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 Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 7:46 pm
kouri-chan_xx Oh my GOd, what is with the great samples recently?? Everything passes! Of course Shizzy said that too but yeah! whee @Kool-Aid: Pass too! Everyone's role play sample looks great! Have you all read the Newbie Guide Sticky? Yup. I have. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Jun 11, 2007 7:58 pm
Captain Kool-Aid kouri-chan_xx Oh my GOd, what is with the great samples recently?? Everything passes! Of course Shizzy said that too but yeah! whee @Kool-Aid: Pass too! Everyone's role play sample looks great! Have you all read the Newbie Guide Sticky? Yup. I have. 3nodding I have as well, just some of it doesn't make complete since to me sweatdrop I'm just guessing on what I should do at some points.
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Posted: Tue Jun 12, 2007 12:56 pm
Jaggerjack7 Captain Kool-Aid kouri-chan_xx Oh my GOd, what is with the great samples recently?? Everything passes! Of course Shizzy said that too but yeah! whee @Kool-Aid: Pass too! Everyone's role play sample looks great! Have you all read the Newbie Guide Sticky? Yup. I have. 3nodding I have as well, just some of it doesn't make complete since to me sweatdrop I'm just guessing on what I should do at some points. PM me or Kouri with any questions you might have. ^^ We'll both be glad to help.
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 7:36 pm
okay here i go
-Suiji leaped from tree to tree trying to get to the Sound village as quickly as possible.He discovered information on the neighboring Leaf village;information that could turn the tides of the war.He stopped and noticed a small shuriken on the ground."hmmm,your setting traps now?" He then shot out air from the palms in his hands and hit the shuriken.It exploded and he was surprised for a moment."Wow,they really want to kill me" he kept his pace an was hoping the village would come up soon.-
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 8:40 pm
"Okay Mom, I'm leaving now," Kaiho said as she moved towards the door.
"Oh, Kai, your father and I are so happy you've finally decided to actively pursue your career as a ninja! Though I wish you'd rethink your wardrobe..." Miyaki smiled as she looked her daughter's all black outfit over disdainfully.
"Mom, you and dad have wanted me to be a ninja since I was born. I had a shuriken plushie!" Kai growled.
"And you were absolutely adorable!" she squealed as Kai turned for the door.
She felt a sudden breeze and Miyaki stood before her blocking her path. Reaching up, she felt her hair no longer loose about her shoulders but pulled tight into a high pony tail on top of her head and secured with a green ribbon.
"Mom!"
"Oh, but sweetie, it goes so well with your hair color. Don't try to take it out, now off you go!" Miyaki chirped as she ushered Kai outside.
Not wanting to risk whatever her mother had done to ensure her hair stayed as it was, she merely sighed and walked out the door. Just as she left the yard she turned and caught sight of her father in the garden, assembling a large bouquet. He grinned and waved her out, having already given her a speech the night before.
"I wonder where my brother is..." she thought as she walked towards the academy.
((@.@ I think I overshot a bit...))
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 9:56 pm
After a long day of reading scrolls Souichiro walks slowly through the hallowed hall of the academy as he looks around beaming with pride as he approaches the auditorium. "This is one of the most important moments of my life thus far. To think I'm about to start my studies as a honorable ninja!" Soichiro jumps into the air like in an after school special without the freeze frame, then lunges into the auditorium. He quickly finds his seat amongst the others and waits for his name to be called. "Damn, I hate alphabetical order, I'm so impatient." As the others are names and receive their orders to go in search of a village to accept them Souichiro's mind begins to wander. "It's only been a few weeks and here I am about to be judged worthy or thrown to the curb. It's almost to much to handle!" Souichiro begins to sway as the anxiety kicks in getting closer and closer to his verdict. "It's like being on trail for my life. I don't want to die not like this not here!" Then Souichiro wakes up under a tree holding the last scroll in his hand. He had fallen asleep while reading. "Bah, reading is so tedious, I want to fight someone!"
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 1:02 am
Name: Knil Al'Shai. Village: Yet to be determined.
