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 Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 2:55 pm
I meant your eye color. Not your character's. In any case, the profile looks fine and it shall be accepted, you may edit out the information.
Sauron - X____X Kay! I'm getting to it now before I forget! X__X;;;
Melon, feel free to. :] Many others have done that as well.
--- Be advised, anyone who is or is going to post their profile after page 3, there will be a new rule set into place. :] Sorry.
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Versi, you really aren't that "smooth" of a lurker. :] You should be posting in white! XD
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 2:57 pm
Is mythology considered a type of fairytale? I wanted to use the Greek myth Arachne, if that's alright.
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 5:11 pm
Yay biggrin Your looking! *Runs in circles, waiting for stuff to start*
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2007 6:34 pm
Bah, I'll genetically modify my eyes to be purple in real life. Just you wait.
xD
So I guess I'm accepted? Or not? D:
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 5:44 pm
I thought Happiness was going to look at my character profile stare
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 7:29 pm
alsdjfoiajdsfoj! I'm osrry Sauron! <3 I was murdered. xD
In any case.
Time for a REVIEW! Woo!
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Kay, let's see, starting from the top. :] The character itself is pretty interesting. Very cool.
I'd like to know how Ryn's skintone changes for either character. Is it make up or is it something else? Just add in some information for how this happens.
The personality seems a bit bland, no offense meant. The way it is written is a little bit... well, ah. There are a couple of types that you should fix. Please try to fix them as well as the few grammatical errors there. The way you wrote it as well, no offense meant, seems just a wee bit... elementary school essay-ish. If that makes sense. The "and this is another reason he was chosen to play Jacen". Perhaps addressing it in another way would be better.
Just a little bit more on the character would be a bit nice.
The rest of it is fine, but it could be better.
At this time, I'd like you to edit the few things, if that is at all possible. At this time, I cannot accept the character yet. Sorry.
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 7:30 pm
VivaLeTeDeTelAviv
Is mythology considered a type of fairytale? I wanted to use the Greek myth Arachne, if that's alright.
In any case, I don't really like mythology. So try and make me fall in love. :]
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 8:15 pm
I'll get to work on making the character more what your looking for... unfortunately I am a bit bad at writing out my characters personality, as that happens to be something I just have as a basic thing, because I tend to have the character acting alot like me, and I'm not exactly sure what my own personality is! But I'll do my best to make it acceptable biggrin
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 8:25 pm
-Thumbs up- Good luck.
... -Dances-
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 9:03 pm
D: What you say? I lurk gewd! ME ARE HAPPER TAT FOO ZEE.
[What?]
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 9:21 pm
Well, you know what you doing.
Make time for survive?
(And now, just for the history, and my application will be ready for review. I also managed to fix the coding problem in it--huzzah!)
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 9:54 pm
... Versi, I'm SO confused right now, by you. It's not even funny. NOT AT ALL. D<
(Huzzah! :] I nearly had a brain orgasm when I saw "Wicked Witch")
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 9:58 pm
Ok.. I've made some changes, and additions... I don't think its quite what you want, but I'm letting you know, so you can point out anything you think needs changing....
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 10:03 pm
Good job fixing.
I like it better (haha, instant tan) and I do so like the changes to the personality. Good to know we have our own little nervous wreck. I'll add you to the front, try to fix the little coding problem at the bottom. x___x I forgot why it was ******** up. xD
In any case, accepted.
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 10:06 pm
Hehehe... Ok so I'm in biggrin *Goes off to figure out if there is a not out of character thread*
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