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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:16 pm
Sirus concentrated, he could hear the clatter of footsteps rushing at him. 'There's five' he thought to himself, even though he was blind his hearing was better than that of any other human being in the world. He heard the distinct sound of a blade being drawn from it's sheath and he smiled. The enemy Shinobi swung their weapons, each one piercing Sirus’s body, he simply stood there for a moment before his body emitted a clicking sound.
Suddenly Sirus’s body exploded shooting poison needles in every direction. Two of the Ninja broke off their attack at the last minute barely avoiding the needles. The real Sirus reappeared between the two Shinobi landing a kick to the face on one. He did a backwards summersault off of the man’s chest lunging a needle into the second’s heart.
He quickly spun around tossing a barrage of needles at the last Shinobi, they hit there target but instead of a dead body a log appeared in its place. ‘Replacement Jutsu’ he thought, but his ears were already filing through every sound until he found a heartbeat. He turned on heels, already making a new hand combination, “shadow impact jutsu!” he shouted lunging two fingers into the enemy Ninja’s heart, releasing his chakra at a dangerous rate.
The burst of chakra flowed from him into the Ninja’s chakra network and through his heart finally exploding out of his back. The Ninja gagged and coughed up blood in the last few moments of his life before he too, like his comrades slumped over dead. "Hmph...mission complete."
Sirus's ears twitched and he swung his hand out just in time to catch a Kunai. Attached to it was a small scroll, he quickly opened the scroll and oddly enough it was written in brail, Your assistance is needed in the Earth land, you will be paid for your services further information on this subject will be given upon your arrival. Destroy this message after reading
((sorry, my minds sorta bouncing around, but i fixed it sweatdrop ))
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:22 pm
Clan/Kekkai Genkai: Yamazaki, Dark flame: This allows him to move through the shadows all around him. I already did it (Kagegan) find another please
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:46 pm
CROW WAS WALKING DOWN A DARK ALLEY WHEN ALL OF THE SUDDEN SOME THUGS CAME OUT OF THE SHADOWS THERE WAS FIVE OF THEM. THE LEADER OF THE BUNCH SAID," HEY GIVE US THAT HAT OF YOURS AND SOME MONEY AND WE WONT HURT YOU.". CROW REPLIED " AS YOU WISH" SO AS HE WAS HANDING HIS ITEMS OVER TO THE THUGS. A SHADOW GREW OUT FROM THE GROUND BEANETH HIM. THE THUG DROPPED THE HAT AND THE MONEY,BUT AS SOON AS HE DID THE SHADOW DEVOURED THE THUG SLOWLY AS HE WAS SCREAMING FOR HELP. THE OTHER THUGS GOT SCARE SO THEY RAN IN FEAR , BUT THEY WERE NOT FAST ENOUGH AND THE SHADOW DEVOURED THEM AS WELL. AFTER THEY WERE GONE THE SHADOW RETURNED TO CROW BUT THIS TIME THE SHADOW DIDN'T GO UNDER GROUND, INSTEAD THE SHADOW WENT INSIDE A SILVER RING WITH A BLACK STONE INSIDE OF IT, WHICH WAS LOCATED ON CROWS RIGHT INDEX FINGER. SO THEN CROW PICKED UP HIS HAT AND ITEMS LEFT BEHIND BY THE THUGS AND CONTINUED WALKING.
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:54 pm
((Not to pick dude but your intro statment doesn't exactly follow the one guidline the thread owner set up.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 2:22 pm
Name:Kaji Shi Village: Konohagakure Age: 17 Gender: Male Rank: Sannin Appearance:  Personality: Laid back, but alert and serious when needed to be Fighting Style: Drunken Monkey Master, can control fire Elemental Style: Fire Weapons: Chakra Bow, Extendable Kunai Special Abilities: Hellfire Jutsu, Fire Rasengan, Fireball Jutsu, Hellfire Chakra Arrows Clan: Jigoku no Kaji About: Born an orphan in Konohagakure, moved to mountains when he was 10. Started training and became a hermit. Once he perfected his technique, he started his own clan based around his Hellfire technique. The clan was called Jigoku no Kaji Clan.
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 2:56 pm
Fist of Rahl ((Not to pick dude but your intro statment doesn't exactly follow the one guidline the thread owner set up.)) ((Not only that, but there's an "accepted" list on the first page. You can't join the RP until your profile has been accepted. In addition, your first post, which shouldn't even be there since you weren't accepted, doesn't go along with the story in any way, shape, or form, and you really ought to delete it. Your spelling and grammar aren't even right. We only take literate roleplayers.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:44 pm
hm...nice job visba and fist of rahl.. Much more posts coming tonight, to future the story along. I like how you all are interact together, its perfect.