Knil silently stalked his target, stepping lightly on his feet. He was one with the darkness, at home with it. Just a few more steps... He thought to himself, grinning in the shadows. He moved towards his target, and pounced! "Gotcha!" He yelled. In his clutches was a his little black kitten, Sneak. He grinned devilishly, "Finally, I've been looking all over for you. Come on, lets go home." He said, walking into the night. Sneak meowed helplessly as he was carried away.
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:18 am
@RudeFan
Nice but might want to do a slight bit more detail but nothing major. You should pass...
@Bakuretsuai
Good. Nice detail. >.> Weird family but nice.
@Lord Souzou
Nice but same as RudeFan. Might want to add a little more detail. Reason being is that you gain exp for better detail and fuller posts. Thats all.
@Blood Elf
Nice, good detail too. Might just wanna make it a little longer. Again, its the same as what I said for Rude and Lord. The fuller and more detailed your posts, the better.
Ok folks, listen up. I'm NOT the one that passes you, I'm just giving you a bit of friendly advice so you can follow it or not, its up to you. 5 lines or so is great but its not mandatory for regular rp. Just...try to reach 5 lines if your training or during battle(I think some villages require 4 or 5 lines and dice rolls for good exp gain). In regular RP though, anything other than one-liners is fine.
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 2:26 pm
Carlos Ralfer @RudeFan Nice but might want to do a slight bit more detail but nothing major. You should pass... @Bakuretsuai Good. Nice detail. >.> Weird family but nice. @Lord Souzou Nice but same as RudeFan. Might want to add a little more detail. Reason being is that you gain exp for better detail and fuller posts. Thats all. @Blood Elf Nice, good detail too. Might just wanna make it a little longer. Again, its the same as what I said for Rude and Lord. The fuller and more detailed your posts, the better. Ok folks, listen up. I'm NOT the one that passes you, I'm just giving you a bit of friendly advice so you can follow it or not, its up to you. 5 lines or so is great but its not mandatory for regular rp. Just...try to reach 5 lines if your training or during battle(I think some villages require 4 or 5 lines and dice rolls for good exp gain). In regular RP though, anything other than one-liners is fine. Thanks!
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 3:25 pm
Waking up from one bone chilling night, Agito walked into the bathroom grabbed his tooth brush and toothpaste, he squeezed some on his toothbrush and threw the past back on the sink hearing it hit the mirror and then the sink. As Agito brushed his teeth he started walking to the kitchen to make something to eat. All of a sudden someone knocked on the door, He ran to answer it. He slowly opened the door to see his brother Shou coming from the romen shop with food. When Agito seen the Steaming Wonton's he started to scream forgetting the toothbrush was in his mouth. Shou started to laugh at him saying "You stupid are u that hungry?" Agito replied "NO!!!! Its Freaking cold and i was going to make some romen!" As Shou walked into the kitchen he placed the food on the table and walked away. Agito started walking back to the bathroom bagging a little on the toothpaste, he finished brushing jumping into the shower (*I would add details but some people mite get happy*)and came out, As he came out he slipped on the bar of soap but catching him self Agito thought to himself "Yes that Wonton is worth dieing for " He started to drool as he could taste the the warm wonton's meaty center and the soy sauce that he dips it into. As he changed and ran to the kitchen Shou set the table and said "Umm this foods not for you but for my date i have. Shou then smiled with joy and started to dance. Agito then started screaming "Why must u tease me knowing Wonton is my favorite food" Shou replied "You never asked if it was for u and laughed" Agito then went to the Romen shop and ate Wonton .
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:02 pm
RudeFan21 okay here i go -Suiji leaped from tree to tree trying to get to the Sound village as quickly as possible.He discovered information on the neighboring Leaf village;information that could turn the tides of the war.He stopped and noticed a small shuriken on the ground."hmmm,your setting traps now?" He then shot out air from the palms in his hands and hit the shuriken.It exploded and he was surprised for a moment."Wow,they really want to kill me" he kept his pace an was hoping the village would come up soon.- Quite OK, just don't keep using 'he' 'he' 'he' it sorta makes it dull.. >.< But it fits our requirements and you pass.
