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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2011 5:17 pm
@KateIyn: You cannot have the Anigan as a transplant. Transplant bloodlines can only be acquired through RP.
You HAVE to have a profession base benefit, it comes with the profession.
Weapon Master has a few learning benefits. They can be found at the bottom of the Weapon Master description, labeled as "Learning Modifiers". Just do a quick copy/paste and put them in that section.
Where is says weakness, it means weakness listed in the Shinobi profession. You get to choose two of the ones listed.
You can find information for your chakra level in the chakra system thread, in the second post, under the section titled "Ninja Ranks". Academy students with low chakra is the first one there.
You need to keep the same elemental affinity for your Ninjutsu and Genjutsu.
Don't worry, anybody can use a sword if they want to. If you want a sword, feel free to have a sword.
40 kunai is too many. Please change this.
Please choose two Shinobi Types, which can be found in the Shinobi Types thread.
@Nerd: Sorry, but I'm catching a few things lance overlooked (sorry)
No one starts out with a summon. Please change that.
50 shuriken is too many. Please change this.
@tyshimoryu: Please place everything back towards the right margin. It makes the profiles more uniform and easier to read.
Please realize that, unless you are part of a bloodline/clan, you pet cannot be used for any sort of combat-related RP.
Please choose a Shinobi Profession, as well as descriptions for Weakness and Profession Base Benefit, and add Learning Information.
Please add the descriptions for Speed and Chakra Control shinobi types.
Please add your chakra points, as in the number of Chakra points you start out with. Chakra information can be found in the Chakra System.
Chakra control refers to your actual bonuses for chakra, such as those provided by a bloodline/clan, or those provided by your Shinobi Type.
Please list the length of the blade and the handle for your katana, because if that 64.5 inches is all blade, then I'm sorry, but it would e denied.
@Kun0ichi: You don't need to take both weaknesses, you only need to take one.
I'm sorry, but 50 smoke bombs is too many. Please edit this.
@Azeiel: You only need one weakness.
You may only start with one element. At Chuunin, you may take your secondary element, and at Jounin, your tertiary.
I'm sorry, but I cannot allow someone to dual wield six foot katanas. It simply cannot be done, especially as an academy student.
@everyone: Please repost your profiles when you are finished. If you have specific questions, do not hesitate to contact me.
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2011 5:41 pm
Gabriel Kaguya
 ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ----------------------------------------------------------------Main InfoCharacter Name:Gabriel Kaguya Nicknames: N/A Title(s): N/A Rank: Academy Student Village:Iwagakure Background Info Currently under construction Physical DescriptionAge: 18 Sex: Male Hair Color:Black Natural Eye Color: Brown Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: A single scar across his chest from the upper right shoulder to his lower left hip ---------------------------------------------------------------- Bloodline, Clan, or Demon ----------------------------------------------------------------Main InfoBloodline, Clan, or Demon: Shikotsumyaku (Approved ) Bloodline/Clan Stage: Abilities of the Bloodline/Clan: (not really sure what to put here ) The clan's signature move and ability, bone creation and manipulation. There are four levels of this ability. Involved with this skill is their bodies amazing regenerative powers. As with the manipulation of bone, piercing through vital tissue inside of the body and able to regenerate quickly Effect: Wounds that are barely skin deep heal off within one post, deeper attacks varied on Rp scenario take at least two to three full posts to regenerate.
1. 2. 3. Companion Info.Companion Type: (dogs, bugs, etc...) Companion Name:N/A Bug Evolutions: N/A 1. 2. 3. 4. Transplant InfoBloodline/Clan Transplant: Transplant Stage: N/A Abilities of Transplant: N/A 1. 2. 3. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ----------------------------------------------------------------Shinobi ProfessionShinobi Profession:Weapon Master Profession Base Benefit:1) Increased Number of Weapon Styles: Because of their focus and training in the use of weapons, weapon masters are able to practice more weapon styles than others. (see below)
Academy Student: 1 weapon style Genin: 2 weapon styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style Chuunin: 3 weapon styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style Jounin: 4 weapon styles, 2 Weapon or Taijutsu Style
In addition Weapon Masters can learn one stage higher than normal for weapon styles(exceptions apply)
2.)Increased Number of Custom Weapons: Weapon Masters are allowed to have 4 custom weapons as opposed to just 3.
