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 Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 8:02 pm
As He gathers his chakra faster than me naturally I still gather some as I can tell this will be the end "Ok I may lose this fight, or I could win, but ones things for sure, I will master this technuiqe!!!!" I keep gathering as Lee can feel my chakra coming up as well he gets ready to unleash his power as he looks back at me I can't see his eyes as even if I was lookin all I would see is darkness as he speaks out with air and rocks coming up over him as dust and dirt are circleing around him I get to the third gate being able to unleash it I look back at Lee as we both know the time has come to finally bring out the final jutsu as we both yell out "NOW, LIFE GATE RELEASE!!!!!"
13/17
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 8:09 pm
As we both shout out the words of the final attack both of us bring are arms up and then seperate them as both of are eyes are fully white the chakra around our bodies explodes as the dust and rock burst away from us as the tree's behind me are blown away into the wind and other tree's Lee power is making a crater in the ground as we both squint and clutch are knuckles we both go into the 4th gate as we push the power up into a new level as are faces are full of veins as more grow from the next gate are skin is darker and tougher as we now can longer feel the pain of the gate apon our body we both now look at each other as we scream with much intensity we blast off of the ground as we have dissapeared into thin air as sparks of light and bashes of booming sounds are heard as me and Lee are going everywhere clashing attacks over an over as the ground and trees shake and nearly uproot we are now going faster than the speed of sound
14/17
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 8:13 pm
As we are clashing we are both now circleing around the area as dust and dirt is quickly broke up as we are moving so fast if we hit a rock we would go dircetly through it without even noticeing as I stare at Lee knowing where he is Lee can locate me as well as we both stop and then jump into the air as we both are strainning now in the gate are bodies are bareley able to keep the strain going as it truns up are bodies breaking them up we both now are ready to go into the 5th gate as we both cloes are eyes and goes passed each other yelling out the next level of the gates now going to my old maximum "5TH GATE, LIMIT GATE............. OPEN!!!!!"
15/17
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 8:19 pm
As we yell out now we can now unleash the ultimate power of the gates as it is the last gate before it is extremely dangerous to go any further I now feel my body stretch as up as I am still moving forward my body is now at full power as Lee is also we now have amphlifed are speed and strength ten-fold as we now move faster than the speed of sound going around the area like jets with no wings I come sat Lee face first now as Lee comes at me also ready to fight this out at full power I hit Lee with clashing punch as Lee does the same thing we feel the intense power of the two attacks make the ground shake and crack up above where we are because of the impact as we are making fast and quick kicks and punches so fast it is hard to even see us as are amrs and legs are constanly moving it look's like we are floating in the air as we attack as I can feel my adrenline build up Lee keeps coming as he knocks me back with thnderous punch to me chest I fly backwards as he pulls me back in I can tell now he using the primary lotus and now is the time for me to finish this and accend to the next gate as I let Lee pull me back in "NOW'S MY CHANCE!!!!" 6TH GATE VIEW GATE OPEN!!!!!!"