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:09 pm
bakuretsuai "Okay Mom, I'm leaving now," Kaiho said as she moved towards the door. "Oh, Kai, your father and I are so happy you've finally decided to actively pursue your career as a ninja! Though I wish you'd rethink your wardrobe..." Miyaki smiled as she looked her daughter's all black outfit over disdainfully. "Mom, you and dad have wanted me to be a ninja since I was born. I had a shuriken plushie!" Kai growled. "And you were absolutely adorable!" she squealed as Kai turned for the door. She felt a sudden breeze and Miyaki stood before her blocking her path. Reaching up, she felt her hair no longer loose about her shoulders but pulled tight into a high pony tail on top of her head and secured with a green ribbon. "Mom!" "Oh, but sweetie, it goes so well with your hair color. Don't try to take it out, now off you go!" Miyaki chirped as she ushered Kai outside. Not wanting to risk whatever her mother had done to ensure her hair stayed as it was, she merely sighed and walked out the door. Just as she left the yard she turned and caught sight of her father in the garden, assembling a large bouquet. He grinned and waved her out, having already given her a speech the night before. "I wonder where my brother is..." she thought as she walked towards the academy. ((@.@ I think I overshot a bit...)) PAss :3 I love your NPC family~ Nah it's fine!
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:11 pm
Lord Souzou After a long day of reading scrolls Souichiro walks slowly through the hallowed hall of the academy as he looks around beaming with pride as he approaches the auditorium. "This is one of the most important moments of my life thus far. To think I'm about to start my studies as a honorable ninja!" Soichiro jumps into the air like in an after school special without the freeze frame, then lunges into the auditorium. He quickly finds his seat amongst the others and waits for his name to be called. "Damn, I hate alphabetical order, I'm so impatient." As the others are names and receive their orders to go in search of a village to accept them Souichiro's mind begins to wander. "It's only been a few weeks and here I am about to be judged worthy or thrown to the curb. It's almost to much to handle!" Souichiro begins to sway as the anxiety kicks in getting closer and closer to his verdict. "It's like being on trail for my life. I don't want to die not like this not here!" Then Souichiro wakes up under a tree holding the last scroll in his hand. He had fallen asleep while reading. "Bah, reading is so tedious, I want to fight someone!" O: Interesting, remember that we use both past and present tenses in this guild so tweak tenses accordingly. Pass :3
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:12 pm
Blood Elf Knil Name: Knil Al'Shai. Village: Yet to be determined. Knil silently stalked his target, stepping lightly on his feet. He was one with the darkness, at home with it. Just a few more steps... He thought to himself, grinning in the shadows. He moved towards his target, and pounced! "Gotcha!" He yelled. In his clutches was a his little black kitten, Sneak. He grinned devilishly, "Finally, I've been looking all over for you. Come on, lets go home." He said, walking into the night. Sneak meowed helplessly as he was carried away. Aww... heart +100 cute points for including a kitty @.@ Pass!! Keep in mind what Carlos said though heart
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:15 pm
J4CK 0F 5P4D35 Waking up from one bone chilling night, Agito walked into the bathroom grabbed his tooth brush and toothpaste, he squeezed some on his toothbrush and threw the past back on the sink hearing it hit the mirror and then the sink. As Agito brushed his teeth he started walking to the kitchen to make something to eat. All of a sudden someone knocked on the door, He ran to answer it. He slowly opened the door to see his brother Shou coming from the romen shop with food. When Agito seen the Steaming Wonton's he started to scream forgetting the toothbrush was in his mouth. Shou started to laugh at him saying "You stupid are u that hungry?" Agito replied "NO!!!! Its Freaking cold and i was going to make some romen!" As Shou walked into the kitchen he placed the food on the table and walked away. Agito started walking back to the bathroom bagging a little on the toothpaste, he finished brushing jumping into the shower (*I would add details but some people mite get happy*)and came out, As he came out he slipped on the bar of soap but catching him self Agito thought to himself "Yes that Wonton is worth dieing for " He started to drool as he could taste the the warm wonton's meaty center and the soy sauce that he dips it into. As he changed and ran to the kitchen Shou set the table and said "Umm this foods not for you but for my date i have. Shou then smiled with joy and started to dance. Agito then started screaming "Why must u tease me knowing Wonton is my favorite food" Shou replied "You never asked if it was for u and laughed" Agito then went to the Romen shop and ate Wonton . Lol interesting story rofl Pass but remember to use paragraphs because it was a little hard to read. And is it that hard to write 'you'? D: XD
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