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 Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 6:14 am
Suki grabbed her keys ad put them on a chain. she said: Starange... my keys has an extra 1 that wont come off. She looked up at the clock, agh!!
im gonna be late for English!! Well if im lucky maybe theyll let me off cuz im new. She headed for English and on her way she saw a girl whith some notes on her hand, but she new better not to ask. but she got there to see a red convertable in the middle of the class room. she asked: y is there a car in the classroom?? The teacher said: Ugh. Im afraid class is canceld today. Awman! Suki complained. I really wanted to go to class today. Teacher: Well, heres your homework. Now off whith you!
Suki headed down the hall and went into her dorm and started her homework.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 6:22 am
She found out that her work was tromendously easy and fineshed it faster than she figred. So she put her work away and went to the library.
She sat in a big old stuffy chair and started to read a science book.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 6:41 am
((-teeth grinding loudly- Please excuse this, Star...
If I remember correctly, this is supposed to be a LITERATE role-play, or at least semi-lit. Do any of you other than Star and Matt know what that means?!! It would seem not. QUOTATION MARKS AROUND YOUR DIALOGUE. Or, more simply, DO NOT PUT:
Teacher said...what are you doing here? I said: I'm waiting for my class to start Teacher said: what class are you in?
It MEANS:
An unfamiliar teacher approached her where she was standing in front of the door.
"What are you doing in this hallway?" she demanded.
"I have a class here in five minutes," Jenny replied, pointing towards the door as she said so.
Surprised, the teacher asked, a touch incredulously, "What class are you in?"
Also...
CAPITALIZATION
PUNCTUATION
SPELLING
If anyone needs an example for the last three, PM me, and perhaps I'll be nice enough to give you one.
Forgive me if that was out-of-line, Star, but illiteracy in a literate role-play bugs me to NO end.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 6:47 am
((man ur mean!! we are just playing a game here its not like it matters))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 6:56 am
((actually, she has a point. Semi-lit means that you spell out your words, use proper sentence structure, and well...use grammer. Please, try to spell out your words. Thanks.))
Star finished her work, and got up. Star rmemebered she had left Leo in the library. Star grabbed the books and headed back down to the library, only having what was left of her hour before Star's class started. She qickly entered the library, and saw Leo still standing there.
"Hey, sorry. English was cancelled because of Mark..again." Star said, laughing a bit and sitting down in her usual chair.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:01 am
((I know what it means, and I do try to spell my words out properly but my keybord is not as good as all of them))
Suki fineshed her book and saw some more kids standing across the room. She stood up and walked over to them she thought that it might be nice to have some friends here, instead of being alone again like at her other schools.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:04 am
Star saw a girl walking over, and quicly hid the books.
"Uh, hi." Star said, dodgedly.
((that is understood.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:08 am
Suki noticed that she was hiding somthing and asked what that was,
she thought she allready knew that they were of demonology but she had to make sure.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:14 am
"So...uhh....what's up?" Star asked, still trying to cover her bag full of books. "Do you need something?" She asked, confused.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:18 am
Hi, im new here and i was wondering if we could be friends...
By the way are those demnology books u have there?? Suki asked.
Because demonology is my third best subject!!
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:24 am
((Wow...no wonder you think I'm mean, you don't pay attention.
Have you ever heard of this wondeful thing called "quotation marks" for your "dialogue?"))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:28 am
((hey im just a kid, im not saposed to be perfect))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:34 am
ratsgalore ((hey im just a kid, im not saposed to be perfect))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:35 am
((I'm a kid, too. Granted, I was raised to be meticulously perfectionist about my grammar, but still. If you have a word processor, you have a spell checker, and Microsoft word processors have grammar checks, too. It can help your literacy to type out your response in your computer's word processor before you post it.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:36 am
((it is kinda hard to tell what you are saying, and what you are not..))
"Um, uhhh...sure." Star said, "I guess I should tell you..they are. I persuaded the librarian to give them to me..." Star confessed.
((have to go....dont post too much...))
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