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HinataLoveRises

PostPosted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 5:24 pm


Chapter 6: New Life


Walking down the sidewalk, thinking of how awesome my new year in the sixth grade was going to be. I see Gerard and Mikey ahead of me waiting for the bus. “Thanks for waking me up!” I said sarcastically to both of them. “Hey I thought that was Olivia’s job!” Gerard said jokingly. Mikey laughed.
Mikey and me montaged about the new year in the new school, and Gerard gave us some helpful advice. The bus had arrived and we all boarded it. I saw Steph and immediately sat next to her. Mikey sat in the seat next to us where this other guy was sitting. Mikey said hi to the guy sitting in the seat Mikey was in.
Mikey has been very outgoing ever since I stood up for him that day in the third grade. The guy said hi back. He had red, puffy hair. Sort of like an Afro.
“Hey, who is that guy with Gerard?” Steph asked. I turned around and saw Gerard laughing with someone. He had black short hair. It was short except for the bangs, they hung in front of his face and waved around every time he would make a dramatic head movement.
This guy’s hotness distracted me. “Hello? Are you there? Ami?” Steph said while waving her hand in front of me. “Huh? Oh sorry!” I said. “So do you know who it is?” Steph asks me again. “I don’t know” I say taking one last glance at him.
We got off the bus and Steph and me took a look at the school. “Wow! Big!” I said. Steph agreed then I looked at Mikey and he was already walking off with his new friend. We walked towards the school and once we entered Steph and I got separated from the huge crowd of older people. I got lost and couldn’t find the way to my A period class. I was fifteen minutes late. The teacher let go though.
I got out of class holding a whole lot of binders. Then the mob of scary older kids came. It seemed like I was the only one going the opposite way they were. I got knocked around, pushed and finally to the floor. It felt like a violent moshpit. When the violent mob went to their classes, I tried to clean up all my papers and put them back in my binder. Then all of a sudden someone trips over me. I go back to the floor and I look at who tripped over me like a rock. It was Gerard’s friend!!
“Oh, I am so sorry!” he apologized. “I-it’s ok…” I stuttered. He helped me clean up my papers and books. “By the way, my name is Frank” he said while helping me clean up. “Oh, I’m Ami” I responded. “Oh, you’re Gerard’s sister right??” he said excitedly. “Ya, You are his friend right? I saw you two on the bus this morning.” I said no trying to seem stockerish. We kept talking even though we knew we were late for class, and my binders were all cleaned up.
I really never felt like this before towards a person. It feels weird. Every time you are near them your stomach explodes. Every time you talk to them you stutter and trip over your words. Could this be…love??
PostPosted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 7:20 pm


YAY, IT'S BEEN RECONTINUED. heart

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 12:13 pm


I've already heard these and you've already heard my comments, but...I LOVE IT!

I'm loving the Frankie heart Amy romaaance.
And of course the Gerard heart Steph romance that hasn't really gotten started but will. IT WILL!
PostPosted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 4:13 pm


I WANT MORE! NOW. gonk

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HinataLoveRises

PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 3:23 pm


It's an UPDATE!!!! You wanted more, and you got it!!!

