rips in it. He also has a pair of baggy gray pants held up by a frayed rope belt and walks on a pair of wooden sandals. Personality: Manuke is usually calm, but he has a nasty temper that shows when he gets very frustrated.He is comfortable with talking to most people in a friendly way, even if the person is hostile to him. He is very trusting and he is very loyal to his friends, though this makes him a little gullible. Background: Manuke was born and raised in the mean streets of the Rice Country. Ever since childhood, he would pick fights with bigger people to try to become stronger. He would cause trouble with anyone that he saw as more powerful than him. His father, Tsutomegi Yuushou, made a living as a farmer, but he could not support his family. His father was a very strict person and favored his younger brother, Ushio. Seeing that Manuke wasn't the kind of son that he would like and a trouble maker, he cast him out to make it easier for him to make ends meet. Manuke came to despise his father for this. Manuke wandered for many days, living off of begging and pick-pocketing. He felt that his life would be wasted until one day he picked the pocket of BakaLao, the fisherman at Shimagakure. Manuke was caught red-handed and forced to work on a fishing boat as punishment. Manuke was shown the island during his time with the fisherman and after he was released, decided to become a shinobi. Other: Manuke is oddly afraid of cats -Abilities- Rank: Academy Student LV: 1 HP: 12 CP: 5 XP: Chakra: 10 Charisma: 10 Endurance: 14 Agility: 12 Intelligence: 10 Strength: 16 -Skills- Chakra Mod: 0 Ninjutsu: Control: Charisma Mod: 0 Persuade: Lie: Seduce: Handle Animal: Sing: Disguise: Intimidate: Endurance Mod: 2 Focus: Blacksmith: Fortitude: 2 Rope: Swim: Agility Mod: 1 Dodge: 2 Sprint: Escape: Sneak Attack: Balance: Hide: Dance: Spy: Tumble: Intelligence Mod: 0 Genjutsu: Detect: Sense: Fuuin: Trap: Knowledge: Alchemy: Strength Mod: 3 Taijutsu: 2 Grapple: Weapons Sword: Staff: Melee: Ninja: Throwing: Range: Heavy: -Techniques- Taijutsu Genjutsu Ninjutsu -Equipment- Items: Weapons: 1 Kunai Damage: 5 to 9 + Strength Modifier + 1 per 10 ranks in Melee Damage: 4 to 8 + Strength Modifier + 1 per 10 ranks in Throwing 5 Shuriken Damage: 4 to 9 + Strength Modifier + 1 per 10 ranks in Throwing Valuables:
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Posted: Wed Jan 07, 2009 11:26 pm
Zac: Heh, I wish you added the Int mod. My character would be balling! But, sadly, no, one starts with just 6 skill points.
Ah, I see. Fascinating! Alright, you're approved. Go ahead and post in the profile scroll and head down to the Shoreline. An NPC will be there to teach you the ropes of our Game System.
Catapault: What is your character's height and weight? Try to write as much as you can about every aspect of Manuke's personality. There are really good examples in the profile scroll.
It's a little too coincidental that you'd find Shimagakure simply by wandering. It's a long journey. Maybe Manuke met BakaLao, our resident fisherman while he was in the mainland? Maybe BakaLao caught Manuke stealing and decided his skills would be better used in the context of being a shinobi?
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Posted: Thu Jan 08, 2009 4:50 am
Thanks, I'll just change a few things.......