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 3:59 pm
Name: Toan Renko Age: 15 Gender: Male Land and village of origin: Fire Rank:Anbu Black Ops Medical team Appearance:  personality:Loves to screw with his enemies, and loves the thrill of battle, calm, laid back, likes to mess around, sort of child like (even though he dosen't look like it) loves being a medical ninja and is quite skilled at it. Weaponry: Twin Katars (blade attached to arms) Katana. Fighting Style:Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, mostly melee sword on sword. Elemental style: Fire, Earth Jutsu: Flames of hell (fire busts out of the ground and wraps around the enemy burning he or she to ash or to a crisp) Flaming petals (Flaming cherry blossom petals fly around the enemy dazing and confusing them) Exploding dragon (creates a flaming drgon from mouth attack enemy and burning everything around to ash or smoldering rock) Earth spike (Spikes of earth rise up from the ground impaling the enemy from below) Blades of Gaia (earth Goddess) (fires a swarm of earth blades impaling or slicing through a enemy or enemyies) Heal (heals minor or severe injuries on comrades or self) Anti poison (Cures comrades or self of poison inside of body) Clan/ Renko:Able to conjure and fire and bend it to their will the Renko clan is fierceom and at the age of 13 is when the family performs a ritual where they use chi (chakra whatever) to burn the japanese symbol of fire onto the child shinobi's chest which gives them this ability but is the most painfull thing you can experience. Background:At Toan's Burning ceremony for his clan he accidently killed his older brother with his new powers and his brother's hatred was sealed into him which makes his fire burn like the flames of hell. He was then feared in his family and shunned by most of its members.
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:03 pm
*Toan glances at the bleeding body of his comrade and starts to perform healing jutsu onto his wounds* "Its okay your gonna be all right" said Toan as the man flinched in pain* *Looks around at the battle that went place not to long ago, shurikens, kunais and other assortment of weapons stabbed into trees, the ground, and the fallen bodies of enimies and comrades*
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:10 pm
XxmehxX hm...nice job visba and fist of rahl.. Much more posts coming tonight, to future the story along. I like how you all are interact together, its perfect. ((Is there going to be more now? Sorry I like Naruto. whee ))
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:14 pm
*Finishs with the healing and whips the sweat off forehead* "Okay now lets see who else is alive" *glances at the field of bodies* "Well none that i can see lets get you out of here" *picks up fallen shinobi and heads off towards the Anbu outpost*
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:24 pm
*Enters the outpost and lays the body down on the table, then another Anbu medical team member comes and checks the body* "Okay he'll make it, how many are still out there? said the medical ninja. "None i tried to save as many as i could but it wasn't enough, i'll send for more shinobi to come but i have to head to the final forest and meet up with the rest of my squad." "Okay good luck" replied the medical ninja. " Well cya." *walks out the door and heads to the final forest*
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:26 pm
takihiro *Finishs with the healing and whips the sweat off forehead* "Okay now lets see who else is alive" *glances at the field of bodies* "Well none that i can see lets get you out of here" *picks up fallen shinobi and heads off towards the Anbu outpost* ((For future reference, this is a literate RP. You don't use asterixes for actions. Here is the correct way to write what you wrote: Toan finishes with the healing and wipes the sweat off of his forehead. "Okay, now let's see who else is alive." He glances at the field of bodies. "Well, none that I can see; let's get you out of here." He picks up the fallen shinobi and heads off towards the ANBU outpost. I'm sorry that I'm such a stickler about this, but I hate illiterate roleplayers, and you could easily be literate, so just take a little extra effort to do it, thanks!))
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:29 pm
Visba takihiro *Finishs with the healing and whips the sweat off forehead* "Okay now lets see who else is alive" *glances at the field of bodies* "Well none that i can see lets get you out of here" *picks up fallen shinobi and heads off towards the Anbu outpost* ((For future reference, this is a literate RP. You don't use asterixes for actions. Here is the correct way to write what you wrote: Toan finishes with the healing and wipes the sweat off of his forehead. "Okay, now let's see who else is alive." He clances at the field of bodies. "Well, none that I can see; let's get you out of here." He picks up the fallen shinobi and heads off towards the ANBU outpost. I'm sorry that I'm such a stickler about this, but I hate illiterate roleplayers, and you could easily be literate, so just take a little extra effort to do it, thanks!)) oh sry lol just a habit of mine heh redface
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:30 pm
((You also should have put all those three posts in one post. Watch your text talk too.))
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