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Sauronbane rolled 1 10-sided dice:
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Total: 1 (1-10)
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 Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:08 pm
HP:20
Ryn brought his bleeding wings around himself, shielding himself from the brunt of the blow, and then roared out,"BIRD MAN? You insult me! I am a Draconian! A lesser class of Dragon!"
Grabbing the piece of metal, he threw it back, his rage allowing him to use the full force of his strength.
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pittbull_mike rolled 1 10-sided dice:
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Total: 4 (1-10)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:14 pm
HP:36
Craig Put his hand out to block the metal, taking some damage. HE then reached the Draconian and swung with his fist.
"Dragons are only that which humans fear, they mean nothing, thus that statement is nothing.. I look like a statue! Does that make me a better being?! NO!"
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Sauronbane rolled 1 10-sided dice:
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Total: 10 (1-10)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:18 pm
HP:16
Ryn hissed as his foe attacked him, and he brought his wings into the way again, blocking the brunt of the attack. He roared when his foes punch caused his left wing to begin bleeding more profusely, and folding them behind him, he said,"And what do you think guards the gates out of Mother Death's pockets? DRAGONS!"
He reached out, slashing with his claw tipped right hand, trying to rip open his foes neck.
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SirBayer rolled 1 10-sided dice:
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Total: 3 (1-10)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:20 pm
((Ah. I should wait for Kin, but I wanna help my friend, 'cause he's like, dyin'.. Solution? SECOND ARM GUN!))
The other gun finished. The first gun fired. Mark grinned. In his hugely enhanced mind, numbers crunched. A second algorithm appeared, and without letting up the first volley of fire towards the first opponent, he jumped sideways, getting a better angle on the second one. "Sorry to interfere again, Ryn, but you can't stand up much longer, can you?" The left arm now lit up, scorching the cuff of his trench coat.
((Is this okay? I don't want to butt in, but I don't wanna lose this fight, either.))
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:30 pm
HP:33
Craig chuckled as he swiped his metal neck, it simply scratched and did no damage. "You don't get it do you draconian... I am not made up of blood or flesh... I am merely shaped metal, all of my body is metal.."
Taken off guard by he second attack, engulfing Craig. through the attack a fist came flying through to attack the newcomer to this particular battle..
((Just checking, your attack...was it that energy burst, or fire? it affects my post and health... I'll edit accordingly))
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pittbull_mike rolled 1 10-sided dice:
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Total: 4 (1-10)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:31 pm
((forgot to roll my attack))
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SirBayer rolled 1 10-sided dice:
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Total: 7 (1-10)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:53 pm
((It's an energy weapon. Shoots packaged energy that takes a teardrop form. Hurts. biggrin ))
HP:52
Mark reeled as the android punched him dead to the face. He dropped backwards, catching himself with both arms before vaulting backwards over his hands. He raised his wrist again, opening up on his target.
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:57 pm
HP: 33
Craig swatted the blast of energy aside. Swinging with his other Hand attacking the head of Mark. "Idiotic thing, robotics in humans. People never understand why they don't work. To me its simple... You leave weak points everywhere you put a weapon, a hinge, a gear.. "
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pittbull_mike rolled 1 10-sided dice:
4
Total: 4 (1-10)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 9:58 pm
((damnit! forgot to post my attack again... either way... here it is))
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Sauronbane rolled 5 10-sided dice:
5, 4, 1, 9, 6
Total: 25 (5-50)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:00 pm
HP:16
Ryn stood, panting, as blood trickled down his back, and chest. Suddenly he heard a commotion behind him, and turning, saw five soldiers run out towards them, guns raised.
"Soldiers! Shoot at the one in the Air!", Ryn shouted, blood splattering the ground around him.
"Uhh.... Yes Sir..", one of them said, before they all turned aiming their guns up at Kin, and firing several shots at him.
((I'm rolling to see if they hit you.... I'm going off the basis of your little minions >.< so 1-4 is a hit.))
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:07 pm
[[One sidekick at a time!!!! 10 HP In cases like mine, where I have a permanent partner, then it's 40 HP total for both people. They basically share one life. If I attack with both at the same time. Mine will only have a 50% hit rate for each.]]
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:11 pm
((OK... Mine aren't sidekicks... technically they are each shooting once yes... >.< but they can die the instant anyone wants them to cause they don't have health... But I can change it if you don't like it >.<))
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:13 pm
[[*sigh*.... stare Ok, then your max number of controllable NPCs will be 5 and their hit rate will be 1-4 only.]]
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:27 pm
((OK! Yay for controllables! *Knows they are all going to die in ten seconds*))
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Onamisaki rolled 1 10-sided dice:
5
Total: 5 (1-10)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:44 pm
[[Oi, I never think me joining a battle is a good idea. I don't post as fast as you guys. By the way. Duckie is gone and Duke is gone. Their lives simply can't accommodate this RP.]]
Amati simply stood there, unmoving as he watched the battle commence. He hated the purifiers, and yet couldn't attack because they were Sakeri's allies.
Suddenly, a piece of scrapped metal flew their way, and it didn't seem as though the shield would hold. He braced himself quickly and drew his sword, accidentally slicing through the shield in the process. The remnants of it burst into an array of particles, before disappearing into nothingness. There was nothing left to slow down the piece of scrap. Amati quickly ducked down, taking the unconscious Sakeri with him.
The earth shuddered with the enormous impact, tossing them violently to aside. A low snarl erupted from his lips as they curled viciously. The gray smoke began to curl around him, and he retained his wolf-like feature. His fingernails morphed into ten extremely sharp claws, fangs elongated to a pointed tip, and his round pupils sharpened to an animalistic slit. Amati's gaze lifted in the direction of this attack, only to spot a normal looking male and a strange being with jet-black wings.
Amati gently set Sakeri down in a safe place, before he turned to glare at the person he believed was the source of this attack. He let out an inhuman roar and charged, sword ready to slay he creature that dared to harm Sakeri. He took a giant leap, meters away from his victim and swung his sword with a vicious glint sparkling in his eyes.
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