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clussy mcwarcrime

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:13 pm


xXKielahXx
Shade Macabre
xXKielahXx
The Most Despair, Is Death

Staring at your picture, wishing you would come home. Wishing it would tell me, tell me where you have gone.

Crossing that line of gunfire, of passions, the gunfire of death. Reloading in poison reloading in knifes to slit your throat and let you bleed that sorrow that wished to be set free. No stories to tell my children, no happiness for me, I?m never coming home. Seeing you fall seeing you die, but what?s worst of all I know you didn?t want this all. Knowing that you held it close to your heart, your love for your country, your despair for your family, your excitement to see this end. But you?re still never coming home again. The bullet of lust, the bullet of sorrow, flies through the air, cutting it like butterflies through this winter tale, flapping its wings of smoke, tearing your grasp of hope, this can?t save you, but it will set you free, you hear ringing, you feel the stinging, you feel the death, the pain, the loathing of hate, the love and the strong wishing for this all to be gone! Piercing your thoughts, exploding your guts?Your guts to be freed, your guts to be allowed to be free?Bloody feelings of loss, gliding wings that push, push you to stay alive. I watch as you fall. I scream your name in agony, I try to get to you but they keep me back, pulling and pulling to get to you, screaming until my body collapsed to the floor in a pile of bloody distress?My eyes filled with hate and love and wishing just to feel you one last time, to hear your voice of purity, the voice that kept me in sanity, I wish I wish for you to come back and be with me. Holding my gun up, pointing and shooting. Unaware of this affair, Unaware of what?s really out there, pulling myself on ward letting your body be lost in the grass, letting the waves lap up the rest, of your blood that was kept it?s best.

Now I know I?m never coming home, not now not ever. Letting my body fall after the last breath of the end of this all. Will there be an end to this all? Am I just lying here wishing it all to stop? This is just pitiful blasphemy, singing in the gales of sorrow. Singing a melody, a melody, of pain, of hate and strain. Our country may not be safe, our country may do wrong, but from all I?ve been through respect all that I have done.


ok well i finished it lol, *looks at shade* There ya go buddy...*sighs*
You need to write a book of your awesome poetry, and while your at it include some of your badass art!
Seriously now, what inspired this? Did someone you know die in the Service? Or maybe you saw something cool on tv? (tv teh pwn! I draw 40% of my stuff from the tv)
*looks embaressed* What are u talking about lol, and no i know no one from the service who died. I just understand feelings lol even tho ive never felt them. I want ppl to understand how every1 can feel at times. I want ppl to understand what goes on in my mind, what feeds off of my mind, what i can create with just my mind...And my arrt isnt that great *sigh* I have better stuff coming in soon once i get scanage working lol XD

That's awesome, I can hardly understand something after going through it multiple times xd . I can't even begin to take that on, understanding something that someone ELSE is feeling, jesus tapdancing christ, I dunno what the hell I've got going on half the time xd . Your art is good! Now do as Thorn told me and steal someone elses scanner.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:16 pm


"Lol i hope to get to my friends house and scan there. Geez you guys want so much from me *sigh* I gotta look for more poems! gonk I think i got some haikus hidden away here and ssome acrostic poems..."

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clussy mcwarcrime

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:18 pm


xXKielahXx
"Lol i hope to get to my friends house and scan there. Geez you guys want so much from me *sigh* I gotta look for more poems! gonk I think i got some haikus hidden away here and ssome acrostic poems..."
Well, someone as talented as you comes around every few years for me, I wanna learn all I can from you so I can improve myself as a writer, it's in my grand scheme of things:
Write,
Comment,
Critique,
Rinse and Repeat.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:24 pm


Shade Macabre
xXKielahXx
"Lol i hope to get to my friends house and scan there. Geez you guys want so much from me *sigh* I gotta look for more poems! gonk I think i got some haikus hidden away here and ssome acrostic poems..."
Well, someone as talented as you comes around every few years for me, I wanna learn all I can from you so I can improve myself as a writer, it's in my grand scheme of things:
Write,
Comment,
Critique,
Rinse and Repeat.
I should be learning from you ypur older then me *sigh* gonk IM NOT THAT GREAT!! geez...scary ppl...lol jk

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:29 pm


xXKielahXx
Shade Macabre
xXKielahXx
"Lol i hope to get to my friends house and scan there. Geez you guys want so much from me *sigh* I gotta look for more poems! gonk I think i got some haikus hidden away here and ssome acrostic poems..."
Well, someone as talented as you comes around every few years for me, I wanna learn all I can from you so I can improve myself as a writer, it's in my grand scheme of things:
Write,
Comment,
Critique,
Rinse and Repeat.
I should be learning from you ypur older then me *sigh* gonk IM NOT THAT GREAT!! geez...scary ppl...lol jk
Oh meh, I like learning from people of all ages, like just the other day I learned that if you buy a hoodie now, the price is jacked up, but wait a while and it lowers, I learned that from my 7 year old cousin... go me >_<
PostPosted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:38 pm


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PostPosted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 9:03 pm


Ok something at the very top of my head!

Dead Love

Love, death, what's the difference?
It seems to me that every day bleeds in the end, the same way.
You stole my heart, but that's not all, you took my breath and you took me and stuffed me full of these usless notions of "It's gunna kill us all." I believed you...
You left me to rot...What was wrong with this love i thought?
Did i imagine wrong? Was i swept away too soon? Do i not understand this? Am i the one to stop? You stared at me with your eyes of despair, peeling back the last acid in the air, the chemicals swirling all over here, what the hell? I fear to almost tears...White petals falling down the sky, black roses left to die, black wasn't the enemy, and white wasn't the fellow, i am evil, you are pure, i guess my body is left to rot here. I say ******** you! Because you stranded me and left me to this blackened fear.
PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 8:28 am


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 8:29 am


Haikus

Lost In Sorrow

Lost, forever gone
Sorrow is only for me
Just set me free please!

Light vs. Dark

Bright, shining sun
Dusk to dawn, night and day fight
Dark, ominous, moon
PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 2:23 pm


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PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 3:51 pm


xXKielahXx
Youkaikitsune
Only at night walks a blood thirsty beast
He stalks the streets for his next tasty feast
You think what harm could he have been
As he whispers sweet nothings and caresses your skin
He kisses your lips and moves down your neck
And then he does something you'll never expect
You stand there stroking his long black coat
He opens his mouth and rips out your throat
You watch as darkness fills his eyes
He drinks his fill then leaves you to die


i loves that poem!!! *hugs dude* I love vampires
thanx heart
PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 3:55 pm


YOUR LOVE
When im dead and in my grave
Your love will stay true and brave
It will bring back my forgoten soul
Your love that you cannot control
Mourning my loss and feeling alone
Your love will bring flesh to my bone
If you scream, scream with me
Your love did this dont you see
The life in my eyes will burn forever bright
Your love made the dead walk this very night

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 4:01 pm


Youkaikitsune
YOUR LOVE
When im dead and in my grave
Your love will stay true and brave
It will bring back my forgoten soul
Your love that you cannot control
Mourning my loss and feeling alone
Your love will bring flesh to my bone
If you scream, scream with me
Your love did this dont you see
The life in my eyes will burn forever bright
Your love made the dead walk this very night
love that one too xd those are great rhymes lol
PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 4:06 pm


M esmerizing beauty
O utstanding in all its bliss
O ften stranded in this
N egotiating this last kiss
L ightly watching us with its black eyes
I nspiring in its large size
G allows bellow its halls
H appiness it can forgive us all
T onight, it casts its moon call

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 5:07 pm


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