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Posted: Thu Jan 08, 2009 2:28 pm
Whoops, double post sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Jan 08, 2009 6:29 pm
Gaia Name:Bel Biv Lucid Character Name:Uzumaki Kenji Clan:Uzumaki Element Affinity:Futon Age:12 Sex:Male Birthday:1st of Fall Theme Song:Song Physical Description:(See Picture) Clothing:(See Picture)
 Personality:He is actually rather Calm and Shy compared to the most part of his family. Although he is fiercely sensitive on threats Background: Other:
-Abilities-
Rank:Academy LV:1 HP: CP: XP:/50
Chakra:10+6 Charisma:10+3 Endurance:10+3 Agility:10+3 Intelligence:10+0 Strength:10+3
-Skills-
Chakra Mod Ninjutsu: Control:
Charisma Mod Persuade: Lie: Seduce: Handle Animal: Sing: Disguise: Intimidate:
Endurance Mod Focus: Blacksmith: Fortitude: Rope: Swim:
Agility Mod Dodge: Sprint: Escape: Sneak Attack: Balance: Hide: Dance: Spy: Tumble:
Intelligence Mod Genjutsu: Detect: Sense: Fuuin: Trap: Knowledge: Alchemy:
Strength Mod Taijutsu: Grapple:
Weapons Sword: Staff: Melee: Ninja: Throwing: Range: Heavy:
-Techniques- Taijutsu Genjutsu Ninjutsu
-Equipment-
Items: Weapons: Valuables:
Would I get my Mod through this equation? :-10 + /2 and round down? I didn't see the way to get mods in the guide.
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Posted: Sat Jan 10, 2009 3:04 pm
Could you add that Futon is Wind so that everyone is clear?
Please type your character's physical description and clothing out in paragraphs. The picture simply does not give enough detail and you may wish to change or emphasize a few traits.
You could add more to Kenji's personality. See the profile scroll for good examples.
Yes, mods are calculated like that. Thank you for pointing that out. We'll get it fixed as soon as possible.
Please condense your ability points into one number so it's easier to read.
Go ahead and finish your profile. ^^
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Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2009 10:04 am
Gaia Name: XchaoticXmelodyX Character Name: Uchiha, Senritsu Clan: Uchiha Element Affinity: Fire Age: 13 Sex: Female Birthday: Winter 3 Theme Song: N/A
 Second picture of her Physical Description: Standing at 5'2 and weighing only 90 lbs, Senritsu has long legs and arms, making her seem less muscular that what a future shinobi should be. She has lightly tanned skin and black, shaggily-cut hair that gives off a light blue/grey shine when she's in the sunlight. Her green eyes seem to do nothing but glow when she is happy and excited, but dull extremely when sad or unhappy in any way. Clothing: Senritsu likes to wear pants that are a little tight around her thigh and a little baggy around her shoes. Black, red and white are her favorite colors, and you can defintely tell by her choice in clothing. She always hated showing her feet and always wears close-toed shoes instead of sandals like most everyone else has. Senritsu had to, of course, find a shirt that wouldn't slow her down when she'd shoplift, so she chose a close, tightfitting shirt instead of a baggy one most kids would chose to wear. She also enjoys the jingling sounds of bangles, charms, and studs, and likes to wear multiple bracelets on both arms. It also adds to the reason she enjoys wearing her multiple belts. Personality: Extremely stubborn when it comes to things she wants and a little cold to people who are cold her her, Senritsu can be a little bratty when needed. Often when people have a bit of an attitude to her, she'd blow them off and set off in another direction or put herself to work doing something with her fingers. She likes to find new places she can sit and read her books. Senritsu has very little that people around her like, other than her friendly personage she gives off when she meets new people, such as her determination to get what she wants. Usually, she'd shoplift it, if it was material, if it was food, she'd do the same, as for something such as a hair style, she'd just cut her hair herself the way she liked. She also has a soft spot for sweets and would do just about anything you asked of her if a little candy was involved. As for now, Senritsu really has no task in life to accomplish, only to get food everyday, and enjoy every minute she has. Background: When Senritsu's parents brought her to Shimagakure, her siblings had yet to be born. Her little sister was currently in the safety of the warm womb of her mother, even then, they hadn't figured out the gender of the baby within. Her mother was a weaver, nothing more than an over-pampered housewife really. Her father on the other hand was an apprentice weapon's crafter, though he wasn't very good at it. They'd heard of the new village and quickly brought the seven year old Senritsu to the place of mention. Senritsu had always been the tomboy of the family, and for that, her mother has always been very displeased. When her younger brother was born, once again, her mother was displeased. It was her mother's dream to have a little girl to dress in frilly clothes and put in pink from head to toe, she couldn't very well do that to her son, and she darn well couldn't do that to Senritsu. She always had a habbit of 'accidently' shredding the clothes with scissors or 'accidedly' ripping it while playing a game. Soon enough, her younger sister was born, and she was defintely the favorite of the family. Her father never showed any preference and was happy after having his son, after all, he'd be the one carrying on the family name. Senritsu was always the 'forgotten' child, often forgotten when calling the children to dinner, and that being so, she rarely ate with the family. Senritsu would always go out with her few friends and hang out by the shopping district. She defintely wasn't a newb when it came to shoplifting, that was for sure. It was how she got her food most days, and it almost seemed as though she were a kid of the streets seeing as how no matter what time of day you'd go out, you'd see the girl around someplace, just randomly walking. Other: She's a sweets freak.