Learning Information: Weapon Masters receive a -1 post learning bonus when learning weapon style/techniques, but receive a +1 post penalty for learning taijutsu styles/techniques and a +2 post penalty for learning nin/genjutsus. Weakness: Weaker Genjutsus: [needs a description] (All jutsus of that type used by the weapon master are counted as if one rank lower in power to a minimum of Academy Student)
Rank Benefits
Genin
Chuunin
Jounin
Shinobi Type(s) Ability Control: Bone Jutsu. The ninja who have a very specific jutsu type and style are called Ability Ninja. Considering their intense training in one area, these ninja are formidable opponents, normally well beyond their rank when using their specialized jutsu. However, when utilizing anything else, they tend to suffer a drop in power. (+2 rank in strength of attacks for abilities *ex. people who use bug jutsu only, bug jutsu attacks increase in power*, jutsu not of the chosen type are decreased in power by one rank.) With two shinobi types: -1 chakra point cost of all Genin techniques, -2 for all Chuunin, Jounin, and Kage techniques when using chosen abilities jutsu
Chakra Control: This Shinobi is a master of Chakra Control, allowing them to more easily learn to mold their chakra to perform jutsus, as well as allowing them to use their chakra more efficiently when using jutsus. At higher ranks they even learn to mold chakra without the use of hand-seals. (-2 posts for training, reduced chakra costs (see Chakra System), can perform jutsus that are two or more ranks below you without hand-seals.)
---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra and Jutsu ----------------------------------------------------------------Chakra InformationChakra Level: Medium
Chakra Point: 18 ( 3/10 Modifier)
Chakra Control: -1 chakra point cost of all Genin techniques, -2 for all Chuunin, Jounin, and Kage techniques
Elemental Affinities: Suiton (water) Jutsu InformationNinjutsuUniversal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
Suiton : • • • • •GenjutsuUniversal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
Suiton: • • • •Bloodline/Clan JutsusNinjutsu • • • • • •Taijutsu • • • • • ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ----------------------------------------------------------------Summoning Type: Summons Known: ---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles ----------------------------------------------------------------: (brief description of the style) current stage:(current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
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Abilities---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ----------------------------------------------------------------WeaponsType of Weapon:Katana X 2 Name of Weapon: N/A Base Range:Four and a Half Feet (Two and a half for blade length, Two for arm reach ) Location: On His hips Type of Weapon:Katana Name of Weapon: N/A Base Range:Four and a Half Feet (Two and a half for blade length, Two for arm reach ) Location: Across lower back Shinobi ToolsKunai:15 Shuriken:30 Makibishi:5 light bomb:5 smoke bomb:10 steel wire:Fifty Feet.ApparelHead-Band Style: Normal Head-Band Location:On left arm Head-Band Color:Brown Flak-Jacket style: Flak-Jacket color:
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2011 8:33 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 07, 2011 10:34 pm
Gregar828 @Kun0ichi: You don't need to take both weaknesses, you only need to take one. I'm sorry, but 50 smoke bombs is too many. Please edit this. Took the "Weak-bodied" weakness and changed to 30 smoke bombs.
