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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 10:35 am
I'm probably not the authority on that, but I feel that it is better to make each a single post and keep up the interaction with others as the jutsu is learned.
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 10:46 am
Hinote Tosatsu Come to Iwa! We have the worst security in the known world! And epic people, that too. Except the crazy ones... Ever since Zane came into the village, we've gotten other people just walking in X_X
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:01 am
Assembly_Assassin Newbie Question:
When it says that something requires X number of posts to learn, do I actually have to make X number of posts, or can I simply put several "posts" worth of text into one post to learn a technique? you may have one long post yes, that's what i do
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:08 am
Lance Fulgurant Assembly_Assassin Newbie Question:
When it says that something requires X number of posts to learn, do I actually have to make X number of posts, or can I simply put several "posts" worth of text into one post to learn a technique? you may have one long post yes, that's what i do
Sorry for all the nitpicking questions sweatdrop I just don't want to under post anything.
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:33 am
@Assassin-
Back when I was still an important part of POTS, before I went Hiatus for nearly five months. crying
I usually just do this: (and this is an example of the clone jutsu. Btw... my paragraphs tend to be REALLY long... and you may want to do that, if you do what I'm describing)
Blah blah blah. -Wants to train, picks up scroll, reads it, starts to do what the text in the scroll describes, messes up, goes back to reading scroll- blah blah blah.
(Clone jutsu: 1/5)
Blah blah blah. -Rereads scroll, practices hand movement till it's perfect, does jutsu again, is better at it, but still fails. moves back to scroll- blah blah blah
(Clone jutsu: 2/5)
Blah Blah Blah -Studies scroll further, practices making the chakra perfect for said jutsu, practice's again, is getting the jutsu, but still needs tweaking, goes back to scroll- blah blah blah
(Clone jutsu: 3/5)
Blah blah blah- tweaks movements of jutsu, rereads the scroll and does exactly what it says, gets jutsu perfect- blah blah blah
(Clone jutsu: 4/5)
Blah blah blah -practices jutsu without assistance of scroll, fails at first, second time does it, does a couple more times just to make sure I've got it- blah blah blah
(Clone jutsu: 5/5)
Got it?
Does that make a little bit more sense?
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:39 am
((I also do this... btw... this is from another guild I'm in...)) LadyShirahime93 Freya Havok Genin | Sand | assassin  Freya looked around, noticing that nobody was around. She was grateful, mainly because she was probably start crying if somebody saw her mess up. She sighed, closing her eyes, and willed herself not to feel bad for herself. She was a kunoichi after all. Kunoichi didn't get embarrassed. But she did. She sighed again.
Freya tugged the large scroll out of her pouch she had borrowed from the jutsu library, took another look around, satisfied she wasn't being watched, and opened the scroll.
She was an Doton user, that much was established, so she sighed, and began to read the Doton jutsu in the scroll.
She decided to start with the basics. Freya propped the scroll up against a boulder, using two other rocks to keep it open, and pulled her hands into the seal, forcing chakra from her body into the ground around her. She gave up after a second, and closed her eyes, feeling slightly disappointed.
(0/1 Doton: Bunshin no Jutsu (Earth Release: Earth Clone Skill)
Freya looked at the scroll again, her hands pushing her hair off the nape of her neck, as her eyes scanned over the paper. It was another clone technique. She frowned, and put her hands into the hand sign shown in the scroll's diagram. The dust around her kicked up, but didn't do much of anything else. Her frown deepened.
(0/1 Koujin Bunshin no Jutsu (Dust Clone Technique)
Her brown eyes once again looked over the words and examples on the scroll. She moved past some other jutsu, as her mouth greedily drank the bottle of water she held to her lips. She pulled it away, sighing in relief, and capped it, looking back at the scroll.
She frowned looking at the technique, and bent down, her left leg sticking up to keep her in balance, her hair falling in her face, as she forced chakra from her hands into the ground. She could feel the ground splinter and crack due to the force of the chakra, but before anything could be said, the earth caved in, in her hands and she had a lump of dirt around her. She needed to practice more.