-Abilities-
Rank: Academy Student LV: 1 HP: 11 CP: 6 XP: 0/50
Chakra: 12 Charisma: 10 Endurance: 12 Agility: 12 Intelligence: 14 Strength: 12
-Skills-
Chakra Mod 1 Ninjutsu: Control:
Charisma Mod 0 Persuade: Lie: 2 Seduce: Handle Animal: Sing: Disguise: Intimidate:
Endurance Mod 1 Focus: Blacksmith: Fortitude: Rope: Swim:
Agility Mod 1 Dodge: Sprint: 2 Escape: Sneak Attack: Balance: Hide: Dance: Spy: 2 Tumble:
Intelligence Mod 2 Genjutsu: Detect: Sense: Fuuin: Trap: Knowledge: Alchemy:
Strength Mod 1 Taijutsu: Grapple:
Weapons Sword: Staff: Melee: Ninja: Throwing: Range: Heavy:
-Techniques- Taijutsu Genjutsu Ninjutsu
-Equipment-
Items: Weapons: 1 Kunai Damage: 5 to 9 + Strength Modifier + 1 per 10 ranks in Melee Damage: 4 to 8 + Strength Modifier + 1 per 10 ranks in Throwing 5 Shuriken Damage: 4 to 9 + Strength Modifier + 1 per 10 ranks in Throwing Valuables:
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Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2009 6:29 pm
I like it...Pic please! xp Also, What is your characters last name? (Family name?) And how did she get to the island?
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Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2009 7:51 pm
...I was planning on saying she's been on the island for a while ^_^' pre-existing, you know? And I haven't gotten a last name for her because I am waiting to see if I can get into the clan I wish to. I have a pic, I'll put it in now. ^_^
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Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2009 9:24 pm
I see...However, the island was only founded Aznka However, Shimagakure is only 6/7 years old. 6/7 years ago... Just a heads up. smile
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Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2009 11:00 pm
You need to write out her description and clothing. There may be details we cannot see in the picture and certain points you may want to emphasize.
Try to put a little more to her personality. Describe all her sides. Why is she cold? How is she cold to people, as in what does she do? What about those that love her? What's her purpose in life? How determined is she? And so on...
How did she get on Shimagakure? I think you should put somewhere that her family were artisans, farmers, or shinobi that Shimagakure needed.
Please put your abilities as "Chakra: 12." We want to keep numbers as simple as possible. You would put your modifiers next to "Chakra Mod."
So she was a shoplifter? Maybe you could put a few points in Spy or Sprint?