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 12:20 am
] Tykitsu kaza ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name:Tykitsu kaza Nicknames: Ty Title(s): NA Rank: Academy Student Village: Konohagakure Background Info Physical Description Age: 14 Sex: Male Hair Color: White Natural Eye Color: Black Body Type: Short and Quick Distinguishing Features:Carries two katanas (one is black/white and one is red/black) and a few dozen of kunai ---------------------------------------------------------------- Bloodline, Clan, or Demon ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: Hyuga Bloodline/Clan Stage: N/A Abilities of the Bloodline/Clan: 1. 2. 3. Companion Info. Companion Type: Wolf Companion Name: kimizachu [X] Bug Evolutions: N/A 1. 2. 3. 4. Transplant Info Bloodline/Clan Transplant: N/A Transplant Stage: N/A Abilities of Transplant: (Provide basic info on your transplant) 1. 2. 3. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession Shinobi Profession:Blade Wielder Profession Base Benefit:Wields two blades which is about 3ft long (both), and uses bladed weapons (like knives) Academy Student: Strong Bodied: strong in the legs and but fairly powerful in the arm Learning Information: Less Elements: [needs a description] Rank Benefits Genin: wield stronger blades (up to 4 to 5 ft.) Chuunin: wield a much heavier sword (up to 15lbs.) Jounin:wield longer weapons (such as scythes,buster ect.) Shinobi Type(s) Speed Shinobi: Chakra Control: ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra and Jutsu ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra Information Chakra Level: Low Chakra Point: 4 Chakra Control: meditation(assigned to him by therapist) Elemental Affinities: Wind Jutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal • • • • • First Element:Wind • • • • • Genjutsu Universal • • • • • First Element: Wind • • • • • Bloodline/Clan Jutsus Ninjutsu • • • • • Genjutsus • • • • • Taijutus • • • • • ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Type:N/A Yet Summons Known: (don't worry about filling this out just yet) ---------------------------------------------------------------- Ninjutsu/Weapon Styles ---------------------------------------------------------------- : (brief description of the style) current stage sad current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
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Weapons
Type of Weapon: katana Name of Weapon: (kenzatsu) Base Range sad About 3.5 in.) picture: 
Type of Weapon: katana Name of Weapon: (Kenzetsu) Base Range sad About 3.5 in.) picture: 
Shinobi Tools
Kunai: 36 Shuriken: 15 Makibishi: 0 light bomb: 3 smoke bomb: 3 steel wire: 0
Apparel
Head-Band Style:Glove Head-Band Location: Hand Head-Band Color: Red Flak-Jacket style: Normal Flak-Jacket color: Black
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 10:24 am
@Azeiel: Please, only list your Primary element until you reach the appropriate rank. Your Katanas have a two and a half foot blade, with a two foot handle? That seems like a bit much for the handle length, it would make the katanas too imbalanced. If you want a two-handed fighting style, I recommend using two normal sized or slightly smaller sized katanas, because anything bigger is just ridiculous. @Kunoichi:  @Tyshimoryu: You cannot simply start off with a bloodline/clan, you must apply for it. But Hyuugas, seeing as we have too many already, are currently closed. "Blade wielder" is not a shinobi profession. I sent you a link to the shinobi professions page already. Please include the descriptions for your Shinobi Types. Please see the chakra system for information about chakra points. Chakra control refers to bonuses given by a bloodline/clan, a Shinobi Profession, or a Shinobi Type.
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 10:33 am
Gregar828 @Azeiel: Please, only list your Primary element until you reach the appropriate rank. Your Katanas have a two and a half foot blade, with a two foot handle? That seems like a bit much for the handle length, it would make the katanas too imbalanced. If you want a two-handed fighting style, I recommend using two normal sized or slightly smaller sized katanas, because anything bigger is just ridiculous. Alright changes made, and the two foot at the end is not the size of the handle it is the reach of his arm. In order to have the real range of melee weapons you have to include the reach of their arms as well. That is what the second number is.
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 5:00 pm
Reiniku Arata ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name: Reiniku Arata Nicknames: Rein, Runt, Mouse. Title(s): Rank: Academy Student. Village: Kirigakure Background Info Physical Description Age: Thirteen. Sex: Male. Hair Color: A very dark shade of brown that will appear almost black unless caught in the correct lighting. Natural Eye Color: Dull brown, nearly always left void of emotion. Body Type: Short yet athletic. Distinguishing Features: Reiniku is incredibly short for his age. In fact, most girls of his age are actually taller than him. Something that he can become quite defensive about when teased or made fun of. Though his physical drawback can also come in handy sometimes, as he finds it easier to sneak way from others by slipping into a crowd, thus causing himself to be swallowed by a sea of taller bodies. Reiniku also possesses three scars on his body, two of which are always hidden. The first of his scars, and the one that is left covered by Reiniku's constantly worn mask, is a small hook shaped scar set upon Rein's left cheek. He often tells people that when he was a child, he fell down the steps and cut himself on the railing. But in reality the scar has a much darker story of a past Rein finds easier to forget. His other two scars, a large burn upon the outer entirety of his right thigh, and the jagged remnants of a rather gruesome wound crossing his entire back from neck to waist. Are always kept covered by clothing and rarely shared with others, though Rein always attempts to change the subject on the off chance that they are discovered.
