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| 3! 3! I'm betting 3!!!! XD |
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| It's going to the deadzone. No one will join it. |
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| *Singing along to music*she's a killer, queeen.... |
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| Hey, I like that song! *talking about angel of darkness* |
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| Cheez and claranet. ^u^ *spelling problem...>.>* |
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| I-I-I'm just here for the gold. ((Me:*slaps you*)) |
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| POLL WHORE OPTION!!! |
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 Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 6:00 pm
((I rather liked the color format, as this new one is a bit hard to read. Are your quotation marks broken or is this just your style of writing?))
Silva stared at Riyu's odd approach to water travel. She decided against commenting on it. She walked over the water, her feet glowing slightly red with chakra. Water sloshed around her, getting her wet reguardless. She swore softly, she hated water, she hated getting wet, and she hated swimming. When she came to points where she was forced to go under, she walked like she was going down stairs and then back up again when she wanted to rise, her cloating hissed with steam where the water hit it. Finally they had exited the cave, with Silva blinking in the harsh sunlight.
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Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 6:37 pm
"I want to die!" Riyu remembered that Silva was standing behind her in the knee deep water. "Oh hey. Ignore me, I'm being emo again. So! Would you be interested in finding the Angel of Darkness? Just a question."
((I AM SO TRAGIC AND WRITER BLOCKED!!!!))
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Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 9:05 pm
Ohjiro looked around half expecting the unknown figure to ambush him. He slowly came to the realization that they were going to be watching him on his travels. He was ok with this, but why was his hand still shaking. He held his hand up to the bright ball in the sky which was the sun. The light seeped through the cracks between his second, third and fourth fingers. His palm was facing toward his face as he squinted. The light was somewhat harmful to his eyes...how odd. His hand slowly went back to the ghostly form it formerly was and the sun ceased to burn his eyes. He suddenly started to sense the spirits around him as he usually could. This usually didn't bother him but this ability had been shut off temporarily. He didn't know how but someone the odd stranger had changed him from a ghost to a mortal. And from the looks of it this was only a short lived spell. He quickly located his comrades vanishing from the spot of grass he was standing on to a nearby wall near where Silva was. He coolly crossed his arms as he leaned against the wall shifting from his ghostly invisible form to one they could see. So, are you two still interested in finding the Angel of Darkness?
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Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 6:53 am
((Woo! We're in level two, everyone! Parteh!!))
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Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 8:00 am
Silva screamed. "AHA!! I KNEW it! You WERE sent by Tsunadae!!! That old hag wants me to go on that quest!! I won't do it!! I won't do it!! Its a quest for a madman!! You'll never take me alive!!" She pushed roughly past Riyu and in her haste and fear, straight into a tree. "D-d-damn....." she muttered as she sank into unconciousness.
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Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 9:07 am
Riyu watched Silva knock herself out. "Buh....I din't get sent by Tsunade... Oh never mind. She's out cold." She sighed and stared at the sky.
"Long lost words, whisper slowly...
to me....
still can't find what keeps me here...
when all this time I feel so hollow...
inside....
I know you're still there.
watching me, wanting me,
I can feel you pull me down.
Fearing you, loving you,
I won't let you pull me down.
Hunting you I can smell you--alive..."
Riyu was standing on the water now, doing some strange dance--
the dance of the demons.
Her body jerked back and forth as if possessed, then smoothed. Her eyes appeared to have rolled all the way to the back of her head, as the pupil and iris was gone.
"Maybe I'll wake up for once,
not tormented daily defeated by you,
just when I, thought I'd reached the bottom.
I'm dieing again.
I'm going under!
Drowning you!
I'm falling forever!
I've got to break through!
Going under!"
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Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 11:53 am
(I foresaw this Roleplay being put in the level two section and honestly it could have been a level three. There are several mistakes that were made that degraded the original well written story. First mistake was introducing Naruto characters in the rp. This often attracts unexperienced noobs that godmod in just about every rp they join. The biggest hit though was when you didn't enforce the rules you originally set up. There is one semi-active member in this roleplay that submitted a profile on page two. This needs to be moved to the front page so it will be organized. The post length is most likely the largest reason this ended up as a level two and not a level three).