(0/1 Doton: Doroku Gaeshi (Earth Release: Rock Shield)
She turned back to the scroll, kneeling down, putting her hand on her knees and resting on them slightly, as she read and memorized another part of the scroll. She felt a little awkward as she preformed the next task. But complied with what the scroll told her to do. She scooped up a bunch of dirt and rubbed it onto her body, and then forced charka out through her pores. She cried out in shock as her body gained about 20 pounds. She fell into the dirt, surprised by the sudden increase of weight. Right... she would remember that the next time. The rock around her cracked and fell to the ground. Looks like she needed more practice on that too.
(0/1 Doton: Ishi Yoroi no Ude (Earth Release: Stone Bracers)
Freya read another jutsu, her lips pursing in disagreement with the words. She had to destroy the ground, and she wasn't looking forward to that. She supposed it came with the territory of the training ground... but still. She sighed, the words seeming to scream at her, and put her hands into the proper seals again. She once again, forced chakra into the area around her, and screamed when she suddenly fell into a puddle of mud. She pursed her lips together, and huffed in anger. Next technique maybe?
(0/1Doton: Gou no Doro (Earth Release: Mud Moat)
She read it, her eye brows lifting into amusement. The jutsu actually looked fun. She placed her hands on the ground, and forced chakra into the ground. It began to wobble, and Freya fell forward onto her chest from the sudden movement. It wasn't big, nor was it fast, but it would provide an element of surprise; she concluded.
(0/1 Tsuchi Tou Tou (Swift Earth)
Freya was annoyed. She began to wonder why she couldn't get the techniques the first time. A yawn came as a reply, and she smiled "Ah, I must be tired," she said to herself, and moved over to the scroll and her belongings. She shifted them onto the ground, around her, and closed her eyes against the sun, determined to take a quick nap to restore her chakra. Hopefully next time she might get it right.
LadyShirahime93 Freya Havok Genin | Sand | assassin Brown eyes blinked open as the sun glared at her. Sweat poured down her body, as a cool breeze whipped around her body. She laid stretched out, her hands at either side of her, with her legs open. She blushed, sitting up quickly and looked around to make sure nobody had seen her. How embarrassing, she thought to herself, cocking her head to the side, and pushing her skirt down, which somewhere in the middle of her nap, had ridden up the base of her legs.
She shuddered just thinking what some perverted guy would say if they saw her like that. She yawned and covered her mouth with one hand, stretched the other far above her head. She blinked again, willing the fatigue away, and looked at the scroll, determined, that now that she was rested, she would get it right. She took a quick peak at the scroll and stood up.
She followed the directions of the scroll to the littlest thing. Placing her fingers into the correct seals, she pumped her newly charged chakra into the ground around. There was a pop, and a puff of smoke and dirt appeared before her. She felt like cheering when she saw herself looking back at her. "Hurrah," she said, smiling, as the clone walked a bit away and began to practice the earth clone jutsu some more, while she focused on other jutsu.
(1/1 Doton: Bunshin no Jutsu (Earth Release: Earth Clone Skill)
Freya looked back down at the scroll, glancing at it quickly, before she placed her hands into the proper hand seals. Dirt and dust in the area began to swirl around like a tornado, and she closed her eyes to protect herself from potential blinding dust. When she opened her eyes again, another her stood before her. This time, they both cheered, and hugged each other. The dispelled this clone, and went onto the next technique. Maybe this is what she needed was a nap to recharge her.
(1/1 Koujin Bunshin no Jutsu (Dust Clone Technique)
She looked at the previous pile of dirt that was suppose to be a shield. She frowned, crossing her arms over her torso, before pursing her lips together. The last time, she had sent quick sharp waves of charka into the ground. What could she do different? Her eyes brightened suddenly, as she bent down to the ground and sent a quick large wave of chakra into the ground. It snapped, and she lifted up the earth, glad she had created a shield... no matter how small it was.