Personality: If one had to describe Reiniku, calm would be the first word to come to mind. He is quite peaceful, never letting his emotions get the best of him as he would rather think over a situation rather than jump into the fray. He has a very quiet voice, a near whisper unless the need to be known is absolutely necessary. Something that has caused him to be mostly ignored by his adoptive parents, as their attention is always taken by the much older, larger and louder children within Reiniku's family. In everyday life, Reiniku can be friendly to those who know him, and secretive to those who do not. He would gladly spend hours talking to a close friend, while he would easily shy away from the new kid in the class. He is known by friends for being a jokester, though his sense of humor is rather dark. He believes that if one cannot laugh, then they cannot experience life to its fullest. Thus he finds it easy to dislike someone if they find his sense of humor offensive. While within a room, the boy also has a near instinctive need to place himself in a far corner away from the others, or in the most shadowed part of a room. A trait he has never really questioned himself, but has been noticed more than once by others. Reiniku has very few things that he actually fears, spiders and clowns barely made the top of his rather short list, and the things he does fear he tries to keep hidden from others. Such as his rather crippling fear of most canines, a phobia that he has had since he was just a baby. He also harbors a secret love for rabbits and most sweets, though he would never be one to openly admit such a thing. In combat, Reiniku sets up crushing defenses and lets his opponents bring themselves to him. He would rather avoid direct combat, as he knows he is the life of his squad. Thus he often relies upon the skills of his squad-mates to come to his aid. But if forced into direct combat, Reiniku can and will defend himself. Usually though taijutsu and weapon based techniques. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi ProfessionShinobi Profession: Medical Shinobi.
Profession Base Benefit Natural Healer (Gains medical as a bonus starting "element"; this does not count against total allowed number of elements, the Medical Shinobi still receives any elements they would normally get to begin with, and they would still get to pick another element at Chuunin, and a final element at Jounin)
Weakness Weaker Ninjutsus (Choose either Nin or Genjutsus, all jutsus of that type used by the medical shinobi are counted as if one rank lower in power to a minimum of Academy Student, this would not apply to Medical Jutsu)
Rank Benefits
Genin (place chosen genin rank benefit here)
Chuunin (place chosen chuunin rank benefit here)
Jounin (place chosen Jounin rank benefit here)Shinobi Type(s) Chakra Control This Shinobi is a master of Chakra Control, allowing them to more easily learn to mold their chakra to perform jutsus, as well as allowing them to use their chakra more effeciently when using jutsus. At higher ranks they even learn to mold chakra without the use of hand-seals. (-2 posts for training, reduced chakra costs (see Chakra System), can perform jutsus that are two or more ranks below you without hand-seals.)
Support Support type ninja are people who use jutsu to help other ninja in attacking, defense and any other type of need a fellow ninja would have. This ninjas is usually well rounded in jutsu knowing a wide range of jutsu from long range, short range and so on. These ninja are faster at learning jutsu and faster at using them too. (Jutsu -2 posts to learn jutsu, can perform jutsus that are below their without hand-seals, jutsus of equal rank can be performed with far fewer hand-seals, allowing the support shinobi to get off a quick jutsu in close quarters, jutsus of higher rank require the normal number of hand-seals.) ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra and Jutsu ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra Information Chakra Level: Low.
Chakra Points: 15
Chakra Control: -1 chakra point cost of all Genin techniques, -2 for all Chuunin, Jounin, and Kage techniques
Elemental Affinities: Medical, Suiton. Jutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
Second Element: Medical • • • • •
Second Element: Suiton • • • • •Genjutsu Universal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
First Element: Suiton • • • • • Taijutsu • • • • • ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Type: Not yet obtained.
Summons Known: Not yet obtained.---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles---------------------------------------------------------------- : current stage:
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Abilities ----------------------------------------------------------------Equipment ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Tools Kunai: 5 Shuriken: 5 Makibishi: 0 light bomb: 0 smoke bomb: 0 steel wire: 0Apparel Head-Band Style: Standard issue. Head-Band Location: Forehead, holding his hair back. Head-Band Color: Dark blue. Flak-Jacket style: Not yet obtained. Flak-Jacket color: Not yet obtained.