Ohjiro just shook his head as he watched the young ninja flip out then walk straight into a tree. He chuckled a bit while shaking his head, "heh youth, what a strange breed they are". Listen up, I've recently come to the realization that this mission will be more dangerous than previously indicated. If we are going to have any hope of completing it we need to stick together. He put more emphasis on the word need than any other word in the sentence. This is my job as an Angel to watch over all of you. Even the ones that hate, lament and loathe spirits.
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Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 4:28 pm
((Trust me. It couldn't have been a level 3. And what problem do you have with that? I accepted FlamingVoid because she's a really good friend I have in real life. And yeah, I know she didn't PM me. I didn't enforce that rule. We talked it out and she apologized. And you aren't really one to talk. You're using the quotation marks wrong. You have characters that are talking without them. If it's supposed to be some sort of weird telepathy, then you should do it in italics. Plus, what's with the one line bio?! You're a lot closer to being banned than she is. And certainly closer than me. XD))
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Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 9:10 pm
(( I choose to be completely neutral in this debate. I'm terribly sorry for any trouble I may cause with my presence....I would however like to say that I've been very polite to everyone here and feel very sad and hurt that you would say such things. We're all just trying to have fun aren't we? It doesn't really matter what level it is....))
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Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 5:26 am
((It's OK, Void. (Yea, I'm just gonna call you void cuz I'm too lazy to type out the whole thing and I don't wanna release your name out into the cyberspace) I don't honestly care what level it's in as long as it's not in level one.))
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Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 12:24 pm
((You can call me Void. I just want to get this rp back on track....But I have writer's block too....))
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Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 3:53 pm
clara33 ((Trust me. It couldn't have been a level 3. And what problem do you have with that? I accepted FlamingVoid because she's a really good friend I have in real life. And yeah, I know she didn't PM me. I didn't enforce that rule. We talked it out and she apologized. And you aren't really one to talk. You're using the quotation marks wrong. You have characters that are talking without them. If it's supposed to be some sort of weird telepathy, then you should do it in italics. Plus, what's with the one line bio?! You're a lot closer to being banned than she is. And certainly closer than me. XD)) I think you underestimate the original story that you wrote. I was merely asking that the profile be moved to the front page. You originally said you would like five posts per day and a certain post length. I stayed active on Gaia for those first couple of days for that very reason. Also Rp style isn't a determining factor for ability. This is the second time you have threatened to ban me from your Roleplay and quite frankly I'm a bit ticked. Unless you can give me a solid reason not to I'm leaving the thread you will not have to kick me.
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Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 9:30 pm
(( I understand your frustration and sympathize with you, however I am very sorry to say that even though you are exceptionally good at Rping, your text format makes it hard to read. Your talent is thus diminished. Think of it this way; If I was an extrodinary writer but had horrible penmenship, people would be discouraged and therein refuse to read my creations. Your roleplaying style is suberb- if a bit hard to read. The only reason that Clara is threatening to boot you is that your posts are hard to read. I would try to sway her in this manner but she remains staid. I'm sure you hear this a lot and and hope that you forgive me for being what has to be another in a long chain of patronizers.))
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 6:43 pm
((Everybody, let's just calm down. I will kick people as I see fit. I do not need to come up with a solid reason; the GM is god. I've kicked my bro from RP's because we got in a fight that got physical. If you saw how incredibly huge he is for a 13 year old, you would understand. This guy on a train started askin' him questions without knowing he was a minor. But back on track then. I'm sorry for starting to b***h at you. At two in the morning with too much caffeine in my system, bitching always seems to be the best solution. And to your thing about the story, I've seen the advanced plots and setup. 2 words: IN SANE. I got a PM from Penden saying that advanced was just a bunch of insane people with no lives whatsoever. No offense. XD))
((Wait....I need Void to Post first.))
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Posted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 3:18 pm
((Post what? There's not much to say, my character is out cold in a nice dreamless sleep. Unless of course you want me to paint an image of flies swarming around, picking at her since she just came out a of a stream in a cave, I mean, that thing HAS to be scummy.))
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