Chapter 7: The Chemical Party


I got home later that day. I went home and went straight to my room. I lied down in my bed. Some people would say it was a horrible first day of school, but Frankie kind of made up for that.
I opened my door to go get a cup of coffee. As I walked into the kitchen, I heard Gerard, Mikey, and Mom talking. “Ya that would be a great idea!” Mikey exclaimed. “What would be a good idea?” I asked. How would you like to have a small beginning of the year party?” Mom asked.
A small party? For the beginning of the year? The beginning of school isn’t that exciting, but the fact of having a party was. I really never had been invited to a party, nonetheless hosted one. “Ya that sounds great!” I told her.
Mom told us we could each bring one friend. I knew I was going to bring Steph, sine she’s my only real friend. I asked Mikey whom he was going to bring. “I’m bringing Ray!” he said excitedly. “Who’s Ray?” I asked curios. “My new friend!” he said. I accepted the fact that Mikey had a friend I didn’t know about and went to go ask Gerard who he was going to bring. He told me he was bringing Frankie. I went into a shock, and then just walked away. Frank? Me? At a party? In my house? TOGETHER?!!
A couple days had passed, and I told Steph about the party. She got excited. That she was going to be at a party with Gerard. She was probably feeling the same way I was when I found out that Frank was going.
It finally got to Saturday and Steph arrived early. Probably for Gerard I thought. I didn’t mind though, because now I know how it feels to be in love. I let Steph in and then the phone rang. “Be right back Steph” I told her as I went to the phone.
“Hello”
“Hey Ami!”
“Oh, hey Frankie. I’ll go get Gerard.”
“Actually I don’t have time. Can you tell him that I can’t make to the party?”
“What? Why?”
“I forgot I have a date with my girlfriend.”
“….”
“You there?”
“Oh ya, I’ll give him the message.”
I couldn’t believe it. Frankie had a girlfriend. I felt like I just blew my brains against the ceiling.((Ha ha, I’m clever!!))
That day I didn’t bother being in the party. I just stayed locked in my room…
PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 6:23 pm


POOR GIRL. FRANKIE'S GOT A GF. u.u HAHA, I LOVED THE BLOW MY BRAINS AGAINST THE CEILING PART. IT FIT SO PERFECTLY. whee heart I WANT MORE PLEASE.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 6:29 pm


Hehe!! Thanks!! I'm drawing a picture of Ami right now, when it's done i'll put it where the first chapter is, ok?? And I'll also work on chapter 8!! biggrin
PostPosted: Sat Nov 03, 2007 7:09 am


YAY. SOMEONE WHO ACTUALLY UPDATES! whee

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 4:56 pm


*never updates*
PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 7:36 pm


I LLLOOOOVVVEEE yr story. biggrin very lovable.

Update soon. biggrin

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Ieros Baby567

PostPosted: Sat Nov 10, 2007 5:59 pm


ILessThan3ZV_IxFx
I LLLOOOOVVVEEE yr story. biggrin very lovable.

Update soon. biggrin

SURE YOU'LL COMMENT ON EVERYONE ELSE'S FAN FICS BUT NOT MINE.......MEANIE.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 9:37 am


What's this? What's this? It's....
AN UDDATE?!?!
Yes, yes it is.

Chapter 8: The Romance has died, or Has It?


Sunday I just lied in my bed thinking of Frankie. How could he have a girlfriend? My biggest love ever and he has a girlfriend. The more I thought of Frankie the more I cried. My pillow felt like I just dunked it into a pool. I heard a knocking on my door.
“Ami? Sweetie? Are you ok?” Mom asked me threw the wood of my door.
“Leave me alone!” I yelled at her. I knew it was kind of rude to shoo her away even though she was trying to help but I was way to upset to worry about proper manners.
“Come on Ami. Please let me come in” Mom says again. I make a silence, which apparently meant “come in”. She walked in and sat on my bed next to me.
“Amanda, why are you so upset?” Mom asks me sounding very concerned. I sat up and looked at her.
“Ok. You promise not to tell Gerard?” I asked her.
“Of coarse” she reassures me. I then explained to her what I was moping about. I left Frankie nameless though.
“Honey, there are other guys out there. But if you really like this guy, you got to keep fighting for him! He just has a girlfriend, god only knows if they will stay together or not.” She explains to me.
I sniff and wipe my nose on my sleeve.
“You’re right! Thanks mom!” I said while giving her a hug.