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 11:52 pm
@Azeiel:  @Requiem: ............(rubs eyes).......................(rubs eyes again)..................Is this.........a perfect profile on the first try?!?!? Requiem, you don't know HOW rare these things are. I am happy to say
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 7:55 pm
Antissa Etalis ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name: Antissa Etalis Nicknames: Antissa Title(s): X Rank: Academy Student Village: Leaf Background Info Antissa Etalis was born in the Leaf, and still resides there to this day. At a very young age, Antissa showed signs of enhanced chakra abilities, most of which was chakra sealing. The young girl had a fascination with art, and picked up on many artistic talents while she was trained in the art of sealing. Her most favorite personal skill is vocal-singing. While training as a ninja in Konoha, Antissa spends most of her time working around the town, doing oddjobs for the locals. Rather than practice her sealing abilities, Antissa prefers to help the citizens out with gardening, cleaning, babysitting, ect. Another thing about Antissa is, she lives alone. Her parents left Konoha on some other business, and she had not heard from them since. Even though she's optimistic, life is hard for the young girl. On top of all the oddjobs she does around the Leaf, she also works in the shopping district as a clerk. The money flow is slow, but the attitude is ever-resilient! Antissa won't give up, she'll make it happen somehow! Physical Description Age: 16 Sex: Female Hair Color: Lightbrown Natural Eye Color: Lightbrown Body Type: Curvy but Antissa is a little top heavy for certain reasons. Distinguishing Features: Short height with mature features. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession Shinobi Profession: Sealing Master Profession Base Benefit: Professional Sealer: Those of the Sealing Master profession are the only ninja capable of fully mastering the art of seals, able to learn and use any type of seal available, and even design their own. (Able to learn all seals in the list, and learn custom seals.)
- Sealed Knowledge: While normally one must be taught how to utilize seals, the Sealing Master is able to learn seals of their level directly from a scroll, so long as they can obtain it. They are also the only class capable of teaching the art of seals to others. (Able to self teach seals of equal or lower rank if a scroll is available, with a +1 post learning penalty. Must PM the Kage or a crew member to obtain the scroll.) Learning Information: - 2 post for Nin/Gen, -1 for taijutsu/weapon styles [Sealing Master recieves -1 post # for Nin/Gen, and +1 post # for taijutsu and weapon styles Support type shinobi have -2 when learning jutsu] Weakness: Weak Bodied - Due to the sealing master’s high academic focus, their physical training has suffered, leaving them more susceptible to harm. (When hit with a damaging jutsu of equal or greater rank to the Sealing Master, the Sealing Master treats the jutsu as if it were one rank higher in terms of damage done)
Rank Benefits
Genin N/A
Chuunin N/A
Jounin N/A Shinobi Type(s) Support: Support type ninja are people who use jutsu to help other ninja in attacking, defense and any other type of need a fellow ninja would have. This ninjas is usually well rounded in jutsu knowing a wide range of jutsu from long range, short range and so on. These ninja are faster at learning jutsu and faster at using them too. (Jutsu -2 posts to learn jutsu, can perform jutsus that are below their without hand-seals, jutsus of equal rank can be performed with far fewer hand-seals, allowing the support shinobi to get off a quick jutsu in close quarters, jutsus of higher rank require the normal number of hand-seals.) Summoning Specialist: If the user can utilize a summon, being a summon specialist is the way to go. Summons utilized by these ninja are stronger then normal summons, drawing power from the very presence of their summoner. Summoning Specialists are also able to use summons at the rank of Genin. (Summons are stronger by 1 rank) ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra and Jutsu ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra Information Chakra Level: Low
Chakra Point: 15
Chakra Control: N/A
Elemental Affinities: Raiton Jutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
Raiton: • • • • • Genjutsu Universal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Type: N/A Summons Known: 0 ---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles ---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu Style: N/A current stage: N/A
Maneuvers N/A
Abilities N/A ---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ---------------------------------------------------------------- Weapons Type of Weapon: N/A Name of Weapon: N/A Base Range: X Shinobi Tools Kunai: 2 Shuriken: 3 Makibishi: 0 light bomb: 1 smoke bomb: 1 steel wire: Less than 1 yard Apparel Head-Band Style: Straight Head-Band Location: tied over right arm Head-Band Color: Blue Flak-Jacket style: N/A Flak-Jacket color: N/A
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 11:52 pm
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