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Inferno_Leo

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 7:48 am


Jake Akazuki

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Full Name: Jake Akazuki
Nicknames: Frosty J
Age: 16
Birthdate: August 15th
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: White and Black mix

Nindo: "Peace and love....That what makes me stronger"

Personality: Brave,Calm,cunning,Cool attitude

Behavior: Good,Calm and Cool.

Biography: Jake was born in the Hidden Mist Village on August 15th on a very dangerous Blizzard. When He was 10 years old an Army was sent on a S ranked mission to go capture Jake.His Clan was Destroyed by the Army along with the village leaving flames and fallen houses everywhere.The guards found Jake hiding in hole full of broken wood.The guards was about to take Jake until Jake run into a large pound that his family had in the backyard and merged with the water.As the guard follows him stopping at the pound Jake fought back using his Clans ability by creating a large body of water formed as a large dragon head slamming himself into the guards and flooding his village and killing every last guard in sight.Leo appears on the ground on his knees crying over his dead family. He ran away out of his village and join an Assassin organization.There until he was 12 was killing people for money.One day he decided to kill the boss of the organization and killed the rest with his Clans unique Water ability finishing by flooding the organization.After that he went on his own as a outcast being reticulated by his because of his Clans abilities.Once day Jake stumbled on the Leaf Village Gate.He walked in seeing change in himself and his killing ways.Surprisely it worked and Jake stayed in the village hoping to see peace and change in himself as a Shinobi

Village: Hidden Leaf Village
Rank: Genin


________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation

Summoning: N/A
Bloodline: Suigetsu Clan
Curse Mark: N/A

Weapon of Choice: Sword

Ninja Class: Ninjutsu Class

Strengths:
● Chakra Control
● Intelligence
● Agility

Weaknesses:
● Weak Ninjutsu
● Weak Bodied
● Weak against Raiton

Shinobi Skills:(Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark)
•Learning Water Ninjutsu and Ice Ninjutsu with his Clan ability it takes 1 less post than normal
•Can break out of Genjutsu more easily than others due to enhanced chakra control.
•Can learn Ninjutsu 1 less post than normal

Chakra Element(s): 1
- Primary: Water
- Secondary: Ice

Chakra Color: Blue



________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation

Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:


________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation

Non-Elemental
Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
Kai - Dispell



Water - Suiton











Ice - Hyōton













________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities

Taijutsu Styles Known:

Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)

(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)

Maneuvers

Abilities

____________________________________

(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)



________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles

# Custom Weapons Allowed: 0

Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:


________________________________________|A|pparel


Headband Location | Style | Color:
Forehead | Leaf l Navy Blue
Flack Jacket Style | Color: Gray
N/A l N/A
Kunai Holster Location | Color:
Right Leg | Navy Blue
Projectile Holster Location | Color:
Left Leg | Navy Blue


Exploding Smoke Grenade: 6
Makibishi: 10
Shuriken: 10
Flash Bombs: 4



________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation

Height: 5'6
Weight: 145
Body Build: Light
Eye Color: Bright Green
Hair Color: Gray
Family: They All Died In The Great Ninja War
Theme song: Kill Bill-soundtrack whistle


________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation

S Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 0
C Rank: 0
D Rank: 0


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PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 7:51 am


(i edit it but im just waiting for the kekkei genkai (or hidan) thing to be approved)

Inferno_Leo


Unrelinquished Despair

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 8:01 am


Leo, the only thing I'm going to say about that.

You're NOT allowed to have an indestructible weapon, not even if you were allowed a custom- which you are not.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 8:04 am


Metaphorically Insane
Leo, the only thing I'm going to say about that.

You're NOT allowed to have an indestructible weapon, not even if you were allowed a custom- which you are not.

Ok is that the only thing that im doing wrong? confused

Inferno_Leo


Unrelinquished Despair

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 9:04 am


Well, until your profile is officially complete, I'm not going to comment further.

HOWEVER, your history sucks. End of story.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 9:22 am


i have to agree on that one =~="

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Inferno_Leo

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 9:31 am


Well all i want is just to get approved confused
PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 9:36 am


That is where you fail Leo. Making a character with those incredibly terrible descriptions and even the bio, shows that you lack the ability to dive deep into a character. That's an important aspect in becoming a good RP'er.

Going through the acceptation process is but a brush off the shoulder for me, a rather absurdly placed rock on the road. The real challenge is immersing yourself into the characters personality and past.

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Inferno_Leo

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 9:42 am


I see.....ill go and see if i can make my bio better
PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 9:49 am


It's times like these I wish I had that wisdom pound insignia thing. It would be so awesome right about now. >->;; Anyway, just having a great bio can tip the scales into a favorable character.

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Inferno_Leo

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 10:00 am


Ok im done and i changed a few stuff as well
PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 10:03 am


Insane, please try to be a little nicer to people about their profiles.

...not everyone has the RP experience some of the seasoned veterans have, and they need a little help to get everything up and running. Yes, there is a lot lacking with his profile, and many aspects of it are incorrect, but let's try to be a little bit more understanding.

We were all newbies once, try to remember that.

Cobra_X
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Unrelinquished Despair

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 10:05 am


Cobra_X
Insane, please try to be a little nicer to people about their profiles.

...not everyone has the RP experience some of the seasoned veterans have, and they need a little help to get everything up and running. Yes, there is a lot lacking with his profile, and many aspects of it are incorrect, but let's try to be a little bit more understanding.

We were all newbies once, try to remember that.


Nnn~ Sorry, I've been a bit irritable as of late, since I'm deal with what seems to be oh-so-normal problems within the literate RP community. Depression, anxiety, and a possible personality issue.

Edit: Leo, the part I REALLY wanted you to change was the army part. xD It bothers me, but that's just me. You're allowed to keep it, and it'll at least provide s'more depth for the character. /koff

Edit#2: Yes, but when I started RP'ing there was no such thing as a profile. It's a plus when you finally run into a forum community. >->;; Spent years on an RP Chatroom, so I was able to develop literacy before exposing myself to the slow forum world.
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