Love the pictures, by the way! smile
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Posted: Mon Jan 12, 2009 4:04 pm
XchaoticXmelodyX Gaia Name: XchaoticXmelodyX Character Name: Uchiha, Senritsu Clan: Uchiha Element Affinity: Fire Age: 13 Sex: Female Birthday: Winter 3 Theme Song: N/A
 Second picture of her Physical Description: Senritsu has long legs and arms, making her seem less muscular that what a future shinobi should be. She has lightly tanned skin and black, shaggily-cut hair that gives off a light blue/grey shine when she's in the sunlight. Her green eyes seem to do nothing but glow when she is happy and excited, but dull extremely when sad or unhappy in any way. Clothing: Senritsu likes to wear pants that are a little tight around her thigh and a little baggy around her shoes. Black, red and white are her favorite colors, and you can defintely tell by her choice in clothing. She always hated showing her feet and always wears close-toed shoes instead of sandals like most everyone else has. Senritsu had to, of course, find a shirt that wouldn't slow her down when she'd shoplift, so she chose a close, tightfitting shirt instead of a baggy one most kids would chose to wear. She also enjoys the jingling sounds of bangles, charms, and studs, and likes to wear multiple bracelets on both arms. It also adds to the reason she enjoys wearing her multiple belts. Personality: Extremely stubborn when it comes to things she wants and a little cold to people who are cold her her, Senritsu can be a little bratty when needed. Often when people have a bit of an attitude to her, she'd blow them off and set off in another direction or put herself to work doing something with her fingers. She likes to find new places she can sit and read her books. Senritsu has very little that people around her like, other than her friendly personage she gives off when she meets new people, such as her determination to get what she wants. Usually, she'd shoplift it, if it was material, if it was food, she'd do the same, as for something such as a hair style, she'd just cut her hair herself the way she liked. She also has a soft spot for sweets and would do just about anything you asked of her if a little candy was involved. As for now, Senritsu really has no task in life to accomplish, only to get food everyday, and enjoy every minute she has. Background: When Senritsu's parents brought her to Shimagakure, her siblings had yet to be born. Her little sister was currently in the safety of the warm womb of her mother, even then, they hadn't figured out the gender of the baby within. Her mother was a weaver, nothing more than an over-pampered housewife really. Her father on the other hand was an apprentice weapon's crafter, though he wasn't very good at it. They'd heard of the new village and quickly brought the seven year old Senritsu to the place of mention. Senritsu had always been the tomboy of the family, and for that, her mother has always been very displeased. When her younger brother was born, once again, her mother was displeased. It was her mother's dream to have a little girl to dress in frilly clothes and put in pink from head to toe, she couldn't very well do that to her son, and she darn well couldn't do that to Senritsu. She always had a habbit of 'accidently' shredding the clothes with scissors or 'accidedly' ripping it while playing a game. Soon enough, her younger sister was born, and she was defintely the favorite of the family. Her father never showed any preference and was happy after having his son, after all, he'd be the one carrying on the family name. Senritsu was always the 'forgotten' child, often forgotten when calling the children to dinner, and that being so, she rarely ate with the family. Senritsu would always go out with her few friends and hang out by the shopping district. She defintely wasn't a newb when it came to shoplifting, that was for sure. It was how she got her food most days, and it almost seemed as though she were a kid of the streets seeing as how no matter what time of day you'd go out, you'd see the girl around someplace, just randomly walking. Other: She's a sweets freak.
-Abilities-
Rank: Academy Student LV: 1 HP: 11 CP: 6 XP: 0/50
Chakra: 12 Charisma: 10 Endurance: 12 Agility: 12 Intelligence: 14 Strength: 12
-Skills-
Chakra Mod 1 Ninjutsu: Control:
Charisma Mod 0 Persuade: Lie: 2 Seduce: Handle Animal: Sing: Disguise: Intimidate:
Endurance Mod 1 Focus: Blacksmith: Fortitude: Rope: Swim:
Agility Mod 1 Dodge: Sprint: 2 Escape: Sneak Attack: Balance: Hide: Dance: Spy: 2 Tumble:
Intelligence Mod 2 Genjutsu: Detect: Sense: Fuuin: Trap: Knowledge: Alchemy:
Strength Mod 1 Taijutsu: Grapple:
Weapons Sword: Staff: Melee: Ninja: Throwing: Range: Heavy:
-Techniques- Taijutsu Genjutsu Ninjutsu
-Equipment-
Items: Weapons: 1 Kunai Damage: 5 to 9 + Strength Modifier + 1 per 10 ranks in Melee Damage: 4 to 8 + Strength Modifier + 1 per 10 ranks in Throwing 5 Shuriken Damage: 4 to 9 + Strength Modifier + 1 per 10 ranks in Throwing Valuables: I think that's all you've asked for, yes?
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