16/17
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 8:28 pm
As my body finally gains the strength to do it Lee pulls me in with much force as I can feel him rushing himself to finish me now that he has heard the attack be unleashed I now have the strength and power to do it as my body now charges up even more chakra than i've ever had I can feel my body grow stronger and my speed amph me up as my eye's now see clearly as when I am in 5th gate my eyes can only see blur's but still decent figures around me as I can now see clearly like I am only moveing normally as I can see like am only running with my weights off I know now that I can beat Lee with a advantage that I now have a easier and faster vision in my eyes and my brain seeing only one simple image as Lee gets close bringing out his palm to finish the hidden lotus I bring out my palm as I am going to use the rising palm on him once we get close I throw out my palm eairler than Lee as I yell out one more time ending this fight
"IT'S OVER, RISING PALM!!!!!" I hit him in his chin and cheek Lee does'nt see it coming as his lotus is now stopped we hit each other from the miss of the jutsu and we both go out of the gates as we fall to the ground about 10 minutes later Gai sensei already has us up in the emergency room as we rest with only little strain on the body but he congragulates me as I have now gone pass the limit gate and shown my true strength as a taijutsu user and a shinobi
17/17
((6TH VIEW GATE mastered))^^
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 5:41 pm
((Intial Lotus Trainning))
As I walk through konoha again the next day as I see rock lee he walks over to me as he explains a new technuiqe he could show me as I look at him with gleaming eyes anxieous to learn this new move he tells me it's called the inital lotus, diffrent from the secondary it makes you unleash the 2nd gate apon your opponent and it makes the secondary lotus much stronger as he stopped explaining I asked him to teach me as he smiled and took me over to the forest where once again we start up a new match but now I leanr a more easier and more efficent technuiqe
1/10
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 5:49 pm
As Lee puts his hand out again he challenges me to a great battle once again as I happily accept I get into the same stance as Lee and myself both dissapear very fast as we are now seen close up at each he swings a forward kick as I dodge it jupming over him I land behind his back as I swing out a backhand at his head he ducks over it throwing his own lower backhand at my leg as I block it with my knee he does a roll away from me as he lands a few feet away he jump forward at me spinning backwards doing a spinning leaf whirlwind as I block it so if he trys to get back into it for a counte there would only be one chance and that would be my dodgeing it with a easy duck as he land on the ground unprotected I throw out a boulder strike as I hit him in the face he falls back as he lands on one hand and one leg looking back at me with excitement
2/10
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 5:57 pm
While looking back at Lee he gets up as he looks at me with much focus he puts his hand out as he comes back me with much excitment he gets up close very quickly coming to a complete stop as dust and rock come up from him doing a skid on the ground I am quickly blinded as he jumps back I rub my face trying to get dirt out as he does a great leaf whirlwind on me knocking me back I land on my feet quickly coming back at him as I run with no more dirt in my face I do a front flip and then do a leaf rising wind as Lee is caught off guard he is sent in the air as I use the kage buyou(Leaf shadow dance) getting behind him in mid-air I can see his back as Lee is impressed by my work he soon realizes he's in it as I try to grab him with my arms and legs he uses his shadow leaf dance and his great speed to get behind me as he is now behind me as I am still shocked by his manuver "Your a fool to think you can catch me in my own move."
3/10
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 6:01 pm
As Lee got behind me I turn my head around as Lee looks into my eyes he can see that my sharingan was already truned on as I have seen his move been down he grabbes my quickly as his bandages wrap on me after that I am held down tight as he turns upsidedown he starts to spin slowly as he is entering the second gate I use a kunai I pulled from my pocket while turning on my sharingan to cut the wraps off a little as I have some room to move my arm around Lee starts to spin faster as he can tell he has me in it already and there's no escape as I grab his right leg with my arm I pull his knee back as the lotus is now unbalanced I have no idea what can happen now his spin is now disturbed by move counter the spin is broken as Lee lets go trying to get my arm off his leg as we serprate Lee lands back on the ground hard as I do a forward flip landing on my left leg and arm hard I can feel some strain from doing all that as Lee looks back at me with intrest in my counter
4/10
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 6:09 pm
As we both seem tried out for the moment we both get up as we stare at each walking in a cricle around each other we lock eyes as this will not be a easy fight to get out of we both run at each other now back into shape we both do a leaf spinning whirlwind as are kicks connect with much force Lee can see I am copying his movements as he figures out that he can trie me out like the last time I did this I am arleady reading his thought with my sharingan knowing his plan I take out a kunai as Lee can't see it he starts coming at me with a constant combo of kicks and punches as I dodge them left and right with my sharingan eye getting all the slow motion action of his moves coming at me I try to slash Lee in the chest with my kunai as he can see it he uses quick reflex's as he gets out his from his back pocket and clashes his with mine as we stuggle to out power one another