(1/1 Doton: Doroku Gaeshi (Earth Release: Rock Shield)
Feeling particularly happy, she looked back at the scroll and saw the next one was the one that she had fallen from. She sighed, but felt confident, since she was expecting the weight increase. She rubbed the dirt onto her body, and once again pushed the charka out of her pores. Instead of letting the chakra go, she pushed the chakra back onto the shield's surface. This time it didn't crack and break. She smiled, and sent a thumbs up to her clone.
(1/1 Doton: Ishi Yoroi no Ude (Earth Release: Stone Bracers)
Freya released the technique, and went onto the next one. She didn't like this one... but maybe she had done it wrong. She cocked her head to the side and looked at the ground. Maybe if she...
She pushed chakra into the ground, and made sure some of it stayed around her to protect her from the mud. She was happy to see that it worked, and that she didn't fall into the mud pit. She jumped up and down excited. Next was her favorite one.
(1/1Doton: Gou no Doro (Earth Release: Mud Moat)
She already knew what was going to happen, so she bent down, and pushed chakra into her feet and hands. The ground moved rapidly away from her, while the chakra in her feet kept her stable on the ground. She jumped up excited, as she hugged her clone, who dispersed a second later.
(1/1 Tsuchi Tou Tou (Swift Earth)
She practiced them again, but something in the back of her head was nagging at her. It was that guy, Ty, and that girl. She frowned. Somehow she couldn't get them out of her head. The last time she had saw them, that girl was close to death. She sighed, packing her stuff up, and decided to go see them again. At least this time to make sure everything was okay with the girl.
{exit to gates}
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:33 pm
Ah, okay, so you do about one paragraph per post. Gotcha!
Thanks for the help! (Nice Posting format eek )
{But why did you make a [0/1] post? Shouldn't the first post have been a [1/1], and as such allowed you to learn the jutsu on the first try? confused }
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:43 pm
Some people are just like that
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:45 pm
I like to write a lot.
Hmmm.
If I remember correctly, I was sick when I wrote those two posts, so I wasn't my best...
Sorry. DX
SOMEBODY GIVE ME SOMETHING TO WRITE ABOUT!!!
Or I'm gonna cry... >><<
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:47 pm
Well I think your post length is Admirable!
*thumbs up*
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:50 pm
Well... the length... is okay...it could have been better...
but the style sucks...
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:51 pm
What do you mean 'style'?
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:51 pm
You can write about me and my overflowing awesomeness!
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:56 pm
Can your character be anymore hot...Anyway. Go write a mini/full arc for the guild =o
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Posted: Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:07 pm
Style... I mean...
Well... it's hard to explain...
Here's an example (And my apologies to Ultima... if you're not a girl... you have full right to hit me. xD ) of Ultima, who I'm gonna call Shade in this example:
Style one:
I looked up from my computer to see Shade stranding in my room, after a bight flash out of the middle of nowhere, left me temporarily blinded. How and why she was in my room, I didn't know. Nor did I care. Shade was awesome. I smiled at her, "Hi!"
Style Two:
There was a blinding flash and I hissed in between my teeth, shutting my eyes against the white light before it burned out my retains. After the light began to die, I opened my eyes, blinking away the white spots that danced in front of my vision. A shadow lingered in front of me, blurred by my temporary blindness. I blinked away the blurriness and rubbing my hands against my eye lids. Once my vision cleared, I looked up and gasped, jumping in surprise. Before me stood Shade, her silky black hair stood out in contrast against her pale skin. She stood a few feet taller than me from where I sat and I gazed at her outfit, a tight fitting kunoichi outift. A flame burned behind her, making her appear with a sense of defiance accompanying the stiff way she stood. She smirked, her muli-colored eyes twinkling; and I felt my face burn with embarrassment at the state of chaos which was my room. Suddenly worried that she would suffocate in the messy small room, I jumped up, "Shade! You're going to kill my room with you're awesomeness! Can we move downstairs," I yelped, opening the door and holding my hand out in front of me, trying to get her to leave the room, before the force of her awesomeness ripped a hole through space and time in this small room. That and I wanted to hang out with her. She was simply smashing.
Get it?
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