The next day I arrived at school and Steph ran up to me. We talked about a lot of stuff. You know girl stuff, gas, poop, diarrhea, and anything else that comes out of your butt, mouth or nose.
While Steph was telling me about this book she was reading that had something to do with diarrhea, I spotted Frank. I told Steph I would be right back. I was going to take a shot on the advice that Mom gave me. I have to fight for Frankie!!
As I approached him I got nervous. It was like time it self was going in slow motion. I could hear my heart pounding; I could feel my cold sweat dripping down by head. I finally got to him.
“Um, hi Frankie!” I said nervously.
“Hey Ami! This is my girlfriend Katie.” he said as he introduced her.
“Nice to meet you Ami!” she said very joyfully while putting her arms around Frankie. It was like she was rubbing him right in my face. That skunk bag!! I realized that another one of those awkward silences came and I should keep the conversation going.
“So Frank, how is your…” I paused to think of what I should ask.
I ran out of time and then blurted out “…Shoes?!”. What did I just say? Shoes? How were his shoes?? What am I? Insane?
Katie laughed at my question.
“Well I hope they are fine, I can’t afford another pair. My last pair caught pneumonia so I had to get new ones.” Frankie said making a funny. I laughed out of embarrassment. Then, luckily, saved by the bell.
Frankie said bye still laughing at my shoe question. I watched him leave then saw Katie leave behind him. She gave me a mean look as she walked away. It shocked me. What happened to the joyful girl I met two minutes ago? Well as I walked to my A period class, I thought to myself….this was going to be harder than I thought…

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 10:28 am


Chapter 9: Dance of the Spades ~Part one~


That same day school was almost over. I walked down the hall in the traveling mosh pit. Some how the sped up and trampled me. Once they were all gone I once again picked up all my papers and binders. And my teachers ask why I hand in homework with footprints on them.
When I got all my papers and binders I got up then got knocked down again.
Apparently there was this other kid in front of me picking up his papers too. We just knocked each other down again because we whacked heads on our way up.
“Oh I am so sorry!” he said.
“Don’t worry about it” I said as we were both covered with papers. When he finished cleaning his papers up he helped me with mine. He shuffled threw my papers and saw a paper that they gave out in homeroom. It said “SCHOOL DANCE; sponsored by the football team; tickets $5; from 7:30-9:00 pm”.
“Hey are you going to the dance this Friday?” the stranger asked me.
“I don’t know. Maybe.” I said.
“Oh, well you should I heard they are a blast, they give out prizes and the food is way better than the cafeteria food!” he explains to me.
“I’ll put it into consideration” I told him. We both went back to class.
When I got to Math, my last period, I saw that guy again. I never knew he was in my Math class. Wow the things I never notice, which happens to be a lot these days! Threw out the whole class we were making funny faces at each other and everything. For once Math class was fun!
As the end of the day bell rang I waved bye to this stranger. I still don’t know his name. I’ll have to ask him next Math class.
I boarded my bus. I looked for Steph then remembered she was going to stay after to do some make-up work. I took a random seat and just sat there awaiting for my arrival point. The guy that was also in my seat turned around.
“Hey you’re that girl!” the stranger said. I turned around to see it was that guy I was flirting, I mean, joking around with in Math class.
“Hey you” I said. He smiled.
“Hey did you make up your mind about the dance?” he asks me.
“Ya, I think I’m gunna go” I said.
“Great! Would you want to go with me?” he asks very rapidly.
My eyes widen. A guy asked me to a dance! ME!! Wait, what about Frankie. Well, I suppose he would be going with Katie.
“Sure I’ll go with you” I told him.
I got home and barged into Gerard’s room.
“Ever heard of knocking?” Gerard said grumpily.
“Someone asked me to the dance this Friday!!” I said screaming.
“Huh? Who?” he asks. I pause. “…I don’t know.”
PostPosted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 5:49 pm


Ieros Baby567
ILessThan3ZV_IxFx
I LLLOOOOVVVEEE yr story. biggrin very lovable.

Update soon. biggrin

SURE YOU'LL COMMENT ON EVERYONE ELSE'S FAN FICS BUT NOT MINE.......MEANIE.


Awe! don't be mad! i'm on it. (Ewh. I wish julie never introduced me to myspace. SHE GOT ME HOOKED!)

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