5/10
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 6:14 pm
Seeing that Lee is more powerfull than me at the moment of my trainning I get out another weapon from my back pocket as I slash at Lee's body again as my other kunai is preventing his from stopping my assault he jumps back droping his kunai and letting it go as he steps back agian and feels his chest as he can see a giant slash mark on it he can see some chakra comig off of it as he looks back in confusion and shock he can see the brace knuckle blades used by Asuma in my hand as some chakra is flowing off of the tip of the blade while I smile with my clever attack made sucessfull "So Lee how do you like me now?" Lee just stares back as he gets on his knee's and takes off his leg weights as my eyes widen I know what he going to do as I stand quickly get ready for him I have now both of the brace knuckle blades in my hands as Lee jump to a tree branch and looks back at me he leaps into the air as he is unseen even by my sharingan at the moment as I get ready to counter him as best as I can
6/10
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 6:24 pm
As Lee is engaded in his incredible speed I focus my sharingan out as I can't see him but when he appears I'll be fast enough to see where he's going next as I wait Lee comes from the back of my as he throws out a trip kick I get hit by it as I nearly fall to the ground I can see him for a split second as he dissapears in the air I read his mind at that instant as I can see he coming down on me to finish me off with a dropkick to my body as I move out of the away as fats as I can Lee hits a split second after I move as I come at him with a slash from my brace knuckle blade he moves out of the way as fast as he can go as I barley knick him in the leg hetrips as he falls to the ground he looks at his leg as he looks over for me I dissapear as he can see me up in the air over him I come down with a briusing sky leg as he moves out the way quickly I hit the ground making giant crater as he is sent away flying from the impact hitting a tree I look at him with much confidence now that he injured in his best spot
7/10
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 6:35 pm
As I look at Lee down now as his legs and body are now strainned from the constant moving of the first gate for too long Lee gets up hurt as I can see him try to move as I run at him with my legs making a stomp on the ground bringing in much force I do a rising palm at Lee hitting him direcly in the body he hits the tree hard as he puts his head down I smile as he grabs my arm as he sends a thunderous kick to my stomatch I fall back as Lee puts his hand back up he had tricked me as he can still fight very well he goes back into the intense speed as he dissapear I am still on the ground as Lee comes from behind and kicks me forward I fall back doing a back roll unconrtolabley I hit the ground on my stomatch as Lee comes from the ground doing a slideing kick he hits me as I go up a little in the air Lee kicks me up more and more going into a intial lotus as I see him with my sharingan he dissapears as he comes from the sky hitting me vertically in the body with a great leaf whirlwind I hit the ground as dust and dirt take over the area from the impact Lee is falling from the sky as he begins to see something in the debree
8/10
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 6:44 pm
As the smoke is clearing Lee can see a figure as large as my body as he comes down with a a leg out to kick me he sees the figure throw kunai as he looks at it in shock and he dodges them by moving his body out of the way in certain spins and backflips as he comeing down still he can see more kunai and shirken come at him as he dodges them some wraps come out of the smoke treing him up tight in mid-air as I come out the smoke and kick him in the side while he wrapped up tight unawair of the attack he is launched up into the air again as I do more kicks at him he was so busy dodgeing kunai he did'nt see or notice a thing as I constantly kick him up about 40 ft in the air air now I pull him towards me as I get a grip on the wraps from the sides I go upsidown as i can see his face in surprise of the attack
9/10
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Posted: Thu Sep 28, 2006 6:55 pm
As I go upsidedown in mid-air I have Lee now trapped in the inital lotus as I can see him freaking out from the jutsu being done as he is now unable to mvoe I go into the first gate spinning slowly now starting it up as Lee struggled to get out I held him tight as I use my chakra to hold him down tighter in the mox I go into the second gate as I and Lee instantly spin rapidly in the air as it is like tornado coming down on the ground being created Lee started to yell as we came down to the ground in thunderous appearance hitting the dirt hard as we hit I quickly cut the wraps and jump off as Lee is still spinning from the recoil he stops and hits the ground on his back as I land on the ground I go and check on Lee as he is up now after about 20 minutes after the fall he congragulates me on my accomplishment and I smile as I help Lee back to Gai's house and I go off with my body a little strained out I can tell this week has been a good pick up for me and my shinobi way
10/10
((Intial Lotus Mastered)^^)
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